Tum Hi Ho- ArJuhi Version :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy Guys🤗

I'm Vedika..and I'm new to this forum..as a matter of fact, this is my first post here..little nervous..but here goes!😊

This is my first ever ArJuhi os..!! I don't know about you all but the moment I heard this song, I could totally picturize them..!😃

I'm in love with this song and ArJuhi, as you can already see..!!😆

Constructive Criticism is most welcome!😃

Please shower me with your longgg comments and likes..!!😃

And one last thing, I tried with all my might to get the song to play on the thread, but it just wouldn't happen..

Please play it from this link, to get the gist of the story😊




Tum Hi Ho- An ArJuhi OS

It was pitch black. The rain pattered and the wind rapped against the desolate highway. The clouds shrouded the sky with an eerie, ominous blanket. But this gloomy atmosphere seemed like the perfect getaway for the newly engaged couple.


Arjun and Arohi strolled along the pathway against the unnerving storm.


Arjun dressed in a formal black suit looked as dashing as ever. He continuously gazed at his fianc without a blink of his eye. The sultry Arohi was dressed to kill, at least that's what any sane man what have thought!


Clad in a ravishing aqua blue sari embedded with precious jewels, Arohi could feel nothing but vulnerable under Arjun's constant stare. He bore his eyes into her. Her petit figure drenched in the rain beckoned him to claim her soul. The still silence was soon ruined by Arohi's sudden eruption of laughter that startled Arjun.


Arjun- Arohi, kya hua? Achaanak, itni hassi?


Arohi- Ar...Arj..Arjun..*laughing* Apna chehra toh dekho.. ekdum bandar lag rahe ho!


Arjun- *pouting like a baby* Kyun? Mere face pe kuch hai, kya?


Arohi- Nahi! Tumhaari "zulfein" is baarish ki vajah se bhikar gaye hai.. idhar aao.. I'll sort it out.


Arjun- Ok.. careful! Meri zulfien meri prized possession hai!


Arohi's face paled.


Arohi- Really? *muttering under her breath* Par mujhe laga main tumhaari prized possession hoon..


Arjun noticed the change in her expression and heard her silent conversation, but decided to take undue advantage of the situation and tease her.


Arjun- Huh? Kuch kahaa tumne?


Arohi felt genuinely hurt and anger raged within her. She shrieked against the piercing breeze as the rain mercilessly soaked her.


Arohi- Nahin, main kaun hoti hoon aapko kuch bolne waali Mr. Arjun Singhania? Aapko jo karna hai aap ki jiye. Main thodi naa maaine rakhti hoon tumhaare liye, hai naa Arjun? Sirf apni puri zindagi tumhaare naam kar di maine, sirf apna vajood tumhaare naam kar diya, sirf paagalon ke jaise tumhaare saath jeene marne ki khwaahish..


Arjun pulled Arohi by the waist with force and sealed her trembling lips with his. As they broke the enchanting kiss of pure bliss due to the lack of oxygen, they shared an eyelock. Silence prevailed them yet again.


Arjun- *whispered hoarsely* Tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho. Chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho. Tere liye hi jiya main, khud ko jo yun de diya hai. Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhaala, saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala. Main jo mit bhi gaya toh wajood mera, sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda.


Arohi quickly placed her hand on his mouth to stop him from saying anything else. Arjun kissed her fingers one by one with all the love in the world, while Arohi blushed crimson just like a newly wedded wife. One wink, with a glow of mischief from Arjun made her heart skip a beat and just as she was about to bolt, her six inch heel decided to betray her. She lost her balance and squeezed her eyes shut as knew she would hit the rock hard surface of the road. As luck would have it, Arohi was pleasantly surprised as she fell into the arms of the man of her dreams.


Arjun- Jab jab aasmaan se ek Arohi pari ban ke gire gi, tab tab uss pari ko bachaane ke liye ek Arjun zarur hoga.


Arohi was so touched by his words, that it had left her speechless. A lone tear slid down her cheek. Arjun scooped her off her feet before she could digest what is happening to her. He held her close to his heart and they drifted off to a world of their own.


