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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

YAAR it was awesome...

Sorry for the late comment...was held up wid sooo many thingss...😭
But I just loved it!!!
I never expected such a twist...
Anywayzz eagerly waiting for taareylicious episode!!😳
Great job!!



thank u so much dear
it's ok i can understand 😊😊
plz don;t cry smile now and keep smiling always
dil se thank u 4 this hearty comment dear 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
A HEARTY THANKS 4 ALL YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS WHICH REALLY ENCOURAGE ME A LOT 😊😊

~~ ISHQ SUFIYANA ~~

chapter - 2

rey grab her hand and make her turn as she was neither stopping nor listening 2 rey , both were crying ,


rey - taani ek baar meri baat to sun lo ,

taani ( crying as well as trying 2 free her hand from rey's grip but can't as his grip is more tighter , but not that tight that it will hurt her) - kya suno main rey , kya suno , isiliye bulaya tha na aapne mujhe , ye dikhane ke liye , apni right choice dikhane ke liye , apka pehla pyaar kria ,

rey crying - aisa nahi hai taani , tum galat samjh rahi ho , meri baat to suno

but taani crying and speaking not letting him 2 complete or speak further , sobbing and stammering in between , as she was in pain real badly , and so was rey in pain and fear of loosing his love again

taani ( crying weeping in a painful voice )- apne to kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi tha rey kyun ki main to kabhi apke level ki thi hi nahi na ,aapke liye to main hamesha se hi ek stupid small town girl rahi hun , jo apne hi jhothe sapno ki duniya main khoyi rehti hai , haan nahi hun main aap logo jaise modern high figh type ki , aur na hi kabhi ban na chahti aur ab to bilkul bhi nahi , agar modern hone ka matlab kisiko use karke , sapne dikha ke uska dil todna hai , to nahi ban na mujhe modern , agar modern hone ka matlab kisiki weakness pe just because usse dance nahi aata to uska mazak udana hai to nahi hona mujhe modern , agar modern hone ka matlab kisika dil todna hai to nahi hona mujhe aisa modern , aur nahi chahiye mujhe kisiki sympathy , ya koi care aur pyaar ka dikhava , nahi chahiye , aap jayiye rey , jayiye yahan se , mujhe akela chod dijiye , bhagwaan ke liye mujhe akela chod dijiye

( she again starts trying 2 free her hand from rey's grip but now rey holds her more tightly and holds her from waist also so that she can' t run away without listening 2 him and misunderstanding him hurting her as always but now rey's grip starts hurting her , it was peircing her soft flesh skin but taani's pain has over taken this little pain , she was feeling pain but her heart was more paining because of d betrayal thinking and that misunderstanding )

taani's each and every word has already pierced rey's heart as well as his soul , tears were flowing from his eyes , he was damn hurt 2 listen all these ,now he just faced a little of taani's pain , but he was hurting and piercing more from inside because of being d reason of taani , his love 's pain
but somehow he speaks while crying , and sinking heart by pain each and every second

rey crying and stammering in between
- nahi aaj nahi taani aaj nahi , aaj tum meri baat finish hone se pehle nahi ja sakti , u have 2 listen me

taani ( shouting a little )- nahiii , nahi baat karni mujhe aapse , plz mujhe jaane dijiye rey plz mujhe dard ho raha

now rey realize that he was hurting her and so he held her by her shoulders , but because of his pain , anger , his grip was still tight ,
rey ( shouting more) NOOO u have 2 listen me damn it . what do u think ki main tumse duur rehke tumse break up karke bahut khush tha , no
nahi , never , main bhi utna hi pain main tha jitna ki tum , par phir bhi maine ye sab kyun kiya pata hai kyun , tumhare liye , sirf aur sirf tumhaare liye
( taani lifted her teary eyes )

rey - tumhare liye , kyun tum mere liye apni life ko sacrifice karne lagi thi , tum mere liye apni individuality , apne real self , apne aap ko kho rahi thi ,
aur main ye kaise dekh sakta tha ki mera pyaar , meri hi vajah se apne aap kho de , kaise dekh sakta tha main , isiliye sharon aur maine milke ye temporary break up ka drama kiya , par trust me taani , i have also gone through this pain , each and every moment , every second , i have just wished and prayed that u get successful and achieve something in your life and so can be together again . today also i called u here because i wanted 2 tell u all this truth


( PLZ USE YOUR IMAGINATION , THEY R ON ROAD AND NOT IN TAANI'S ROOM 😆)

taani was a little shock and was not understanding what's actually happening , everything was so confusing , she didn't know how 2 react , her heart wants 2 believe rey but is it so easy 2 forgive or forget that worst pain , she was feeling weak , she was just standing and listening and trying 2 understand like a statue

rey continues - trust me taani i have died every second when i saw u in pain , or see u crying , it hurted me even more 2 ignore u ,and talk lies and rudely with u , how will i explain u that how much i longed 2 be in your embrace , 2 be in your arms , 2 feel u and your soothing serene love , u r d only one who completes me , infact u not only completes me but also d relief of my soul , my actual reason 4 existence , u r my life , my love . only u and will always be u ,

suddenly an image comes in taani 's mind of kria hugging rey tightly
and she speaks

taani- but jo abhi maine dekha kya vo sab bhi jhooth tha , aapka pehla pyaar kria ,
rey- no u r misunderstanding , because i don't love kria , d feelings , pain i felt after loosing u taani , when u go away from me r different and much more painful than tha pain when kria left me , trust me taani , our temporary break up made me understood that kria was just a mere attraction , but my love is u and only u and i have actually truly heartily loved only one girl in this universe and that's u and i will always love u no matter what , i neither want any high figh modern girl nor any big dancer , i just want my cutie taani , my sweetheart , my love my --

but before he could finish his sight cought something and he holds taani in his embrace and takes taani 2 d other side of d road as he just saw a high speed car coming from d other end of d road as they were still on a road , but were alone as it was night

( to be continued )

precap - tareylicious 4 sure hehe 😉😉 with something called surprise ya shock yaa kuch bhi nahi😆😆😆

DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART IF YOU REALLY LIKE THIS UPDATE , AND SORRY IF I DISAPPOINT ANYONE 😊😊

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaya !! Me first !! La la la la ...
~Res~
Will unres soon... hehe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res/unres

firstly must say its an amazing update sweetu 😛 loved it very much n very emotional n full of love pain... aftr updating this much emotional part u r telling me not get tears nooo ways coz i cant control emotions n ya very lovely this much love between them wowww superb... n taani's words gosh seriously damn emotional her pain n words r really awesome... n rey so sad of him how much he loves her... n precap wowww very interesting do continue it soon n pm me... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
koi nahi
3rd to aai
supr awsm updat
jst hop ki taani rey ko maf kr de or firse taarey ban jay
Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsmmm lovd it...thnk god atlast taarey are gonna be together...really a vry heart touching update and rey's wrds were so emotional and taani's wrds tht she dnt want to be modern was damn killing...plz update soon and PM...eagerly waiting for taareylicious update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
love love u sweetu for ur tarelecious lovable emotional update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome super se uper wala update tatlly loved it
waiting fornext part and plz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc part.luvd it.waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey it was awesome yaar!!
LOVED IT!! 😊😊

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