ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb.

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

awesome

try to continue soon

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nimmi

@aksuji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

mmm I don't know what to say for u r a fantasic writer...I wonder there is sooo much of talent here...this story is sooo beautiful and yet sooo difficult to write...u have such a beautiful imagination and u write it so vulnerably and delicately , its a bliss to read this story...

I just don't have words to express my feelings for this story...m instantly in love with it...I discovered this story quite late and I stayed awake till 4 in the morning to complete it...I read both mirage and pursuit...I would just say it is a very very very beautiful story...and u write amazingly...hats off to u...👏 👏 👏 👏

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

love the update.waiting for the reaction when Khusi comes to know the reason of suffering of Mann

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sridivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Cute update...hey its k dont stress urself much

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Mithila

@Mithikush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awww so cute update

Arnav-Khushi is so adorable

Loved it

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

i missed this one...
stupid exams...
stole my stalking skills... 😭
reading all the missed chap in one go..
after i finished with this...n also my exam...my next target is vaishali.. 😉

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Dr. Anupama Ramakrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

THE PURSUIT-40/2

THE MIRAGE-II

Manna looked at the photo and said," jey hain abhi?

( She is alive now?)

The man who stood before him said irritatedly! "Hain tho! Wahee tho museebath ki jad hain!"

( Ofcourse she is! She is the source of all strife)

"Itti soni... pari jaisi... waah!" Manna said again!

( So pretty like an angel)

"Tum ko kam sey matlab hain!" The man chided.

( You should bother about your assignment)

"Nah! Humey paisa... paison sey matlab hain!" Manna said!

( No I am always bothered about money)

"Phir jo karni hain wo kar" the other man said!

( Then what is told)

"Karengey per yeh humey chaahiye!" Manna said!

( Will do! But i want her!)

"Areyyy "o" woh kaun hain tum janogey tho latkogey ulta" the man bullied him!

( Hey you! If you get to know who she is you will find yourselves in soup)

"Koyi bhi ho ! Manna ko pasand aayi tho bus!" Manna said.

( who ever she is ! Manna likes her)

READ MORE>>>

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nimmi

@aksuji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

wowww m first to comment...🥳

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nimmi

@aksuji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

yet another beautiful update...

m glad that I have discovered such a beautiful story...

so even thakur is a prince...

khushi and thakur share a complcated yet a very beautiful relation...and arnav is all ready to accept their relationship...

this khushi is sooo innocent,so beautiful and yet sooo strong...

finally khushi is showing some some of her feelings for arnav and giving off her resistance...

the way khushi behaves with thakur is really so cute and I love it,her dominance and her anger...but thakur ,I hope he finds salvation from his grief...he is such a warm hearted person...

anukat ...I love the updates of this ff...they r sooo beautiful and they move in a easy flow...thanku for giving this story to us...I wait patiently for the updates of this story and thanku for not delaying with the updates...these quick updates makes the story all the more beautiful...plz continue soon

Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago