arshi FF - HO HI GAYA PYAAR ch 8(a)up {on-hold} - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww arnie boy toh kho gaya pura khushi ki awaaz sunke...!
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Need To Know Khushi's Past Please :)
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Chapter 8 - feelings ? (A)

Arnav Was lost in his thoughts

Wondering the reason why he had brought that ring...he himself didn't knew why he just felt like buying it and giving to the person he will truly love and will mary.

He wondered how the thought of marriage came in his mind when he never believed much in long term commitments.

And the thing that shocked him was why he was thinking about khushi when he brought that ring.

He knows that he is a little attracted to her and likes her but he barely knows her !!

Arnav's thoughts were disturbed by the ringing of his phone

He saw an unknown no. But anyway. Picked up the call

"hello" cams a soft lovely voice from the other end of the phone and he felt a sudden breeze blow on his face out of no where.

For a few seconds arnav was in daze hearing that melodious voice but was brought back when she repeated "hello"

"hi who's this ?" the voice on the other end looked familiar but he could not guess to whom it belonged.

"arnav it's me khushi"

"humm...why did u call me khushi ?"

He questioned and the way he said her name caused her heart beats to increase their speed of beating...it was too strange for her for a second she thought why was her heart beat increasing even when she was talking to him on phone ...it had even happened when she had first met him and he had his arms around her holding her ...she decided not to give all this much thought and continued

"umm..did ..did u checked the bags from ..umm...from the jewellery shop?" she was really feeling strange talking to him and she didn't even know why...

This conversation was surely the awkwardest conversation she had with any one till date...hearing his voice ...it always gave her strange feeling !!!

God what was happening to her (<<she was falling in love 😆)

"no why ?" he asked confused by her question.

She had always behave a little arrogant and looked always angry with her but why was her voice sounding different and soft today ?

He wondered a little but then shrugged the thought away.

" actually our bags have been exchanged ...so just wanted to ask you when can i come to pick them up and give you yours" she finally asked the question for which she had called him.

"oh ...you can come anytime ..i at home only...btw are you sure you called me for asking this only ?" he said with a smirk "and yeh you can even come at the middle of night..i will not have any problem..ok" he said in a flirty tone as he came back to his normal self. He really enjoyed flirting with her...he smirked imagining the perfect o shaped mouth and her cute angry expressions on her face.

And he was right khushi kumari gupta was currently really angry on him for flirting with her again and had a mouth wide open as if it was waiting for a mosquito to enter.

Arnav didn't know the reason why he liked flirting her'but he always loved when she blushed as well as got angry on him and when he eyes become as wide as saucer and her mouth shapes into her perfect 'O'when she was surprised. He had always found her soo cute and he really liked seeing that expression on her face.

He with a smile went to sleep to see those carmel eyes of hers in his dream.

O0o

Dear diary,

Why dairy ? why ? when I look into his eyes I want to just drown in those deep chocolate brown eyes. That when he touched me I felt like a current run down my spine. That whenever he is around I turn tomato red so much so that I can even put a tomato to shame. Why is this happening ? what is this feeling ? am I attracted to him ? have I started liking him ? NO this cannot happen I should not start having such feelings for him or rather anyone...these only destroy people...hadn't such feeling destroyed ma ... had not her life was destroyed by these very feeling ? this is wrong...very wrong..I should stay away from his as much as I can.

She closed her eyes as she remembered her painful past.

NO that will never happen with me.

She soon went to sleep but the memories of her past didn't let her sleep easily and she tossed and turned on her bed till tired of the day events sleep took over her.

O0O

OMG I just realized it has been three months since I updated last..i mean I knew I am late but not soo much !!!

I am really really sorry for that and also becoz this is really short update only 784 words but I promise to post next part soon !

thanks for all the comments and likes on the previous part.

I am just a little disappointed that this FF doesn't get as much response as others but I guess it is my mistake that I am not able to write this story properly and just the storyline is not proper and all...but I am trying to improve

please positive criticism and suggestions are welcome

I also needed a help here ! can u all please help me find a perfect pet name for arnav and khushi of this story as I really need one...

I mean I want khushi to give a pet name to arnav looking at his behavior.

and I want arnav to give a name to khushi also but don't know what names to chose. if u have any names in mind do tell me.

keep smiling

love

- gunj 😊

Edited by fan123GUNJ - 12 years ago

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