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Posted: 12 years ago
nice storyline. update the next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2, Hmmm Muskaan in a tough spot,

hope she don't fall for this trap because i think the boys playing her and a guy who doesn't have the courage to tell his parents before hand to avoid this problem then he don't deserve the love in ma eyes, he should have told his parents before that he liked muskaan, if muskaan chooses that path all she will get is heart ache and more sadness, if she chooses this path she will never understand that life can be good too
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Yes pls do!!! 😉
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Meri adhoori kahaani (My incomplete story)

Part 4

Khud se kab tak aur Kahan tak koi bhag paya hai
Kisi Manzil kisi rah pe tu use tham jana hai
har Zindagi ki dor us Rab ke haton main hai
Deakh te hai...
Kab tak aur Kahan tak khud apni marzi se zinadgi jee paoge

"ahhh" I screamed as I fell over the rock hitting my leg. "Muskan" I heard my brother worried voice, I looked up at him making a baby face and cried "Bahi" only to hear a scold from him as he said "sush, can't u watch where you are going, see now you hurt yourself na, Neha, Neha bring me the first-aid kit" he shouted to Neha di as he helped me sit on the chair. "Uff bahi its not that much of a big cut, I am fine" I told him to ease him down but instead he gave me a glare, I rolled my eyes and then I felt a waked on my back and I looked up to see Neha di standing their fuming in anger as she said "Bahi just leave her, she is getting so much pampered now a days that she is becoming so stubborn and careless"

"Shut up fatty, I am not careless nor I am stubborn" I retorted back as she help Sanjeev bahi with the medicine. "Oh really, then what is all this fuss going on" Sanjeev bahi said to me. "Look Gudiya I have been telling you from day one to just forget everything, and just live your life then why are you..." Before he could continue I interrupted him saying "I know bahi u said that to me and trust me I am living my life and if you want to see me happy then please don't force me into something that I won't agree with you this time, I have always listen to what you had said, but this time I won't listen to you because my happiness is not in what you all think is in, my happiness is in my life, with you all"

Neha- Muski you were not the only one to go through all the rough days, we all went through those rough days, I understand you being the little one affected you the most because by the time you were up to the age where you can forget all the things and just move on with the time flow with whatever we had to endure, all the ignorance from Dad, all the craps talking from others because of him, everything that had made you isolated from this world had made you shut yourself from everything, but Muski life is about happiness and sadness, if we have bad times in our life then only we get to see happiness in our life, then only we know the value of happiness, then why can't you give a chance to your life and..."


"And What Di, I know what you are trying to get me to think, but trust me Di I have already thought over it, not once but million time, I agree I should let things go and just move on, but Di I can't, I can't let things go, I want to but I can't I want to be happy like others but its not in my hand to forget everything, Bahi you only used to say na do what makes you happy then this is what will give me my happiness, me being alone, I don't want to be tied to anyone, please why don't you all understand me, I don't want to be tied to someone with whom I will have to live in fear, in fear of being betrayed, fear of him treating me ill, fear of him being a bad person and then if I happen to have my own kids I don't want them to go through the same life as we did because of him"

Sanjeev- but Muski all of them are not bad gudiya, there are lots of good men, just see your two jiju, aren't they good, aren't they keeping your sister happy, aren't they living a happy married life.

"you know what Bahi I though at least you will understand me but even your proved me wrong, but still I will tell one thing to you I am scared of my own destiny and I will not let anyone play with my destiny and life, I don't want to get married and that is the last and final decision I will say" saying that I stood up and took the kit from bahi.

Sanjeev- Muski listen to me I...

"There is nothing left to listen now Bahi" I said.

"But Muski we were just" bahi said to me as he tried to stop me.

"Bahi I said na I don't want to listen to anything now" saying that I left.

Neha: Bahi, why is she being such an idiot, what the hell is wrong with her, uff is this something to be scared of, we all know marriage is like a gambling, those who gets happiness are lucky and are just like the winner in gambling and these people are the winner in life gambling, but yeah I agree there are those who are not that lucky to get a man of their life like they dream of, a man who will love them, take care of them, give them happiness, but still this is no reason to refuse to not get married"

Sanjeev- we can't force her in this if she doesn't want to Neha, it was already decided that no one will force her for marriage and we had given promise to her too, and you and I both know how much promises are dear to her, if she believes in anything then its only promises, let's go finish the dressing on her, or else she will just leave the cut open without dressing it, you know how scary cat she is.

"Muski stop being a scary cat and just put the medicine one, nothing will happen, just a little sting you will feel and nothing" I told myself for the hundredth time as I reached to my cut, but then again pulled my hand back. "if you let your wound open for long time then it will only get worse and deeper and may even cause you more serious problem later on" I heard my Maa say and I rolled my eyes and stared at her as she stood near the door, she came to me and sat beside and took the medicine from my hand and said "I meant it can get infected"

"and what if there is no healing for some hurts" I asked and I knew and she knew what I was talking about which meant we both knew we were not talking about this cut. "then there is only one thing that can heal that hurt and that is only time and if we give chance to let other heal it" saying that she without warning placed the cotton filled with dettol on my leg and I screamed jerking her hand off of me and I stood up jumping from one place to another like a monkey as I continued to screamed. After few minutes I heard fits of laughter echo in my room and as I looked at the door I saw all my sister and bahi laughing holding their tummy and my Maa also joined them. "I hate you all" I screamed as I throw a cushion toward them. "I Hate you, I hate you all, get out of my room" I again shouted.

