ArHi SS: Static Shocks - COMPLETED p.28 19/6 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad to see you are continuing this !😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm a new reader here and good Lord! This is soo damn funny. You have a wonderful sense of humour. But more than that, I'm just surprised by how versatile you are! You're too good!

Keep it up! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
You fudge, son of a biscuit. My God how do you think up all this, V?
Do you know in French slang a Fudge is a Jew.

I loved this story.
Just read both the chapters.
Thanks a lot for the PM.
Arnav seems to have had it .
How could he throw his own birthday cake on Khushi?
And how can not recognise his wife of five days and five minutes?

Hope you will update this soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read this one
Love it
Its hilarious
Can't wait to see Arnav apologize to Khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
And to think i would have completely missed out on this had it not been for the PM that you sent for the other updates.. **Thanking my stars here**😊

That was a one crazy shocking story that i have read so far...
Arnav and khushi who were married in a drunken state in Vegas, got the marriage annulled and now khushi is back in Arnav's life arranging payal and akash's wedding...
Wow a great story already.
Looking forward to the next installment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
keep it up. need a little comedy in my life. thanks for the pm.
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Chapter Three: EARTHQUAKE!!!

"Sorry"

"Not interested"

"Sorry"

"You can say the word 'sorry' a million times, Arnav Singh Raizada, but my answer is not going to change. Am I clear?"

"Yes"

"Good. Is there anything else you would like to say?"

"I apologize for accidentally throwing the cake on you"

"NO"

Hari Prakash could feel his head spinning as he followed the conversation. He could hardly be blamed. For Khushi and Arnav, as they played their game of sorry or not sorry, they were walking around the room in circles. Suddenly he glanced up at the chandelier and saw that it was shaking and so was the fan. He glanced confusedly at Arnav and Khushi. They didn't look that heavy. This could mean only one thing.

And so Arnav and Khushi pretty little game was rudely interrupted as Hari Prakash shouted "EARTHQUAKE!!!!"

* * *

Arnav and Khushi were squished under the table, she pressed against his chest. If this were a po*n movie, Arnav was certain this moment would have been accentuated with loud ' erm, whatever. As for Hari Prakash, he had run away, shouting "EARTHQUAKE-EARTHQUAKE". Arnav was pretty sure by now the whole of United States of America knew that New Delhi, India was experiencing an earthquake.

"Once the earthquake gets over, I will resume NOT talking to you" Khushi suddenly shouted.

"The earthquake ended ten minutes ago" said a voice from somewhere above.

Khushi and Arnav scrambled to get out of the table. "Ouch!" they shouted simultaneously as they banged their heads. Rubbing their heads, they emerged from underneath the table and Arnav felt his mouth pop open.

Standing in front of them was a crying Payal. "There's going to be no wedding" she wailed and ran out of the room.

Arnav and Khushi looked at each, worried. What the hell happened?

_______________

In the original incident that inspired this chapter, the earthquake had happened and the two people WERE squished under the table for something like three hours, while the earthquake lasted only ten seconds. I have NO idea what they were doing for three hours under a table, but we can always keep guessing. We can rule out shooting of the po*n movie though, I'm pretty sure there were no camera's around.

-Vandana

PS - Check out the previous chapters, I've updated the original incident which inspired the chapter.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😎
Of chandelier shaking and Arnav-Khushi being heavy...HP has it in him to form the weirdest of connections😆

And to say that earthquake inspired the squishing kya? Not that we mind...but then Payal's statement burst the bubble.

Of all the real life inspirations that have resulted in the chapters, i say this one takes the cake👍🏼
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...awesome...LOVED IT...thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This real life incident proves that drama sirf television mein hi nahi asli zindagi mein bhi hota hai 😆
Earthquake? But what the hell caused this supposed "earthquake"?
Payal broke up with Akash!
This is getting spicier.
Update soonish Vee!

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