Arjun- I love you Arohi


Arohi- *Hitting his chest playfully with her delicate hands as her bangles jingled merrily* I hate you Arjun, I hate you, hate you, hate you! Because I love you!


Sweet nothings could be heard, as Arohi hid herself in the crook of his neck and Arjun refused to stop teasing her. Their smiles could be seen from miles by an elderly couple that witnessed this epitome of love as the rain was dripping down both of them.


Hope it was atleast readable!


Love,

Vedika❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Vedika(It feels like I'm talking to myself 😆)
I'm so glad you thought of writing this as ArjuHi also...

Firstly... The title is super amazing (I'm being biased because I LOVE the song 😛 parr sachi... Amazing title...

Now about the OS... what should i say??? You left me speechless girl...
This was so nicely written...
I love the way you used the song (as a dialogue) it was so perfect...
I could feel the love...
Amazing Vedika 👏👏👏

BTW "Arjun's Zulfein" cracked me up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I loved this ❤️


Edited Again...

I loved this Dialogue ----->> Jab jab aasmaan se ek Arohi pari ban ke gire gi, tab tab uss pari ko bachaane ke liye ek Arjun zarur hoga. Superb 👏❤️

Edited by veds_6791 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to the forum🤗
res!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome dear 😃
Amazing update vedi 👏 👏 👏
Super title ⭐️ tat pic ws so perfect 😳
Arjun ws asusual so besharam 😳 😳 😳
Aur hamisha ki tara arohi ws like prey fr his hunger 😳
U hv done some sort of magic with the words lovely dialogues 🤗
Keep writing thanx fr the lovely os 😃
Edited by Deepika06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: veds_6791

Hi Vedika(It feels like I'm talking to myself 😆)
I'm so glad you thought of writing this as ArjuHi also...

Firstly... The title is super amazing (I'm being biased because I LOVE the song 😛 parr sachi... Amazing title...

Now about the OS... what should i say??? You left me speechless girl...
This was so nicely written...
I love the way you used the song (as a dialogue) it was so perfect...
I could feel the love...
Amazing Vedika 👏👏👏

BTW "Arjun's Zulfein" cracked me up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I loved this ❤️


Edited Again...

I loved this Dialogue ----->> Jab jab aasmaan se ek Arohi pari ban ke gire gi, tab tab uss pari ko bachaane ke liye ek Arjun zarur hoga. Superb 👏❤️

Heyya Vedika😆😆 Kinda odd isn't it?😛

Thank you so much for the encouragement and praise..I love the song too!!❤️
I don't think it was good..but thanks anyway 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey vedika... Welcum to the forum 🤗

it always feels good to read new stuff on our beloved arjuhi


res..will surely read n comment asap!! :D btw since its on ashiqui..m already excited to read the Os :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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''Jab jab aasmaan se ek Arohi pari ban ke gire gi, tab tab uss pari ko
bachaane ke liye ek Arjun zarur hoga.''
Ds line touched me d most ! Hi vedika, welcm to d forum...frst f all dnt wry it ws a superb work ! I personaly loved d os bcz i love d sing n ur wrtng style ws gud ,,i felt lyk watchng d scene..
Keep in wrtng eh??
We wd love to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: veds_6791

Firstly... The title is super amazing (I'm being biased because I LOVE the song 😛 parr sachi... Amazing title...

veds..phir se?? Ek din mein kitni baar bolegi?? 😛

btw..i love the title :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_15

veds..phir se?? Ek din mein kitni baar bolegi?? 😛

btw..i love the title :))

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 i knew you or Sanju would say that... kya karoon I love this title ❤️

Ek baar aur zaroor bolungi... Amazing title

PS - Vedika, Dont get scared... we are like this only...you'll get used to this 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it <3 read it while listening d song...it was beautiful *dreamy* Dailougues were awesome! Thnks fr this...expecting more works on arjuhi frm u:) n ya the pic is perfect! I can imagine my arjuhi behind that jacket;)
Edited by Arjuhi_kk - 12 years ago

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