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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rajkumaripari

coming to os wowww amazing as always n filled with emotions n pain of true love  πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š ... taani proved her as best student,frnd,daughter,sister wowww superb πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› n swaron r together awww happy for them  πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ β€οΈ  β€οΈ  β€οΈ... n taani as a teacher wowww its superb dear πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š  ... the way u explained taarey's situation is awesome n very emotional πŸ˜­ ... i was happy when rey text taani to come to rh n rey lost in taarey memories    yeah i badly need this in d3 also... but tht kriya πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘😑  spoiled every thing how  she hugged rey... but i loved rey least bothered about kriya  πŸ˜ƒ n saw taani n her pain wowww really his love is meant 1Ly for taani πŸ˜Š ... n when tht kriya said i love u n all buk buk rey shouted i thought of slap πŸ˜†  πŸ˜†seriously ... n rey running behind taani  n grabbed her hand hope all will be fine between them n our taarey will be back together... πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š n waiting to c taarey romance n patch up  



hey   my  sweet   dear  friend πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
tight   hugs  4  your  awesome   heart  touching  comment dear   πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

but  yaar  slap  thoda   zyada  ho  jata  ,  so  rey's  shouting he  thik  hai  abhi  ke  liye  πŸ˜†

πŸ€—  i  am   fully  surprised  after  seeing  your  wonderful  comment   dearπŸ€— β€οΈ


dil  se  a  very very  big   thank  u  my  sweet  dear  friend  πŸ€—

it  really   means  a  lot  2  me   
love u  a   lot  buddy  and i   loved  your    amazing  special wonderful   comment also   ,  
thanks   again  
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dinu..

awsum dr.so emotional...luvd it😳 plzzz update soon


thank  u  so  much  dear  πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Tani achvd heights.Hr down to erth personality tchng in orphanage is realy cmndbl.Oh nw Rey wna reveal d truth & gt bck hr in hs lf.Wt d! Kriya is bck,lft our Tani in MU Rey(its obvious)! Our Rey gv gd reply to Kriya.Nw hw he's gna gt hr bck?Excitd.


awww   πŸ€—   dil  se   thank  u  dear  4  this   hearty   lovely  comment  dear  πŸ€—

 


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

awesome.
put next part soon.


thank  u  dear  πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
i  will   update  asap😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
YAAR it was awesome...
Sorry for the late comment...was held up wid sooo many thingss...😭
But I just loved it!!!
I never expected such a twist...
Anywayzz eagerly waiting for taareylicious episode!!😳
Great job!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

YAAR it was awesome...

Sorry for the late comment...was held up wid sooo many thingss...😭
But I just loved it!!!
I never expected such a twist...
Anywayzz eagerly waiting for taareylicious episode!!😳
Great job!!



thank   u  so  much  dear   
it's  ok  i  can  understand   πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
plz  don;t  cry   smile   now   and   keep smiling  always   
dil  se   thank  u  4  this  hearty  comment dear  πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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Posted: 10 years ago
A  HEARTY  THANKS   4  ALL  YOUR   WONDERFUL  COMMENTS   WHICH   REALLY  ENCOURAGE   ME  A  LOT πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

                 ~~  ISHQ  SUFIYANA ~~

chapter  - 2  

rey grab  her  hand  and  make  her  turn   as  she  was  neither  stopping   nor  listening  2  rey  ,   both   were   crying  ,  


rey  -   taani   ek   baar   meri  baat   to  sun  lo  ,  

taani  (   crying   as  well as   trying  2  free   her  hand  from   rey's   grip   but  can't   as  his   grip  is  more   tighter  ,  but  not  that   tight   that   it  will   hurt  her)   -  kya  suno  main  rey   ,  kya   suno  ,  isiliye   bulaya   tha  na  aapne   mujhe  ,  ye   dikhane   ke  liye  ,  apni   right  choice   dikhane  ke  liye ,  apka  pehla   pyaar  kria   ,

rey  crying  -  aisa   nahi  hai  taani  ,  tum   galat  samjh   rahi  ho  ,   meri  baat  to  suno  

