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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyz m bck wid a new update, m extremely sorry 4 da delay...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments guyz, n 4 da lyks..hope u'll lyk dis part as well..Myvirman, I've started working on ur suggestion, hve a look, hope its up 2 ur expectation..EnJoY...Sorry 4 da delay...




VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 30...

~Recap~

Jeevika: (holds her hand) Mannu chal.
Maanvi: (stops her) Di, hum sahi kar rahe hai na? Viraat ko kuch hoga toh nahi na?

Jeevika: Kuch nahi hoga Mannu, (smiles) Bhaagwaan par bharosa rakh.


Maanvi sighed and started walking again, towards Viren and Viraat.


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Viraat was just looking at the person, who was coming close to him. His heart beat was increasing by every steps she takes towards him. Viren smiled looking at his restless Brother, who was just looking at his Saali. Finally, she was visible to him. Finally he saw her beautiful face. Everything around him seemed to stop, along with his heart beat. Maanvi was just looking down, trying to hide her tears, but her heart was beating at a unbeatable rate. Viren and Jeevika smiled at each other, looking at Viraat's reaction. Viraat came out of his dreamland, when Viren placed his hand on his shoulder.

Viren: Kya hua?

Viraat: Kuch...kuch nahi...(smiles a little) kuch nahi Bhai.

Viren smiled, looking at Viraat. Maanvi and Jeevika reached where Viraat and Viren were standing.

Viren: (hands folded/smiles) Namaste.

Viraat: (hands folded/smiles) Ji Namaste.

Maanvi looked up at Viraat, while Jeevika smiled at both of them.

Viraat: (pointing towards their seat) Aaiye na, baithiye na. Aap hi ka ghar hai.

Maanvi looked down and a cute smile crept on her face, thinking about their first meeting. Viraat also smiled, seeing her beautiful smiling face, a smile to die for. He was just staring at her, lost in his deep thoughts yet again. JeeMan sat down on their seat, where as Vadhera Broz were standing. Jeevika held Maanvi's hand, and signalled her to say something.

Maanvi: (controlling her emotions) Uh..Aap,,,aap bhi baithiye na,,,humara hi ghar hai.


Viraat smiled looking at her cute adorable face.

Viraat: Ji


Both of them sat down on their seat, looking at both of the girls. Maanvi looked up and found Viraat's gaze on her, she blushed a little and looked down. Viraat was again feeling something weird, as if he had went through all of this. She took a deep breath and smiled, telling herself that she can do this.

Maanvi: Ji, aap dono toh...do hain.

Viraat shook off his thoughts away and smiled at Maanvi.

Viraat: Ji toh aap dono, teen hai kya?

Viren and Jeevika smiled at each other, as their plan seems to be working out a little.

Maanvi: (looking at both of them) Aap dono mein se, Viren kaun hai?

Viraat: (smirks) Ji pehle aap bataiye na, ki aap dono mein se, Jeevika kaun hai?

Maanvi: (gives him a sarcastic smile) Pehle aap bataiye na, aap mehman hain.

Viraat: (pretending to be nice and innocent) Ji aap ladies hai toh pehle, ladies first banta hai na.

Maanvi: (fake smile) Ji dekhiye, pehle aap, pehle aap mein, train chut jaiye gi. Bata dijiye na.


Viraat chuckled and looked at her lovingly, while VirIka were enjoying the moment.

Viren: Um, dekhiye confusion main clear kar deta hun, Viren...

Jeevika: (suppresing her smile) Ji mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Meri Bahen ki aadat hai. Darasal hum mein se Jeevika...

Maanvi: (hand on her chest) Main hun...

Viraat: (smiles) Main Viren hun, aur (arm around Viren's shoulder) yeh mera Bhai Viraat.

Maanvi: (points at Jeevika) Aur yeh Maanvi.

Viraat: (controlling his laughter) Ohh, woh jo dayan hai?

Maanvi: KYA?

Viraat: (a little suspious) Aap...aapko itni problem kyun ho rahi hai? I mean aap...Aap thodi na, main toh (pointing at Jeevika) unki baat kar raha tha.

