tose naina lage --- taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago
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tose naina lage piya saware
nahee bas me abb yeh jiya sawaen
mohabbat toh ek javeda jindagi hai
mohabbat toh ek javeda jindagi hai
tose naina lage mili roshani
tose mann jo laga mili jindagi
mohabbat toh ek javeda jindagi hai

Rey...i still remember the date..4th april 2012..The day i met you . my life got the goal that it yearned for...TRUE LOVE. You were my love...i just had to confirm it to be true.. i did...and i was gifted.. by you ,, BREAKUP ...14th may 2013 ... the day i will never forget...
Do you remember me anymore ?? do you remember the frst time we met ??
our secreat place ?? our promises ?? our LOVE ??
I do ... I still cherish them..dont know why.. i still coudnt let you go ...
I had loved you long before u did ... U were my mr.right ... u never have noticed.. i dint mean to make you notice either.. but fate did ...
The frst time u risked ur life for me ,,,you fought for my respect.. my morals ... i knew that day .. i could never be myself again ,, i had become yours ..
but for you i was still the same nothing special ,,, thats what you said ...
But i knew ,, i had made you weak ...
I had become ur responsibility cause you wanted me to be.. You made me feel safe .. You stood there gaurding me ...i knew i have given up...for you were willing to take me ...
shama ko pighlane kaa arman kyun hai
patange ko jalne kaa arman kyun hai
isi shauk kaa imtihan jindagi hai

I was ready to burn in ur rage. My life wasnt mine anymore .. each breath it took whispered ur name... My eyes had ur reflection in the mirror...
UR touch made me burn with desire .. cause ur eyes gave me hope that future does exist...Ur feel erased mt past... ur presence made my present...
But today i stand alone... with an empty mirror and empty future and an empty ME .

mohabbat jise baksh de jindagani
nahee maut par khatm usaki kahani
kaise jiya jayey
kaise jiya jayey
ishq bin


Taani ...i remember the frst day i saw you ... you were so different .. nothing i have ever known of. You were so innocent,, so pure,, so delicate ,, so angel .
I was fated with love .. TRUE OVE ..
You were the fresh air that blew through me.. suddenly i wanted to live in present ..my past had became a history .. You gave me courage.. you gave me motive ,,
you gave me you..
You became my necessity ,, one sight of yours made me crave for more...
I felt you belonged to me ..my princess and i was ur knight in shining aarmour.. i knew i had to protect you .. you were so pure i feared you would be stained.. I made myself nothing but Yours ..to protect you.. to love you ..
14th may 2013 ... i abandoned you ... the biggest mistake i have ever made in my life ... Life ???? i forgot i had none ,,, i gave it away the day i ached ur heart... my heart ripped apart in the pain you was feeling ..

shama ko pighlane kaa arman kyun hai
patange ko jalne kaa arman kyun hai
isi shauk kaa imtihan jindagi hai

i am burning ... burning in pain ... in guilt ... i am burning in agony ,,,,
i burn in anguish .. cause i hurted your emotions ...
i burn in agony cause i pained you pure heart..
i burn in wrath cause i made you question urself ...

mohabbat jahan hai waha jindagi hai
mohabbat naa ho toh kaha jindagi hai

today i stand ,,, for ur return ... for i beg to live .. to live with you ...




(hey guysss .. i know its not upto the mark ,, not that good,,,, but i wanted to write something like dis ,, i tried ,,,, but i dont know ow much i succeded...i invite ur critics)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres-
yipeee i am first

omg piya you rightly said that it's not up to our expectation because it's more than this it's awesome i loved it the way you portrayed their feelings or true love for each other is really commendable ...
thanks for the pm😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is good
awsm i luv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just awsome...👏 truly luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the pm...
😊
Edited by bhumikamakkar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written pritha one of ur bst work :-) luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so so so beautifully written .. beautiful!!! so touching n emotional .. its so beautiful .. a different and very nice attempt .. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome beautifully portrated rey's feelings... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ths s simply amazing...
song ws perfect to descrbe evrythng..
it ws so emotional n touching...
so pure n so true.
lovd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u potrayed their feelings too nicely and ur writing was awesome but i really do feel after the break up taani may become strong but will she ever return to rey

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