it was very surprising to see those harsh words on the previous thread & very interesting to notice the person who is complaining hasn't even commented once for my update on that thread
well if a writer needs to care for readers.. I guess vise versa
I totally understand ur anger now days better because .. I too follow FFs now😆.. ask me.. I am so waiting for parineeta to be updated.. uff.. kya karu.. ash has exams..
me waiting for shackles of love.. dam!!! her net is down
so many of anu.. actually all of them.. but she said she is moving!!
still she did update saathiya yesterday.. thanks for that!!
there r so many writers.. doublecross..
parents wala FF
more.. on my list!!!
but doesn't mean I write something on their wall to hurt them!!!
PART 34
she got really mad & he could understand it was more of anger right now..
when she just stepped away from him & questioned
"yaa phir koi dost dhunlethi aapne.." "GEET" he threatened.. clearly knowing she meant Sam & him, but then closed his eyes clenching his fist
god lord.. the sight of seeing ur husband in some one else arm!!! only he knew how he lived last 24hrs assuming she was Dev's wife. It was iniquitous in every possible way still his heart bleed seeing them together. She had not questioned anything abt his relation with Sam nor did she show any interest then.. but now he could clearly read her objection.. add to his foolishness he himself has given her all the details of their relations.. which could be quiet misleading.
He just stood rooted as she sat in the couch wiping her tears that didn't seem to stop. She refused to spare him even a glance after that. It was dead silence that followed. Daadi looked at Maan & then Geet... tears of guilt.
Geet sighed & went near Daadi. She caressed the back of her wrinkled hand softly, trying to promise something she herself was not sure to keep. Daadi didn't want her to burden Geet with anything any more but deep within she wanted to see them together. & exactly that commotion was stressing her. He just watched them both... so many things playing back in his mind... every incidence. How every instance was designed to get them together. How destiny played its part to make him realize his responsibility. Her terrified face seeing the fire flashed infront of his eyes, he just wanted to take her in his arms to comfort her, cry with her.. feel the pain with her.. ease every wound of her. Be with her every loneliness darkest of night.. not just because he loves her now.. but for this relation they share deeper than he could ever imagine. For he knew for sure the only reason he felt so comforted in her arms was because they were lost part of each other. Only way he could ever feel complete was with her.. in her arms.. in her heart. Now his love for her felt so sinful. His heart felt so helpless .. he was in no position to tell her he is so much in deep love with her.. He closed his eyes & sunk in the couch.
All the while he was contemplating how he would tell her.. talk to her.. his feelings... & here now his feelings.. his emotions just felt nothing.. how much ever he would try to explain.. or undo.. nothing would change.. not the fact that he is the soul reason for all the miseries in her life.
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Next day Geet & Maan got Daadi discharged & took her back home. There was this thick air between them.. his heart beating heavily with every passing min. Daadi could clearly see the happening & all the hope she had to see them together sunk. She couldn't even voice anything.. for her geets decision was final & no one should be forcing her..not even her own ill health.
Geet settled Daadi in the room. Daadi didn't say anything, when Geet informed her abt her departure to US the very next day. Daadi smiled weekly suppressing her hurt. Not that Geet didn't understand but didn't know how was she going to get that smile back on daadi's face.
Geet went to her room to pack her stuffs. Meera & Dev tried speaking to her.
Meera ' Geet aap veerji ko ek mauka tho
Geet cut the topic immediately
Dev tried ' Geet bhai aisen nahi hain. Aap bhi jaanthi ho it was all a misunderstanding
Geet looked away. She was hurt deep within.
Dev & Meera spent the whole afternoon trying to convince her. Geet didn't say anything she just kept quiet.
Latter in the afternoon Meera & Dev where discussing in their room when Meera's mom came in..
Meeras mom ' Mujhe Geet ki baat kuch samjh nahi aathi
geets step froze outside the room door .. she doesn't like to eve drop.. she just decided to leave
Meera ' maa aap rahne do
Meeras mom ' nahi beta, aakhir jo bhi ho Maan uska pati hain
yeh ladki uske liyen sati ho sakti hain.. lekin usken saat nahi jana chathi
Dev was already pissed off .. he didn't want to say anything to an elderly lady but today he lost his patience & shouted.. but it was directed at Meera
Dev ' Meera ek aur lawaz nahi.. his hand was raised.. not even caring she was full term pregnant. Meera looked at him with tearful eyes & then at her mom accusingly. The message was conveyed & her mom just left from there.
Dev hit the chest hard hurting his hand. Meera instantly took his hand in hers & cried... Dev pleaded forgiveness
Meera kissed his hand & whimpered I know u would never hurt me
Dev just hugged her dearly .. kissing her frightened himself.
It was post dinner. Maan was in his empty room when the scent in the air warned his senses her presence. He turned around only to see her walk in with a glass milk.
Aapne dinner nahi kiya she said softly, extending the glass to him.
This sudden change in her addressing him.. went back to the time when he had told her his side of the story. Even now he remembered clearly how she hesitated & instantly addressed him as aap the moment she had the doubt!! he felt choked.
She handed over the glass & walked towards the door. He didn't know if he had any right to say anything to her.
Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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