Asya os:Destiny(Updated)

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Hi!! this is my first os..hope you guys like it..

DESTINY

No mr.Khan!! I can't do this any more...I don't have any more strength to do this drama. Why don't you understand?? If every one comes to know that we are faking our marriage, they will be heart broken, especially phuppi and my sis. Please..atleat now speak out.Just tell me what is in your heart. Just now you told my aapi that this nikhah is real.Do you mean it? Speak out mr.khan,just speak out!!

These words uttered by zoya kept haunting asad through out the night..

'She was really worried and sad, yet I failed to convey my true feelings..she's right! I am really emotionally challenged..I can't see her sad, but I am the sole reason for her sadness..No!! I can't let this happen any more..i want to give her all the happiness in this world, and shied her from all the evils'.I'll confess my love to her and will always be by there for her..' with this determination, asad went in to sleep..

Next day mornibg asad woke up with a smile on his face..it was their sangeeth and he is going to confess his feelings for zoya.The very thought of making zoya his forever brought a huge smile on asads face..

On other hand, zoya woke up thinking about her encounters with asad..She did remember him calling her a musibat..but at the same time she remembered how concerned he was towards her whenever she was in trouble.She was confused.She couldn't make out what asad was feeling towards her.She didn't know what todo.. She was brought out from the reverie when she heard dilshaad asking her to get ready for her sangeeth..'Oh yeah!!today is my sangeeth, but only god knows its real or fake' she sadly smiled to herself and got up to gety ready..

Asad quickly got ready and came to the living room excited, but something caught his sight.. Tanveer was talking to some one in the phone and was threatening that if they don't pay her enough she would reveal to zoya about her father..Asad was dumbstruck!!He didn't know how to react..should he believe what he heard and witnessed or should he have faith in his friend?? Atlast he decided not to confront tanveer and deal this issue himself..He immediately found out the no., called his secretary and asked him to find out the details of the person to whom tanveer was talking to..He has to find out who it was and what they are up to..Just then Zoya came out beautifully adorned in her traditional outfit, looking stunning than ever..The first thing she noticed was that Asad looked tensed..she was pretty sure that he is very much worried.." wait!he is worried!!is it because of this nikhah?? Am I really that bad??" the very thought took away the smile from zoyas face..

Here, asad was worried about zoya..he kept on pacing from one place to the other, eagerly waiting for the phone call.At last, he got a call from his secretary and what he got to know gave him a shock of life time!!The other person to whom tanveer was talking to is razia bee!! And then, as if this shock was not enough, his secretary also told him that tanveer is pregnant and she is the one who informed the immigration officer about Zoya..

With this, asad understood what tanveer is upto..everything fell into place..but one thing he needs to find out is the mystery related to zoyas father..

Mean while, tanveer has been planning what to do..all her plans till now have failed miserably.If asad confesses his love for zoya then everything will go out of her hands..she has to do something..After thinking a lot, she has an evil smile on her face.. She went to zoya and said that she has to speak to her about something important..Saying that, she took her to a room ..she kept a worried face and began telling to zoya, "Zoya, listen to me carefylly!! Just now I came to know that your abbu is not dead" with those words, zoya became numb..she forgot to react..her abbu is ALIVE!! Then she immediately gathered herself and began shaking tanveer and asking"Please tanveer,tell me this is true!! Tell me its not a dream!! My abbu is alive!! Thanks a lot allah miya..Tanveer how do you know that, and plase tell me who is he??How does he look?? Where does he live?? Does he know about me??"

Tanveer again told in a concerned voice"Zoya!! I don't know how to tell this..i know u'll be hurt a lot..but you have all rights to know the truth..your abbu is none other than mr.siddiqui, who ruined the life of jammy..i know that you are very happy that your abbu is alive..but are you equally happy after knowing who he is??He is the reason for all the misery in jammy's life and he is the person jammy hates the most..Do you think he will be able to accept you after knowing this truth? And the most important thing is that even your abbu hates jammy..so after knowing that you are his own daughter will he let you be with jammy?? You have to choose between your abbu and jammy..think carefully zoya.. what to do now is left to you..do you still want to do this nikhah which will do good to no one??"

With that tanveer left the room leaving behind zoya in distress..

So this is the first part and will update the other one soon..please let me know how it is.. this is my first os and yeah!! this is my first post in this forum too.. am really looking forward for your comments!!

part2 in page3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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someone please kill that tanveer 🤢

nice. update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz update soon it's so amasing pm me also
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omg...no no no no!! this can't happen...u can't seperate them...plz...
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Thank you all!!😊 will update soon!!
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Please continue soon! Its really good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good work asad. you found out about churail.
zoya choose asad over your abbu and don't listen to that daayan.
asad give a kick to tanveer and slap her nicely.
nyways fab cncept.
keep up the good work.
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Hey plz cont soon nd pm me
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part2:

Asad decided to unfold the entire mistery and for that he needed help..he called ayan and asked him to meet him immediately.On hearing asad's worried voice ayan was sure that something went wrong.He reached asad's home and entered his room.Asad explained the entire situation to him..they had to do something and that too faster..

Ayaan ensured him that everything will be ok and left..