Maanvi: (pretending to be sweet) Kisne kaha aapko?

Viraat: (smiles) JI woh, Badi B ne bataya.

Maanvi: (smiles back) Actually woh satthiya gayi hai thodi. Pyaar pyaar mein bol gayi hongi.

Viraat: Ohh...
Viren: Um..huh, sorry about that, mera jo Bhai hai, usse..usse mazak karne ki aadat hai, (smiles at Viraat) haina.

Jeevika: (smiles) Ji, koi baat nahi, meri Bahen ko bhi mazak karna bahut pasand hai.

Viraat: Of course. (looking at Maanvi) Acha toh yeh batao..Tum teacher ho?

Maanvi: Haan, koi problem hai tumhe?

Viraat: Oh..

Maanvi: Sab ko sabak padha sakhti hun main. Maanvi se poochlo, puri colony ki class le leti hun main. (smiles/looking at Jeevika) Haina Maanvi.

Jeevika: Ah, (smiles) Haan...(looking at Viren) aapne ghar walon ko, khidhki wali baat nahi batai, (smiles at him) uske liye thank you.

Viren: (smiles) Nahi, that's all right. Waise ek baat kehna chahunga, jis tarah se aap upar chadhi thi, kafi dangerous hai. I mean agar aaj, main nahi hota toh shayad aap...

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat) Shayad koi aur hota. Koi Doctor. (looks away as she saw him looking at her)  Aur waise bhi rahi khatre ki baat toh fir, ek anjaan ladke se shadi karne se bada khatra isse kuch nahi ho sakhta.
Viraat: (smirks) Toh aapko mujhse khatra hai?

Maanvi: (without looking at him) Jeevika kissi se nahi darti.

Viraat: Oh acha, toh fir, (evil smile) aapki chadne wali baat bata dun Beeji ko? (nodding) Nahi na?

Viren: Jaisa ki main keh raha tha, mere Bhai ko mazak karne ki aadat hai. Waise please mind mat kariyega.

Maanvi: Arey, kamal hai aise kaise mind na karun? (looking at Viraat) Inke saath shadi hone wali hai meri, mind toh karna padega. (smiles at him) Side mein aaiyege zaara?

Viraat: (confused) Side?

Maanvi: Arey, Ladka Ladki hum hai, kyun in dono ko tang kare huh. Thodi direct baatein ho jaani chahiye, haina?

Viraat: Oh...(smiles at her) Kitni Direct?

Maanvi: (gets up) Aaiye na, karte hain baatein.

Viraat: (looking at VirIka/getting up) Aate hain.

Viraat and Maanvi walked away in a corner, while VirIka were just sitting there.

Jeevika: Viren ji, aapko lagta hai yeh plan kaam karega?

Viren: Haan Jeevika, thoda thoda aasar toh ho raha hai Viraat ko. Usse ajeeb mehsus ho raha hai, jaise ki yeh sab uske saath pehle ho chuka hai.

Jeevika: I just hope usse sab jaldi yaad aa jaiye. (sadly) Main Mannu ko udas nahi dekh sakhti.

Viren:  Himmat rakho Jeevika, jaise Maanvi apni himmat banaye huyi hai. Dekhna sab jald hi theek hoga.

Jeevika smiled at Viren and nodded positively.

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Viraat: So? Kya direct baat karni hai aapko?

Maanvi: (looking down) Dekhiye, main baki ladkiyon jaisi nahi hun.

Viraat: (looking at her, from head to toe) Woh dikh raha hai.

Maanvi: (looks up at him) Mera matlab hai, main kisi aur ki nahi sunti. Jo mera mann karta hai main wahi karti hun.

Viraat: (smiles) Yeh toh meri aadat hai yaar.

Maanvi: (pretending to be worried) Toh fir...ek mayan mein do talware...aap samjh gaye na?

Viraat: Nahi toh, (leaning close to her) samjhaiye.

Maanvi: Dekhiye, aap mujhse shadi karke khush nahi raheinge. (smile, finding him so close to her) Main kisi aur se...

