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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asya OS - Kiss me !


Asad : Miss.Farooqui - I mean Zoya, mein tumse -
Before he could say the rest, someone had called out his name, it was Tanveer!
Tanveer : jammy!!! Jammy!! Ghar mein koi hai! Mujhe lagta hai koi chor hai
Zoya : CHOR? Omg mera pepper spray! Room mein hai, ab mein kia karoon? Woh chori karle ga!
Asad : Miss. Farooqui! Pepper spray hee toh hai! Doosri le lena
Zoya : No No Mr. Khan ap ko pata nahi! Idar aao! * she whispers in his ear* ap ko ek secret batao? Koi baat nai mein hud hee bata dehti ho, actually jitne bhi gunday hai un sab ko maarne mein meri best friend ne madat kee hai! Mera pepper spray!
Tanveer : Jammy Jammy!!!
Zoya : Mr. Khan ap kaise hai? Apni friend ke baray mein bhool hee gai
* he gives her an 'its all becoz u' look*
Zoya : sorry ( she covers her mouth )
Asad : Tanu, kia hua?
Tanu : Ghar mein chor hai I think!
Zoya : it's okay Tanu Don't worry! Mein pakar loongi usse! Aisa khayal karoongi na ek minute mein aai
Asad : Zo -
* she leaves *
Asad : pagal hai Ms. Farooqui!
Tanu : Jammy mujhe darh lag raha hai kahin woh churail eye wala na ho
Asad remmebers what that churail eye guy/girl did

( flashback )
Zoya was spinning like a beautiful, cheerful girl but that churail guy/girl misunderstood that it was Tanu so he -
Asad : Zoya!
Tanu : Kia hua jammy?
Asad : Tanu! Rembr last time churail ankh walay ko laga ke it was Zoya toh usne woh penkha tha and Zoya was going to die but thanks to -
As he was finishing his sentence, he heard Zoya screaming!
Zoya : Mr. Khan!!! Mr. Khan!!!
Asad goes back into the house and then her room, he sees Zoya in her room screaming!
Asad : Ms. Farooqui! Are you okay? Kia hua? Ap theek toh haina? Chot toh nai lagi?
Zoya : No Mr. Khan!! I-I'm alright but *she cries like a kid* mera peper spray!! I can't find it! ( She cries more )
Asad : What? Ap chila rahi thi pepper spray ke liye? I thought ke tummein kuch hua!! ( he was in tears )
Zoya : Haan ! Agar mujhe kuch hota toh mera pepper spray -
Before she could explain further more, Asad hugs her tightly, as he hugged her she felt the warmness of his hug. She felt safe and comfortable in his arms like a beautiful dream. she closed her eyes and as she closed her eyes, everything stopped. She couldn't feel anything but warmness, calmness and secureness.
Asad : Zoya ... Next time aisa nai karna phirse, I get worried.
*The hug broke*
He came closer leaving no gap between them. He looked into her eyes then her lips, her lips seemed sweet to kiss, he thought. He holds her by her waist, pulling her closer. And finally, he gently kisses her red lips.

Thats it :)
How was it?
Plsss commenttt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Very very very nice
But where is meao meao tannu , off thank GOD she didnt disturb them when they were together
Very nice os loved the last part , hope they CAN make in qubool hai scene Like this one without this billi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
awieee it ws chooo cute!!
very nice!!
lovely!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
OMG that was amazing! hahaha how she cries for her pepper spray LOL Tannu bhi na 😡 Now if there was a chor where the flip is he? He just disappeared! Stupid woman... BUT OMG THE HUG AND THE KISS SOOO GOOD!

Loved it hun
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
lovely OS 👏 loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS
I really love it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
it very nice...
it just awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Thank you guys ;) for ur lovely comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Even thought i thought he would confess her..
He didint ohh no!,
Anyways it was cute update
Awsome

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