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Kabhi tum nahin tha kabhi hum nahi tha

Bajaj-

Rishab- a loving father and a rich business man (played by ronit Roy)

Prena- a caring mother (played by shweta)

Anjali- use to live with them but not anymore (played by Natasha)

Sneha- a very sweet person traditional yet modern (played by Jennifer)

Ronit- a very sweet guy though has a lot of attitude (played by Amit Jain)

Lakshya- a very sweet guy and a sanskari type (played by Pulkit Samrat)

Prem- the one who is loved the most very sweet though naughty arrogant and a flirt (played by manoj bohra)

Kapoor-

Jai- a very nice father though a very rich and busy business man (played by ram kapoor)

Pia- jai's 2cd wife a very evil person (played by roshini chopra)

Kripa- a very traditional and nice person (played by neha bamb)

Kavya- use 2 life with them but not anymore (played by ejaz khan)

Omi- a sweet yet a flirt type guy (played by Shabbir Ahluwalia)

Pooja- adopted daughter of jai very sweet and traditional girl (played by Shama Sikander)

Mukti- a very sweet girl hates her step mom and is traditional a little bit but modern 2 (played by Tina parekh)

Angad- prem's best friend and very arrogant (played by iqbal khan)

Krishna tulsi (played by mouni Roy) - kripa's best friend

Bani- jai's first wife (find out more later0 (played by prachi desai)

Intro-

Prem and mukti's family use 2 be best friends but then due to a misunderstanding they became enemies the misunderstanding was that jai thought Rishab had taken all the money from Rishab and his bank account (they both were business partners) and Rishab thought jai had taken the money but the real culprit was Pia Pooja knew that but she didn't have evidence so she kept her mouth shut plus she was adopted so she didn't want 2 lose her family so now both the families hate each other and both of the families kids go 2 the same college

I hope u liked the intro this fan fic will be written by mandy/mandy07 and prem-mukti#1/sania which is me!

Please tell me how u liked it!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!! i just love all your fan fics... and i know this will be great as well... do continue soon... will be waiting egerly for your fanfic...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great! do continue soon! (good god-there are too many hot guys in this fanfic 😳 -MANOJ, RAM, EJAZ...all hot) šŸ˜† continue soon šŸ˜‰
Edited by reeha...k - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeha...k

great! do continue soon! (good god-there are too many hot guys in this fanfic 😳 -MANOJ, RAM, EJAZ...all hot) šŸ˜† continue soon šŸ˜‰

i know!šŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bisma_4eva!

OMG!!! i just love all your fan fics... and i know this will be great as well... do continue soon... will be waiting egerly for your fanfic...

thank u and i am sure u will like it its not that much of my fan fic it is mandy's but still she is a great fan fic writer!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hun i have one request...bani gose with jai- not pia😔...lol do whatever you please i shall read- and keep the hot guys comeing😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeha...k

hun i have one request...bani gose with jai- not pia😔...lol do whatever you please i shall read- and keep the hot guys comeing😃

i know don't worry its just for now that is why i wrote pia is the evil one so bani will come soon but not that soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tib_gal

continue plzzzz šŸ‘ šŸ‘

will cont tonight!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1
Its morning in kapoor house u hear 2 people doing pooja its kripa and pooja both of them r wearing churidars with the dupata on their head showing how cultured they r
They r singing om jai jagadish upstairs in mukti's room
Mukti- oh god when will they both ever let anyone sleep
In pia's room
Pia- god what luck I have 2 step daughters ruining my sleep!
Breakfast
Kripa and pooja make breakfast
Pia- where is my breakfast
Kripa- right here choti ma
Kripa gives Pia breakfast
Pia- thank u and after college come home and prepare dinner
Kripa- sure
Pia- u 2 pooja
Pooja- yes choti ma
Omi- hello my lovely sisters and my evil step mom
Pia- omi
Omi- just kidding
Kripa- bro where is mukti
Omi- as always sleeping
Kripa- ok I will go wake her up
Pia- no need when she wants 2 she can but go leave u all will be late for college
Everyone left
In the car
Pooja- why didn't choti ma let u wake mukti up
Kripa- because she likes mukti and 4 mukti she will let her do anything so if mukti wants 2 go 2 college late she can choti ma has instructed the principal and the teachers that mukti will not be scolded and all her days notes will be given 2 her and she has 2 do nothing in college
Pooja- wow lucky
Omi- in a way yes but in a way no because mukti doesn't like Pia so the day pia finds out mukti will be dead
Kripa- till then let her enjoy after all she is the youngest
Omi- true
Kapoor house
Pia is on the phone
Pia- yes darling I am taking care of all the kids
Jai- ok take care bye
Pia- bye
Mukti finally woke up and hot ready she was looking for clothes when pia came in
Pia- good morning
Mukti thinks "tuja dikh liya phir kaisa good morning!"
Mukti- good morning
Pia- what happened what r u looking for
Mukti- clothes all of these r old I wore them once already
Pia- ok I will order your clothes today but for today just wear a churidar
Mukti- thank u mom
Mukti thinks "u can never take place of my mom but kya kara majbori hai tuja ma bulana"
Pia- ok now hurry up get ready and leave umm I forgot 2 ask do u want 2 drive or should I send the driver with u
Mukti- no I will drive thanks though
Pia left
Mukti thinks "god where is my mom"
U.S
U see a house inside the house u see pictures of mukti kripa omi pooja and kavya
In the kitchen u see a person making chocolate chip cookies and the person turns around and is bani
Bani- mukti every year on the first day of school I use 2 make u your favorite cookies so what if u r not here at least making cookies might make me feel good that my daughter is here anjali and kavya r here


Hope u liked it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o m g!! WAT THE !! BANI IS OUT AND PIA IS IN!!! 😔 😔

u got sum 'splainin to do girls..

by the way, mandy and sanya, great part.. and continuee sooonn

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