AsYa SS 'Saath Baaki Hai' Chap 1 Page 2 (19 Oct 13)

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Prologue

"Come On Zoya!! Hum ek doosre ko bachpan se jaante hain!! Aur mujhe nahi lagta ke... aisi koi bhi wajah ho sakti hai jo humay ek doosre se door karde..." He paused to look at her only to find her looking at him with a straight face...

"In sab baaton ka kya matlab hai??? Tumne mujhe yahan, yeh sab kehne k liye bulaya hai??" She asked straight pointing around the whole restaurant... "Yeh baat to tum ghar pe bhi mujhse kar sakte thai.."

"Nahi Zoya! Yeh baat mujhe tumse akele mein he karni thi.. Aisa kya hogaya hai jo tum itni badal gai ho?? " He asked with concern keeping his palm on hers...

"Aisa kya hogaya??? Kamal hai!! poori duniya ko pata hai ke kya hogaya... aur yeh mujhse pooch raha hai kya hogaya??" She looked at him with hurtful eyes and thought...

"Zoya!! I know... Jo tumhare saath hua wo ghalat tha, lekin tum yeh kyun nahi sochti ke tum kitni bari musibat mein parne se bach gai ho iss sab ki wajah se.. Aur tumhi ne kaha tha naa... ke jo bhi hua usse humare beech jo rishta hai uss pe koi farq nahi pare gaa... I was proud yaar ke itna sab hone ke baad bhi tum mere saath wesi he rahi... lekin ab tum ek dum se kyun badal gai ho???" He again asked hoping she will answer this time but to his disappointment, he saw her still looking away...

"Tumhe kyun chirr hogai hai shaadi se yaar??? tum kyun nahi karna chahti shaadi???" He frowned making her look at him...

"Meri life hai!! iss ke saath mujhe jo karna hai mein karungi... You are no one to interfere!!! Meri zindagii mein koi dakhal andaazi kare mujhe pasand nahi!! Aur tumhare bhaijan ne jo kiya hai!! wo mein kabhi bhool nahi sakti...

I HATE HIM!! from the bottom of my heart..." She tighten her jaw somehow controlling her anger and blasted at him...


"Unhun ne jo kiya wo kiya!! Lekin usse tumhari zindagii bhi to bach gai naa... agar wo waqt par apna mu nahi kholte to tumhari saari zindagii barbaad hojati... tab kya karti tum??" He questioned...

"Mujhe mere Allah ne bachana tha! Bacha liya!! Iss mein tumhare bhai ka koi contribution nahi hai!! Aur ainda mujhse iss baare mein baat mat karna..." She answered bitterly...

"Mein yahan unke baar mein baat karne nahi aya tha!! " Ayan sighed shaking his head as this was getting worse...

"To kya kahne aye thai aur???" She asked calming down herself as she realized it was a public place and she should control her anger here...

"Zoya!! Meine bohat socha... but jab se tumne mujhe ignore karna shuru kiya hai, i have just lost my world.. Meine kabhi nahi socha tha ke mein tumse yeh sab kahunga... but yaar!! tum mere liye bohat matter karti ho..." He pressed his lips together...

"Mein tumse shaadi karna chahta hun!!" At last he said for what he was there and closed his eyes as he waited for her reaction as it was obvious that she will start shouting again...

Her heart skipped a beat... "Kya yeh wohi baat nahi hai? jo tum sunna chahti thi??" A voice echoed straight from her heart... A film started revolving around her eyes since her childhood days to present.. And that melting heart again started freezing, tears stopped in between her eyes somewhere before they could roll down her cheek...

She looked up at his hopeful eyes with a desperate face for her answer which made her smirk inside...
Taking a deep breath, she looked up at his smiling face which was telling her that he was expecting a yes or he had taken her for granted that any how she will say a yes..

He looked at her dried lips which she just pressed and his heart raced as he saw them moving to say something... And finally she said...

"Mein Asad se shaadi ke liye haan kar rahi hun!!"




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I Have no idea how is it and why the hell am i writing this?? But while exam preparations saare fitoori ideas dimagh mein atay hain and here is one of that...
Lets see what are your views about it and then i will decide to work on it further or just leave it as it is and forget it..

Love,
Sameera
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wo! Its intrstng cont soon
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If I will continue, that will be after my exams only!!
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OMG!! I posted this in june and totally had forgotten about it after papers... will continue soon if anyone is interested in reading!
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Chapter 1


Life is too short to make mistakes and then seek lessons from it... Zindagii ke faisle humesha complicated he hote hain!! Kuch faisle hum apni zindagii ke liye leyte hain aur kuch zindagii humare liye..Hum jese hain, wese kyun hain??? humare peeche ki kya kahani hai, hum kis tarah ke environment mein palle barhe hain?? hum kya chahte hain?? kya sochte hain?? iss sab ke baare mein sochne ke liye kisi ke pass waqt nahi hai... Har insaan apne mein magan hai, har ek ki apni dunya hai, apni zindagii hai... Aise mein kisi se yeh expect karna ke wo humay samjhe gaa, humare baare mein soche gaa bewaqoofi hai!!

