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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG

hahah !!πŸ˜†
I loveddd this update  ..πŸ˜ƒ
Virman  & VV Broz convo was fun filled Awesome ..πŸ€£πŸ˜ƒ
Bechara virat haha .. πŸ˜†
But The Original Bechari is Maanvi .. hmm 😭..
Update Sooon this time .. πŸ˜•

Thnk u so much..ya original bechari.. will update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome yaar..

Loved Virat and Manvi part..
Viren and Virat scene was alsoo veryy cute..
I loved the sindoor and stuff part the most..
But why didnt you PM me???
But continue soon..

  Thnk u so much..glad u lykd it...sorry I 4got i guess, will keep dat in mind...thnk u..n will continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fairy-Ami

Great update! Sorry for late comment. Loved their moments on the way back! They became just like how they were the first time:) please please please make virat remember everything ASAP!! Can't see them like this, especially manvi! :( continue soon and pm me if possible :)

Thnk u so much...its ok...glad u lykd it...he will remember soon...will continue soon n will pm u as well..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Brilliant update ⭐️virman nok jhok is back i luved dat utha k mandir le jao ga n maanvi provoking him 2 do dat he got confused n shocked by her line awsum , vvbros convo on jeevika was hillarious d way virat was giving xcuses 2 viren dat maanvi n viren r totally different jeevika will b gud 4 him n viren was teasing him dat he like maanvi very much n he wants 2 marry her after lossing memory he's 2 possessive about her he can't imagine sumone else with her even called himself monkey , he's falling 4 her again

Thnk u so much.. glad u lykd it...yes  he cnt...thnk u,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
will update soon..thnks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mannat_n

Congratzzz for second thread...poor manvi...vv bro convo was too good...plz add me in ur budy list nd p m me wen u update...love amu

Thnk u so much...glad u lykd it thnk u...wud luv 2 add u in my pmlist, n will defi. pm u..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess84

awesome chapter continue soon...heart goes out to manvi continue soon

Thnk u so much...will update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mika17

awesome update
aww hope virat remembers soon

Thnk u so much.. he will soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guyz...m bck, Thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...really appreciate it..hope u'll lyk it...Njoy...



VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 32...

~Recap~


Maanvi smiled at Jeevika and hugged her tightly.


Jeevika: Chal ab so jaate hain.


Jeevika and Maanvi lied down on the bed. Jeevika started caressing Maanvi's hair, lovingly, making her, go to sleep. And with no time, both the Sisters doze off into a deep slumber.

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~12:30 am, Chaudhary House~


Maanvi and Jeevika's sleep got disturb as they heard Maanvi's phone ringing.

Jeevika: (turns towards Maanvi) Mannu, kiska phone hai.

Maanvi: (rubbing her eyes) Pata nahi Di.

Maanvi looked for her phone and picked it up without looking at the ID caller.

Maanvi: (least interested) Hello?


~*~Hello~*~


Maanvi's heart stopped beating for a while, as she heard his voice..her Viraat's voice. She was fully awake by now, after hearing his voice.

Maanvi: (wide smile) Viraat..?


Jeevika looked at her with a smile when she heard her saying Viraat's name.

Viraat: (lying on the bed/smiles) Arey wah, pehchan bhi liya?

Maanvi: Tum itne raat ko kyun call kar rahe ho?

Viraat: (sits up/thinking for an excuse) Kuch nahi bas...aise hi...kya kar rahi ho?

Maanvi: (sits up) Um...You know, human sleeps at night. (smirks) Par tumhe kaise pata hoga, tum toh Ullu ho na.

Viraat: Ya right, (smirks) waise jaag toh tum bhi rahi ho, toh Ullu tum bhi hui na.

Maanvi: EK Chep, Ullu ne mujhe uthaya hai, isiliye jaag rahi hun.

Viraat: (smiles widely) Acha?

