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Posted: 12 years ago
sry for late comment
it wa dam hot
even sitting in ac i am sweating a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Haven't read yet...but I'm 15
meanin I can't read it


awn its ok
do not worry story will continue from the last chaapy onyl so this si not so important
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: livvy

me 2 I wanna update 2 I have time write now 2 get started par kya karu this forum is 2 addicting


yea i am so lazy dat y my updates r late
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

sry for late comment

it wa dam hot
even sitting in ac i am sweating a lot


thank you
i am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18


yea i am so lazy dat y my updates r late

I'm updating after 3 months
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Originally posted by: livvy

I'm updating after 3 months

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can u please update it today itself pleassseee
sorry if i am bothering you
its just that i liek the ss a lot and i hav a small confusion
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its to good awsome
mindblowing zabardast annesha
i can't wait more please update soon
thanks for the pm n pm next update
when u update please update fast i m waiting awsome story zabaradst mindblowing wow fantastic u r the awsome writter😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: pari_vania

wow its to good awsome
mindblowing zabardast annesha
i can't wait more please update soon
thanks for the pm n pm next update
when u update please update fast i m waiting awsome story zabaradst mindblowing wow fantastic u r the awsome writter😊😊😊


thank you soo much
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Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 11

The storm had ended a long time ago and now the jungle was quietly and peacefully spleeping in the arms of the warm sun .the birds were flying high in the sky as the feathers sprang up and down ,while the leaves smoothly moved it head and there was a cold pleasant breeze blowing through out , a naughty ray of light travelled to the small tree house and hit his eyes ,at first he turned his head the other side to escape the ray but failed miserably and again another ray hit his eyes and withdrawing to the nature he finally got up and the first sight he saw was his dear manyata beneath him as he was still inside her ,he had never slept so peacefully ,last night completed the missing puzzle in his life as with his figure he caressed her check ,so bubbly and so pink ,she was indeed very beautiful and was all his ,he felt proud that he was the first one and last person to claim her body and her soul and never he could stand anybody taking his rights ,he was over possessive about his girl , his chains of thought were broken as he felt her struggling for some space ,he understood that she needed to move but with him inside her it was rather an impossible task he softly lifted his body and finally separated his organs from hers as he could see her frowning and a lone tears escaping from her eyes finally he dragged himself out of the bed and got into his pants and looked down her ,he knelled beside her and looked at her uncovered body ,the milky skin glowed in sun like some jewels but his heart ached to see all those blue and black marks all over her body and her blossom sollen and her lips all red and solllen her body explained the pain she had gone through last night his heart ached he regretted being so hard on her as he took his shirt from the floor and covered almost half of her body with it as he wandered around the kitchen as he knew the first thing manyata was going to ask when she would wake up was food it was common hunger which every one who is all new to this have , a smile appeared in his face as he remembered his first time it was with jai at the age of 13 ,at the very thought of jai his heart rang an alarm as he felt the ground below him sweeped away he had lied to manyata about many thing and did not even confess the truth about jai and the baby ,as the tale that he narrated to manyata was completely different from reality , to her he was taken to USA by giriraaj after the bomblast ,then they changed there identity ,giriraaj established a business and he lived by the false name of pratabh , the truth of him being a maiost was totally hidden from manyata he did not have the courage to confess the truth to her ,he feared loosing her all over again so decided not to think a bout it and to continue to keep her in darkness ,the thoughts were broken as he heard her cry in pain he turned and rushed to see her trying to get up on the bed as she screamed at him

MANYATA:uday what did you do to me see I cannot even move my hands?

A smirk was plastered to his face as he sat beside her and cupped her face saying

UDAY:I already told you na jaan it will hurt

She jerked his hands off and said getting all irritated

MANYATA:yes but I did not know after being with me in the bed you will turn into a tiger

Uday enjoyed her antics and decided to tease her even more

UDAY: a hungry tiger wifey

Manyata on noticing his behavior glared at him and said

MANYATA: you enjoy this na watching me in pain

UDAY:yes but only if I am the cause of such pain

He said with a smile which made her check blush furiously she hide her face in his broad chest as he ran his figure through her hair and kissed her forehead

IN ARNAV KHURANAA HOUSE

He took the whiskey glass on his hands and looked towards the handsomely dressed fairly young man who was none but his son standing opposite to him and he had fireballs in his eyes ,arnav was happy that his son was back to home ,he rarely met him although they worked in the same office as his son headed towards him a hurt tiger was seen him ,as his eyes clouded with tears he said

BOY:why do you always have to this ?

ARNAV:Its for your own good

BOY:then stop I do not want my good I hope you get that

It was more than enough he got up and looked straight into his eyes and screamed

ARNAV:no I don't you are my son and it is my responsibility to look after you if you are doing a mistake its me who will correct it

BOY:mistake huh dad I LOVE her

ARNAV:do you even know what are you telling

BOY:maybe I don't and I feel that is better for both of us you are on your way and let me live my life

Saying this he stormed outside the room as arnav crushed the glass in his hands and gritted his teeths saying

ARNAV:no way I cannot let this happen never

IN MANYATA HOUSE

Both unnati and vijay sat on the couch ,unnati was drowned into tears as vijay locked his hands in hers trying to pacify her pain it had been complete two days since manyata and pratbh was missing but they could not even get a clue even the police had no idea as abhi entered unnati looked at him as he shook his head in a no ,abhi came and layed his hands on her shoulder saying

ABHI:unzie please have something please

UNNATI:no unless jiji comes I will have nothing and no one is going to force me

VIJAY:ok ok abhi let it be she is too upset listen the dinner is served in the table you and have it

ABHI:no I am full now you had your dinner

VIJAY:no I am not hungry yet

Both knew that they were lying to each other as no one in the house had eat anything since last night ,nothing as they sat there suddenly a knock disturbed into there thoughts they opened the door as a wide smile crept into unnati face and she broke into a hug it was manyata and pratbh both clothes were shabby and dirty abhi had a smile and a tear too as for melodrama vijay banna broke in hug with pratbh as he said

VIJAY:awn I missed you so much where had you been huh

All witnessing the scene was shocked specially manyata as she fired glares at vijay and said

MANYATA:vijay banna I was also lost I guess

VIJAY:oh sorry m bhai

And finally departed and hugged manyata finally abhi came to manyata ,a guilt was shown in his face as she mumbled

ABHI:so where was you and what happened?

MANYATA:ahh I am tried can we discuss about it later

ABHI :Sure

He made his way back , manyata could clearly read his thoughts she did not like seeing her friend that way so she just pulled his hands and hugged him as she said with a tear

MANYATA: I missed you

He hugged her back as with a sparkle in his eyes he said

ABHI:I missed you too

While vijay and unnati adored this cute scene prtabh flinched his hands into fist and was ready to punch abhi but he controlled himself as they finally broke the hug and headed inside the room a happily ever after or maybe beginning of a tragic END

DONE WITH THIS CHAPPY

PLEASE FORGIVE MY MISTAKES

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Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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