Swaron SS : Rhythms of an unheard song

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Swaron OS : Rhythms of an unheard song..

Unknown destiny...


Somewhere in Newyork..

It was early in the morning,when the sky was still dim.I was walkin on the beach by myself,with my sandals off,feeling the grainy sand that comforts my feet as I walked across the shore, as the tide hit on shore, the spary of water splashed on my skin ,refreshing it was.

As I looked back, the footprint I left showed my path; suddenly, a tide stroke on the shore, wrapping away the mark I had left. Looking far, I saw nothing but the deep blue sea, it was as far as your eye can see.

The sun was , little by little, rising up from the edge of sky.It's light painted the sky with red. Frequently, there were people who jogging, biking, walking out dogs, passed by here, adding vitality to this place

This is what is allures me to beaches in morning.The site you can't see in city. Here you don't have to worry about anything, it wraps away all your stresses.


Somewhere in Mumbai..

swayammm.. - a girl shouted on top of her lungs.

and sweat buds formed on his forehead.

It's been a week he is trying to convince her but she is she, as stubborn as a mule.

Get your stupid ass out here right now...-she said, shouting on top of her lungs.

swayam has locked himself up in his room to avoid her.

swayam :*in a sweet voice* listen sweety these days am overloaded with work.nahi to main tumhari baat nahi manu.

to himself"itni himmat kaha hain mujhme"



girl : i don't know anytrhing swayam you are going to do as i say or else .i won't talk you ever.
She said in a tone that swayam knew she wont tal.k to him for the rest of her life.



swayam : kria, please try and understand.* in a begging voice*

kria : mujhe kuch nahi pata swayam.mai apna decision nahi badlungi, aur pehle bahar aao.

He unwillingly gets up and unlocks the door to see a raged kria.

kria : swayam please maan jao na..

swayam : kria tumhe pata hain mujhe kitne saal ho gaye hain vo chode huye.

kria : i know swayam.but please mere liye.*With a cute pout and puppy dog eyes*

Swayam : *smiles looking at her tactics*...kria please i don't want to do this.

kria : swayam please..if u love me you have to do this.mujhe kuch nahi pata.

swayam : kria try and understand.

kria : 'cuts him in between'. swayam you have changed , you don't love me anymore.*tears threatening to spill out of her big green orbs*

swayam : *sighs* kria u know i love u the most. Have i ever denied u for anything.*cupping her face*.I can do anything for you,.but not this.

kria :*lightly sobbing* please swayam . meri khushi ke liye.

swayam 'sighs' to himself this is going to be difficult.








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Posted: 12 years ago
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My Angel🤗

I am a big fan of ur write ups since my non-members day...the urban touch in ur write ups make them more attractive ...u can write romance so well...but u prefer to stick to sad ones...god knows why..they r beautiful though...

Coming to this SS...WOAH ...bang on start with full on confusions ...poor readers r wondering ..what is happening..i know the story😆...baby u cant fool me😛


Loved the beginning...

As I looked back, the footprint I left showed my path; suddenly, a tide stroke on the shore, wrapping away the mark I had left. Looking far, I saw nothing but the deep blue sea, it was as far as your eye can see.

Loved her insight ...getting a moment for urself in the busy city life is difficult...

Loved Kriyam conversation...

Get your stupid ass out here right now...-she said, shouting on top of her lungs.

swayam has locked himself up in his room to avoid her.

swayam :*in a sweet voice* listen sweety these days am overloaded with work.nahi to main tumhari baat nahi manu.

to himself"itni himmat kaha hain mujhme"

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🤣poor guy...i loved how she shouted on him😆...guess who shouts like this😉😛

Loved the emotional black mailer Kriya...ahaaa...i CAN NOT wait to read futher...u know wat i want from this SS...

Loving it ..ALREADY😳



PS- Bhagwan ke liye font color change kar le baby...make it anything but such light colors..chashma pehwaegi tu sare readers ko

Luv
Ur Di

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is intresting..
Swayam nd kriya bro-sis??
Nyc start pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nisha aur new ss .. 😲

wat abt old ones...??? 😛

majnu mumbai me aur laila newyork me 🤪

ye kriyam ka kya lafda hai? ?? 😆

vaise mujhe besties hi lag rhe h.. & a very lil guess goes for siblings 😳

kya kaam karaying tu usse??

jo vo itna pareshan hoying


Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cupcake, what was that?
Konsy kan-fused
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm confused 😕
Are swayam and kriya related ?
Amazing start
Pm me when you update .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

nisha aur new ss😲
kal hi to bataya tha, challenge vala ss hain😛
wat abt old ones...???😛
ek to kar dia, dusra pata nahi😆
majnu mumbai me aur laila newyork mai
Saat samundar paar🤣
ye kriyam ka kya lafda hain ? 😆
vaise mujhe besties hi lag rhe h.. & a very lil guess goes for siblings😳

Sad ending ho nahi sakti,par aapne swaron nahi kaha tha😉
kya kaam karaying tu usse??
jo vo inna pareshan hoying
Mai nahi kria...mai swayam ko pareshan😲😆

Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye wo waala challenged ss hai. d one i challenged u???
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Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-

ye wo waala challenged ss hai. d one i challenged u???


Haan 😛
Dhang se comment kar 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--


Haan 😛
Dhang se comment kar 😆


baad mein! abhi update likh rahi hun main!!! 🤣

pm me that intro I will edit it up. 😳

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