Asya os:Tere bin...part 5 updated...

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Hey guys m starting new os...

Asya ki shadi ho chuki hai par unki shadi ki baat zoya ke aapi aur jiju ko pata nahi hai...

In khan mension

dining table..

Dil:zoya kya hua itni tense kyu lag rahi ho?

Zoya:woh ammi aaj aapi ane wali hai...

Dil:yeh toh achi baat hain woh nikaah mein nahin aa payi na ab ham milke saath mein baat karenge aur tuhme bhi tuhmari aapi ke saath baat karne ko milega tuhme toh khush hona chahiye itna sad kyu ho...

Zoya:in mind apko kaise batao ammi unhe hamari shadi ki baat nahi pata hai...

Asad:ammi mein office jaa raha hoo shaym ko aa jaunga...


Dil:par asad meri baat toh suno woh aaj zoya ki aapi aane wali hai tum zara zaldi aana...

Asad:kya aapi ...

Dil:haan tuhme pata nahi tha kya zoya ne nahi bataya...

Asad:woh bataya hoga main hi bhool gaya...acha aami aa jaunga...zoya muje tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hain zara kamre mein aana...

Zoya:jee mr khan abhi aayi...

In beedroom...
Asad:kya aami ne joh kaha woh sach hai aaj tuhmari aapi aane wali hain...

Zoya:han mr khan main bohot tense hoon kya karu unhe pata nahi ki hamari shadi hui hain...

Asad:acha hain nahi bataya...

Zoya:whats wrong with u mr khan aap ko ye majak lag raha hai woh meri aapi hain woh mujhe yaha se le jayegi aur rahi baat iss nakli nikaah ki toh woh iss baat ka bada batangat banayegi aap jante nahi hai unhe...

Asad:haan janta hoon tum aisi ho toh tuhmari behen kaisi hogi...

Zoya:apne kuch kaha mr khan...

Asad:nahi toh...

Zoya:maine suna mr khan aap kuch keh rahe the...

Asad:haan mein yeh keh raha tha ki tum unhe mat kaho ki hamari shadi ho chuki hai ...

Zoya:yeah u r right mr khan ...main apke bare mein bilkul sach hi sochti thi aap sach mein emotionaly chalenged hain...agar maine aapi ko kuch nahi bataya toh phir woh mujhe yaha se le jakar mera nikaah kar degiii...


Asad:ismein problem kya hai...

Zoya:apko problem nahi dikhai deti hain kya...ane do mein bhi kis insaan se behas kar rahi hoon...

Asad:matlab...

Zoya:yahi ki aapki nazzar mein yeh nikaah drama hai...aur mujhe aapi ke saath jakar unke pasand ke ladke ke saath shadi karni chahiye right...

Asad:mera matlab woh nahi tha...

Zoya:apka kya matlab hota hai yeh mein abhi tak nahi samaj payi hoon mr khan...

Asad:iska kya malab nahi samajh payi actuly mein apko nahi samajh paya miss faroqui...

Zoya:mr khan mrs zoya khan...

Asad:yeah...

Zoya:aur ek baat mr khan jab tak aap mujhe aapki dil ki baat nahi kehte tab tak mein toh aapi ko kuch nahi bataungi uske baad woh meri kisise nakah bhi kare mein nahi batene wali aapko sab ke samne aake kehna padega ki hamari shadi ho chuki hai aur mein apki legally wife hoon...

Asad:sapne dekhna chod do zoya aisa kuch nahi hone wala...

Zoya:hoga mr khan zaroor hoga aur mein yeh karke dikhaungi aap bhi mujhe nahi jante mein zoya asad khan hoon...

Asad:ohh really toh dekh lete hain challenge excepted miss faruqui sorry mrs khan...


Precap: aapi:zoya toh chale ghar tuhmare jijju tuhmse milne ke liye bade betab hai...

Zoya:haan aapi chale..

N zoya aapi ke saath jati hain...


