KriYaansh SS: Kya ban payenge hum do se ek? - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYaanshAngel1

PART-5

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Rey caught kria's hand and pulled her towards him. he turned her to the tree and was too closer to her. kria was not about to say something as she was speechless. firmly rey whispered in her ears.
Rey: tu mujpe bherosa rakho...i love u

After listening this kria was shocked. she was just confuse what to say. she firmly whispered back.
Kria: i...love u too..

rey was shocked. and he then kisses kria's neck. neck to ears. kria felt a sensation. but this time she totally surrender her to him. rey kissed her near jawline. almost near the lips. kissed her shoulder. at the moment it was lightning heavily and kria became more closer to rey. rey kissed her from the shoulder to hands.then slowly her cheeks..and moving up to her eyes. rey pulled her waist and pulled her more closer. and kissed her lips passionately. both go deep and kissed each other passionately. rey pushed his cheeks to hers and made her feel . shock was passing through both's body . kria moved back and ran. rey followed her. after sometime kria was disappeared. rey kept on searching for her. kria came from back and throw water at rey. rey made a grin.
Rey: Kria!
and he ran before her. kria was laughing. rey to threw water at Kria and they both began to throw water at each other. both enjoyed. rey ran before kria and caught her. they both again lost in each other. rey kissed her neck and kria then kissed his lips.



Both were sitting under a tree. kria's head was on rey's shoulder. both were happy finally they confessed. breaking the silence kria spoke out.
Kria: rey..
Rey: haa?
kria: tum muje kabhi chodke nai jaaoge na.
Rey: kabhi nai
kria: kabhi bhi nai?
Rey: marte dam tak nai..
Kria: tumhe toh pata hai mein kitni beshram ru...toh ab to meri demands or bad jayengi..😆
Rey: huh...kisse pagal bana rai ho tum baatcutter...muje sab pata hai teri demands..
kria: acha..
rey: haan..
Kria: like...?
Rey: like Singapore, goa , Macau...nd nd meri jeb khaali kerwana...shopping...
Kria: (hitting rey) u can read my mind..
Rey: yup i can...
Kria: acha yeh toh hai hi meri demands wich u have to complete. per meri ek or demand hai...
Rey: konsi?
Kria: u know it!
Rey: seriously i don't
Kria: REY! how d hell can u forget...!
Rey: plz baatcutter seriously i dont know
Kria: pakka nai pata?
Rey: nopes
Kria: Dumbo...bhul gaya humara bachpan ka promise.
rey: seriously bhul gaya hun...
Kria: HUH! mein nai baat ker rehi tumse...best frnd hai fir bhi kuch nai pata...

Kria got up and stand beside the tree. rey also got up and hugged he from back.

Rey: yehi promise na ki...i'll teach u how to drive..
Kria: tumhe yaad tha na...(hits rey)
Rey: thodi si masti bhi nai ker sakta kya?
Kria: per see after jab mein car chalana seekh jaungi i'll only drive like a boss...tumhe to chune bhi nai dungi..only i'll drive..sun lia
ReY: ok baatcutter...nd best frnd wala BF nai..boy frnd wala Bf...

They both laughed and giggled.




They both started dancing. you all can imagine the Tujhko jo paya dance of KriYaansh.



it was morning. Kria was sleeping in rey's lap. Rey woke up first and saw kria in his lap. he smiled and kissed on her forehead. after sometime kria also woke up.

Rey: good morning baatcutter..😃
Kria: good morning...😊 rey subhah ho gai hai lets go and find dad.
Rey: ok abhi face or hands wash kerlo fir chalte hai..

they both goes to a nearby river and washes their hands and face. kria was washing her face that her some hairs pulled out. rey forward his hand and tuck her hair behind her ears. The hawa hawa look look.
after that they walked forward and started searching for kria's dad. suddenly kria heard something.

kria: rey...rey meine kuch suna..shayad meine dad ki aawaaz suni
Rey: sach mein?
Kria: haan rey! matlab voh yahi kahi hai..
Rey: chalo aage dhundte hai..

After some time they rey saw a house.
Rey: kria...dekho ek gher..chalo under jaaker dekhte hai..
Kria: rey muje dar lag raha hai...
Rey: dont worry baatcutter m with u

Kria hold rey's hand. they both first looked through the window. they saw kria's dad was tied up with rope and a chit was on his mouth. kria was about to say dad but rey shut her moth wid his hands. then they saw a man with a gun was coming. he removed the chit from his mouth.

Man: aee...sidhe sidhe apni saari jaayedad humare hawale ker de...verna thok denge tujhe saale..
Gautam : meine kaha na..nai..nai karunga...or kya karoge muje maroge..maro..maro mere merne ke baad waise bhi meri jaayedad meri biwi or beti ke naam ho jayegi...
Man: toh kya hua unko bhi thok daalenge..kisse pata lagega..
Gautam: tum unhe kabhi nai dhund sakte..or na hi mein bataunga...

Man puts his gun in gautam's mouth.
Man: aee shaane...chup chaap bata de verna abhi ke abhi muh tera thoke dalega...
Gautam: go on..maaro muje...

Kria was not able to tolerate and directly go in. rey follows her.

Kria: dont u dare! mere dad ko marne ki himat bhi mat kerna..verna tumhare saath boht bura hoga!

Man: acha..to tu iski beti hai..or kya bigad legi tu mera...

man walk towards kria and was about to hit her that rey stopped him. full on anger was in his eyes.
Kria: rey..rey uske haath mein gun hai plz due hat jao..
Rey: tum uncle ki help kero..isse toh mein dekhta hun..

Kria was worried. she go to her dad and opened his rope. and free him. Rey punched the man. the man shooted but rey somehow defended . he then punched i min his stomach and he threw gun from his hands. rey took the gun and hide it. he fighted with him. a kick in his stomach, and a puch in his face. continuenessly punches in his chest and at last the man was totally injured. rey went to kria and gautam. kria hugged her dad tight.

Kria: DAD...!! aap zinda ho..
Gautam: bus bus..rote nai..

Rey also hugged him.
Gautam: tum dono kitne bade ho gae ho...reyaansh beta..aaj tumne ek asli dost ke bete hone ka furz nibhaya hai..
Rey: uncle aap mere dad ...

Rey was about to speak "aap mere dad hi toh banne waale ho"

Rey: aap..aap mere dad jaise hi toh toh...

The three hugged each other.
Gautum: chalo ab gher chale..gher chalker tumko sab kuch batana hai..
Rey: yaa lets go..

gautam moves out. kria hugged rey.

Rey: i love u...thank u so much..
Rey: i love u too..






no yaar i did not like it


infact i loved it

it was awesome

mindbogglingly

fabulous

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome loved it the way kriyaansh masti was great
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 7

it was awesome
i loved it
finally rey demands was fulfilled awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome
i loved it
mindblowing
amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome loved it fabulous
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey,
just read whole ss in 1 go...
loved it.it is awesome...
plz update soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb! Just caught up with this piece. Beautifully expressed. When are you planning to update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply wow... i read all the updates... its very nice...
oustanding yaar..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

BEAUTIFUL

READ IT ALL IN A GO

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON n PM me too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
abhi tak update nehi kiya...??/ 😭

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