VirMan SS~Tum Ho Mera Pyaar~Thread#2*Part 39-Pg 76 - Page 13

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome update

felt bad for maanvi

hope virat remembers everything soon

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

Thnk u so much, glad u lukd it..her will soon...will update 2morrow, n ur most wc..😊

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

first of all a very very heartist congratulations on your second thread so party sharty toh banti hai na🥳

now coming to the update again it was flawless and i enjoyed the every bit of it as laways😊

omg it was not a lame one yaar it was superb

you know what when i was readin their meeting on the terrrece haye purane dino ki yaad dila di yaar. thank u so much for refreashing old memories in heart of your readers. i was toh just enjoying that moment😳

so virat basically feeling for her as he know her before

i hope he got his memory back soon

overall it was dhamake daar update and i'll give u 10/10 so enjoy your success baby

now plz cont soon and keep rocking

thanks for the pm

love you🤗

  Thnk u so much Shivi..haan haan kar le Party,..Thnk u so much, glad u enjoyed it..he will get his memory back soon...thnk u so much 4 giving me 10/10 Shivali...I will surely enjoy..😳 Viraat ko send kar na..😆...will update 2morrow...thnk u, ur wc, n luv ya 2..😊

Originally posted by: Maridda

Hey,
I found this story through an appreciation thread for you and I love it. You are truly an amazing writer. I just read the last chapter, but I'm going to read the whole story. I'm like, addicted to your story. I'll reply to those chapters later, and please pm me when you update.
Love,
Marissa

Helloo...Oh really...thnk u so much...dat thread was made by my wonderful Partner, my DIII...😊😉...thnk u so much, dat really means a lot 2 me...will definitely pm u wen i'll update, thnk u so much..😊

Originally posted by: mika17

awesome update

Thnk u so much...😊

Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1

mmmuah lovely update sooon

  Thnk u so much..will update 2morrow..😊

Originally posted by: Khushi

it was too good😊 the feelings of virat u potriad them smoothly...feeling really bad for mannu😭...plzzz ,make virat regain his memory soon...

Thnk u so much...he will soon,..thnks 😊

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

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  KAL 2MORROW, PAKKA...😊

Originally posted by: sweetyvirman123

hi aarti me sana i knw am commenting first time fr tht am sorry

i have read ur both stories both are just faboulous

OMG virat ki memory chali gai hai feel bad fr manvi

and in kuch is tarah woh alag kyun hai ab to bta do

i knoe am giving comments for both story here i m sorry frm next time it will be seperate sana promise ok

u r really a talented writer keep writing luv uu

  Hey sana, dn't b, at least u commented...thnk u 4 dat..uh...bataungi bahut jald batungi..sabar karo..lol😆...its ok, will wait 4 ur comments...thnk u so much, means a lot 2 me...😊

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 31...

~Recap~

Viraat pulled Maanvi up, balancing her steps, she stood up, looking down in embarrassment.

Viraat: Chalo, chalte hain.

Without looking at each other, or at the other people, VirMan walked away from there.

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Viraat and Maanvi were walking back towards the Chaudhary house, from the Ganga Ghat. Both were silently walking in the street, without saying anything or looking at each other.

Viraat: Um...woh...

Maanvi looked up at him and gave him a small smile.

Viraat: Woh, main (bits his lower lip)...I mean, main aapko kaisa laga?
Maanvi: JI?
Viraat: Nahi woh, shadi, humari..toh...?
Maanvi: (smiles) Sab se alag.
Viraat: In a good way right?
Maanvi: (looks away with a chuckle) Of course.
Viraat: (running his fingers through his hair) Actually, mujhe aapko kuch batana tha.
Maanvi: (looked at him) Kya?
Viraat: Yahi ki, main...(looking at her nervously) main Viren nahi hun. Mera naam Viraat hai. Viren mere Bhai ka naam hai, unhone kaha ki main..
Maanvi: (without looking at him/smiles) Pata hai.
Viraat: (looking at her shockedly/surprised) Kya? Aapko pata hai?
Maanvi: (turn to face him) Haan, woh toh pehle hi pata chal gaya tha mujhe.
Viraat: (confused) Toh fir aap mere saath yahan aayi kyun?
Maanvi: Kyun ki...(smirks) Main Jeevika nahi Maanvi hun.

