ArShi FF :Tu Hi Bata Mere Maula

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is an Fan Fiction written by me, as an FF of 'Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon'. its dedicated to Arshi and mah love for Arshi. It could not be a good one or might be a bad, but pls read it once at least for our love of Iss Pyaar Ko kya naam doon and Arshi.


❤️TU HI BATA MERE MAULA





Character Sketch

Arnav Singh Raizada







27 yrs old Arnav Singh Raizada is a successful and famous business tycoon who is the owner of Raizada Fashions. He comes from the family consisting of his nani, masi Kiran, his younger sister Suhani and his cousin NK. His Masi is so close to him like a mother with whom he can share his joys and sorrows. He has some problems regarding his past which had made him so judgmental and stubborn. His past has also separated his affection and attachment from his dearest sister also. Love and relationships have always been a myth for him, which can exists only in books and films, so he always use to run from them.





Khushi Kumari Gupta




24 yrs old Khushi Gupta is a fashion designer and in a search for a job for herself, to settle in her career. She owes a tom boyish, bubbly and talkative nature. She is blessed with beautiful smile and amazing looks. Food has always been a weakness for her, especially jalebis. She has lost her parent at very early age of 8, in an accident and after that she shifted to Mumbai with her badima garima , bade papa Shashi, cousin Arman. She is a little bit different from the show, as she is girl of modernized and confident world with a touch of Indian culture.


Raziada family




- Kiran is Arnav's masi who is a strong independent woman and a part of Raizada Fashions.


- NK is the son of Kiran, a flirt and funny person who is not so good at his Hindi, essentially as he was in the show.


- Akash is not related to Raizada family, he is just Arnav's PA,


- Arnav has one sibling, younger sister Suhani, who is a college student, she has some problem with her brother which will be disclose soon.



- Nani is the same as she was in the show.



Gupta Family




- Garima and Shashi are not Khushi's parent, but badi ma and badepapa.


- Buaji is same as she was in the show.


- Her cousin Arman is a college student who is very close to his sister, not even real siblings can be as close as they are.


- Lavanya and Payal are her best friends-cum-sisters, who are not related to Raizada's.


- Payal is not like as she was in the show, she is independent, modern girl who has raised with her real roots.






Chapter -1




A girl in blue chudidarsuit and a pony tail, whosedupatta has tied on her waist, she has hold a cricket bat in her hands and playing cricket with some children over the road. One of them throws the ball; she hits thatball, it bounces in the air and a loud noise came. All of them get shocked due to which. Actually a window's glass has broken from one of the houses from the velocity of the ball. All the children get scared and leave the place immediately and that girl has become thebali ka bakra. She was also leaving the spot; but the owner of that house, comes down.



On the other side, two ladies enter in a house, where the name plate has stuck as GUPTA HOUSE. They rings the door-bell, a woman, opens the door. She welcomes them with a broad smile.😊

"Namaste! Garima ji", one of the guests said, joining her hands.

She replies "Namaste! Andar aiye na", and gladly welcome them in the
house.


The house is not such a huge house, but not that small too. It is a very simple and sober kind of house where pictures of family are hanging on the walls. All of them get their seats.


OoO




Whereas, the owner of that house has started scolding her for that broken glass.

"Teri shetaniya roz- roz badhti ja rahi hai' aj to khidki ka shisha tod dia",
she yelled at her.


"Sorry aunty!Wo mene '" the girl genuinely apologized but the owner of the interrupted in between.


"Koi sorry nahi chalega aj... teri badi ma se shikayat karni padegi'tab samajh ayega tuje", she interrupted her and told this with lots of anger


OoO


All the ladies are talking to each other
"Apki ek bhatiji bhi hai na?", one of the guest asked.


"Ha. Khushi", she replied casually "Wo hai kaha? Dikhayi nahi de rahi?", other one asked , "Or apka beta wo bhi nahi dikhayi de rha?", she continued herself.



OoO




"Nahi aunty, please badi ma se complaint mat kijie. Please", khushi insisted her.


But without even hearing a single word, she took her toGupta house to complaint her badima.



OoO



Badima calls her son, Armaan and ask him about Khushi.


"Khushi kaha hai?" she whispered in his ears.


"Wo di' di... di to interview ke lie gayi hai na'" he intentionally lied to her
for saving khushi


Badima answers the guest question about Khushi that she is not in the house.


"Ghar me kam hi rehti hai lagta hai", guests taunted her.


"Kuch samajhdar ho gayi ya pehle ki tarah'." they did not complete themselves
but said what they wanted to.


"Nahi meri khushi samjhdar hai'uske lie apko fikr karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai", she gave them a tight answer so they cannot be able to utter a single word.




Before they could complete, the owner of that house came to theGupta House,whose glass had broken by Khushi, and that lady starts calling badima from outside only. Hearing this, all of them rush outside to see what's going on and remain shocked to see Khushi there with a lady who is standing with an angry face.

"Sambhal ke rakhiye apni bhatiji ko, roj adhe umar ke baccho ke sath road par cricket khelti hai' or aj to had hi kar di'. Humare ghar ka sheesha hi tod dia isne'sambhal li jie'nahi to ap hi ki preshania badhayegi'", she yelled at both of them even without taking a single breath.


And continue to humiliate them in front of people. So, she apologize to her on behalf of her
niece, due to which khushi felt very bad and got angry at herself for all these happened. She could clearly see the tears in the eyes of her badima.


"Gharwalo ko lagta hai kaam se gayi hai, gayi to kahi or hi hoti hai ' or na jane kese kese jhuth bolti hogi'.." ,the guests added fuel to the fire by saying this.


All leave the guest, lady owner and the audience too.




All of them entered the house, badima was very angry at her and she was not in a mood to talk toher, and not even gave a chance to explain the whole situation. So she entered to
her room and shut the door on her face, before she could complete.




OoO




This was my first attempt, I hope u all liked it...sorry if had tortured u with this...but
it's just for mah love for Iss Pyaar Ko Kya naam Doon.




❤️Aditi



Index




Chapter 6






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bewakoofLadki thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u have posted dis bfr also??
bcz i had read n commented too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story sounds really different dear
Seems a light hearten one
A tom boyish Khushi playing cricket 😃

But my only Shikayath is where is our Arnav ji?
Missed him in this chapter
Hope the man will be there in your 2nd chapter

Continue the FF
Really liked it
PM me once you update it 😊

Edited by bluesobti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
well written keep it up do more of them thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds interesting...update soon dr😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
nice one
waiting for next update...sorry i read it lately just some busy
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...
continue soon n pm me next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its seems really a diff story...
Garima as badima n a brother instead payal, its really interestinggg
n ya missed arnav in dis chap
hope next chap v il hav him
plzzz continue
il b waiting for d next part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's very interesting
Khushi tom boy playing cricket
Garima as Badi ma and a brother
Missed Arnav in this part
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by Angel13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice! continue~ ilike it soo far! :D

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