For a second, she was lost in him, in the closeness that was between them. She came back to her sense, when she heard Dabbu's voice.

Dabbu: (trying his level best to be normal) Didi, agar aap log zyada busy nahi hai toh Beeji ne neeche bulaya hai, chaliye.

Maanvi: (smile at him) Tu jaa hum aa rahein hain.

Dabbu left, and Maanvi was again lost in her thoughts...thoughts of Her Viraat.

Viraat: (tapping on her shoulder) Hello, kahan sui kahan atak gayi tumhari bose?

She came back to her sense yet again and looked up at him.

Maanvi: (smiles cutely) Viren Ji?

Viraat: (smiles back, cutely) Haan ji?

Maanvi: Aap pehle kabhi Rishikesh aayein hain?
Viraat: (frowns) Nahi toh..


Maanvi turned around and started walking towards Virika.

Viraat: Eh hello, kahan jaa rahi ho?

Viraat followed her confusedly.

Viraat: Kya hua?

Maanvi: (looking at Viren) Viraat JI?

Viren: (smiles) Ji?

Maanvi: Aap dono pehle kabhi Rishikesh aaiye hain?

Viren: Rishikesh? Nahi.

Maanvi: Fir toh, aapne Ram Jhula bhi nahi dekha hoga.

Viren: Ram Jhula,,,Nahi.

Viren looked at Viraat, who was just looking at Maanvi. He smiled and turned his gaze back at Maanvi.

Maanvi: Lakshman Jhula?

Viraat: (nodding negatively) Nahi.

Maanvi: (dramatically) Haww, Ghat ke darshan toh bilkul bhi nahi kiye honge?

The Vadhera Broz: Uhh...(nodding negatively) nahi.

Maanvi: (shaking her head) Arey arey arey arey...fir toh aap logo ko, shadi se pehle, ganga ji mein dupki laga ke paap dhona toh banta hai.

Maanvi looked at Jeevika, who was smiling looking at her strong Sister. She smiled back at her, and assured her with her eyes that she is ok. She looked back at Viren and Viraat.

Maanvi: (smiles) Aap dekhna chahiye ge na?

Viraat: Ji.

VirIka and VirMan went down stairs, took elders permission and went out of the house.

Viraat: So hum jaa kahan rahe hain?

Maanvi: Uh, Viren ji, aap mere saath aaiye, aur Viraat ji aap Maanvi ji ke saath jaiye.

Viren: Magar kahan?

Jeevika: Jahan kismat le jaye. (pulls Viren with her) Chaliye.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) OK then, chalo.

Maanvi and Viraat went away, leaving VirIka alone.

Viren: (looking at them, walking away) Tumhe kya lagta hai, Maanvi Viraat ko kahan le kar jaiye gi?

Jeevika: (smiles) Ganga Ghat.

Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Ganga Ghat? Kyun?

Jeevika: Kyun ki Mannu ko wahan jaana acha lagta hai. Mama Papa se milne.

Viren: (holds her hand) Acha toh tumhe bhi lagta hai na?

Jeevika: (smiles at him) Haan, par mera aaj wahan jaana, mumkin nahi hai.

Viren: Waise, in sab mein ek baat achi ho rahi hai.

Jeevika: Kaisi baat?

Viren: (pulls her close) Yahi ki hum woh saare pal fir se jee rahe hain, jo humare dil ke bahut kareeb hai.

Jeevika: Soh toh hai Viren Ji, par mujhe Mannu ke liye bahut bura lagta hai. Jisse woh pyaar karti hai, usse ajnabion ki tarah baat karna padhta hai usse.

Viren: Bura toh mujhe bhi lagta hai Jeevika. Par kya kare, aur koi rasta nahi hai humare paas.

Jeevika: Haan Viren ji. Par issi bahane dono paas toh rahein gein. (smiles) Aur mujhe pakka yakeen hai, Viraat fir se Maanvi ko chahne lage ga.
Viren: Haan Jeevika. Yeh bahut hi jald hoga.

Viren smiled and hugged Jeevika, who smiled while hiding her face in his chest.

