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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maheek

awwesome looking for next part,tfs for pm😊



thanks a ton maheek! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Xarina

Love the little family unit but Rashi ans Urmila are the pits. Thanks for the pm.



thanks a ton xar! while im replying you,the spamming thing is coming..its been same from thrice! aah! irritated! 😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all I am back with an update! I would like to tell you all that i am so sorry i wont be able to update regularly from now, i guess i need a week for evry update,coz i am in my graduation final year and there is a project of developing a search engine i am working on! And trust me its killing me and my time! So i wont be able to update much. but i promise i would update once a week! This update is dedicated to my lovely friend Shwetha! Coz of her lovely comments in all my stories..Thank you very much sweetheart! 😳😳

Part 4

Gopi got ready and was making Gulab Jamun for Ahem. She wanted to make something for him as it was valentines day. Hetal asked her,"Gopi for whom are you making these gulab jamuns?"

G-"Who kakiji…"

H-"Ha ha samj gayi..why for valentines day?"

G-"Who kakiji ahemji gifted me a necklace set and I didn't gift anything so I am making his favorite food."

Kokila shouted,"Ahem gave you a necklace set gopi vau? And he didn't tell me about it….."

Gopi was shocked and kokila left the kitchen. Gopi was worried about what would happen and kokila directly questioned ahem "Ahem dikra,you brought gopi a necklace?"
A-"Ha mom..why?"
K-"Why? I mean what is the occasion?"
A-"Mom who…" Ahem got a phone call and kokila left the room. After few minutes,ahem came downstairs and saw jigar struggling with tolu and molu. He giggled and sat beside him and said,"Jigar kya hua?" Jigar was quite irritated and spoke "see bhai these babies don't even listen to me. They keep crying crying and only crying.." Ahem took tolu in his armas and started to play with him and he was quiet in a second. Jijar was shocked and spoke with the baby,"aisa kya hai tere chacha ke pass! Ek second mein chup hogaya tu!"

Ahem laughed and said,"Jigar you know what, handling baby is an art.."
J-"You teach that later but see what is coming…"
Ahem looked at the direction jigar was pointing towards and found his kaki bringing gulab jamun. Both ahem and jigar grabbed them and kaki chuckled,"Ahem and jigar you are having babies now and still you behave like babies only?" Ahem and jigar smiled and ahem spoke,"Thank you kaki!"

Hetal spoke-"Thank you for me? Why?"
A-"For the sweets"
H-"Then thank your wife ahem dikra"
A-"Gopi?" J-"Bhabi?" both spoke at the same time.
Hetal laughed and said,"Ha gopi only! She made them for you ahem dikra,for valentines day"

Ahem was a bit shy and jigar spoke,"Wah bhai,valentines day! Ahan! Nice..! So where is the party?" Ahem hit on jigars hand and gopi came there with more jamuns. Jigar took them and spoke,"Sorry bhabi,I know you made it for bhai but I love them too much,so I am shamelessly eating them"

Gopi smiled and said,"Devarji these are for you also don't worry"

Hetal interrupted,"But kitchen mein you said they are for ahem na.."
Gopi was blushing hard and ahem was shy. Jigar and hetal started to laugh! Ahem spoke,"Gopi get ready we are going out for lunch…" Jigar and hetal jaws dropped and they made 'O' shaped faces. Jigar spoke,"Bhai whats going on? Jamuns,lunch etc etc..! planning for a cricket team or what?" Saying so jigar ran from there and ahem chased him. Kokila came and saw both of them running here and there,so she asked hetal,"Kya hua mota bhabi? Why are they running here and there?"hetal told her everything and she stopped ahem,"Ahem what is this?Your going out with gopi? What about your office and her work in the house?" ahem was getting irriated with the questions and he spoke,"Mom whats wrong? I am going out with my wife on valentines day and work will not run away if I don't go. And gopi,she is not the cook of this house,she is the bahu! Arey subah se sawal pe sawal…Gopi get ready!" Saying so ahem left and kokila was disappointed and angry!

Gopi and Ahem left the hall and in their room gopi spoke,"Ahemji maaji might have felt bad.."
A-"No gopi she should know,she was always behind my office. I wanted to spend some time with you today..so no more arguments come on lets get ready.. "

Precap: the same as before :(


i am sorry that its a bit short..was really running out of time! sorry! 😭

So how is it? Please do leave your likes and comments!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Madhu first of best of luck with the project. And second of all I like the way you are portraying Ahem and Gopi's relationship. Continue soon and thanks for the pm. Best of Luck with everything Madhu you are truely one talented person🤗 Deepz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Madhu you should be the one as cvs for sns having a correct lead for Gohem love was really wonderful you bring Ahem from his work to spend time with Gopi which is impossible in sns
very much thank you dear for the wonderful chapter😊
All the best your project dear do it from your Heart you ill definitely ill be successful 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one Madhu 👍🏼

Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all so sorry DII for late reply😭😭😭😔,Thankyou very very very much "MADHU DII" to written my name on your post,I always appreciate your writting ability,I must say that you are such Outstanding writter,a three cheerz for you DII👍🏼👏👏👏⭐️😃😛😳,and a big tight one hug for you DII 🤗❤️😃😛😳... Now on update what a update DII I want this type of AHEM on SNS,that was dream❤️😃😛😳... I am eagerly waiting for your next update,Please updated so soon as possible for you DII 😃😛😳... Thankyou so much "MADHU DII" for PM 🤗❤️😃😛😳... !!!!!!!!!





