The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41

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ASRphanki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Beautiful...
Glad dat u showd diabetes part...nd also pooja connectiin..

Very sad that u r plannin to end ...(: (:..hoping u wud come back soon nd continue wid u r tke on arshi

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nilanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awww beautifully written my dear

loved it

update soon :)

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Superb part.
Its good that pooja is out of his life.
Arnav will finally be able to complete his dreams...he has come to US.
Continue soon

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vyasakshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

when u are planning metting of arshi?

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sk2405

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Spectacular! You covered so much so well. 😊

Starting with Pooja, I hate her. And after meeting someone like her at such an early stage in life, no doubt Arnav lost his ability to trust people. She's so damn selfish.

Then his good-bye's at the airport and the little part wherein he controls his tears was very well written. I guess that was today's highlight.

Waiting for the next part. 😊

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Awww your note was sad and it's such a shame this story is ending, but I'm glad you will complete it before you go on leave. Also regarding unexpected challenges coming your way, hope you complete them with khushi's dedication and how she use to stand up to Arnav regarding a challenge.

Coming to the update it was Fantastic and mind blowing,

Absolutely brilliant and written exceptionally well,

Awww poor Arnav was diagnosed with diabetes, glad you wrote that in.

I can't believe how cruel pooja was and she actually had the nerve to tell Arnav that he deceived her, I'm so glad he told her where to go, no wonder poor Arnav lost the word trust in people.

So Arnav finally left for America, the emotional farewell at the airport was sad, especially Arnav trying to control his tears.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

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Deepti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

comment for chapter 6 edited on page 28..😊

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chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

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damon fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Hey.. I'm really really very sorry for replying late...I was too much busy from last 2-3 days... My comment is on nxt pg..!!

Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago

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