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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all very very sorry for such a late comment...


Bt shivi where r u now a days...
itne din ho gaye update nhi kiya...
is evrything ok na...
plzzz update sooon we r dieng everyday 2 read d furthe part...
plzzz plzzz plzzz update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE n mujhe PM bhi kar dena plzzz...
m sending u buddy request...


Edited by muskituski - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskituski

hey shivi where r u now a days...
itne din ho gaye update nhi kiya...
is evrything ok na...
plzzz update sooon we r dieng everyday 2 read d furthe part...
plzzz plzzz plzzz update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE n mujhe PM bhi kar dena plzzz...
m sending u buddy request...


wo if chodne ki soch rahi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

GUYS I DONT KNW WHAT TO SAY ?

I MEAN WEN I HAD POSTED THAT I WAS NOT GNG TO UPDATE I KNEW THAT PPL WILL BE AFFECTED BUT THIS MUCH !!!!!😭😭😭😭
I HAD NO CLUE
I RECEIVED TRUST ME ON THIS 70 MAILS AND NUMEROUS PMS JUST TO FINISH ETERNAL
I MEAN PPL ARE READY TO W8 FOR LONG HOURS FOR IT !!!!!!
I WAS IN TEARS AFTER SOME MAILS AND SMS...😭
WEN I DIDNT UPDATE THERE WERE IF GUESTS WHO MADE ACCOUNTS TO SEND ME PMSS...ASKING WHY I WAS NOT UPDATING.
I SWEAR I NEVER EVER THOUGHT THAT COULD MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO SOO MANY
SO FINALY I HAD THIS CHAPTER READY SO I M UPDATING BUT GUYS
R U OL READY TO W8 FOR LONG SO THAT I COMPLETE ETERNAL AND SHOW TAAREY WEDDING ??????
I MIGHT NOT ABLE TO MAKE FANCY THREADS , QUOTE COMMENTS SO WILL IT BE OKKK ?
I MIGHT GIVE SHORTER BUT YES PROMISING UPDATES ?????
BUT 1 THING IS FOR SURE THAT I M NOT ALONE IN THIS WORLD RATHER I HAVE THE SUPPORT OF MANY MANY AROUND
LOVE U
SHIVANI
NAUGHTY CHAPTER 😆
Chapter 29

Before taani left swaron's place'.. viaan and tahira came

Taani introduced them to the whole gang and even explained them the situation'.

Taani: tum dono humare saath ho na ?

Viaan and tahira both said in unison " yes we are"

Vicky (whispers to Nil): abbey yahan bhi chemistry ka chakkar hai kaya ?

Swayam noticed the two'..

Swayam: abbey aisa kuch nahi hai

So chilll

Vicky: (whispers to nill) yaar humesha over protective hi rahega '.

Kabhi taani to kabhi Sharon and now tahira !!!!!!

And they both chuckled''.

The next morning at rey's house''.

At the breakfast table'.

Taani: rey u know ki the whole gang is in Mumbai'.

Rey: what ?

I mean that's so good'..

Humare D3 group ka next performerance Mumbai mein hai kya ?

Listening this taani was a bit nervous to answer rey but she wanted his well being so gathered courage and replied'

Taani:yes rey '..your next assignment is in Mumbai

And even the doctor has agreed that u can dance'..

Rey jumped in excitement listening this and hugged taani '.

His eyes were wet''

Rey: I m so haapy taani ki meri life mein dance phir se vapas aa jayega'.

Ab mera dil,mera dance aur mere dost sab mere sath honge '.

Main tumhare saath , apne doston ke saath dekha hua har sapna pura karunga'.

Taani was too in tears after his words

She caressed his back '..

Taani: haan rey ab aap apni zindagi phir se khul kar jee payenge''

I luv u rey '.

Rey : love u too sweetheart''.

Soon the finished their breakfast and went to the drawing room'..

Taani: arrey rey par kya aap jante hai ki humare gang mein aajkal girls vs boys chal raha hai'.

Rey: (shocked) what ?

Not again?

Waise kiss baat par?

Taani: arrey rey aap jaante hain na that ab inn married couples ke jhagade high level ke hote hai'..

So rey wo kya hai na jab last month puri gang picnic par gayi thi na at the Central Garden to wahan they saw this couple fighting''.

Where the woman accused her husband of not taking proper care of their child so the husband took up a challenge to take care of the baby for about a month without any help from his wife''

To which the girls of our gang have put a bet that the men can never be good at taking care of the baby'.

So, the girls have challenged the boys that the cant be good parents and the boys have accepted the challenge and will now help the ladies in taking care of the kids'..whom the have adopted from my friends NGO that gives training to young couples on how to deal with infants'..

Rey: what ?

Rey stood up from the couch with a sudden jerk'..

And taani who was sitting with her head on Rey's shoulder till then was now laying because of Rey's sudden jerky movement.

I mean are they mad arrey yaar shaadi ke ekk saal baad itni badi responsibility ?

But u know what I am not shocked kyun ki humari gang ka USP humesha se sirf jhagda raha hai'.

(taani smirked ; hey Krishna ji main rey ko kitna ache se janti hun)

Aane do unhe'.main unki acche se class lunga'.

But waise on second thoughts yeh unke liye kafi profitable hoga I mean jab unke khud ke kids honge tab tak wo puri tarah train ho jayenyge'..

And he winked and sat next to taani '..

Facing her and looking in her chocolately brown eyes'.

He very gently held her face in his palms and said

Rey: taani humare doston ki gadi to bachon tak chali gayi par yaar humari gadi kab aage chalegi yaar ?

Taani was blushing and she faced the other side but rey came closer to her and placed a peck on her cheek'..