but   taani  crying  and  speaking  not  letting  him  2   complete  or  speak  further    ,  sobbing  and  stammering  in  between  ,  as  she  was  in  pain  real  badly  ,   and  so   was   rey  in pain  and   fear  of   loosing  his   love  again  

taani  (  crying  weeping  in  a   painful  voice  )-  apne   to  kabhi  mujhse   pyaar   kiya  hi  nahi  tha  rey   kyun   ki    main  to  kabhi  apke  level  ki  thi  hi  nahi  na   ,aapke   liye  to  main   hamesha   se  hi   ek   stupid   small   town   girl   rahi  hun  ,  jo apne   hi  jhothe   sapno ki  duniya   main  khoyi  rehti  hai  ,  haan  nahi  hun  main  aap  logo  jaise  modern  high  figh  type  ki ,  aur  na  hi  kabhi  ban na   chahti  aur  ab  to  bilkul  bhi  nahi    , agar  modern  hone  ka  matlab   kisiko  use  karke  ,  sapne   dikha  ke   uska  dil   todna  hai  ,  to  nahi   ban  na   mujhe  modern  , agar  modern  hone  ka   matlab  kisiki  weakness   pe   just   because   usse   dance  nahi  aata  to  uska  mazak  udana   hai   to  nahi hona   mujhe  modern  ,  agar  modern  hone   ka  matlab  kisika   dil   todna   hai    to  nahi hona   mujhe  aisa  modern ,  aur    nahi  chahiye  mujhe  kisiki  sympathy  , ya   koi   care   aur   pyaar  ka   dikhava  , nahi  chahiye  ,  aap   jayiye   rey   ,  jayiye    yahan  se  ,  mujhe   akela  chod  dijiye  ,  bhagwaan  ke  liye  mujhe  akela   chod   dijiye  

(  she   again  starts   trying  2  free  her   hand  from   rey's   grip  but   now   rey   holds   her  more   tightly    and   holds  her   from  waist  also   so that   she  can' t   run  away   without   listening  2  him  and   misunderstanding   him  hurting   her   as  always  but  now  rey's  grip  starts   hurting  her   ,  it  was    peircing her  soft  flesh   skin  but   taani's    pain   has  over  taken  this   little  pain  ,  she  was  feeling  pain  but her  heart was   more   paining    because   of   d  betrayal   thinking  and  that  misunderstanding )

taani's  each  and  every   word has   already   pierced  rey's     heart  as  well   as  his   soul   ,  tears   were   flowing   from  his   eyes  , he   was  damn   hurt   2  listen  all  these  ,now  he   just  faced  a   little  of  taani's   pain  , but   he   was   hurting  and  piercing more   from  inside   because   of   being   d  reason   of   taani  ,  his  love  's  pain  
but  somehow  he  speaks  while   crying  ,  and   sinking   heart  by  pain  each  and  every   second  

rey  crying  and  stammering  in between  
-  nahi  aaj   nahi   taani   aaj  nahi  ,  aaj  tum  meri  baat  finish  hone  se  pehle   nahi  ja  sakti  , u  have  2  listen  me  

taani  ( shouting  a  little  )-  nahiii ,  nahi   baat  karni  mujhe  aapse  ,   plz   mujhe  jaane   dijiye  rey   plz  mujhe  dard   ho  raha  

now  rey    realize  that  he   was   hurting her  and  so   he    held  her  by her  shoulders  ,  but   because  of  his   pain  ,  anger  ,  his   grip  was  still  tight  , 
rey  (  shouting  more)   NOOO  u  have   2   listen  me   damn  it  .  what  do  u  think  ki  main   tumse   duur   rehke    tumse   break  up  karke   bahut  khush  tha   ,  no  
 nahi  ,  never   ,  main  bhi  utna  hi  pain   main  tha   jitna  ki  tum  ,  par  phir   bhi   maine   ye    sab  kyun   kiya  pata   hai  kyun  ,  tumhare   liye   ,  sirf   aur  sirf   tumhaare  liye  
  