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Viraat: Are you serious? Tum mujhe yahan sach mein dupki lagane ke liye layi ho?

Maanvi and Viraat were standing at the ganga ghat. Viraat was little worried, looking at Maanvi and then at the river. While Maanvi just laughed at his expressions.

Maanvi: (laughing) Don't worry. Main aapko yahan se dhaka nahi dungi.

Viraat was just admiring her beauty. She looked even more beautiful while laughing.

Viraat: (smiles) Thank God. Mujhe toh laga tha aaj mujhe maarne ka pura plan bana kar aayi ho.

Maanvi: (frowns) Tumhe maarne se pehle, (tears filled her eyes)  main khud mar jaungi.

Viraat: (confused at her words/expression) Kya?

Maanvi: Uh,,woh...I mean, tumhe mar ke jail jaane se acha hai ki main khud hi mar jaun.

Viraat: Acha? (looking around) Waise hum yahan kyun aaye hain?

Maanvi: Ab humari shadi hone wali hai na, (smiles) toh tumhe kisi se milwana tha.
Viraat: Kisse? Tumhara koi boyfriend hai kya?

His expression changed into a very worried one at his own question.

Maanvi: (smirks) Haan hai na, par usse baad mein milwaungi. Pehle mere Mama Papa se milo.

Viraat was a little hurt at her answer, but he ignored his feelings.

Viraat: Mama Papa se? (looking around) Kahan hai woh? Tumhare saath nahi rehte?

Maanvi: Saath nahi Paas rehte hain. (pointing at the Ganga River) Wahan.

Viraat turned around, to the direction where Maanvi was pointing.

Viraat: (still looking around) Kahan?

Maanvi: (still pointing)  Wahan?

Viraat: (confused/looking at her) Paani mein?

Maanvi: (smiles at him) Haan.

Viraat: Matlab?

Maanvi: Matlab ki, mere Mama Papa iss duniya mein nahi hai. Par jab bhi mujhe aur Di ko unse baat karna hota hai, hum yahin aa jaate hain.

Viraat: Oh I'm sorry, maine aapko hurt...

Maanvi: Nahi...aapne mujhe hurt nahi kiya. (looking at him, lovingly) Aap kabhi mujhe hurt kar hi nahi sakhte hain.

Viraat: (looking at her) Bahut miss karti ho aap dono unhe?

Maanvi:  (smiles a little) Nahi. Kyun ki hum kabhi unse alag hue hi nahi. Woh hamesha humare saath hi rehte hain. Hamesha.

Viraat was just admiring her beauty. She was looking really beautiful, her hair flying all over her face, as she was trying to push them back. Viraat walked a little close to her, and slowly raised his hand to move her hair away from her beautiful face. Maanvi looked at him in the eyes, which was looking back into her. He touched his fingers on her cheek, pushing away the hair behind her ears, without breaking the eye lock. Maanvi shivered at his touch, a smiled spread over her lips, finding her Husband so close to her. Viraat was just lost in her, she was driving him crazy for some reason. His mind was telling him to move back, but his heart told him to stay where you are, live the moment, hold her close. He wrapped his hand around her waist, pulling her a little bit close, his gaze went down to her lips, which had a small, cute smile. He looked up at her eyes and again looked down at her lips. Slowly, he leaned close to her lips as she closed her eyes, his eyes were still glued to her pink, juicy lips. Their lips were just about to meet, when someone dived in the ganga river, spilling the water on them. They pulled away from each other with a jerk. Awkwardness filled in the atmosphere.

Viraat: Woh...


Viraat was feeling embarrased, where as Maanvi was a little disappointed along with a little hurt. She looked down to hide her tears from him.

Viraat: I'm sorry, main...woh...

Maanvi: (trying to control her emotions) Um, koi,,,koi baat nahi.,,,its ok.

Viraat: (not looking at her) Um...hume ab chalna chahiye, sab intezaar kar rahe honge.

Maanvi: (nodded without looking at him) Hm...