So guys hows it...
Part 2 pg 2
part 3 pg 4
part 4 pg 6
part 5 pg 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice

Aapi and Jeeju should come for a visit.

AsYa who pretend that they don't want to stay together and are doing natak for ammi but actually want to stay together will have to really stay away

wow amazing hoga

what if aapi and jeeju get a rishta for Zoya

let it come out on the breakfast table and he will choke on his coffee

wow ye toh mera chioce hai let's see how you write it

make it fast and funny and have all the AsYa elements

waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one waitg for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice i love it :-)
Please update it soon and pm me :-)
I am waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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actually they themselves want to be together but just using dilshad z great mom as an excuse ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat11

Nice

Aapi and Jeeju should come for a visit.

AsYa who pretend that they don't want to stay together and are doing natak for ammi but actually want to stay together will have to really stay away

wow amazing hoga

what if aapi and jeeju get a rishta for Zoya

let it come out on the breakfast table and he will choke on his coffee

wow ye toh mera chioce hai let's see how you write it

make it fast and funny and have all the AsYa elements

waiting


hey mein bhi same soch rahi thi thanx yaar hamari choice same hain mein definetly yahi likhne wali hoon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome os...pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice..pls update soon..pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww. really so niceee. plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
next morning
dinning table...
Najma was sitting there..

Zoya:goood morning najma...aami kaha dikhayi nahi de rahi...

Najma:woh bhabhi ammi kuch kam se market gayi hai baad mein aa jayegiii...

Zoya:ohhh acha...

Najma:bhabhi bhaijan kaha hain...

Zoya:woh mr khan toh aaj subah hi office chale gaye...

Najma:itni jaldi...

Zoya:han...

Door bell rings...
Zoya:mein dekhati hoon...aapi aap...

Najma:kon hai bhabhi...

Zoya:woh meri aapi hain najma...in mind hey allah miya ab kya karu kahi najma ne ujhe bhabhi kaha tho gadbad ho jayegi ...zoya run to najma n said yeh dekho tamatar plzz mera ek kaam karna mein darvaza kolti hoon par tum aapi ke samne muhe bhabhi mat bolna...

Najma:par kyu bhabhi...

Zoya:baad mein sab batati hoon plzz najma mere liye...

Najma:jee bhabhi i mean zoya...

Zoya:thanks n she opens the door...

Aapi:kya baat hain hai zoya itni der kyu lagai darvaza kholne mein koi nahi hai kya ghar mein...

Zoya:woh aapi ham breakfast kar rahe the na iss liye...

Aapi:han toh main ander aa jao...

Zoya:haan kyu nahi najma yeh meri aapi hain...

Najma:hello...

Aapi:hei tum najma ho zoya tuhmare bare mein bohot baat karti hain aur dilshan kaha hai...

Najma:woh aami kuch kaam se baha gayi hai...

Aapi::ohhh par haame ab jana chaiye bohot sara kaam hai ghar mein...

Zoya:matlab aap mujhe yaha se lejane aayi hain..

Aapi:haan ghar chalna nahi hai kya...

Zoya:haan eoh tamatar mein kuch der ke liye ghar jaa rahi hoon baad mein tuhme call karti hoon...

Najma:totally confused zoya aap ghar jaa rahi hai ...

Aapi:hhaan zoya apna saman leke aajao...

Najma:par saman kyu chahiye...

Zoya:najma woh kya hain na aapi mere saman matlab mere cell ki baat kar rahi hai...

Aapi:toh chale zoya...

Zoya:najma mrkhan se keh denna mein chali gayi han...

Najma:zoya aap kya keh rahe hi mujhe kuch samaj nahi aata...

Zoya:mujhe bhi...

Aapi:toh ham chalte hain dilshan se milne baad mein aa jaoungi...

Zoya:bye tamatar...
N they goes...

