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MeghnaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me first🥳... Awesome story... loved it.. loved how u give words to geet's feeling, geet's restlessness... Geet's wait... luved it... super OS...

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb Os 👍🏼

Geet's restless for Maan & wants to tell him the news of the baby ..

Lovely One shot 😊

Same hre a grand salute to all the soldiers ..

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Divya

@april12

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome one shot

the feelings beautifully portrayed

and it is well written

hope this encourages you to write more

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Nitya

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏Salute to you !!!

You really make a good writer !!!

Lovely piece of writing !!!😛

P.S : By any ways , is this your first work ????!!!

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MeghnaA

@MeghnaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -niti-
👏Salute to you !!!

You really make a good writer !!!

Lovely piece of writing !!!😛

P.S : By any ways , is this your first work ????!!!

Thank You 😊

And nopes it isn't my first work. But then again, in a way it is. I usually write third person narrative, m more comfortable with that. This is the first time I went for first person. I couldn't write this OS any other way.

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful os

like is not working..

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

such a beautiful update dear

you said right these feelings can only be felt by the woman who has been going through this

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

thats one lovely OS on such a wonderful theme... its hard to imagine what the family of our brave soldiers go through, while they are fighting on the border to protect our country...kudos to them for being so selfless , without caring about their lives ... thnxx for this awesome OS..hope to read some more great stuff on this theme👏

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Superb. Loved the way you penned down the feelings of an army officer's wife. It really does make you think how do they live knowing there's danger around their loved ones. Absolutely loved it... Geet's pregnant.. hope she is able to tell him.. (in my mind he comes back and leaves the army to be with her and their angel...) 😆 but then thinking on it you didnt mention his name

Oh well its still Maan 😆

A superb piece.. If you do have any other works do let me know. Would love to read them. 😊

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