Meanwhile guests began coming to the sangeeth and dilshad was busy receiving them.So she asked najma to check over zoya if she's ready.Nazma went to zoya's room and was shocked to see that zoya was crying her heart out..she immediately sat beside her and gave her a tight hug.She tried her best to console her, but more she tried the more zoya cried..slowly zoya began to calm down..she looked at nazma, her sweet tamatar, who was worried about her..Nazma asked "Whats wrong zoya??What happened?Why are you crying so badly?Is everything ok?" Somuch concern echoed in her voice..zoya was unable to react.She was terrified thinking about their reaction when they know about her abbu..she began to think.She has to take a decision soon..She looked at nazma and said" Thankyou tamaatar for everything, and yeah! You will know everything soon, when time comes.Right now I need to go out for an important work..I'll be back soon.Please inform puppi" By saying this, shetook her gudiya given by her abbu and left the room without waiting for response..Outside the room, every one was busy..zoya looked at dilshad who was happily telling about her bahu to her friends..a faint smile appeared on zoya's face..will she accept her after knowing the truth?? Coming out of the thoughts, she searched for tanveer, who was found no where..then she made her way out of the house.First, she needs to confront her father..She decided to be strong and tackle the situation..she found out the address of mr.siddiqui's office and went over there..she waited for sometime and atlast got appointment..she was very much nervous..she thought to herself..what a situation she had to face..she was going to introduce herself to her abbu!! She gathered all her courage and met him..she was unable to speak.. Zoya controlled herself and told him everything , She showed him the gudiya.. how she was saved and brought up in newyork, how she came here in search of him and everything..she then asked him with teary eyes ,"Abbu, why did you leave us?? Why didn't you take care of me?Did you never think of me?Do you even know if I am alive or not, Or you don't even care??"

On hearing all these words, guffur was dumbstruck..while his daughter has taken so much effort in meeting him, he was worried about his reputation.He thought that if every one comes to know about his illegitimate child, he will lose his respect in the society..The first words he spoke to her were"Please don't tell this to any one..and yeah I am glad that you are here..but I am sorry..i can't accept you as my daughter infront of the world…" On hearing these words, zoya completely shattered..she did not listen any further..she immediately left that place..all the words kept ringing in her mind "guffur:I can't accept you as my daughter..Asad:You are a musibat..Tanveer:Will asad accept you after knowing the truth??"

She was walking on the road and was lost in her thoughts..suddenly a car hit her and she fell unconscious.. People gathered there and one of them took her to the hospital..

Asad's house:Everybody was worried about zoya..Nazma told them that zoya was crying badly and left the house saying that she has an important work..On hearing this Asad was sure that tanveer must have done something..he immediately shouted Tanveer!!He looked angrily at her and asked her"What did you tell her??What did you do to her??"She stammered and sais" I didn't tell her anything..and why would I do something to her?? Jammy, listen to me.." Asad retorded, "Don't ever call me that!! I know everything about you..will you admit or should I call the police??" With that she scared and said,"I don't know anythind..but razia wants to send her away..i don't know anything else.."He gave her a tight slap and Just then they got a call that Zoya was hit by a car and is admitted in hospital..On hearing that, asad immediately went out and drove like a mad man to the hospital..He almost shacked the doctor and asked about Zoya's condition..Doctor said that she is out of danger, but is kept under observation..it will take some time for her to gain consciousness..On hearing this, Asad took a sharp breath..He collapsed in one of the chairs..Later dilshad and nazma also reached there ..Asad explained everything to dilshaad and Nazma, who were confused and worried..

Ayans house:

Ayan reached his house and he wanted to confront Razia..so he made his way to her room..

Razias room: Guffur was talking to razia-"I have never expected that she would come back to our lives..what if she make this public?? I have a lot of respect in society..what will they think??" On hearing this, Razia was very happy..she didn't expect this from him..she thought that he would accept her with open arms..

She told him" We'll do the same thing to her that we had done to her mother.."

On hearing this conversation ayaan immediately called Asad and told him the truth..Thats it!!Now Asad was completely broken down..he could only imagine the pain that Zoya had gone through..

Dilshad and Nazma tried to console him..but even their hearts wept for zoya..poor thing..she must have gone through a lot in last few hours..

Then the doctor arrived and told them that Zoya is conscious..

First,Dilshaad and nazma went near her..Zoya wanted to tell them the truth..She said "Phuppi, my abbu is not dead, he is the one who ruined your lives" and began crying..Dilshad hugged her and said , "Zoya!!Don't blame yourself for that!!You have nothing to do with that..and yeah, I came to know that you are Mr.Siddiqui's daughter..But that doesn't matter..i have always treated you as my daughter and nothing will change that..I am really very lucky to have you as my Bahu..and yeah, asad wants to tell you something..we'll wait outside" saying that, she left

Asad entered the room with a heavy heart..He was unable to see her in that position..She laid down on the bead, she was so vulnerable..

Seeing Asad, she began to cry.. "Mr.Khan, my abbu.."

"Shhh!!Don't say anything…I know the truth."He held her hands and began telling "Zoya!! I know I have hurt you many times..i called you a musibat..i told that we are different kind of people and this nikhah is fake..but believe me Zoya!!I meant none of those..I can't even imagine a life without you..and the fact about your abbu, it doen't make any difference..Zoya!!I love you and that's all that matters!! I love the you, I love your stupid shaayaris, I love your craziness, I love your cute smile and I am nothing without you.. Will you fill my life with your craziness??If you are in my life, every second becomes a celebration..

Will you forgive me for everything?? WILL YOU MARRY ME?? "

With that, tears of joy began to roll down the cheeks of Zoya.She whispered "Yes jahaapana" in his ears and they embraced each other happily..Dilshaad, who witnessed the confession was overwhelmed and thanked god for everything..She thought to herself, "I knew these two were destined to be together"..she had a sweet smile playing over her lips knowing that nothing in this world could separate ASAD and ZOYA

And yeah, tanveer was thrown out of the house later after being slapped by Asad..😉

Thats it guys...hope you enjoy it...and sorry for the mistakes if any.. 😊

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