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Gr8 prologue ,

Originally posted by: ...anju...

nice prologue and cs.

loved it loads.

i think manyata is in luv with
someone.

but he considers her as best friend.

why was she running alone amd from whom.

who was dat person who hold her wrist.

dere r so many confusions dear

so cant wait.continue soon.

thanks😳wait n watch 😆will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: priyash..

oh tho aap bhi likhna start kar rhe ...😆😆fir bhi bhoth zayada acha likhga hai ab plz ...pm kar diyo finally mujhe teri story padne ko milegi i have a one question isme j eveil hai ya sudhri hui hai ? 😊...awesome prologule ... loved it ab jaldi se 1st chappy de de wait nhi ho rha !!!
😆😆😆

thanks will update soon😊

Originally posted by: aathiraa

awesome prolog and cs

do continue soon.

thanks will do 😊

Originally posted by: htgcute

Awesome blossom who said u r not a gud writer u r really a grt writer..

thanks u so much😳

Originally posted by: annesha18

awesome
please pm me

thanks Ann🤗

Originally posted by: shaisra

lovely i really like it alot...
Pzzz cont soon and pm me...

thanks will update soon😊

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

such a beautiful prologue dear. its so gripping! well i will not throw any random guesses about who is who. i'll wait n watch. when are u updating dear! do it fast. just cant wait to see what happens ahead. i never knew u could write so nicely riyu. kaha chupake rakha tha talent??

thanks sanju🤗 iss talent ka muje bhi nai pata tha 😳 🤣

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

pyaar pe zor nahi-ye huwa na perfect name for the ss 👍🏼
mujhe wait karneki aadat nahi hai..mai dusro ko wait karati hoo 🤣

😆bf thanks☺️ok bf will tery to update soon🤗

Originally posted by: -Sans-

Haila😲 u writing a SS 🥳
the prologue is amazing👍🏼 cont soon and do pm me

thanks u sana🤗will do it😳

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... It was fab...

I am waiting for the next update...

Do pm me...

thanks 😳will do 😊

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice cs...nd interesting prologue...update soon...nd pm me when u update...

thanks😳will do😊

The prolouge was just super. Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Shahista01

GREAT PROLOGUE AND CS RIA..👏 LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE...

CONTINUE SOON😉

thanks shahista 😳will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: serat

really good prologue
cntiuneee
really good
loved it!!!!!!!!

thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Prologue Ria Bacha

Good luck with ur new SS

thanks mom🤗

Originally posted by: mrs.K

Gr8 prologue ,

continue soon😊.

thanks😊

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

NIce prologue Chota Chatri😊...loved it...continue soon

thanks gargi🤗will update soon😊

Originally posted by: andy.a

The prolouge was just super. Do continue soon.

thanks will update soon😳