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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: asmamember
Hey awesome,realy loved it.
Taarey awesome loved it.
Plz plz update soon.

thank u asma...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: Ishika_Taarey
dipu i madly wait for this story update so pls update a bit regularly cause i can't wait anymore

thanks ishika...will update soon...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: Rhea18
i love the way u take the story.. pls update soon.. and pm me if possible
😊

thanks rhea...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall
superb update dear!
Taani's dad is no more😭
i wish Vihaan is punished asap
please update the next part soon
nd thanx for the pm

thanks dear...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: aishapie
I jus luv dis ff...all chap till now wer superb..n 15th chap waz also gud but but d precap seems damn interestin,
taarey romance hayyy!!!! 👏
pls pls pls nxt prt jaldi update karo cant wait to read it further.

thanks dear...will update soon...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: mehek_luvD3nTBP
luv u diii..
awesome one..
srry fr late and small cmmnt..
huh dadu mar gaye..
emotional..

thanks sweeti...love u too.

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Heya guys...agin i m here with an update...enjoy...this dedicated to shriya and of cource ishika who told me to update fast...here is the update shriya and ishika...enjoy...

And ya this is dedicated to my close buddies nats(natasha.),(nichuus) nishu di , christy(..dinu..) ,jaan (taareylove) , sreelu , (Nsohi) niks , annie(patie)...guys missing u so much...missing our cc talks...and fight...kitne dino se aap sab se baat nahi hui...and ya all my buddies who r updating their ff plz dont mind if i didnt like or comment...m busy with my exam...will surely comment after my exam dears...

guys after reading this u all have to tell me ki me ab konsi story update karu??and ya pls tell me u want taarey confession after two chapters ya phir u want some tr romance like this update and then confession...

And ya who didnt read my new ff ...check this...

taarey ff:kaise jiye tere bin

chapter : 16

"go and pack your stuff taani...' said rey with a little angry tone...

Taani went in her room to pack her and yug's stuff...

Here rey was sitting on sofa when swaron came there...

"hi rey..." said swaron coming inside...(door was already opened so dont ask darwaza kis ne khola)

"hi love birds..." said rey with a smirk...

Swaron blushed a little and look at each other...

"hello love birds...come down on earth now..." said rey looking at them...

"shut up rey..." said swaron and sat on the sofa beside rey...

"taani kaha hai???dikhai nahi de rahi??"ask swayam looking here and there...

"ha wo apna saman pack kar rahi hai..." answer rey...

"kyu??apna saman kyu pack kar rahi hai???" ask swayam again...

"wo me rey k ghar rehne ja rahi hu..." answer taani coming from behind...

Sharon get up and hug taani...

"kaisi ho taani??"ask sharon while hugging her...

"i m fine sharon.." said taani with a fake smile on her face...

"tum rey k ghar kyu ja rahi ho taani??" ask swayam eagerly wanting to know the reason...

"vo bhai mene rent nahi diya to ..." taani was going to say but rey cut her and said..." ha wo landlord ko rent chahiye tha aur taani k paas nahi tha to vo badtamizi pe utar aaya..."

"what???kya kiya usne taani??tum thik to ho na??asked swayam with a worried tone...

"ha bhai me thik hu...rey the na mere sath"said taani...

"aur nahi to kya...achha hua me thik time pe aa gaya...esi khabar li hai us machhar ki ki ab kabhi bhi kisi ko rent pe flat nahi dega...gadha kahi ka..." said rey and the trio laugh a little...

Rey smile automaticaly after looking at smilling taani...

"do din baad tumhare chehre pe smile aayi..." said rey and the trio look at him...

Swaron know that how much rey love taani so they didnt think anything but taani...she felt something...she can saw so much care in rey's eyes for her...but she through out all her thoughts out of her mind as she heard yug ...

"mumma..."

"ha beta..." said taani...

"aap kaha ja rahi ho???" ask yug

"hum hamare new ghar me ja rahe hai..." answer rey before taani can answer...

"wow...new house...vaha video games hai kya papa??" ask yug eagerly...

"ha beta vaha video games hai...vaha basketball court bhi hai...u can play basketball too...vaha sabke seprate rooms honge...aap ka special room hoga with toys and softtoys..." said rey taking him in his hands...

"wow...bahot maza aayega..."said yug with smiling face...but suddenly he become sad and hug rey...

"kya hua yug??" ask rey with concern...

"vaha dadu to nahin honge na..."said yug and a tear drop roll down on his cheek...

All felt bad...taani came near them and said:"ha beta...dadu to nahin honge but vo jaha bhi honge hume dekh rahe honge...aur agar aap ese sad rahoge to vo bhi sad ho jayenge...aap chahte hai ki dadu sad rahe???

Yug broke the hug and look at taani and nod his head ...

"to phir smile karo..."said taani...

Yug smile a little and taani said:"thats like my boy..."

"ok then ...ab tum log ja rahe ho so...hum bhi chalte hai..."said swayam...