Viraat stopped in his tracks, looking at Maanvi, confusedly and shockedly.

Viraat: Matlab tum Jeevika Ji nahi ho?
Maanvi: (stops/smiles at him) Likh kar dun kya?

Viraat lips curved into a big smile, but the reason behind it was unknown to him.

Viraat: Matlab aapne hum dono Bhaiyon ko ullu banaya?
Maanvi: (innocently) Banane ki zarurat thi kya?

Maanvi smirked and started walking away from him.

Viraat: (following behind her) Oh hello? Kehna ka matlab kya hai aapka? Hum ullu hai?
Maanvi: Lo, yeh bhi likh kar dena padega. (laughs a little)
Viraat: Oye hello, hum tumhe ullu dikhayi dete hain?
Maanvi: Hum nahi...(smiled cutely) sirf aap. Aapka Bhai bahut seedha hai, aapki tarah nahi.
Viraat: Aap toh aise keh rahi hain jaise ki aap mujhe kitne saalon se janti hain.
Maanvi: Janti hun, isiliye toh keh rahi hun.
Viraat: (stops yet again) Acha kaise janti hain aap mujhe?
Maanvi: (stops/smirks) Mere ghar ke bahar bahut saare Ullu baithte hai na, isiliye.
Viraat: Huh...Main Ullu nahi hun...?

And with that he followed behind her, as she starred walking again.

Maanvi: Waise, (looking at him, with a cute smile) aapko meri Di pasand aayi?
Viraat: Di ka toh pata nahi. (looking at her, lost) Par Di ki Di zarur pasand aayi.

Maanvi looked at him very confusedly as she didn't get what he was saying.

Maanvi: Kya matlab?
Viraat: Aap nahi samjhogi.
Maanvi: (pouts) Haye, kyun nahi samjhungi?
Viraat: Kyun ki Bandariya ke paas itna dimaag nahi hota ki woh kuch soch samjh sakhe.
Maanvi: (hands on her hips/stops walking yet again) Bandariya? Main aapko Bandariya dikahyi deti hun?
Viraat: (cutely) Dikhayi nahi deti, aap ho.
Maanvi: Oh hello? Kis angle se, kis angle main tumhe Bandariya dikhayi deti hun?
Viraat: (smirks) Maaf kijiye ga, actually maine abhi tak aapke saare angles dekhe nahi.
Maanvi: Huh..You...You...Urghh...Chep.
Viraat: (making weird face) Chep? Pehle Ullu tha, ab Chep, naam karan karne ka kaam karti hain kya aap? Wah.
Maanvi: (fake smile) Abhi shuruwat hai Beta, aage aage dekho hota hai kya.
Viraat: (stepping close to her) Dhamki de rahi ho?
Maanvi: (coming even more close to her) Nahi dara rahi hun.
Viraat: (inching even more close) Acha, aur tumhe lagta hai main dar jaunga?
Maanvi: Mujhse pura Rishikesh darta hai, (coming even more close) toh tum kya chiz ho?
Viraat: (leaning close to her face) Main chiz nahi, aapki Didi ka hone wala Devar hun, meri...(pushes some strands of hair behind her ear) Bhabhi ki Behna...(winks)

With that, he started walking away, leaving a blushing Maanvi behind. He turned around towards her.

Viraat: Ghar nahi jaana Bandariya Ji?
Maanvi: Don't call me that, Chep. (following him)
Viraat: Arey wah, gussa bhi karti hai. Ab pakka yakeen ho gaya hai ki tum Bandariya hi ho.
Maanvi: (smiles at him) Kyun Bandariya tumhari ristedaar hai jo tumhe pata hai ki woh gussa karti hai ya nahi.
Viraat: Fortunately or Unfortunately, abhi nahi hai, par banne zarur wali hai. (laughs)

Maanvi started running behind him, as he started running away from her to save his life. Finally they reached the Chaudhary House, panting.

