taarey os - ISHQ SUFIYANA updated ch-4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY MY SWEETU BUDDIES , WELL THIS IS MY FIRST OS ( may be 2 shot orn 3 shots) 😉 AND ITS ESP ON D REQUEST OF ROCKANYA MY SWEET DEAR BUDDY , SO DON'T BEAT ME IF U DON'T LIKE THIS BUT IF U REALLY LIKE THIS THEN DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART 😊

~ ISHQ SUFIYANA ~

(TAAREY OS BASED ON CURRENT TRACK )

CHAPTER - 1
d story starts after taarey's break up and after that taani has proved herself in every possible way as d best gs , best student , best friend , best daughter best sister also as she has done something which made her tauji realized how wrong he was , and she changed tauji's thinkings about dance also , now he behaves normally with swayam also and have no problem with swayam's profession in dance , now she has decided 2 take teaching as her career option , as she loves teaching , but d thing is that she won't teach 4 money purpose but 4 spreading education , she teaches half time in a private school 4 earning money and half time she teaches in orphanage but no one knows about this , she has just started teaching , now d3 team also a little popular and rey's profession is also set , and so was of swayam , now swaron r back together but swayam is still unaware of sharon and rey's plan

today rey has decided 2 tell taani about all these things that he has done all this 4 taani only and his actual reason behind d break up ,
he only know how he lived without her all these days , he was living just in a hope that one day taani will come back 2 him once she get 2 know d truth and about all these drama , and that day taarey will be back together ,
taani was also paining , hurt inside her sweet innocent heart which is broken
very harshly and that too into uncountable pieces , she was still very hurt as no one could understand her , but she lives 2 proof herself and 4 d happiness of her maa who is no more now but watching her from heaven ,
rey messaged taani
" taani come and meet me in d rehearsal hall of our college , don't say no , or don't ignore its really very urgent plz , its my last wish "

beep beep
taani got d message
and she gets suspicious , surprise , shock as soon as she saw rey's name as he hardly calls or message her ,

she opened d message and read it , in no time her eyes get wet ,
she was a little confused as well as scared ,
taani ( 2 herself) - " ab kya baat karni hai rey ko mujhpe , mujhe jana chahiye ya nahi , but kahin koi problem ho to , i should go
( pyaar mar kar bhi hamesha zinda rehta hai , hum nafrat karna chahe to bhi hamara dil pyaar hee karta hai , pyaar jitna khoobsurat ehsaas hota hai utni hi zyada takleef bhi deta hai , utna hi zyada dard bhi hota hai is pyaar main ,)

taani go 2 d rehearsal hall 2 meet rey

on d other side rey was waiting 4 taani in d rehearsal hall impatiently ,
his back is facing d door , he was standing there closing his eyes , lost in taarey old yet d most beautiful memories , only taani's face was flashing in his mind as well as heart , her innocence , her purity , her cutely weird antics , her love , her care , everything , he was reminiscing each and every moment spent with taani , taani was his love as well as pain , his soul as well as his life , his heart as well as heart beat , taani was everything 4 him ,

while he was drowning in d beautiful taarey memories , a girl comes from behind and hugs rey tightly from behind , but this was not d same touch , he felt it a little different and he gets shocked as he opened her eyes he saw through d mirror in front of him that its' not taani but it's kria who is hugging him
he was too shocked 2 react at that moment ,

taani reached there at that very moment before he could react or do anything , and in no second her eyes filled with tears , she was numb 2 see d sight in front of her , a girl is hugging rey so tightly , she was facing their back and it was looking as if d two of them r plastered with each other

but as soon as rey come out from his shock , he immediately turned back and roughly put kria's hand down his shoulders but he got more shocked 2 see taani standing at d door with tears continuously flowing down her cheeks reflecting a no. of emotions at d same time , pain , jealousy , anger , hurt all were visible in taani's beautiful eyes , he could not understand what was actually going on , and how can kria come there , when and why ??? why is she hugging him , ??? he called taani not kria there , but one thing was sure 2 him that taani has misunderstood him and so his eyes also got filled with tears due 2 d fear of loosing his actual true love taani , and d pain of taani's heart and hurt anger and hatered in her eyes was piercing his heart even more ,

as rey put kria's hands down harshly , kria lifted her eys and said
kria ( cryingly a little ) - i love u rey , i really love u , i am sorry ki us waqt mujhe aapko chod ke jana pada , i am sorry rey , but i know ki aap aaj bhi apni kria se , mujhse pyaar karte hain ,
( kria didn't saw taani as her back was facing taani , rey was least bothered about kria and he was listening but his eyes were constantly on taani ,

this last line shocked taani even more , now she can't control her emotions, so she just ran away from there cryingly , sobbing , weeping a lot ,

rey was about 2 go but then kria hold his hand
asking him again and again
kria - bolo na rey , karte ho na aap aaj bhi mujhse pyaar , hai na

rey ( a little shouting ) - just stop it kria , just stop all this non sense , what rubbish r u talking , tum mujhe chod ke gayi thi main nahi , no no no i don't love u infact i have never loved u , i love only one girl in this world and that is taani not u , get that okk