Maanvi: Haan bilkul. Waise tumne itni raat kyun call kiya? (suppressing her laughter) Aur mera number kahan se mila?

Viraat: (thinking of a reason) Woh...aise hi..(confused) aur yeh number mere phone mein pehle se hi tha, pata nahi kaise, maine tumhara naam dekha toh socha call karke check karlun ki wahi Maanvi hai ya...

Maanvi: Pagal bana rahe ho? Maine toh kabhi tumhe apna number diya hi nahi.

Jeevika: (picking up her phone/whisperes)  Mannu, tu Viraat se baatein karo, main Viren ji se baat kar ke aati hun.


Maanvi smiled at Jeevika, as she got up and left.

Viraat: (scratching his head) Wohi toh meri bhi samjh mein nahi aa raha ki yeh mere phone mein tumhara number kaise aaya.

Maanvi: (smiles) Zyada sochne ki zarurat nahi hai, maine hi daale the.

Viraat: (confused) Acha kab?

Maanvi: (thinking for an answer) Woh..woh..(smiles) yeh mere haathon ka jaadu hai, tum jaise Ullu Chep ko nahi pata chalega.

Viraat: Acha? (teasingly) Arey Haan, Bandariya jo taheri.

Maanvi: (irritatedly) Chep.

Viraat: (lying back on the bed) Acha suno, tumhe pata hai kal kya hoga?

Maanvi: (lying on the bed) Kya hoga?

Viraat: Lo, tumhe pata hi nahi. Arey kal hum fir se Rishikesh aa rahein hai, and then wahan se Masoori jaiyeinge. Sabko Bhabhi se milna hai na.

Maanvi: (smiles widely/sits up) Really? Wow, sachi mein? I'm so happy.

Viraat: (smiles amusedly) Tum kyun itni khush ho rahi ho?

Maanvi: Tum nahi samjhoge abhi.

Viraat: Hadh hai, samjha toh sakhti ho na.

Maanvi: Chodho.

Viraat: Waise, tum soyi kyun nahi abhi tak?

Maanvi: Main toh so hi gayi thi, (smirks) bas ek Ullu ne jaaga diya.

Viraat: (bit his tongue) Oh, sorry, mujhe laga tum..

Maanvi: (smiles) Koi baat nahi. Tum kyun jaag rahe ho?

Viraat: Woh..woh..bas yahi batana tha, kal hum aa rahe hain. Ab tum so jao haan. Good night.

Maanvi: (smiles) Good night.

Viraat hang up the phone and smiled, lying down on the bed, thinking about Maanvi. On the other hand, Maanvi was smiling with tears, hugging a pillow close to her heart. Just then Jeevika walked in the room.

Jeevika: (excitedly) Mannu tujhe pata hai...

Maanvi: (even more excited) Ki kal saare ghar wale yahan aa rahe hai, aur hum Masoori jaa rahe hain.

Jeevika: (confused) Tujhe...? (smiles) Oh Viraat. Waise usne tujhe call kiya, kyun?

Maanvi: (smiles) Yahi batane ke liye.

Jeevika: Jo bhi ho, tu khush hai na usse baat karke?

Maanvi: Bahut Di.

Jeevika: Dekhna, jald hi uski yaadash wapas aa jaiye gi. Aur agar na aayi toh,,

Maanvi: Hum ek nayi yaad bana leinge. Haina?

Jeevika: Bilkul, pehli meeting ka side effects dikh hi raha hai Viraat pe.

Maanvi: (happily) Haan Di.


Jeevika and Maanvi hugged each other.  After talking a little more, both went back to sleep.

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~Next Morning...10:00 am, Vadhera's~


All the Vadhera's were on their way towards Rishikesh, in the bus. Viraat and Viren were sitting together, Kadambari Chachi and Vanshika Maa were sitting together, Dadaji and Swamini Bua were sitting together, and Inder Chachi and Shlok were sitting together. Everyone in the bus were bored to the core, just sitting and looking at the views outside.