Maanvi turned around to walk away, when suddenly she slipped. She closed her eyes, expecting her to be hitting the floor any minute. But that never happened, instead, Viraat wrapped his hands around her waist, preventing her from falling on the floor. Once again, they were lost in each others eyes, standing while holding onto each other.

Viraat: (to himself) Pata nahi kyun? Par tumhe chune se mujhe kuch hota hai. Ek ajeeb se feeling hoti hai, jaise ki main tumhe janta hun, tumhe pehchanta hun. Tumse pehle mil chuka hun, humara rishta bahut khas hai. Jaise ki tum meri hi zindagi ka koi hissa ho? Aisa kyun lagta hai mujhe? Akhir ho kaun tum? Main na chahte huye bhi tumhare itne kareeb kyun aata jaa raha hun? Tum toh mere Bhai ki Dulhan banne wali ho, yeh soch kar, mujhe bura kyun lagta hai? Kaun ho tum? Humara kya rishta hai? Kya lagti ho tum meri?


Maanvi: (to herself) Yaad karne ki koshish karo Viraat. Aise kaise tum apni Maanvi ko bhul sakhte ho? Please Partner, mujhe pehchanlo, main tumhari hun, tumhari Maanvi, tumhari Patni. Yaad karo Viraat, please yaad karo.


Maanvi looked around and saw people, who were looking at them and smiling. She looked up and saw a lost Viraat, who was just looking at her. She looked down and called out his name.

Maanvi: Viren JI..?

No Response.

Maanvi: Viren JI.?


No Response.

Maanvi: (shouts) Viren JI?

Viraat: (came back to his sense) Huh haan...?

Maanvi: Mujhe chodhne ka kasht kareinge aap?

Viraat: (realized their closeness) Oh I'm sorry.

Viraat pulled Maanvi up, balancing her steps, she stood up, looking down in embarrasment.

Viraat: Chalo, chalte hain.


Without looking at each other, or at the other people, VirMan walked away from there.


Dats it guyz...I knw its lame, nothin new, as much...but still leave ur comments 4 me..thnk u...Luv Aartii..SORRY GUYZ, BUT NEXT UPDATE WILL B A LITTLE LATE...


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Edited by Artii159 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
glad that he getting flashbacks but feel for manvi...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
idate ppehla hi bohat late update kiya tha isi liya ajj double updae plez and do reply and send pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
ress !! 🀣
Unress !! πŸ˜›
aaah .. After a Long U updated πŸ€— n The update was just Aww .. πŸ˜³πŸ‘
feeling really really bad for manvi πŸ˜­ .. kese bear kr rhi hogi vo ye sb .. How ?? πŸ˜”
Ganga ghat scene was Romantic + Full of emotions πŸ˜Š .. I loved their first meeting " Again " .. Re-Lived all those beautiful Memories .. OLD memOries Golden memories ..
aaah  !! Plz Update sooonnn .. eagerly waiting for the update .. 😊😊

And yeah ! CongO fOr ur 2nd Thread .. πŸ‘πŸ₯³


Dono stOries K 2  threads Hogae hn .. 😊
Great wOrk Artii πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘



Edited by Tuba_KSG - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Final;ly u updated...
Thank u for pm..
Awesome update...
Liked it...
Want next update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
choti maa y u r u doing dis to ur beta.
u r making me cry.
but tis cry makes me so special becoz i am crying
for my virman.
wat an update.
the old days which i was missing their first meeting.
u reminded me of that.
but the ganga ghat scene was so romantic.
poor manvi she is broken that her husband couldn't remember her.
so that means there will be maya's entry also.
i am waiting for next update.
love u chotimaa
Edited by keertu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awww re-living d old cute memories😳
Hope virat remembers evrythng soon😊
Update and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
beautiful update sab old memories phirse fresh ho gaye lovedd the way manvi is being strong
hope they get together soon
and the ghat  scene was amazinggg 
thnx for the pm
update soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Thank u for pm..
Awesome update!!...πŸ‘
waiting eagerly fr ur nxt update...
pls do update soon...    :)
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Amazing update! Please make virat remember everything soon! Update soon :)