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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello alll i am back after a really long time! i must say ages. I am almost done with my project and its successful. thank you to everyone for supporting me even while i was away! i hope no one forgot the story! Sorry for being so late, it wont happen again!
Coming to the update, yes im updating now!
This update is dedicated to each and every friend of mine who waited patiently especially deepz and deepu(haha so similar) coz of those wonderful heartwarming replies. you made me feel so happy and proud...thank you very much!


Part 5

Gopi and Ahem left the hall and in their room gopi spoke,"Ahemji maaji might have felt bad.."
A-"No gopi she should know,she was always behind my office. I wanted to spend some time with you today..so no more arguments come on lets get ready.. "

Gopi went to the washroom and got ready in a beautiful green saree and ahem was shocked looking at the stunning beauty in front of him! He knew gopi was very beautiful but green despite being his favorite color looked stunning on her. May be that's the reason it was his favorite color. Gopi observed that ahem was looking at her and she was feeling shy, she walked to the mirror and was about to put sindoor. Ahem took it and kept it on her forehead and gopi's eyes welled up. Ahem saw that and understood that her past is still haunting her. He hugged her and spoke- "Gopi I am very sorry. I am really very sorry…"

Gopi was confused why ahem was apologizing but she understood immediately that he was feeling guilty, she spoke "Ahemji please don't apologize. I am not feeling sad anymore for whatever has happened…"
Ahem-" Gopi then those tears?"
Gopi-"Arey ahemji I was happy, voh kya hai na I am not used to this attention and love isiliye…" her eyes began to tear again..
Ahem kissed her eyes and said," Don't worry gopiji I will make sure you get used to every thing in your life…"

Gopi smiled and hugged ahem but unknown to them a pair of eyes were watching them with full of hatred and anger.

Gopi and ahem came downstairs and took leave of everyone, though kokila was very disappointed she didn't show it. Rashi came downstairs at the same time and kokila asked her to make some tea for all. Rashi made faces and left.

Lunch:

Ahem took Gopi to the temple first as he knew nothing can match up to the happiness she gets by going to the temple. Gopi was very much happy that Ahem took her to the temple. They entered the temple, offered the prayers and the priest spoke, " I don't know if you have any other occasion but I haven't seen any couple coming to temple on valentine's day. May God bless you forever" GoHem smiled and they left the temple.

Ahem brought jalebis for gopi and she was super excited. They went on a long drive and ahem spoke about various things. He took her to a park where he used to vent out his feelings in his childhood. Gopi was surprised but stayed quite. Ahem took her to an isolated place, and both of them sat there. Ahem took Gopi's hands and spoke, " Gopi this is the place where I used to come to vent out my frustration. I find this place very calm and solace. But I brought you here to speak about few things. Gopi, I am sorry. … " gopi was about to speak something, " Don't interrupt me gopi please. I am very sorry. I have hurt you badly. I have come here to tell you few things, mainly about anita. " Gopi just smiled, and ahem continued," gopi I was doing my graduation in US and there I met anita. We were just friends at the beginning, but later we fell in love. I am sorry gopi. I wanted to marry her, and I thought my parents won't say no, with the same hope I came to india and spoke to mom about it. Her reaction came as a shock, she didn't agree and I was very disappointed, I never expected that and our marriage happening in that time came as a shock. I needed time to come over it. I was fighting with myself, and that was when all the things happened to start. I don't know how to tell you how sorry I am gopi,please mujhe maaf karo na"…. Gopi hugged ahem and spoke," ahemji I know about anithaji and you weren't completely at fault. Circumstances played a huge role. So please stop saying sorry ahemji, please.." ahem smiled and captured her lips, though she was shocked she gave in.

After some time they broke apart and decided to leave for lunch, he took her to a huge restaurant and had a lavish meal. They decided to go home as the family would be waiting for them.

Back at their house, after lunch everyone were relaxing and baa brought some papers and a box. She spoke, "Chirag and Parag come here, hetal vau and kokila vau you too. I have decided I will be giving few things to you all, I feel its high time I transfer the responsibilities to you"

Rashi gave a wide smile and was waiting what she would get, baa started to divide all the things she has kept in store for four of them, just as she finished ahem and gopi entered the house. They exchanged their greetings and ahem sat down wondering what was happening, baa called ahem and gopi and spoke," you are the bada beta and badi bahu of this house, so you would be having the responsibilities, though I have written the name of our modi bhavan in chirag and parag's name, you both should make sure our families would never split, " saying so baa gave veryone everything and decided to call kinjal the next day to give her part. Rashi was feeling irritated that she didn't get any property on her name and that's when she realized about the modi industries, so she spoke, "baa what about the modi industries? " everyone where shocked and jigar spoke," rashi just shut up. How can you ask like that?" rashi made an irritated face and said, "jijargji now you and jiju are managing the office but after that? Anyways meera is a girl so she doesn't need it and she cant be the CEO of the industries, so better you write the industries on my sons name na baa?"

Ahem and the whole family where shocked, well shcok can be under statement too. Kokila spoke," rashi! How dare you speak like that?"

Rashi and others kept quite but ahem was lost in thoughts, without speaking he went upstairs, a worried gopi followed him, taking meera along with her.

Precap: Urmila-"You are an orphan and you will remain one! but i will make sure meera would become an orphan too!"
"THAT WOULD BE ONLY WHEN I DIE!!!"

So guys how is the update? hope it aint crap!

i am so sorry if it is!

Thanks for reading it friends

love you


madhu!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Another important thing I forgot to mention is, I have read each and every comment and thank you very much for them! I am sorry as i was running out of time, i couldnt reply to everyone! but trust me you people make me amazingly happy with those lovely comments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
that's an awesome update Madhu! well done! 👏

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