Shlok: (pouts) Aap sab itne chup kyun ho? Main bore ho raha hun.

Viraat: Yaar bore toh main bhi ho raha hun.

Viren: Aur kya kar sakhte hai, neend bhi nahi aa rahi, abhi so kar uthe hain.

Inder Chachu: (sadly) Agar Maanvi hoti toh...


Viraat looked at Inder Chachu confusedly.

Shlok: (smiles) Haan Papa, agar woh hoti toh hum bore nahi hote.


Viraat again looked at Shlok weirdly. Viren noticed Viraat's changing expression.

Viren: Uh..(smiles) Haan Chachu, maine bhi suna hai ki woh bahut masti karti hai.


Inder Chachu at first was confused, but he understood as he looked at Viraat's confused face.

Inder Chachu: Uh (smiles worriedly) haan haan, bilkul.

Kadambari Chachi: Arey maine toh jabse uska naam suna hai mujhe toh woh pasand hi aa gayi. Kya naam hai, (smiles widely) Maanvi.


Viraat smiled at this.

Dadaji: Main bhi, mujhe toh usse milna hai, aur Jeevika se bhi.


Viren and Viraat both smiled at each other.

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~Chaudhary House~

Everyone were sitting in the living room, with their packed luggage, waiting for the Vadhera's to arrive any minute.

Dabbu: (pacing back and forth) Kitni der se keh rahe the, 15 minute mein pahochte hai, abhi tak nahi aaye.

Maanvi: Tu kyun fikar karta hai, aa jaiyeinge na.

Dabbu: (stops) Main toh aap dono ke liye bol raha tha, warna mujhe kya, meri thodi Dulhan aane wali hai unke saath.

Jeevika: Tu apni Dulhan ko chodh, kuch khane ko le le. Jaa.

Dabbu: Aren kahin rukege toh na Di.

Maanvi: Haan rukeinge, par kya pata kahan milega khaana. Isliye jaa rakh le.

Pinky Chachi: (caressing his hair) Haan Dabbu, mere Putar, jaa.

Dabbu: (smiles) Theek hai.


Dabbu went away, to pack some food.

Maanvi: Waise keh toh sahi raha tha Di, 15 minute se bhi upar ho gaya hai. Kab aayeinge yeh.

Jeevika: Pata nahi Mannu, Viren ji ne toh yahi kaha tha.

Just then they heard the honk of the bus. Maanvi and Jeevika smiled and got up excitedly.

JeeMan: Aa Gaye.


They hurriedly walked towards the door and opened it. Maanvi and Jeevika, both had tears in their eyes, seeing Vanshika Maa, Dadaji, Swamini Bua, and Kadambari Chachi in front of them.

JeeMan: (smiles with teary eyes) Maa..

Vanshika Maa: (arms spread out for them) Jeevika, Maanvi..


All three of them hugged each other, letting their tears flow. Maanvi and Jeevika looked up and saw Viraat, who was coming out of the bus and walking towards them, along with Viren, Inder Chachu, and Shlok. They wiped their tears and broke away from the hug.

Maanvi: Main abhi aayi.


Maanvi hurriedly ran away from there, leaving everyone confused, but Jeevika.

Jeevika: (smiles) Kaisi ho aap Maa? Dadaji? Bua ji? Chachi?

Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni Jeevika, tum dono ke bagair hum kaise reh sakhte hai. Bahut yaad aati hai tum dono ki.

Jeevika: (forcing a smile) Jii woh, main...theek hun. (looking ayt Viraat)  Aa..aap sab kaise hain?

Everyone looked at her confusedly. She signalled them with her eyes, towards Viraat. They turned around and found him right behind them.

Kadambari Chachi: (smiles) Hum bhi theek hai.

Viren: Chachi yeh Maanvi...