Viraat: Oh God, ab pura yakeen ho gaya, bhaga bhaga kar halat bigad di meri.
Maanvi: Arey tum toh ullu Chep ho na, tumhe toh udhna aana chahiye tha. Afsos, abhi bacche jo ho.
Viraat: Main tumhe baccha bhi dikh raha hun? (smirks) Agar, main Viren hota aur tum Jeevika, toh tumhe issi bacche se shadi karni padti.
Maanvi: Zabardasti hai kya? Main bas na kar deti,.shadi cancel. (smiles)

Maanvi was about to leave from there, when Viraat held her wrist and pulled her on him.

Viraat: Aur tumhe lagta hai main aisa hone deta? Abhi iss waqt utha kar mandir le jaata, aur tumhari marzi ke baigar, tumhe apna bana leta.
Maanvi: (looking at him/smilingly) Himmat hai?
Viraat: Haan hai.
Maanvi: Utha kar le jao, tab maanun.

Viraat looked at her all stund. Maanvi smirked and walked away, after getting herself out of his grip.

Viraat: Wah, kya ladki hai.

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Swamini Bua: Acha toh hum chalte hain.
Beeji: Ji.

Maanvi and Jeevika were standing together, their eyes filled as Swamini Bua said they were leaving. Maanvi was looking down to hide her tears, and Jeevika was looking at Viren, with painful eyes. Viraat was just busy staring at Maanvi, while Viren was standing their, looking at Jeevika, and assuring her.

Viren: (hand on his shoulder) Viraat, chal.
Viraat: Huh..Haan..

Swamini Bua walked towards JeeMan, followed by The Vadhera Broz.

Swamini Bua: Abhi toh hum jaa rahe hain, par bahut jald apni (looking at both Jeevika and Maanvi) Bahuon ko bhi le jaayeinge.

Jeevika smiled and hugged Swamini Bua.

Swamini Bua: Apna khayal rakhna, aur uska(baby) bhi.

Swamini Bua placed her palm on Maanvi's cheek, and her eyes filled with tears. Maanvi forced a smile on her face, and looked down, as she couldn't hide her tears, seeing Swamini Bua in tears. Viraat was just staring at Maanvi, with a smile of pain...pain of leaving her behind. Something told him that she didn't belong here, she belongs with him.

Swamini Bua: Apna khayal rakhna haan. Aur kisi baat ki fikar mat karna, hum sab hai. (smiles) Sab thik ho jaiye ga.

Maanvi looked up at Swamini Bua and hugged her, sobbing softly. Viraat looked a little confused and surprised, seeing his Bua like this.

Swamini Bua: (stroking her back) Sab thik hoga, bas himmat mat harna. Hm...?

Maanvi wiped her tears and broke apart. She smiled at her, assuring her that she will be alright.

Swamini Bua: Viren, Viraat, chalo.

Swamini Bua walked away, wiping her tears off, while Viren and Viraat took blessing of all the elders and walked towards JeeMan.

Viren: Acha Maanvi Ji, Jeevika Ji, hum chalte hain.

Viraat smiled widely, as he thought Viren was still unaware of their(JeeMan's) true identity.

Jeevika: (smiles) Ji Viraat Ji, apna khayal rakhna.

Maanvi looked up at Viraat and smiled.

Viraat: Ok then, Maanvi Ji, aur Jeevika Ji, hum chalte hain.
Maanvi: (smiles) Ji.

Viraat smiled at Maanvi, and started walking backwards, along with Viren. His eyes were still not leaving her face, he was just looking at her till she was out of his sight.

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It was around 7:30pm, Viren, Swamini Bua, and Viraat reached the Vadhera Mansion, where the Vadhera's were already present.

Dadaji: Aa gaye tum teeno. Kaise hai sab wahan? Jeevika Maanvi, kaisi hai dono?
Viraat: (confused) Dadaji, aapko kaise pata ki wahan Jeevika ke saath Maanvi bhi rehti hai?
Dadaji: Woh, woh...
Viren: Arey Viraat kaise sawal puch raha hai? Tujhe nahi pata toh kya Dadaji ko bhi nahi pata hoga kya? Yeh mat bhul hum waqeel khadan se hai.
Vanshika Maa: Haan Viraat. Didi, kaisi hai dono?
Swamini Bua: Thik hai Bhabhi, (smiles) bahut ache sanskar diye hain un logo ne unhe.
Dadaji: Toh kya..tumhe yeh rishta mazur hai?
Swamini Bua: Haan Bauji, par yeh Viren ki zindagi ka sawal hai. Viren kya tumhe Jeevika pasand hai?

