ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb.

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Oops sorry for putting my reviews in thread three ...

Looking forward to see Maan's future

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

updates were good... hope Maan confesses soon.. he is hurting badly..

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Nice.But Deeptiman had just said a bluff of married...

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

whoa! Wt ws that?
Is he really married ?
Okay i luv Deepu's character .. Luv Their friendship..
Luv the way u portraying his character ..
To Khushi, deepu is only a good frnd a vry gud 1 indeed .. As i cn remember she never hd any other feelings toward him..
glad that arnav totally trust understand khushi & her friendship with Deepu..
Update ws beautiful.nicely written and yeah ! Waiting for next chapter eagerly ..
xoxo

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

i feel sorry for maan. i am sure he lied that he is married isn't it. waiting for the next

awesome update

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

both updates were awsumm

loved them deepu were bluffing with khushii ...hope he confess his feeling

continue soon

thanks for updating

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manusmithcl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow.. Beautiful chapter.. How do u come up with such wonderful chapters and that too with frequent updates?... Amazing

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Beautifully written is an understatement. I have not seen a triangular love story written with so much purity less of any evil feelings.

Maan's love for Khushi is purely eternal and it would be insulting if we describe it in words. Honestly, I didnt like him in the first place as I thought he is acting like kabab mein haddi type. But you are right. The way you portrayed his selfless love totally made me fall in love with this character. It is hard to believe such people still exists in todays world but I give it to you he is a dream come true for any girl.

Khushi's love is more like sacrifice of herself and her soul. Her feelings is totally justifiable given her condition. If placed in her shoes, I would probably do the same thing. Her character is making more sense to me esp in last few chapters.

Arnav's love is very practical and very different in present modern times. He does and fulfill everything a doted lover and dutiful husband does but yet he doesnt want to name it love or believe it as love. I dont mind having a mate like him after all he is expressing more than what the three magical words could express.

Love you dear for this beautiful chapter.

Deepthi.

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

superb update...👏👏
good to know that arna trust khushi...
maan truly loves khushi...
waiting to know what happens next...

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

I m still stuck on the stunt khushi pulled at the end ..Ohh if Arnav had seen her with the gun in her hand ... It'd be more than but it was indeed very good

All the pent up emotions from maan was wonderfully penned

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