Viraat: Bhai galat naam kyun bata rahe ho? Chachi, yeh Jeevika Bhabhi hai.

Viren: Main bhi toh yahi kehne jaa raha tha Viraat.

Viraat: Toh sidha batana tha na inhe, confuse ho jaate toh.

Dadaji: (smiles)  Hum sab samjh gaye Viraat.

Beeji: Andar aaiye na Vadhera Sahab.

Dadaji: Nahi Bahen ji, jitni jaldi nikleinge, utna hi acha hoga, aapne saman rakh liya hai na?

Beeji: (smiles) Haan Ji, bilkul.

Dadaji: Chalo acha hai. Viren, madat karo inki, saman laane mein.

Viren: Ji.

Dadaji: Chaliye, hum bus mein intezaar karte hai.

Beeji: JI.


After greeting each other, all the elders walked away, leaving Viraat, Jeevika, Shlok, and Dabbu behind.

Shlok: Dabbu Bhaiya, chalo main aapki madat karta hun.

Dabbu: Haan Haan chalo.


Viraat was continuously looking around the house, his eyes searching for Maanvi. Jeevika and Viren noticed this and gave each other a mischievous smile.

Viren: (hand on his back) Viraat, kya hua mere Bhai, chal na, saman rakhna hai.

Viraat: Haan woh..Um, Bhabhi ji..sorry aapko bura toh nahi lag raha na, main aapko Bhabhi jo bula raha hun.

Jeevika: (smiles) Nahi nahi Viraat, tum mujhe Bhabhi bula sakhte ho.

Viraat: Ok thank you.

Jeevika: Toh aap kuch puch rahe the?

Viraat: Haan woh...um..woh aapki...(mumbling to himself) kaise puchun...

Jeevika: (suppressing her smile) Meri?

Viraat: (smiles) Aapki tabiyat kaisi hai? All ok?

Jeevika: (smiles back) Haan, sab thik hai. Aur tumhari?

Viraat: Meri, meri bhi theek hai. (looking around) Waise koi dikh nahi raha...

Jeevika: Dikhega kaise, sab bahar jo gaye hain abhi abhi.

Viraat: (running his fingers on his hair) Oh, yaa, point.

Viren: (suppressing his laughter) Tu point chodh aur saman pakad, chal jaldi.

Viraat: Huh, haan Bhai.

Viraat, unwillingly walked towards Viren to take the lugage from him.

Jeevika: (smirks/shouts) Mannu, kahan hai, neeche aa na.


Viraat immediately look at Jeevika and then his eyes searched around the house again. There he saw Maanvi, looking really beautiful in her pink and white patiala suit. His lips curved into a big smile, looking at her angelic face. Finally, she reached where Jeevika was, still not looking at Viraat, but her heart was dancing with joy, knowing that he is smiling only after seeing her.

Maanvi: Chale Di?

Jeevika: Haan Mannu, bas yeh saman rakhle.

Maanvi: Lao main madat karti hun.

Jeevika: (smiles) Haan yeh le.


Jeevika handed her a bag and walked away towards Viren.

Jeevika: (whisperes) Viren ji, apne Bhai ko dekho, kaise meri Bahen ko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Viren: (smiles/whisperes back) Wohi toh, past yaad karte karte, shayad present mein fir se pyaar ho gaya mere Bhai ko.
Jeevika: (smiles back) Haan.


Maanvi was just ignoring Viraat, she picked up the bag and started walking towards the door, where Viraat was already standing by. Just as she was passing him, he spoke.

Viraat: (not looking at her) Ignore kar rahi ho?

Maanvi stopped and suppressed her smile, turning towards him.

Maanvi: Main kyun tumhe ignore karne lagi?

Viraat: Acha, toh tumhare yahan mehmaan ko "hi" "hello" kiye bina hi jaate hai?

Maanvi: Nahi na, mehmaan ko 'hi' bhi karte hai aur 'hello' bhi. (smiles) Par Ullu Chep par hum yeh rules follow nahi karte.