Viraat looked up at Viren, looking at him curiously.

Viren: Haan Badi Maa, mujhe Jeevika pasand hai.

Viraat's heart skipped millions of beat.

Viraat: (to himself) Nahi yeh nahi ho sakhta, mujhe Bhai ko batana hoga, ki jisse woh Jeevika samjh rahe hain, woh asal mein Maanvi hai.
Dadaji: (forcing a smile) Toh hum unhe phone kar dete hai, aur jald se jald roke ki taiyaari karte hain.
Viraat: Um..woh Dadaji, usse pehle, mujhe Bhai se kuch baat karni hai. Aap please unhe kal call kariye ga.
Dadaji: Arey par kyun?
Viren: Dadaji, sun lete hain na, sab ki rai jaanna bhi toh zaruri hai.
Dadaji: Theek hai.
Viraat: (smiles) Thank you Dadji. Chalo Bhai.

Viraat held Viren hand and dragged him towards his room. Once he entered his room, he was amazed, he's room was so different, it was totally changed.

Viraat: (looking around) Bhai, yeh mera kamra, itna alag kyun..?

Viren looked around the room, and he realized that there were still Maanvi's belongings in this room.

Viren: Woh...woh..maine hi sab kiya tha.
Viraat: (turns towards him) Aapne? Kyun Bhai?

Walking towards his wardrobe, he opened the door and saw some sarees hanged there.

Viraat: Bhai yeh saree? Yeh sab kiske hain?
Viren: Viraat woh..yeh sab..
Viraat: Kiske hai Bhai? Yeh sab saman? Yeh...(walking towards his dressing table) Yeh sindoor? Yeh chudiya? Yeh sab, kiske hain Bhai?
Viren: Viraat...
Viraat: (shouting a little) Bolo na kiske hain?
Vanshika Maa: Kya hua Viraat?

Vanshika Maa, along with Kadambari Chachi came towards Viraat's room, as they heard his loud voice.

Viren: Maa,,
Viraat: (shouting, while holding those things) Maa yeh kiske hain? Mere kamre mein, yeh sab kiske hai?
Vanshika Maa: Viraat shant ho jao Beta.
Viraat: Maa, yeh sab kiske hain? Mere kamre mein yeh kahan se aaye? Yeh sindoor, yeh kangan, yeh saari sareeyan? Kiske hain Maa? Kiske hain.
Vanshika Maa: Viraat...
Kadambari Chachi: Mere hain.

Vanshika Maa, Viren, Viraat looked at Kadambari Chachi, shockedly/confusedly/thankfully.

Viraat: Aapke? Par yeh mere kamre mein kaise?
Kadambari Chachi: Woh...woh..haan...woh kya hai na, (forcing a smile) main apna kamra saaf kar rahi thi, aur inhe kahin rakhna tha, toh maine yahan rakh diya.
Viraat: Toh apne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?
Kadambari Chachi: Woh...woh..woh us waqt tum ghar par nahi the na issiliye.
Viraat: (smiles) Oh.

Viren, Kadamabri Chachi, and Vanshika Maa heaved a sigh of relief. But the next second, Viren's gaze went towards a picture frame of VirMan's wedding, which was place on the table, beside the bed. He worriedly looked at Viraat, who was looking at the sindoor box, which was in his hand. Viren slowly went towards the table, and quickly grabbed the photo frame. Viraat looked at Viren, who was hiding the frame behind his back, confusedly.

Viraat: Kya hua Bhai?
Viren: Uh...kuch..(smiling) kuch bhi toh nahi...

Viren walked towards Vanshika Maa, and secretly handed her the photo frame.

Vanshika Maa: Chalo Kadambari, hume kuch kaam tha na.
Kadambari Chachi: Haan Bhabhi, chaliye.

Kadambari Chachi, and Vanshika Maa walked out of the room, leaving the Vadhera Boyz behind.

