The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41 - Page 21

amazing update...what shravan died?😲
arnav has become real ruthless and heartless...!!!!!

Gr8 update..
Shravanz death was heart wrenching..(:
Waitin to read more..

Poor Shravan...His GF betrayed him...
Then his death...!!!
Arnav s brokn...

Eeeps! Will comment in a couple of days.

arnav's fascination with America, his hardwork to achieve his dreams while indulging shravan and always looking out for him were beautifully etched... the phone call to his family reminded me of the typical phone calls that a loving family makes to an nri... poor shravan, having his heart broken and then losing his life... such a waste! he seemed to be someone who didn't take life seriously, just glided along enjoying it... when he finally decided to take life seriously, he got a rude awakening! given the freedom that is there in USA, it's difficult to believe that arnav wasn't in any physical relationships, but knowing his mistrust of women and his focus on fulfilling his dreams, such a notion isn't far-fetched either... however he, in a drunken stupor, sleeping with sheetal came as a surprise... that would make what he said in the show about their relationship incorrect! his flashbacks are really turning out to be interesting!

this is one of the rare stories from arnav pov and you plan on ending it soon. thanks for completing it though. this was good. i hope they used protection and sheetal ain't gonna show up with a kid

res😊

Edit-

Yes, I can't handle death but couldn't help reading it either..😭 I never thought that his end would come so soon... He was really a nice guy. and it's really sad to know if it was a suicide or an accident.

I'm absolutely okay with the sheetal's incident.. I hate her for what she did but it's really wasn't Arnav's fault at all. I really loved your perspective in all this. That if you love someone truly, then you accept him as the person he is and not look at the past.

Once again a wonderful update dear..👏 You did a commendable job by adding flashbacks to the present with perfection..👍🏼 Loved it..❤️❤️

XOXO 🤗

P.S- Did you realize that my every comment ends with the same line?? 😆

Heart Touching update 😭

Hey helee...thanxx for this long update...we really needed one...
And ..i think you don't have to change anythng...i lyked this part very much...
Yeah!..shravan's death is a big shock!..to me...
Why grls are hell bend to being a bi**h..here...
Any ways..thanxx.yar!..you have shown our arnav much more stronger than ever...
Thanxx for the pm...