SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

sorry 4r not commenting

ws shifting 4m country
story is going great
plz don't let madhu's fear com true
hate t hope abhay teaches her a good lesson
plz do continue soon

No problem
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys.thanks a lot fr those lovely words. I know most of you are upset about the last chapter, but please have faith in me. I promise a happy ending:) I know due to my bad writing, many got confused as to what took place bwt Abhiya. It was a big fat nothing. They just shared some passionate kissing taken a bit further but nothing major. No geeting naked i mean:DThis is my last update before my exam. Would update only after 2nd June. Do let me know how was this update, because i wrote after one year, so i expect this not to be good:-(please don't forget to comment and like:)enjoy reading. For pms send me buddy request:D

Chapter 6


5 YEARS LATER


Piya Jaiswal stood in the shadows like a fugitive, just yards away, from the Taj Mahal Palace, in Mumbai. She reassured herself that she wasn't actually a fugitive, she was just collecting herself…she could see the crowd walking inside the hotel, the elite of Mumbai society.

The evening was preceding, what she promised a new beginning. Piya's soft mouth firmed and she tried to calm her racing heart. After a very long time she was back in Mumbai, the city of dreams to many, but for her the city had always been a nightmare.

Piya shook her head, trying to let go off those old memories, which gave her anything but pain and at the same time her eye was caught by the almost silent arrival of a low slung silver vehicle at the bottom of the main steps which led up to the hotel. Instinctively she drew back more. The car was clearly vintage and extremely expensive. Her mouth dried and her palms got sweaty – would it be - ? The door was opened and a tall shape came out from the driving seat.

It was him.

Her heart stopped beating for a long moment. She was not hoping to see him here.

Abhay Raichand. The most successful business man in Mumbai and probably the entire India by now.

Dressed in a black suit Piya could see his gorgeous, yet stern and arrogant features as he cast a bored looking glance around him. He looked darker, sexier. He had a distinct charisma and his good looks could be marked from anywhere.

A flash of movement made her drag her eyes away and she saw a tall woman emerging from the other side of the car. As Piya watched, the woman walked to his side and slid her arm through his.

Piya couldn't see the look they shared but from the smile on the woman's face she didn't doubt it was hot. A sudden shaft of physical pain lanced her and Pia, begged herself mentally, she didn't want him to affect her like this. She didn't want him to affect her at all, specially after that incident.

She'd wasted long teenage dreaming and lusting after him, and building daydreams around him 5years back. And that foolish dreaming had culminated in catastrophe. It had broken her apart.

The last time she'd seen Anhay Raichand had been a 3 years ago in a club in Gia. Their eyes had clashed across the room and she'd never forget the look of pure loathing on his face before he'd turned away and disappeared.

She sucked her breath deeply and controlled herself. She couldn't stand in the shadows all night. She had come home as a favour to Kabir. She had to fulfill her promise to him.
Trying tried to block out the last cataclysmic meeting she had with Abhay if she went down that road to focus on the present and the future.

Piya entered the hotel hall, where the party was going on. Seeing the crowd dressed elegantly, Piya was happy that she could some how manage a decent dress for the party.

***

Abhay Raichand stifled a yawn. He'd been working around the clock to to ensure his never ending heights. But deep down he knew he'd been just trying to occupy himself in work so that he could forget that fateless night.

'Really darling,' came a dry voice to his right, 'am I that boring?'

Abhay forced his attention back into the room and looked down at his date and quirked a mocking smile, 'Never.'

His companion squeezed his arm playfully, 'then i hope you wouldn't mind spending the night with me.' Abhay's back touched her bare, sexy back and ge winked a yes at her. Saying something she disappeared into the crowd.

Abhay shook his head ruefully and thanked his lucky stars that Tanya's presence tonight might at least temporarily stave off the more determined of the Mumbai man – eaters. He was in no mood to humour the mercenary women he attracted in droves. His last lover had screamed hysterically at him for an hour and accused him of having no heart or soul. Ofcourse he had no heart and soul, he had enthrusted them upon someone he considered special, until she broke him in pieces. Now he was just a ruthless business man, who just thought about his profit. He had no place of love in his life. He knew no such word. For him woman just meant one thing- a satisfactory toy, to pleasure his nights.


Just then he saw a figure appear in the doorway to the hall. Inexplicably his skin tightned. Ridiculously Abhay felt the need to turn and leave, but he stood.

It couldn't be...she was supposed to be in Goa. Did she really have guts to show her face to him? Or was she here again to play with his heart.


His hands turned into fists and tighten.
His eyes moved to her body. Stunning as always. She was what one could call a stunning beauty, an intoxicating package. Their eyes met he saw the pink flush in her pale cheeks. It had a direct effect on his body, causing a hot throb of desire in his groin.
Too many emmotions hit his gut- the dominant one being the acidic betrayal, humiliation but still after all this he could feel himself drowning in her.

Unable to control the urge to talk to her, he advanced his steps to her. 'Piya Jaiswal,' he drawled, not a hint of his loss of composure in his voice, 'What the hell are you doing here?'

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Posted: 12 years ago
yipee i am the first one 😆!!!

the update is so short that i did not have words to say😆 !!!!but anyways !!!the update is nicely written 👏!!!you should not show anyone more beautiful then piya 😆!!!coz piya is the main lead in this ss so she should be the most beautiful girl that every man want !!!😳i hope you understand what i mean !!!!but i am really looking forward to read the next chappy !!!😉i hope in the next chappy we can see abhay getting jealous !!!seeing kabir flirting with piya !!!!😉btww if we get one more update before your exam plzz😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
five years! Wonder what Pia had been doing all this while. What happened to T, did Abhay eventually ditch her?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampireking

yipee i am the first one 😆!!!


the update is so short that i did not have words to say😆 !!!!but anyways !!!the update is nicely written 👏!!!you should not show anyone more beautiful then piya 😆!!!coz piya is the main lead in this ss so she should be the most beautiful girl that every man want !!!😳i hope you understand what i mean !!!!but i am really looking forward to read the next chappy !!!😉i hope in the next chappy we can see abhay getting jealous !!!seeing kabir flirting with piya !!!!😉btww if we get one more update before your exam plzz😆

Sorry if u found the update short, i didn't realize it when i was writing:D
Will try to improove
Thanks
N wbt be able to post anything before exams
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

five years! Wonder what Pia had been doing all this while. What happened to T, did Abhay eventually ditch her?

Those questions will be answered soon:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
the story took a 5year leap:D great so we have liads to catch. Piys knows kabir,bt how. N abhay has turned into a ruthless business tycoon:-(
loving the twist
Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: didlr

the story took a 5year leap:D great so we have liads to catch. Piys knows kabir,bt how. N abhay has turned into a ruthless business tycoon:-(

loving the twist
Thanks fr pm

Glad ur finding it intresting:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww they separate past 5years😔hope they relasiled their miss understanding & reunion again...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh i loved it😳 im xited for their meeting😛
u r inspired by one night with the enemy by abby greene right😉
all the best for ur exams😳

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