This made Taani's whitish skin turn tomato red and she had a diabetic smile on her face'.

She was numb and her body was totally cold'..

Rey was staring at her as he was enjoying her beauty'

She was looking angelic and Rey announced through his eyes that she was hers forever'.

As he looked at her he was falling for her more and more'..

Her eyes, her luscious lips everything was attracting rey more towards her'.

Her blush was adding to her natural beauty and she looked a million dollar'..

Her heart beat increased and she looked straight in rey's eyes'..

That was it ''..rey could no more be away from her and he advanced towards her

BUT''''''' "THE DOOR BELL"

Suddenly taani came out of the trance and stood up''

She gave a big laughter ''.she was laughing holding her stomach''

Taani:rey aapki kismat'..

Oh Baby''..

Sooo sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And she chuckled

But rey was angry , he stood and frowned''

Rey:yeh zarur tumhara maali hoga ????

Humesha aapne plants ko paani dene ke chakkar mein mere romance ki band baja deta hai'.

Aaj to yeh plants ko nahi balki main isse water karunga ?

And he angrily stood up and went to the bathroom'..

He returned with a big bucket of water''

And he opened the door with a jerk and threw the water without even watching that who was at the door''.

But suddenly the bucket fell from rey's hand and he stood at the door with his mouth wide open'.

Taani ran towards the door and saw all the boys standing all wet at the door'..

She could not control and laughed'..

The girls too joined her on entering the scene with their cute toddlers''

but the boys were still in shock'.

Vicky: arrey yaar acha theek hai hum tujhse hospital main milne nahi aaye to tu hume aise welcome karega !!!!!!

Swayam and Viaan : arrey par hum to aaye the ?

Phir itna acha welcome kyun bhi'..

And everyone exchanged looks and gave a devilish laughter'.

Rey: sorry guys wo mujhe laga ki ''

Nil:koi baat nahi bacha hum jante hai ki jab girlfriend ke saath akele ho aur koi bell bajaye to kaisa lagta hai'.(he kept his hand on swayam's shoulder)

Swayam gave him "abbey thodi sharam kar yaar" look''..

And he immediately removes his hand''

all of them hugged rey''

even viaan did without any hesitation that surprised Sharon a bit''

but the environment was too light to take on any kind of stress'.so she ignored''

then rey walked up to the girls who were standing with beautiful kidos to win over rey's heart''

Rey hugged all of them and they all entered the house''.

PROMO

A PASSIONATE TAAREY ROMANCE :

They were lost in each other's embrace and found it hard to even look away from each other's eyes.

His coziness was making it difficult to control her self so she hugged him tightly and made her nails pierce through his skin.

Rey were calmy pulled a shiffon blanket over them and switched of the lights .

And then they were lost in the beauty of the night that made them one forever and ever.

NOW PLSSS ANSWER MY QUESTIONS
BECAUSE ONLY ND ONLY UR COMNTS WIL DECIDE WHETHER I SHALL UPDATE OR NOT ?????
SO PLSS HELP ME GET A CLEAR PICTURE WITH UR COMNT PLSSS

AND THEN LIKE AND COMMENT

THANK U AGAIN

Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res/Unres...
First, will give u comment for the updates...
I am really sorry.. actually..I am angry on myslef..How can I miss such wonderful updates!!! Huh.. 😭
I read it entire... where I left reading. And.. OMg!! All updates were magical and Tahira and Viaan ka.. I am dead sweetheart.. I am really dead. Man... Haayee.. Kya bike ride thi unki..Muhhhaa to u!!

Taarey..
Taarey ke baare me kya bolu! Kya scenes the yaarr... and ur amazing writing made really easy for me to imagine those scene... Aww... Your each update was pushing me into a beautiful dreamland.. Hmm... LOved it.. more than enjoyed it.

LOL...Gang ki entry... Gossh!! Itne bade ho gaye.. bacche ho gaye!! Firbhi jaghdate rehete hain.. Seriously... I also missed them in entire FF story line... Ohoo.. wow!! Wonderful plan... Taani... kya deemag lagaya hain!! 😆 😉

Lol...🤣 Rey stood up with jerk.. and Taani...🤣 laying on couch.. Goshshhh... Mein toh pagal ho gyi this hass-hass ke... Mannn!! And.. Rey's reaction...😆..Hmm.. I loved Taani's too. She smirked and thought kitna acchi tarikese jaanti hun...😳

Hufff... Rey!! 😆 Maali ko blame karta hain.. ruining for romance ke liye.. Gosshh!! man...😆
And, gang's reaction after getting attacked by Rey!! lolzz... Taani and Girls.
Hehehehe..😆

Loved it...Hmm... Vian...😳

Overall...fab, superb... are full on awesome update!! 😃

Okay...
I dun have any prob, if u give update late and short. I am ready to wait. I really don't want u to discontinue any of ur story. as I said, through scraps. 😊

and... Whever u'll get time. Update. 😉

and.. one more thing... what's the big deal. If u can't make fancy threads. We love your wrting sweetie.. Okay. U get it na.. What I am trying to say!!
Okay...

Sweetheart...

Update soon! PM me! and Take care. Have a fun too. All the best for your 12 and future.

Keep rocking.

Love you. 🤗

Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update I don't mind if the next updates are short
Edited by Angel-luvs-s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res will give u long wala lecture after i get home
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for update...
n for ur question
m ready to wait.. for years also...
m k with short updates... but plzzz continue this plzz shivi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update 👏
And yes i am really ready to wait for your updates ..
Jab freee hoge tab update karna ..no issues.. 😊
Promo 😳 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...nice update !!! waiting for taarey romance☺️...plz update soon n ya thanx for d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update and i am always waiting for ur updates plz continue

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