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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter - 4



Arnav was passing the road, when his eyes went to the direction board, he was suppose to leave for the office but he ordered the driver to change the direction. driver obeyed him, and took him to the other direction.


Gupta Niwas


lavanya was supposed to pick the newspaper up from the table to show ASR's pic to khushi but the same time khushi picked the coffee mug freom the tablr and felled down, which spoiled the newspaper along with pic.

"you spoiled it.. its your fault... i wanted to see is...", pouted lavanya

"oh hello stop this nautanki haan... it was just a pic.", said practical khushi.

"just a pic?... it was ASR's pic", said lavanya with puppy dog face.

"asr asr asr...stop calling this name again and again ...asr nahi salmaan khan ho gaya", complained khushi.

"Salmaan is nothing in front of asr okay". said lavanya with pride.

"hey dont you dare say that.", yelled khushi.

"huh" they both said in unison.

OoO


Arnav's car stopped in front of a beautiful bunglow, on the entrance it was engraved as 'Raizada Mansion'. he opened the main gate and took a look over it. there was a huge beautiful water fountain on the courtyard and garden on the left. the beauty of it was more than a bride which can't be explain in the words.


he took a step forward to rang the bell but was in a huge dilemma to press the bell or not. his mind was not allowing him, but heart was in the favor. finally heart won over the mind in that battle and he pressed the bell. the gate opened immediately as someone was already there. when the door a opened a girl was there in a peach color floral top and black jeans. she took the glance over him. Seeing him her eyes filled with tears as she was in aghast to see him.


the same time a voice came from inside, it was a female voice,
"kon hai suhani", she asked in in-cognizant.

Suhani came to her senses with a jerk and replied, "i have to leave for the college...getting late", snatched a bag from the table and left without uttering a single word to him not even seen him for a once, she was running him or herself, and controlled her tears to fell down.

Arnav came closer to her masi and she wrapped him in a hug to show all the motherhood and love for him.

"tum yaha itne din baad", she complained in a low tone.

" wo ..actualy ust for few weeks.", he justified.

"kam se kam aye to..", she replied with hope in her eyes.

and continued, "do u know how much we all miss you"

"ahaan! i can see that", he raised her eyebrow to rimind her what just happened.

She got his taunt and replied,"she is your sister.. bas thodi naraz hai.", she cutted off by him before completed herself.

" oh yes naraz hai", he again taunted her.

"She has her own reason ...dont forget", she coreected him.

he was supposed to left but she stopped him, " breakfast?"

"ah i did it in the hotel...or fir office bhi jana hai", he curtly said.

"afterll.. work is worship", he continued.

"but..", before she could complete he left as he was not at all interested to listen.

"and what about family", and she got seated on the sofa and gulped all his love, desires and feeling inside her and a tear rolled down from her eyes.


Gupta Niwas

all are settled on the dining table for the breakfast except garima who is serving food. when khushi got up from her seat and

"today i ll serve the food", she said to all and held garima ffrom the shoulder to get her seated.

then she serve to all by chanting the favorite food of everyone, and then get seated on her chair. she ate the food as she has not eaten since ages.

"tuje sabka fav. breakfast pata hai", amazed lavanya asked.

"hmm", khushi replied with mouthful of food.

"but how", she asked with wide eyes.

"what hoow?..they are my family and...", she cutted herself to to have another bite


"And", questioned lavnya.

khushii gulped the food and answered," family is everything".

all looked at her with a awe and buaji complimented her, "kabhi kabhi akal wali bat bhi kar hi det hi ee sanka devi"

"but how do u know about me", confused lavanya

buaji sighed and shut her eyes before rolling them and, " haye re nandkisore, koi ee ko bataye ki dandi jese patli ladki cornfakes ilawa kya khati hogi"

lavanya made faces and whispered in khushi's ear, "what is nandkisore...inke boy freind ka naam to nahi hai na", giggled lavanya

and then they both laughed out loud.

oOo



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Keep them coming, Please Keep Liking and commenting !! Love you all..