( and he run away from there behind taani )
taani was walking all crying , her pain , anger , frustration was coming out in form of tears which were flowing down her cheeks without stopping , she couldn't believe , she don't want 2 get affected by it but still she was getting most affected , after all both have already done break up , but still her heart was paining real badly by seeing rey with kria , she was feeling so disgusting on rey , each and every piece of her broken heart was crying , paining , hurting ,

( she was walking on d road alone as she tried but she couldn't find an auto rickshaw )

rey came running behind her

rey - taani taani , taani , ruko
( taani started walking faster as she listened and saw rey coming behind her)

rey grab her hand and make her turn as she was neither stopping nor listening 2 rey

~to be continued ~
precap - taareylicious 😉 so stay tuned 😆

SORRY IF I BORED OR DISAPPOINT ANYONE
DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART
love u all buddies
take care and keep smiling 😊😊

( a little glimpse of d chapter 2)




(a little glimpse of chapter 3 , just a glimpse , 4 more u all will have 2 read taareylicious update 😉😉 😆)



taarey ki twinkle 😉 , 2 know more go and read update my dear 😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yupieee moni dear me first saw it b4 ur pm... coming to os wowww amazing as always n filled with emotions n pain of true love 😊 😊 ... taani proved her as best student,frnd,daughter,sister wowww superb 😛 😛 😛 n swaron r together awww happy for them 😃 😃 😃 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️... n taani as a teacher wowww its superb dear 😊 😊 😊 ... the way u explained taarey's situation is awesome n very emotional 😭 ... i was happy when rey text taani to come to rh n rey lost in taarey memories yeah i badly need this in d3 also... but tht kriya 😡 😡😡 stupid girl spoiled every thing how dare she hugged rey... but i loved rey least bothered about kriya 😃 n saw taani n her pain wowww really his love is meant 1Ly for taani 😊 ... n when tht kriya said i love u n all buk buk rey shouted i thought of slap 😆 😆seriously ... n rey running behind taani n grabbed her hand hope all will be fine between them n our taarey will be back together... 😊 😊 n waiting to c taarey romance n patch up

btw wht is the meaning of the title???? 😕 😕 sry i didnt understand 😕

amazing update dear loved it to the core... do continue it soon n pm me... 👏👏 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow super
Plz update soon n pm me plzz
Loved it
Poor rey hope taani understand him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!! i came runningbut i lost 1st position
unres!!
sweetu...
nice Plot.. i loved the starting ...it was emotional... beautifully penned sweetu ..loved the way u wrote a heartbroken taani.. i felt so bad for her😭😭 ...she was already hurt n still she decided to give their relation a chance n came to meet him but then the scene she had in front of her eyes!!.. she was heartbroken!! felt soo bad for her!!..
n rey!! cannot blame him too.. he was not at fault !!😒he didnt do anything😒.. he only wished their reunion but fate!!😭😒 fate planned something else for them😒 .. he was innocent in this case which makes me feel bad for him too.. such a bad game fate plays sometimes!!!!

loved it sweetu.. u wrote it beautifully ...
Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for update...
pls do it soon...
nd kriya q aati hai hamesha?
kabaab me haddi kahin ki...
i have become allergic to her!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept first of all...
and secondly, i dnt knw how to react...
initially, it was so nice and soft...laga ki finally patch up ho jayega..
rey lost in d dreamland was soo sweet <3
and taani finally agreeing to meet him too...
but then the jhatka...it was literally a shock!
felt so bad for taani...and rey too...
its soo sadd... =(
hope rey is able to make taani understand his point...
*sigh*
im blabbering, na? always happens...
anyways...eagerly looking forward to the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it... Rey's plan gone wrong for him...
Taani is hurt more than ever... Her feeling betrayed again was so emotional...
Update next part jaldi se... N sorry i m late for commenting on ur other stories as i have my exams...
Awesome job... Waiting for the nxt part... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itsreally intrestin cnt wait fr taareylicious update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome ... very heart touching start ...
lovely ... love it...😊
kriya kyon aaye 😡
you write taarey emotion so beautifully 👏
precap is taareylicious 😉😉😉
waiting for next chapter ...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start,n kriya, I was soo not expecting that!!! I'm really looking forward to the next part, please do continue soon

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