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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 i can see your eyes wide open
dont mistake me. as far as i know writers of os ff are the cvs of our forum

we all know this track lost its direction and is heading towards a nowhere land
the cvs themselves are confused, is this the same director who gave us wonderful tracks
ok now coming to the topic
if you were the cvs how would you handle this issue
everything was going right , how did this track loose its direction which episode in particular

. if i was the cv, i would have done a tiresome homework before thinking of this track.
just to show sandy as a super woman, they took this matter to gaav,
in which village ( rajasthan) do they accept such IR marriages, whatever bhashan or a question of life or death ( fire accident) they will never accept. how can they give green signal to momily marriage just because kajri saved the children . i cant co relate it. any way this track would have been better if it was solved in RM itself,

when bhabho came to know about mohit behind emily pregnancy, she should have given an emotional bhashan it would have been more effective ( instead she kept mum)

when sandy insisted on emily to be recognised as RP beendhni with her own identity, bhabho should have either accepted or should have given the suggestion of momily staying separate afer thier marriage,( i would go for register marriage, it would be safe for emily )

this will be a good opportunity for mohit to develop the lost love for emily , as he will see her struggling during pregnancy. without the help of elders


soon after bhabho hears the news of emily giving birth to a child , she cannot hold herself and would tell mohit to join RP ( this what happens today, the boy and girl decide to elope and once they give a waris the family get united )

because mother sentiment always works. instead they created unneccessary chaos in the gaav
is there any compulsion that in every track sandy should win

instead why cant it be realistic , with love winning finally
now neither bhabho is happy nor mohit

sorry i cant match our forum writers but just a thought
share yours

P.S. ami dear the titile is just to raise the eyebrows and turn this thread to pink soon ( contribution to the CM😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I already said Shobhana is a CV.

For the rest...I just call ... 'Uma!'
Edited by PadBear - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rama ka u stole my question to umaji & made a thread😆 anyways i'm gonna answer this wat for 15 mins.

Paddy aunty i'm not one of the CVs. Don repeat this already i get nice taang pullings for supporting bhabho &cv's😆

Edited: My take on this track. If I were cv.
Two options i have

Option one: Imagining that i joined the DABH team b4 this IR track:
I would never showed emily pregnant. Mohit may be shown denying all his misdeeds. But bhabho gets to know the truth by sandy. Then bhabho would throw him out of the house. He begs for his life as he has never gone to office😆 Emily would bring up her child as a single mom & reaches great heights. Seeing this mohit may or may not realise. His own child will bash him up. etc etc.

Option two: Just now i joined the cv's at a stage where emily is ready to follow all the sanskaars of marwaris.

Better late than never the cv's can manage to give some justice to this track even now.
First i will ponder some points to show how they failed in this track & then i will describe what to do.
1. Emily's pregnancy & thereby everyone accepting her.
2. One bhashan & everyone changed that too to an extent they are ready to accept emily as a christian bahu?? wedding in church etc etc
3. they created hype abt honour killings & made a huge blunder. Nothing was justified.

This much is enough i think. They started of this track with an intention to give a social message on honor killings based on IR marriages & now has landed up in a situation to save atleast their bacha kwacha sammmaan. The only mistake they ade is that they exclaimed momily to be in deep love so that everyone must accept for IR marriage😡. Showing emily like a christian - western style shows that the cv's had taken up the issue to an international level😆 Ball room dance , kissing - i'm k with it. There few ppl here iin India like that. It can also be shown right😉Now they are trying to show some justice to love portion.
1. First they are showing mohit to be reluctant even now which is his characterisation basically. (realistic)
2. They show IR marriage with mix of both the rituals & a mockery show of dhaisa & gang (which actually happens if IR marriage takes place like this)
3. Bhabho still is in denial to accept ems as it is.
4. As per the spoilers emily will be shown donning marwari attire in order to gain the love of bhabho. Practicing the religion of husband is not a sin or a wrong thing (but the hubby must also follow her religion in case of ideal couple here mohit still to realise her love).

After the wedding the things need to be shown (most probably the cv's will show the same i guess. The spoilers make me think this way) The following are those things which i would like to see.

1. Mohit will tell emily that he will not behave ike his husband untill bhabho accepts her whole heartedly.
2. Emily will try to impress bhabho by donning marwari avatar.
3. Bhabho will not accept her so soon.
4. Emily will be shown practising both the religions.
5. Bhabho will develop a soft corner for emily when her health fails & will take care of her.
6. Emily will make mohit realise the worth of her love.
7. Mohit shd be shown slowly realising his mistake & apologise to both bhabho & Emily most importantly.