Koi itna selfless hojaye ke khud se pehle doosrow ki khushiyun ke baare mein soche, aj ki duniya mein possible nahi hai... Haan, aise kisse kahaniyaan hazar mil jaeinge lekin aisi reality kahin nahi milegi... Hum mushriqi ladkiyaan apne rishton ko sab kuch maan kar zindagii unke naam kar deti hain, shayad yeh humari fitrat mein shamil hai... Ek ladki kitni he modern kyun na ho jaye, apna dill kabhi nahi badal sakti, Usski zindagii mein kabhi na kabhi koi ek aisa insaan zaroor ata hai jiske liye wo apna sab kuch luta sakti hai, apne app ko kurbaan kar sakti hai... Lekin yeh humesha zaroori nahi ke jiske liye wo yeh sab kare usse pyaar bhi kare...

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Banging the door behind her, she walked inside her house and straight away went towards the refrigerator to feed herself with some chilly water which will help her cool down her temper... One, Two Three and hence she lost the count of glasses she drank in that one minute and still she was not satisfied...
"Yeh kya kar rahi ho??" Her mom asked with concern as she saw the empty water bottle hitting floors and an angry zoya walking away towards her room...
Slamming the door behind, she went under chilly shower and stayed for almost an hour... Tears ran down her cheeks as she slipped down against the wall... "Jahanum banadi hai meri zindagii..." She rasped...
"Mein bechari nahi hoon!! Theek kaha tha unhun ne... Aur wo jo mujhe bechari samjhne lagay hain! Unki yeh ghalat fehmi ab jald he door bhi ho jayegi!!" She wiped away her tears feeling a bit strong than before...

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"Zoya!! kya hua hai beta??" He mother lightly caressed her face and asked...
"Ammi!! App Asad Ahmed Khan wale rishte k liye haan kar dijye... Maine decide kar liya hai! Main Asad se he shaadi karungi!!" She said in a strong determined voice...
"Kya??? Asad se shaadi??" Sania, her mother stole a glance of him and turned her face another side... "Lekin tumhare abbu aur hum sab soch rahe thai k..." She paused for a moment...
"Soch rahe thai k meri shaadi Ayaan ke saath kar deinge???" She completed shooting a disgusted look to Sania...
"Haan!! wo... mera matlab hai!! Tum aur Ayaan to bachpan se..." Sanis tried to explain..
"Main aur Ayaan bachpan se kya??? Bachpan peeche choot gaya Ammi! Main Asad se he nikkah karungi bus!!" Her tone was a finalizing one...

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"Aap jaanti hain k app kya kar rahi hain??? Aapne iss shaadi k liye haan kyun kahi??" An annoyed Asad almost shouted over Zoya...
"Main haan nahi kehti to koi aur keh deta!!" She sighed... "Look Mr Khan! Jab main app se pehli baar mili thi meine tabhi app ko saara sach bata diya tha!! i am glad k app honest hain... appne saaf saaf keh diya jo app mujhse kehna chahte thai..." She paused to look at him...
"And now what??? Baat tabhi humare beech clear hogai thi!!" He frowned at her...
"Mr Khan!! Mera apse nikkah karne ka sirf ek he reason hai... aur wo yeh hai k yahan se door jana chahta hun.. apni zindagii apni marzi se jeena chahti hun... " She ended shortly not wanting to brief him more...
"Are you sure?? Aap mujhse nikkah karna chahti hain?? yeh janne k baad bhi k bhopal se bahar nikalte he hum ajnabi ban jaenge?? Hum saath ho kar bhi saath nahi honge??" He asked to conform...
"Jee!! Na main apni zindagii mein ab kisi ki madakhlat chahti hoon aur na app apni zindagii mein... Aur mujhe lagta hai k koi aur na sahi lekin yeh ek rishta mein bakhoobi nibha sakti hoon!" She led out a deep breath trying to relax herself a bit...
"So yeh humare beech deal rahi??" He pressed his lips together while looking at her..
"Deal!" She smiled stretching her lips a little...


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I know its too too too short but... kaam chalo abhi isi se...
Sameera😊
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one of my fav writer is bk 😛
awsume di cont soon
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heyy this is reallyyy good.. plzz continue sooon... and pm mee...
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Awesome update. Please PM me. Great start..
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This is awesome but could you please add the translation as well

it's hard reading hindi :(

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