Najma:yeh kya ho raha tha abhi pata nahi...bhaijan ko bata deti hoon...
N she call asad...

Asad:hello haan bol tamatar kya hua...

Najma:woh bhaijaan bhabhi...

Asad:ab kya kiya zoya ne...

Najma:kuch nahi bhaijan woh bhabhi ki aapi aayi thi toh woh bhabhi ko lekar chali gayiii..

Asad:kya par kab aarahi hai...

Zoya:pata nahi bhaijan kuch ajeeb behave kar rahi thi bhabhi balki unhone mujhe bhabhi kehnese bhi mana kiya...

Asad:i mind kya zoya sach main chali gayiii...

Najma:bhaijaan aap meri baat sun rahe ho...

Asad:haan...aur najma aami thi kya waha...

Nnajma:nahi bhaijaan aami market gayi hai abhi tak aayi nahi...

Asad:k tum phone rakho aab...in mind mujhe zoya ke ghar jana hoga...
N cut the call...

In zoya house...
Zoya:aapi aap itni khush kyu hai aaj...

Aapi:kyu ki mein aaj itne dino ke baad tuhmse mili hoon...

Zoya:lagta toh aisa nahi hai pata nahi mr khan kya soch rahe hoge mere bare mein...

Door bell ring..
Zoya:aapi zara dekho toh kon hai...

Aapi:haan ... Aap kon...

Asad:woh mein asad...

Aapi:asad kon asad...

Asad:woh main zoya se ...

Aapi:zoya se kya tum zoya ko jante hon...

Zoya:kon hai aapi..

Aapi:koi asad hai...

Zoya:shock asad mr khan yaha pe ...n she run...aapi ruko...
Yeh mr khan hai dilsahan ke bete jaha pe mein ruki thi...

Aapi:ohh tum ho mr khan tuhmare bare mein bohot suna haii...

Asad:kya suna apne mere bare mein...

Zoya:kuch nahi mr kha woh aise hi...aap ander aajayiye na...

Aapi:haan aao na andar...aap kya lege...

Zoya:black cofee...

Aapi:tum toh bohot janti hoon asad ke bare mein...

Zoya:smile haan janti toh hoon...mein banakar lati hoon...

Aapi toh aao na zoya ne apko pare shan toh nahi kia na...

Asad:pareshan ...yeh toh khud ek badi pareshani hai...

Aapi:kya...

Asad:kuch ahi koi pareshani nahi hui...

Aapi:kamal ki baat hai...
Zoya gives asad a cofee...

Appi:pata hain mene zoya ke liye ek ladka pasand kia hai...

Asad:split a coffee what...

Zoya:kya...

Aapi:haan zoya aur ek baat iss bar mein tuhmara nikaah kar ke rahongiii...

Asad:par...aap iski marzi ke bina kaise nikaah kar sakti hai...

Zoya:in mind haa mr khan jeoulouse hue...

Aapi:kyu nahhi kar sakti meri behen hai mein joh bhi karungi iski bhalayike liye hi...

Zoya:haan aapi mein nikaah ke liye tayyar hoon aap uss ladke ko bula lijiye mein usee milna chahti hoon...

Aapi:sach main toh main usse kal hi bulati hoon ruka mein ab hi usse phone pe baat karti hoon...
N she goes...

Asad:yeh kya hai miss faruqui aap ko pata nahi aapka nikaah ho gaya hai...

Zoya:nikaah konsa woh toh drama hai na mr khan...

Asad:haan par nikaah toh hai...na...

Zoya:aap jal rahe hai mr khan aap mujhse mohobaat karte hain toh batate kyu nahi...

Asad:mohobaat aur tuhmse pagal ho gayi ho kya...

Zoya:main janti hoon aap yeh kabhi qubool nahi karoge lekin mein apse yeh baat qubool karke hi rahongi...

Asad:apni aapi ko kehna ki mein chala gaya...

Zoya:haan mr khan bata dungi...

N asad goes...

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