This may take two to three months in the serial😆


Edited by shobhana_dabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol, i will try my hand in this , just a Try
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobhana_dabh

Rama ka u stole my question to umaji & made a thread😆 anyways i'm gonna answer this wat for 15 mins.

Paddy aunty i'm not one of the CVs. Don repeat this already i get nice taang pullings for supporting bhabho &cv's😆

RES will edit it after 15 mins😉


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sorry shobi
i didnt notice your comment on umaji's thread
apni di ko maaf nahin karogi❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what... everyone is preparing a huge essay kya. ok then i will also try... 😲

Rama, when Babs keeps quiet instead of screaming, it's a big danger sign. It means big volcano will erupt after 3 weeks.

As far as I know, this is the worst track this show has ever shown and it's not a temporary glitch because this involves so many people and Sandy is in the middle of it as well. Plus it's a family matter, not one of Sandy's external problem solving cases. Plus all members of RP and everyone walking around Hanuman Gali can and will have strong opinions on all this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This track should have been plain and simple. Mohit need not have been portrayed as so dark. He could have been shown really loving Emily despite all his other faults. He fights with his family for her. Sets up a nuclear family. Has a kid after a year. Bhabo cannot remain angry for so long. She goes to see the child, warms up a bit and gradually they start visiting the RM. Relations normalize but they do not become a part of the joint family. Emily retains her faith, can eat what she wants, dress the way she wants and work without hindrance. I have written about this umpteen times in different threads. Even now they need not show Mohit being resentful of Emily. Seeing Emily and Bhabo's inability to adjust to each other they can show Sandhya advice Bhabo to let them go for maintaining the larger peace in the family and giving freedom to Emily to follow her way of life. Ajmer is a 15 min drive from Pushkar. They can come every weekend. As Emily is pregnant they can rent a house near Emily's parent's house. For change to happen joint families have to break up. Let them start in DABH also. What is so sacrosanct about RP that it cannot break ? Did Bhabo not break away from village to set shop in Pushkar ? Suraj clearly stated his childhood was spent in the village. If Bhabo can break away from Maasa and company why a similar right should not be enjoyed by her sons. It is not as if Bhabo is being abandoned. There are two other sons living with her. At this age why should Bhabo be compelled to change her way of life or alternately why should Emily change herself totally to adjust to RP. Both can lead their respective lives independently while maintaining cordial relations.
Edited by UMDU - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ramadi I will give my views here
- Track was lost when Emily pregnancy was shown. IR message lost. Still this could have been salvaged
- Bhabo throwing Mohit out of the house and asking him to marry Emily acceptable.( It would have been a realistic take, maybe SURYA can show supporting Momily hiding from bhabo etc.. and when bhabo finds out , a hungama I would have accepted it)
- Gavv track they took, fine could have done well with atleast a civil marriage and a reception than this over the top wedding hungama.
- Ok wedding shown, again goof ups. I have been to n number of christian weddings have neither seen groom kissing the bride or ballroom parties. Comon Emily is a Indian christian, there was no need to show western christian wedding. This shows how poorly they have researched the topic.
Stopping now , let me see how this progresses then will add on later.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes Uma, showing a nuclear family set up is far less challenging story wise. The fact that CVs didn't do that and have waited till after the wedding for Mohit to reject Emily (spoiler) tells me that they really want to make this a very knotty situation. Emily is going to try and stay at RM in spite of Mohit's antagonism. Unhappy couple - Sandy's problem #1. Unhappy Bhabo - Sandy's problem #2. Trying to study in the middle of all this - Sandy's easiest task.

Not to mention, baby swap drama to come - Sandy's rescue Meena mission. Then arrival of another baby... it's difficult to maintain a train of thought here, let alone write a logical script.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@umaji why u always suggest nuclear family?😕 its k u & rama ka wanted a same track.😆

@shruthi - why can't the cv's show the westernised christian in this show? Is that bcoz the story becomes complicated? We dabhians & sandy love complications right😉 I feel that those kind of ppl also live in India may be few. That can't stop the cv's from showing a westernized/modernized Christians.

@ Anusha aunty - would anyone watch the show if sandy has no prob at all?🤣 I like the way the cv's made a knotty(naughty😆) situation like this. I'm sure they will come up with good solution😉

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