"ha dude chal phir...kal milte hai..."said rey...

"ok bye...bye taani..."said swaron and they left from there...

After they left...

"ok taani...lets go...hum bhi chalte hai..."said rey...

"ha chalo..."said taani...
Three of them left from there...

They left from there...and sat in the car...yug was in between taarey...but suddenly yug thought something and he said..."mumma ek minute aap bahar niklegi??

"but why yug???"ask taani

"uffoo mumma...aap sawal bahot karti ho...aap bas bahar niklo..."said yug..

"ok..."said taani and came out of the car ...

Rey was watching yug and trying to find out what was yug upto...

Yug came out and said"ab aap andar betho..."

"but why???u r going to sit in between us na???"ask taani...

"ya but i want to sit near the window..." answer yug...

"ok..."and taani sit in the car beside rey...

"hmmm...my mumma papa lok cute together..."said yug while sitting in the car...

Taarey heard this and caught in a cute little eyelock...but soon they came back in the world...

All the way to his house...he was staring her...her hairs which were coming on his face...he loved it...her fragrance of her hair which was making him crazy...how much he want her with him...forever...

They reach at his home but still he was lost in her...taani look at him and found him staring at her...her whitish cheeks become crimson red...she blushed a little and said "rey..." but no responce from him...

"rey..." she again call him but he was so much lost in her...

Finally he shook him and he came back in his sense...

"ha...kya hua taani???" ask rey looking here and there...he know that he was caught...

"haww...papa...aap kabse mumma ko stare kar rahe the..."said yug in between his giggle...

"nahin ...me vo...bas..." he was struggling for words...he dont know what to answer...

"ummm...chaliye ghar aa gaya ..."said taani helping him...

"ya chalo..." said rey and three of them came out of the car...

They stood in front of a huge mansion...

"wow...itna bada ghar...hamara hai papa???"ask yug with widen eyes ...

"yes ...this is our house..."said rey picking him up in his arms...

And three of them walk through the path and reach at the door...rey rang the bell and an old aged servent open the door...rey consider him as his kaka...he never behave with him as a servent...he always treat him nicely...

"are rey baba aap???itne dino baad...kaise ho aap???"ask kaka

"me thik hu kaka...aap kaise ho???"said rey...

"me bhi thik hu..." said kaka ...then he notice taani...and yug in rey's arm..."ye bitiya kon hai???"ask kaka...

"ummm...ye meri dost hai aur ye uska beta hai"said rey to kaka and then to taani..."taani tum andar jao me aata hu..."

"ha..."said taani and went in...

Rey said everything to kaka that he is pretending as his dad...and then he came in and kaka went to buy something...

"papa...mujhe videogame khelni hai..."said yug with a cute pout...

"ha...jao upar ke room me hai..."answer rey...and yug ran upstairs...

Taani went in kitchen to drink water...and then she decide to rub icecube on her arm...

She took out a tray of ice and took an ice cube...

Rey was wondering where taani went...he check kitchen and found her struggling with an ice cube...ice cube was slipping from her hands everytime...she was making cute and angry faces...her hairs were disturbing her...rey smile looking at his cute innocent angel...he unknowingly took steps forward...he came closer to her...she saw him coming toward her...her heartbeats were increasing...and suddenly ice cube fell down from her hand...she look down ...and rey came in front of her...he bent down and took the ice cube in his hands...

"let me help you..."said rey coming closer to her...

"ummm...nai me kar lungi..."answer taani looking at the ground...

"ha dekha mene kaise khud kar rahi thi..."said rey and just going to put the icecube on her arm...

"rey me..."taani was saying something but rey put his finger on her lips...she look at him...and lost in his dark brown eyes...

"let me do it..."said rey and taani nod in yes...

Rey started to rubbing icecube on the mark and its paining...taani close her eyes in pain...rey look at her and understood that its paining...

"dard ho raha hai???"ask rey ...

Taani nod her head in yes...

Rey start to rub icecube smoothly...now the pain was decreasing...taani open her eyes and look at him...he was so much engrossed ...he was rubbing icecube with so much care...

Rey felt an intence gaze on him...he look at taani who was staring at him...now he also lost in her ocean blue eyes...wind was coming in from the window...her hairs came on her face which was disturbing rey from admiring his angel...he put her hairs behind her ears and she closed her eyes...

His one hand was holding icecube...his another hand automaticly hold her another arm from her shoulder...the distance between them was decreasing...their heartbeat were increasing...rey was coming closer and closer...their nose were going to touch ...rey was lost in taani that he didnt realize when the icecube fell down and taani came back in her sense...she saw rey was coming closer. ..and she turn her head in other direction and tip of his nose touch her cheek...she close her eyes with his touch...he rub his nose gently on her cheeks and in this process his lips touch her cheek...

