AsYa FF Destruction of Darkness Updated Page 28

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Hey guys. Im here with a new FF. It is a bit different then the kinds of stories I usually write But, I hope you do like it!
For PM's, I usually just pm anyone who comments. If you want me to pm you constantly then just pm me and tell me! Thanks! :)
Destruction of Darkness
By: IIdewaaneII
Chapter 1: A Striking First Meeting
Boom bang boom. One gun made it seem like hundreds were being fired. It was about midnight, the street was empty other than the one black car and two man who fought for it.
Man voice: Move away from the car, or I'll shoot you.
Car owner: (trembling) But who are you.
The man came out of the shadows and into the brightness of the headlights.
Car owner: Asad?
Asad shot him quickly, giving the man no time to ask any questions. He walked over to the dead body and kicked him over.
Asad: Sorry, but you took too long.
He out the gun away and opened the car door. Before sitting inside the new black car, he grabbed the man's wallet and keys.
Asad: I might need these. By the way, thanks for the car.
He gave a dark laugh and shut the door of the car and drove off. Blasting his music he made his way to a night club. He has never been to this one before, but had heard that its always wild and filled with girls. Asad walked into the club and had the first impression of 'dead.' He didn't know the song and not many people were dancing. He went straight to the bar and sat down at the stool. He ordered a drink and sat there scanning the club to see if there was anyone interesting.
Asad: Hey you listen.
He called on the manager for some clarification.
Manager: Yes sir.
Asad: Is this club always dead?
The manager gave a light smile and answered the question.
Manager: Seems like it is your first time here. Well this is probably the most wild club you find around here. Just wait till 12: 05. That's when she comes out. The life of the party.
Asad checked his Rolex watch and looked back at the manager
Asad: its 12: 03 and who is she?
Manager: Just wait two minutes and You'll find out when she comes. Just make sure you don't mess around with her.
Asad: What do you mean?
Manager: Well, she is the jungli billi type.
Asad: haha. I have to meet her then!
Manager laughed and went back to work. After some moments the music began to fade and the dance for cleared. A girl in a silver sequenced spaghetti strap dress that was above her knees stood in the middle of the dance floor. She had 4 and a half high stilettos that had silver sparkled heels. As she flipped her hair and turned to face everyone. Asad could notice how perfectly she matched her red lipstick to her heels. Her eyes were almond shaped and milk chocolate coloured. She grabbed the mike and began to engage with everyone.
Girl: *Loud and obnoxiously* How's everyone doing tonight?
Everyone present at the club made a noise, insuring they are having a good time.
Girl: Well be ready for the time of your life as the music is about to go wild. Join the dance floor Cause I've got part on my mind!
The crowd cheered loudly and joined her on the dance floor. The music began to increase. Party on my mind was blasting and everyone danced as if their life depended on it. Asad saw the girl and was mesmerised by her beauty. Her perfect fair skin, milky chocolate coloured eyes, slim body and beautiful curves. He watched her dance and enjoy every moment of her life. Asad didn't bother to dance, but just sat there watching her dance. after a couple of songs, she came off the dance floor to get a break. She went outside to another room. Asad saw her leave and followed her. She was sitting on the sofa alone, tapping on her Samsung.
Asad came and sat down beside her.
Asad: Can I buy you a drink?
The girl put her phone down and made eye contact with Asad.
Girl: No thanks, I don't drink.
Asad: Well that surprising
The girl laughed out loud. A bit dark. Almost the same as his laughter.
Girl: You're way more different than I expected, Asad Ahmed Khan.
She got up to leave the club when Asad's deep voice stopped her.
Asad: How do you know my name? Who are you?
The girl laughed out loud once again
Girl: A person always keeps track of her enemies, Mr. Khan. Have a good night.
She left the club, leaving a stunned man behind.

Song Used: Party On My Mind
Movie: Race 2 (2013)
Link: YouTube


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Love it! Sounds exciting!! Can't wait for more! Thanks for the PM! :))
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Absolutely love the concept! Eager to know what Zoya was talking about! Very excited! Please continue soon, and could you please PM me, pretty please?
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interesting ...luking frwrd fr da nxt part..

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a new concept..lyk it ..plz pm me nxt tym..
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Intriguing! Wonder how she knows him :P please continue soon!!!
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Ingruiged by this

Cmtinue soon, im so in
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It ws too good... Cont soon plz
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