❤️Aditi
Edited by -Aditi. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Nice start
Loved reading it
Do pm me I am sending u a buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow amazing updates loved them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: deeksh

Part 3 was nice... But was confusing... Who al r der in Arnavs family? Wanna know... Aww Khushi cudnt c his pic :( .. Gud dat la n khushi r frnds in dis... N she cals her Chamkili aww dats so cute... Update soon nxt part :D





Thnks
Ya it ws confusing actually i wanted to took it as suspense so..
The confusing part will b clear out in the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: twinki

Nice start
Loved reading it
Do pm me I am sending u a buddy request


Thnks
Ya sure i ll pm u
Js send me ur buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: bluesobti

Nice update dear
But wanted to read more of our own ASR

More exited to read Arshi meeting. When will this happen? Update soon yaar. Don't take too much time.

Take Care 😊





Arshi meeting will b very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: naina1716

Read alk the parts
Its awesome
Pls do send me pm




Thnk u so mch
I ll pm u fr sure
Js send me buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -BarunKiMeera-

lovely adi..
mast hai yaar..
hayeee finally mera arnav aa gaya :D
update soon... waiting..




Hayela
Itni excited h ki arnav ko hi dance kra rhi h
Hahha
Ilove u yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
nicely written Additi
update soon
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Edited by Asya_KaJen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

I really apologize for such a delay in the update... all my gadgets cheated me ... but trust me i would'nt disappoint u guys afterwards... i have my exams this months so i wouldnt be active... sorry in advance. pls tolerate my bakwas and yes suggestions and criticism are always welcome. Now u all can throw your rotten tomatoes and joota chappals for this hilarious update.


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Chapter - 5




She is walking alone in the dark night in the empty forest, not even a single bird is there. Her face has become pale and the beads of sweat are all over while her hairs have become untidy. She is continuously gasping and shivering due to fear. She starts walking hurriedly to reach the home as soon as possible. But no vehicle was passing from there as it was a dark forest. Suddenly a luxurious car passed from there, she takes relieved breath, shakes a hand to stop the car but she got only disappointment in her hands, because it doesn't stop which increases her heartbeat as she has lost all her hopes, after few seconds a light from somewhere fell on her face, she covered her face with a hand and removed it slowly to check what is disturbing her eyes, with creased forehead. She closed her eyes with a little relief, when she came to know that it was the taillight of the same car which has passed earlier; and its returning back to stop in front of her. A person on the back seat harshly grabs her hand to sit in the car, she tried to drag her hand back from his but he was too hard, his face was completely invisible in the dark moonless night, when a sound distracted her with a jerk.



"Good Morning ... Good morning", a dancing doll-cum-alarm clock buzzed repeatedly buzzed.


Khushi wake up with a jolt as it was a nightmare and she was dreaming herself in it. She came to her senses after few seconds and closes her eyes to thank her devi maiyaa as it was just a nightmare not reality and sighed a deep breath of relief. Her bed is also like her a very Bubbly kind of bed, with a colorful floral bed sheet, a pink teddy bear near her pillow, some silver stars above her head and posters of her favorite actor Salman on the wall. She was so busy to thank her devimaiya who were placed near her bed on a corner table, so she forgot to switch of that alarm which was continuously buzzing the Good Morning sound. She finally came to the real world and switched off that alarm, removed her pink duvet and tip toed to the bathroom.


OoO


Arnav who has woke up already, watering the plant as well as ordering his PA Akaash on his dearest Bluetooth.


"Is presentation ready", Arnav asked his assistant.

"Umm y..Yes sir.", he replied with confidence.

"So we will meet in the presentation room", he ordered

"yes sir", akash obeyed.

"No mistake... Otherwise ..." arnav warned.


And in the middle of the conversation he disconnected the phone call, as always.
Like her, he also tip-toed to the bathroom to get ready for the office.


OoO



She was brushing her long beautiful black hairs on the dressing when,


"Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika Re ai ai...", her phone ringtone rang which was the song of her favorite actor salman.

"
Hello..." ,she attended the call.

"hey khushi", a sweet sugary voice came from other side of the phone.

"Payal", surprised khushi.

" kesi hai tu... kaha hai... ", khushi bombarded loads of questions on her head.

"wait wait wait... get down off your horse and listen to me", she took a deep breath and continued.

"main or lavanya tera shopping par wait karenge ... wahi jaha hum har baar milte hai... at sharp 11 okie and don't be late as usual", she explained the whole plan to her.

