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Posted: 12 years ago

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

nice prologue and cs.

loved it loads.

i think manyata is in luv with
someone.

but he considers her as best friend.

why was she running alone amd from whom.

who was dat person who hold her wrist.

dere r so many confusions dear

so cant wait.continue soon.

Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

oh tho aap bhi likhna start kar rhe ...😆😆fir bhi bhoth zayada acha likhga hai ab plz ...pm kar diyo finally mujhe teri story padne ko milegi i have a one question isme j eveil hai ya sudhri hui hai ? 😊...awesome prologule ... loved it ab jaldi se 1st chappy de de wait nhi ho rha !!!
😆😆😆

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago

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aathiraa

@aathiraa

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome prolog and cs

do continue soon.

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome blossom who said u r not a gud writer u r really a grt writer..

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

GF ☺️ Nice concept but I think ye title ka SS DEK me already hai..Swini (choco.swiss) likhti hai...
kamini...donone QH se churaye 🤣

And ch 1 update jaldi karna. I am waiting.

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shaisra

@Brokenhearty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely i really like it alot...
Pzzz cont soon and pm me...

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-
GF ☺️ Nice concept but I think ye title ka SS DEK me already hai..Swini (choco.swiss) likhti hai...
kamini...donone QH se churaye 🤣

And ch 1 update jaldi karna. I am waiting.

😆thx BF☺️

btw i have no idea bf🤣well we can change it right😆ohh bf abhi tu prologue update diya hai🥱well wait for update🤣tx ed🤗