Arshi SS: I WILL ALWYAS LOVE YOU(Discontinued)

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Hey guys... Avi here with a new SS.😛

It is a short story guys... and yes really a short one of about 3-4 chapters and an epilogue.

The story came in my mind while watching the episode of IPKKND (😳yeshh!! I am addicted to it😳).It is just a random one. I only wrote it down without thinking much.

Guys I will continue this SS if I get enough Response. I mean what is the use to write when no will one read it. So if you all want me continue it please to comment and like. Your suggestions are always welcome.😃

" I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU"



Prolouge.

"KHUSHI !!!!" shouted Arnav .

"KHUSHI JUST STOP WHERE YOU ARE... DON'T!!! Don't take one more step..." shouted Arnav in a panicked voice. His heart racing and shouting with his voice. He was breathing heavily. His hands seemed to be cold. His senses were going out of control seeing his wife or the 'contracted wife' standing on the edge of the railings trying to commit sucide.

"why? Why should I stop!! I am doing your work only!! You should be rather happy with this..." she retorted back. " hey devimaiya... ek toh inka kaam khud karo upar se inki daant suno" she muttered to herself.

"My work?" asked Arnav confused still trying to analyse the whole situation.

"yes... your work!!! Aap hi toh humein marna chahte the na!! Taki aapko aapka pyar mil jaye!!" said khushi dramatically.

"what the... pyar??" said Arnav and moved a little towards her.

"Stop!! Don't come near me otherwise I will JUMP DOWN!!" threatened Khushi when she saw Arnav coming closer to her.

Arnav stopped immediately at his place and tried to calm her down " okay... okay... i will not come there... but please come down damn it!" said Arnav.

"WHY? So that you could kill me?" asked Khushi. "No Mr Raizada I will not come down! Main dushmano ke haathon marne se accha khudkhushi karna pasand karoongi." Said Khushi and stepped more towards the edge of railing.

"STOPPP!!!" shouted Arnav.

"Listen Khushi !!! I don't know what you are talking about!!!... why? Why the hell will I kill you and..." explained Arnav.

"Because you want me out of your way!! So that you can marry Lavanya ji!!" said Khushi coldly.

"What the? Lavanya? Where did that come from?" said Arnav confusingly. " see Khushi... please come down we have to talk about this... there is some misunderstanding for sure."

"Arnav ji aap dariye mat hum aapko aur lavanya ji ko bhoot bankar darane nahi aayenge!!! Aap yahan neeche khush rahiye hum vahan upar hi khush hain!" said Khushi.

"Khushi just come down! We can talk..." said Arnav.

"No... I don't want to talk to you... Rakesh khabri ji ne humein sab bata diya hai... aapki kundali mein dosh hain na... isliye aapne humse shaadi kari na... taki 6 mahine baad hum upar aur aap lavanya ji ke saath..." said Khushi.

"what the Khushi... I SAID COME DOWN NOW!!!" shouted Arnav. His heart still racing watching his wife commiting sucide infront of him.

"nahi Arnav ji. Bas ab aur nahi.Hum thak chuke hain. Par dukh toh humein iss baat ka hai ki appne humein istemal kiya... agar aap humein ek baar bhi bata dete na Arnavji ... toh hum aapke liye apni jaan bhi de dete!!!" saying this she stepped her one leg out in the air.

"Khushi!!!!... Khushi just come down... please..." pleaded Arnav.

"No Arnav ji !! not more!!!... but yes I do want to tell you something before I die..."said Khushi her voice choking.

"stop it Khushi!! you are not going to die!! I said come down!!!" said Arnav his heart sinking with each passing second.

Ignoring his words Khushi said "Arnav ji... I know you trust your jijaji very much but please... don't trust him... if possible take him away from di. he is not worth her... I know you will not trust me but believe me Arnav ji he is cheating her...he has already cheated with me an now with her... a dying human will never tell lie." Said Khushi her eyes moist and voice calm.

HE stood still. His mind replayed her words. ' don't trust him...take him away from di ...believe me Arnav ji he is cheating... di...me'

This is what he feared. This was what he wanted and also didn't wanted to hear. He wanted Khushi to be innocent in whole of this act but he didn't wanted to know that the most guilty person is him. He didn't wanted to know that he is the person who has destroyed everything... who has destroyed Khushi. Now today after listening to her he has been presented with all the knowledge that he didn't wanted. But what to do now? What should he do get her back? Yes! He will apologize to her. He will apologize till she forgives him. He will undo all the things that he had done wrong. And he will make her his.



Khushi knew that it is waste telling laadgovernor because she can never be a part of his trust. But today she has decided that she will open her heart before dying to the person she LOVED . yes LOVED ... Khushi LOVES ARNAV. And this will be the first and last time she will be telling this to him... so she gathered all her voice and said

" One thing more Arnav ji... I LOVE YOU." Said Khushi. Her voice filled with all the love and emotion for the man infront of him.

For to second nobody spke.

Khushi wanted him to say something. Anything. She wanted him to react to her last time , to retort back to her or even deny her love but she wanted to hear him last time. But when none came from his side she silently smiled and was about to say her FINAL GOODBYE when her leg slipped and she could only say "Arnavji...".

Was it a crap??😕

Please don't bash me out if it was🤣.

It is just a random one. It is from the scene when Khushi was trying to commit suicide after thinking of arnav and lavanya's relation. I thought what would be it like if the story went like this.

If I continue It will be A weekly SS Because I have one more going on.

❓so should I continue or not?❓


Like it ???? 😲

if yes 😃 then like and comment .😳😳

and for pm's just buddy me... and you will recieve it...



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Part 1 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3612922/arshi-ss-i-will-alwyas-love-you-discontinued?pn=8�

Part 2 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3612922/arshi-ss-i-will-alwyas-love-you-discontinued�

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aashi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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liked it
waiting for next part
update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nooo...kushi s nt dying...realy its interesting...arnav s surely gonna save her...pls continue
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Originally posted by: aashi12

liked it

waiting for next part
update soon




thanx...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: makeitgood

nooo...kushi s nt dying...realy its interesting...arnav s surely gonna save her...pls continue



thanx... i will make it good...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prologue!! Continue soon n pm me!!
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Originally posted by: Jananivjc

Nice prologue!! Continue soon n pm me!!


thanku thanku... will surely pm you i I continue!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the next part...
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Awesome...Continue Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This scene was one of those which was ruined by the hilarious music and shabby cuts and edits but still I loved it no matter what! And I love it so much that I always wish it could have be done in a more dramatic way in the sense, more serious, filled with overwhelming emotions right from the beginning when he finds her on the terrace to where he prevents her from falling!!
But by reading, my wish is almost fulfilled. Arnav's despair is splendidly described and Khushi's hurt that both he and La didn't confide in her and even at that crucial time, she wants his sister to be safe and happy!

I love her <3 And then she confessed and you left us at the cliff hanger..

Do continue soon :)

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