Viren: Um, Viraat tumhe kuch baat karni thi na?
Viraat: (closed his fist, which held sindoor box) Haan, haan Bhai, mujhe kuch baat karni thi. Jeevika Bhabhi ke baare mein.
Viren: Kyun? Kya hua? Tumhe woh pasand toh aayi na?
Viraat: Nahi..woh..
Viren: Kyun? Kyun nahi pasand aayi. Tu toh pura time uske saath tha.
Viraat: Aisa nahi hai Bhai. Mujhe woh pasand hai, par...
Viren: (looking confused) Par kya?
Viraat: Bhai, aap jisse shadi karna chahte hain woh Jeevika nahi Maanvi hai.
Viren: (pretending to be shocked) KYA?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, jaise humne apni identity change ki thi, waise hi un dono ne bhi.
Viren: Matlab jo Jeevika thi, woh asal mein...
Viraat: (smiles) Maanvi thi...aur jo Maanvi thi, woh asal mein...
Viren Jeevika thi?
Viraat: Haan.
Viren: Toh fir, meri shadi toh Maanvi se honi chahiye na, mujhe toh woh pasand aayi.

Viren smirked a little, seeing Viraat's changing expression, which looked like hurt, confusion, and disappointed.

Viraat: Par Bhai, aapko woh pasand nahi aayegi. Jeevika is way better.
Viren: (smiles) No Maanvi is better Viraat.
Viraat: Nahi Bhai. Woh Bandariya hai. Kitna bakwas karti hai, aap nahi jhel paoge usse.
Viren: Main jhel lunga Viraat. Waise bhi perfection se life mein maza nahi aata. Bandariya hi sahi, mujhe wohi pasand hai.
Viraat: Par Bhai, Jeevika is way better, woh shant hai, aapki tarah. Smart hai, beautiful hai. Aap us Bandariya ke peeche kyun apna time barbaad kar rahe ho.
Viren: Par...
Viraat: No par war Bhai. (arm around his shoulder) Dekho Bhabhi kitni samjh dar hai, sundar hai aur kya chahiye.
Viren: Haan toh Maanvi bhi smart hai, sundar hai, usme kya kharabi hai?
Viraat: Arey woh Bandariya hai, aur Bandariya sirf Bandar ke saath hi ache lagte hai.
Viren: (smiles at him) Haan toh tu koi Bandar se kam hai kya?
Viraat: (making weird faces) Bandar? Main aur Bandar..main...(smiles) acha thik hai, hun main Bandar, aap thodi ho. Toh kya socha hai aapne?
Viren: Mujhe toh abhi bhi Maanvi pasand hai.

Viraat looked at him disappointedly.

Viren: But you're right.  I guess, Jeevika hi mere liye better hogi.
Viraat: (smiles widely) Exactly. Chalo sabko batate hai ki rishta pakka ho gaya hai.
Viren: Haan, chalo...

Both Vadhera Broz walked out of the room, towards the main hall, where everyone was present.

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Jeevika was sitting on the bed, while Maanvi was lying down, with her head placed on Jeevika's lap.

Jeevika: Mannu tu theek hai na?
Maanvi: Haan Di, main thik hun. (frowns) Yaad aa rahi hai Di, par kya kar sakhte hain ab.
Jeevika: (teary eyes) Mannu..?
Maanvi: (sits up) Nahi Di, (smiles) main kazor nahi padungi. Mujhe pata hai aaj nahi toh kal usse sab yaad aa hi jaiye ga. Aaj maine uski aankhone mein dekha hai. Kahin na kahin usse lagta hai ki woh hume janta hai Di. Shayad usse mehsus hone laga hai ki uske saath yeh sab ho chuka hai. Ab main peeche nahi hatna chahti Di. Mujhe apne Viraat ko wapas laana hoga aur uske liye, mujhe yeh karna hi hoga, himmat rakhna hi hoga.
Jeevika: (smiles at her) Aur mujhe pura yakeen hai, meri Mannu bahut strong hai, woh apna pyaar wapas paa kar hi rahe gi.

Maanvi smiled at Jeevika and hugged her tightly.

Jeevika: Chal ab so jaate hain.

Jeevika and Maanvi lied down on the bed. Jeevika started caressing Maanvi's hair, lovingly, making her, go to sleep. And with no time, both the Sisters doze off into a deep slumber.

Dat's 4 2day..I hope u lykd it..leave ur comments 4 me, n hit lyk plz...thnk u..Luv Aartii...

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