( taani  lifted   her   teary   eyes   )

rey  -  tumhare   liye  ,  kyun   tum   mere  liye  apni  life  ko  sacrifice  karne  lagi  thi   ,   tum  mere   liye   apni  individuality  , apne   real  self  , apne  aap  ko  kho   rahi  thi  ,  
aur  main  ye  kaise   dekh  sakta  tha   ki  mera  pyaar  ,  meri   hi  vajah  se  apne  aap  kho   de  ,  kaise   dekh   sakta  tha  main  ,   isiliye  sharon  aur  maine   milke   ye   temporary  break  up ka  drama   kiya  ,  par   trust  me  taani  ,  i   have  also   gone  through   this  pain   ,  each  and  every  moment  ,  every   second  ,   i  have   just   wished  and  prayed  that     u  get   successful   and  achieve  something  in  your  life  and   so   can  be  together  again  .  today  also  i  called  u   here  because   i  wanted  2   tell  u   all  this  truth  


(  PLZ  USE  YOUR  IMAGINATION , THEY  R  ON  ROAD  AND NOT  IN  TAANI'S  ROOM πŸ˜†)

taani  was  a   little  shock  and  was    not  understanding   what's   actually   happening  ,  everything  was  so  confusing  , she  didn't  know   how  2   react  ,  her   heart    wants   2  believe     rey  but    is  it   so easy  2  forgive   or   forget  that  worst  pain ,  she  was   feeling  weak  ,  she   was   just   standing  and  listening   and   trying  2  understand   like  a  statue  

rey   continues  -  trust   me taani  i  have   died   every  second   when  i  saw  u  in  pain  ,  or  see  u  crying ,  it   hurted   me   even more    2  ignore  u ,and   talk  lies  and   rudely  with  u  ,  how  will  i   explain  u  that   how  much  i longed  2  be  in  your  embrace  ,  2  be  in  your   arms   ,   2  feel    u  and   your   soothing   serene   love  ,   u  r  d  only  one   who  completes  me  , infact   u   not  only   completes  me  but  also   d   relief   of  my  soul  ,   my  actual  reason  4  existence  ,  u  r   my  life  ,  my  love  .  only   u  and  will   always  be u  ,      

suddenly   an  image  comes  in taani  's  mind      of   kria  hugging  rey   tightly  
and  she  speaks  

taani-   but   jo  abhi  maine   dekha   kya  vo  sab  bhi   jhooth tha ,  aapka   pehla   pyaar   kria   , 
 
rey-  no   u  r   misunderstanding  ,  because    i  don't  love  kria  , d  feelings  ,  pain   i  felt   after  loosing   u  taani  ,  when   u  go  away  from  me  r  different  and  much  more  painful  than  tha   pain  when kria  left  me  ,  trust  me   taani  ,   our  temporary   break  up  made   me  understood  that   kria   was   just  a  mere  attraction  , but   my  love  is  u  and  only  u  and   i  have  actually   truly   heartily    loved  only   one   girl  in this  universe  and   that's  u  and   i  will   always   love  u   no  matter  what   ,  i  neither   want  any  high  figh  modern  girl  nor   any   big   dancer  ,   i  just  want  my cutie  taani  ,  my  sweetheart ,  my  love    my  --

but  before  he   could  finish   his  sight   cought  something   and  he  holds taani  in his  embrace   and  takes   taani   2   d  other  side  of  d  road      as    he   just   saw  a   high  speed   car   coming   from   d  other  end  of   d  road    as   they  were    still  on   a   road  ,  but   were  alone  as   it  was   night   

(  to   be  continued  )

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Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaya !! Me first !! La la la la ...
~Res~
Will unres soon... hehe...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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firstly must say its an amazing update sweetu πŸ˜› loved it very much n very emotional n full of love pain... aftr updating this much emotional part u r telling me not get tears nooo ways        coz i cant control emotions n ya very lovely this much love between them wowww superb... n taani's words gosh seriously damn emotional her pain n words r really awesome... n rey so sad of him how much he loves her... n precap wowww very interesting do continue it soon n pm me... πŸ€—  πŸ€—  πŸ€—  πŸ€—  πŸ€—   πŸ€—  πŸ€— 
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