MY LOVE- a taarey poem

hey guys! bohot pareshaan kar rahi hoon na mai apne poems se?😆 but aapko mere poems itne pasand hain mai kya karoon? ok i wrote this poem long ago, just after taarey confession but posting it now! hope you guys will like it!

MY LOVE

you came like a soft breeze

like a kite without any rope

like the morning's sunshine

like a new ray of hope

i was shattered

i was a wheel less cart

then you came near me

to mend my broken heart

you always tried to give me happiness

but i behaved rude to you

you always tried to cling to me

but i kept pushing you

at last my heart gave up

and my mind said i love you

now we are together and

i want to spend my whole life with you!

hey guys so how was it? thank you so much for bearing my bakwas poem! i think it could have come in a better way but uss samay taarey ko dekhkar dimaag theek se kaam kare tab na! ok guys if you liked it then hit the like button n do comment!😊

love aditi❤️

In this poem reys felling is beautifully expressed really liked ur work

Ech & evry line wr perfctly apt fr TR! Beautiful!

thappad khayegi jo aage se bola ki pareshan krti hoon,itna awesome poem tha..aur bol rhi hai pareshan krti hoon,aur likho nd han hme pm zrur krna...:)

A beautiful poem...
I think it suits Rey's POV...