Viraat: Acha? Sharam karo Meri Bhabhi Ki Behna, kuch sikho apni Di se.

Maanvi: (raised eyebrows) Itni pasand aayi meri Di tumhe?

Viraat: (smirks) Haan Bahut.

Maanvi: (smirks) Toh khud shadi karlo na.

Viraat: (frowns) Pagal ho kya, Meri Bhabhi hai woh.

Maanvi: Abhi bani nahi.

Viraat: Mujhse kyun keh rahi ho unse shadi karne ke liye? (leaning close to her) Tumhe dar lagta hai kya mujhse?

Maanvi: (eyes narrowed) Mujhe kyun dar lagega?

Viraat: Kal kaha tha na, utha ke le kar jaunga mandir, bina tumhari marzi ke, aur tumhe apna bana lunga.

Maanvi: Maine bhi kaha tha, (leaning even more close) himmat hai toh...utha kar le jao.

With that she once again walked away from him, leaving him shocked and amused once again..

Viraat: (smiles amusedly) Kya hai yeh..?


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Viren and Jeevika were sitting together, looking at Maanvi and Viraat who were sitting together but still not talking to each other.

Jeevika: (whisperes to Viren) Yeh dono kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hain?

Viren: (confused) Wahi toh, chup kyun hai? Maanvi bhi kuch nahi bol rahi.

Jeevika: In dono ka rishta mujhe toh samjh nahi aayega.

Viren: Koi nahi samjh payega Jeevika. In dono ke ilava.


Viraat was just thinking about a way to start a conversation with Maanvi, where as Maanvi was enjoying his impatience.

Maanvi: (to herself/smiling/looking away from him) 1...2...3...

Viraat: Yaar tumhara koi chup rehne ka fast hai kya? Itni chup kyun ho?

Maanvi: (turns towards him) Meri Marzi.

Viraat: (frowns) Hadh hai, main yahan bore ho raha hun aur tum ho ki...

Maanvi: Oh, bore ho rahe ho, woh..(pointing at Dabbu and Shlok) wahan jao na, Dabbu aur Shlok masti kar rahe hain, jao unke paas.

Viraat: (making faces) Woh Baache hain.

Maanvi: Acha? Toh..(looking around) um...(pointing towards all the oldies) wahan dekho, sab baatein kar rahe hai, wahan jao.

Viraat: Main itna bhi old nahi hun.

Maanvi: (laughs) Acha? (looking at Virika) Toh wahan dekho, tumhara Bhai, aur Bhabhi, woh tumhare hi age ke aas paas hai, unke saath jaa kar baat karo.

Viraat: Kyun main tumhe kha jaunga kya?

Maanvi: (smirks) Kya pata, Chep jo ho.

Viraat: (smiles sacrastically) Sorry, main Bandariya ko nahi khata, un mein taste jo nahi hoti na. (making weird faces) Bilkul taste less hai.

Maanvi: (mumbling to herself) Woh toh pata chal hi gaya tha, confession ke din.

Viraat: (eyebrows raised) Kuch kaha tumne?

Maanvi: (eyebrow raised) Kuch suna tumne?

Viraat: Nahi, (narrowed eyes) par tumne kuch kaha hai zarur.

Maanvi: Jab suna nahi toh kaise keh sakhte ho?

Viraat: Mujhe bas pata hai.

Maanvi: (smirks) Tumhare kaan bajte hai kya?

Viraat: Nahi, tum mere sir par baith kar clap karti ho na, woh baj rahe hain.

Maanvi: Joke tha? Hasna tha?

Viraat: (smiles) Haan haso.


Maanvi rolled her eyes and looked away with a smile.

Sorry guyz m stopping here, will try 2 update soon, plz leave ur comments 4 me n hit lyk,,,thnk u..Luv Aartii...(PM WILL B SEND OUT LATER)


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