"If we go away then how will we see you jumping and dancing like a monkey" I heard Bahi saying and I turned toward him and just as I opened my mouth to say something Neha di came from behind and covered my mouth and said "Shut up, not a single word should be coming out of your mouth now"

"mmm...mmm"I tired saying but all i saw was her placing her finger on her lip and said "no word, meaning no sound too" with that saying I saw her gesturing her something toward bahi, and I stood there with my eyes widen and shaking my head in no but it was too late as the next moment I stood struggling in her hold as Bahi started bandaging my cut, while everyone stood laughing at me.

"here done" Sanjeev bahi said as he stood up and just as he was about to pat my cheek i turned my face away from him and he made a sorry face and said "sorry I forgot, I will be just back in a minute" saying that he zoomed in my bathroom and in no time he was standing right in front of me.

"mmm...mmmhmmm" I mumbled trying to get Neha Di attention toward me to let go of my mouth but she was lost in her own world of laughing. "ouch Bahi" I heard her saying as bahi waked her head. "Idiot let her mouth go now, she won't be screaming anymore" He said

Neha- oh sorry I forgot" saying that just as she removed her hand I screamed "Ahhhh" closing my eyes and my own ears till I ran out of breath. "Shut up" I heard Sanjeev bahi screaming back once I was done and I saw all of them standing their covering their ears.

"Why did you scream now idiot" Suman di said as she rubbed her ears.

I made a puppy face and said "it burned"

Suman- then you should have screamed at that time na,

"how could I have screamed at that time, this fatty had her hand covering my mouth" I said with the most innocent puppy face yet with con-vincible face to them and seeing my face they all once again started laughing pulling my cheek one by one and when Sanjeev bahi came to pull my cheek I punched him in his stomach and he winced in pain and I started laughing seeing his face then controlling my laugh I said "how was it bahi, did it hurt you"

"hurt, I will tell you how it feels" saying that he started chasing me while I started running limping around the room and then went out of my room into family room. I went and hid behind Dad, who was reading newspapers. "Sanjeev, Muskan, what are you both doing" He said as he still looked into the papers.

Sanjeev- Dad don't just sit there hold muksi for me

"why are u chasing her" Dad asked to which I laughed.

" she punched me" he said that making a baby face, and I started laughing louder holding my stomach while other joined me. Seeing Bahi attention diverted I took that chance to ran back to my room pushing everyone inside my room as they all stood at the door, well not all as Neha and Suman di fell on the floor. "See this is what you all get for hurting me" I said seeing both of them rubbing their bum as they stood up.

"When did we hurt you" Sanjeev bahi and Neha & suman Di asked me, to which I pointed them at my leg and the next moment they all bounced on me saying "we didn't hurt you, you fell down" as we fell on my bed laughing, and I just laid their watching them laugh, well this was me the little clown of my family, where I was the little baby to them to make them laugh with my weird behavior that they seems to have think it as cute antic, and then there were some moments like this where we laughed like a mad person. I would have continued with this little fun with them but before I could I heard Aisha DI saying "I want you all to leave this room" with me all looked at her stopping their laugh and Ma said "but why Aisha"

Aisha- please do as I say Maa" and in the next few mins everyone left, but not before giving me a smack on my head.

"Di is everything ok" I asked as I saw her locking the door.

"Till now there are some stuff that are needed to be sorted out for me to say that everything is ok" She replied as she walked toward me. Somewhere I knew what she was hinting toward but still asked her "what stuff are you talking about"

Aisha- you

"Me"

Aisha-look gudiya don't get me wrong or anything but can you for at least Maa sake say yes

"And can u please for Maa sake not ask me for this also, and anyway I won't be here with u guys after a week as I already got accepted to UK college, hence after this I will be continuing my study from their only" I said turning my back to her.

"Muskan" I Heard her gasp and I knew she was a little shocked.

"yes Di after a few weeks I am going to UK to continue my study" I told her again and then I felt her pulling me and gave a look of not believing me. "I already did it long time ago Di, actually in the second semester of this year college" I told her and then she left my hand and without saying anything she left from there.


To be Continued...

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Edited by CrazzyBusy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!
I have been refreshing this page for half an hr now!! 😆

haha Krishu!! 😛

haha Krishu I unres first this time!! so suck it!! 😛


anyways no to the reading...

Mariam I like that this part was lighter then the other parts and dealt with the family I can tell they all really love each other!! aww sweet! 😃

aww Muskaan is leaving is it because of Aman?? or was she always planing to leave? 😲

can't wait to read the next part to see her reasons for leaving to England!!

p.s. so Neha is not mad at all?? I would think she would be lil mad or sad that her rishta has broken! 😕

Keep up the excellent work!! 👏

Edited by SaNaYa_4EvEr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah Well, i was busy downloading Kik and NOW I HAVE IT
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Originally posted by: OldieDezard

Yeah Well, i was busy downloading Kik and NOW I HAVE IT


Really will then I should download it too then 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SaNaYa_4EvEr


Really will then I should download it too then 😆


LOL Yes maybe you should!!! :-P 😆

I am boreddd
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OldieDezard


LOL Yes maybe you should!!! :-P 😆

I am boreddd


what is my name again the wolf and fairy so I can open my account with that

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SaNaYa_4EvEr


Really will then I should download it too then 😆



Wow Krishu hate u for that
AMina ur late for this jaldi

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