"thik hai lekin..", khushi continued as she always has a lekin with her.

And call disconnected from the other side, otherwise her lekin kintu parantu will not get over, not even in the whole day.


OoO


Arnav who always dresses in black three piece suit but today in a brown shirt for a change reached his office. He entered inside from in his tashan as usuall, pulled his one sleeve up and took a glance over his expensive but a simple silver and black watch, he was before two minutes as he was Arnav the one who is very particular about his professionalism, he then scratched one of his eyebrow with his left thumb and entered the cabin, where Akaash was already waiting for him.

"M..morning sir", he wished him but with little hesitation as new day has started already and his boss is so the factory of anger.

"morning... who has prepared the presentation", he asked.

"Mr. vikas", he answer immediately.


"okie lets move to the presentation room", he took a step forward for presentation room.


In the presentation room, Arnav and the other few employees from Raizada Fashions including Akaash waited for Vikas, as he was going to present the presentation but he was two minutes late which was a big deal for Arnav, so he started boiling with anger but Akaash insisted him to have a look on the presentation,

"pls sir give him a chance", biting his lower lip.

"u know I don't like latecomers.", clenched his hand in a fist.

"pls sir it's a request", he requested on which Arnav nodded positively.


Vikas started giving the presentation for some designs which were going to be the masterpiece in the history of Raizada Fashions, as they were going to be launch on the occasion of would be 5th anniversary of the company. Arnav's anger kept on increasing because his clothes were a complete mess, also he. Arnav took a step towards him.



OoO


Khushi left house for the reunion and shopping, mauj masti and food of course which was decided near the favorite spot of the trio friends, near juhu. Before leaving she gave a kiss to her dearest pink scooty, Anarkali. She was beautifully dressed in a yellow suit with a little white embroidery work, which was done by her only, matching earring, minimal makeup, just a little kohl and lip gloss and plated long pony tail. She reached her destination and parked her scooty in the parking area who was late as usual. Payal and lavanya were waiting for her on the parking area payal hugged her,"uff... khushi I am afraid of you... humesha ki tarah firse late ... mene kaha than a... late mat hona."

"Sorry wo ghar se nikalne mein time lag gaya or...", she started her train when interjected by lavanya.

"Leave her payal... iska late ana itni bdi problem nahi hai jitna iska muh Khulna", she chuckled.

Khushi rested with a perfectly O shaped mouth and taunted lavanya, "haan kuch logon ko ready hone mein bhi to bas 3 se 4 ghante hi lagte hain...kyu lavanya."

"Ah.. Stop you both", payal held her head.

And continued, "by the way... someone is looking gorgeous...kaha se liya ye suit tune", excited payal.

"Hum to apne kapde khud banate hain", winked khushi after answering.


OoO


Arnav took a step towards vikas and tightened his tie which was messily loosened and said in a bitter voice clenching his jaw,

"humare kapde hume banate hain..."


"ss..oo", he supposed to apologies but he interrupted in between,

" I don't like latecomers but I hate sorry ... got it ", he roared like a lion and pointing his index finger towards the main gate "you are fired" , he continued.

"b ..but ssir ...", he requested ...in fact begged but Arnav was not in a mood to forgive him, fired from his job and marched with the lava of anger.


OoO


The trio was enjoying their reunion-cum-shopping when khushi's phone rang.

"ji buaji ... mein le aungi ...okie.. haan baba jaldi aa jaungi", and disconnected the phone.

"hey guys, tum log chalo... muje yaha se buaji ka kuch saman pick karna hai... to use pick karke I will join you okie."

She picked buaji's stuff and was suppose to join her friends when her eyes fell on chaat corner, as khushi is khushi, the smell of food diverted her mind and dragged her to the chaat corner. She was enjoying the delicious mouth watering chaat when a thud took her attention to the vehicle stand where a vehicle fell down due to the collision with a huge luxurious car. She left the food and ran towards the parking area as it was her lovely and dearest scooty, Anarkali. She picked the damaged scooty up with the help of some people and turned to yell at the driver of the car.

"Can't you see...", she shouted at the one who was driving the car the tall and handsome man, none else then Arnav Singh Raizada.


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❤️ Aditi











Edited by Addu16 - 11 years ago

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