Taani immidgetly turn around...now he was facing her back.and after few second she could feel his hand around her belly...he pull her closer...she crashed on his chest...he could see water droplets on her arm...he bent a little and kiss on her arm absorbing the water droplets and decreasing the pain...taani closed her eyes tightly...rey look at her and smile a little...he came near her face and rub his cheek with her...and wrap his another hand around her belly...but soon he came back in his sense and losen his grip...taani was waiting for his lips to touch her cheek...but when she open her eyes she saw rey at a little distance from her...she turn and face him...

"sorry vo mujhe thode dur se..." said rey but taani cut him in between...

"its ok rey...laiye me kar deti hu..." answer taani...

"no me karta hu..."said rey and again take another icecube and start to rubbing...

After few minutes..."is it paining now??"ask rey...

"no...its so much relief..."said taani and smile...

Rey also smile...

"thanks..."said taani...

"anytime..."answer rey and then went in his room...taani went in her room...(ya guys...their rooms were seprate...)

"kya kar raha tha rey...cant you controll yourself...agar usse bura lag jata to??kya soch rahi hogi vo...but me uske itne karib...wow...m feeling so happy...rey hug his pillow and remember the moment with taani...and he was smilling...suddenly someone tap on his shoulder and he open his eyes...

"why r u smilling papa???"ask yug folding his hands against his chest...

"vo me...vo..."rey was finding words...

"ha ha...i know aap kyu smile kar rahe ho..."said yug with a smirk...

"achha...hum bhi to jane aap kya jante ho???"said rey...

"hmmm...i know aap mumma k bare me soch rahe the na???batao batao. ..."said yug and curved his eyebrows...

"nai...esa nahi hai...vo to me bas ese hi..."rey was saying something but yug cut him...

"me mumma ko bata dunga..."said yug and ran from there...

"are yug ruko...mumma ko mat batana..."he ran after him...

"kya taani...kya kar rahi thi...cant you controll yourself???kaise tu unki aankho me itna kho gai...but aaj first time i felt like rey mere liye kuch feel karte hai...kya pata vo bhi mere bare me vahi sochte ho jo me unke bare me sochti hu ...par unhe realise hi na hua ho...kya mujhe pata lagana chahiye ki rey mere bare me kya sochte hai??ha yahi sahi hai...me pata lagaungi..."taani was thinking but she heard something and she came down in hall...

"mumma ...mumma..."taani heard that yug was calling her...

"kya hua yug tum ese..."she stop when she saw yug was running and coming toward her...rey was also running...

"are kya hua???"ask taani...yug hide behind taani...as rey was running...he saw taani infront of him ...he try to stop but it ended in he collide with taani...both were going to fell down...rey wrap his hands around her petite figure so that she didnt got hurt...taani closed her eyes in fear...she felt his arm around her...she hide her face in his chest and clutch his shirt as they fell down...first rey was on top of taani ...then they roll and now taani on rey again they roll ..now rey on taani and finally they stop after one last roll...now taani was on top if him...her face was in his cgest...and his hands were tightly wrap around her...

Precap:

Gang masti...

And couple dance + group dance competition will come...

Jealous rey because of taahan dance...

rey choose to do couple dance with taani instead of to do group dance...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

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superb update 👏👏

uff taarey 😳😳 😳😳

and yug is so intelligent 😆 😆😆 😆

their romance 😳😳

awesome 😊😊

Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 13 years ago

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chinudolly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

res/UNRES

DIPU I AM EXTREMELY SORRY 4 COMMENTING LATE BUT I AM REALLY BUSY YAAR . AND TRUST ME U R ONE OF MY FAVOURITE WRITERS , I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES DIL SE ENJOY EACH AND EVERY UPDATE OF YOURS' STORY

AND THIS STORY IS VERY CLOSE 2 ME , IT'S REALLY MY FAVORITE STORY , I READ ITS UPDATE BUT COMMENTING LATE AS I GOT BUSY AND STUCK COZ OF POWER CUTS

AS ALWAYS THIS UPDTAE IS ALSO DAMN BEAUTIFUL , ROMANTIC , AWESOME , HEART TOUCHING DEAR , TAAREY ROMANCE WAS JUST OUTSTANDING AND SUPERBLY WRITTEN BY A WONDERFUL AMAZING WRITER , AND MY DEAR SWEET BUDDY DIPU 😳😳THANKS BUDDY 4 YOUR BEAUTIFUL STORIES , WHICH MAKE ME FLOW IN EVERY EMOTIONS BE IT LOVE , ROMANCE , FUN , MASTI , , SWEETNESS . CUTENESS . ... ETC 😳

DO AS U FEEL , I JUST WANT YOUR UPDATES DEAR , BECAUSE I KNOW , WHATEVER U WRITE IN FUTURE UPDATES WILL BE D BEST

😉😉 UPDATE SOON DEAR

Edited by chinudolly - 13 years ago

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Mehek Asaria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

res
unres...
yey me 3rd..
wow dii... such a cute update..
simple yet enchanting..
luved naughty yug..
and precap.. di updt soon na.. m waiting for far away...😭
haan di frgt 2 tell u.. LUV U... muaaah..

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 13 years ago

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