Devilz Lair: First Touch of Love prt 2 pg 61 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt...🤗

Such a lovely OS...Cute...romantic...adorable..little funny moments(due to the puppy) ...the hut romance...the coffee flavored kiss ...woah...

I LOVED the way u places all the elements of the challenge...it seemed so effortless...nothing looked forced...puppy,electricity...hmm..they r not my cup of tea...of shall i say coffee😆


I loved the way he showed up outside her window n asked her for a dance...d most romantic thing ever...waltzing in rain...ahaaa

Definitely the pleasant weather was enlightening everyone's mood. She couldn't help but smile back at him, his excitement was infecting. Swayam who was by now completely drenched gestured her to come outside while she shook her head and pointed towards her wrist indicating "do you know what time it is?" He nodded telling "I know" and then did a small step of waltz with an imaginary girl telling her he wanted to dance with her while she mouthed "Pagal" to him to which he bent down on one knee and clasped both of his hands both as if begging her to come outside. Sharon eyed him for a second but then a traitorous grin found it way on her face and he jumped a feet in air yelling "YES!" which made her giggle and she indicated him to wait.

The walk was pleasant..teasing the lovesick hearts...the puppy spoil the kiss...but it added the fun element & cuteness...swayam getting annoyed with the small puppy was a treat to read..

Swayam made a face upon being disturbed for the second time while Sharon giggled and both of them looked downwards only to find a cute little puppy snuggling next to them. Swayam almost jumped two feet in air upon spotting such a vile and repulsive creature according to him sitting next to him while Sharon bent down and picked it up saying "its so cute swayam" swayam looked horrified and made no efforts to hide his disgust while Sharon bonded with the little animal happily. He hated puppies. Why? Because when he was young one dog bit him pretty bad since then his hatred for dogs started. He finally found his voice back and said "let go of it Sharon" Sharon looked at him wide eyed and said "why? And it? He has a name okay" swayam groaned and said "oh come on Sharon…look at it…..its so ugly" Sharon looked like as if she would eat him alive while he corrected himself "cutely ugly"

Cutely ugly...awww...so sweet..i love jealous swayam..pouting..looking adorable...

Coming to d hut romance..it was heavenly..rain..swaron sharing single blanket ...fireplace...coffee flavored kiss...dream come true...loved these lines..

Then she settled herself in his lap while he wrapped the blanket around both of them and also locked her in his embrace while she leaned against his muscular chest. Then she grabbed the cup of coffees and gave him one which was by then still hot but not steaming hot. They sipped their coffee quietly deciding in between to steal a coffee flavored kiss while the fire burned in silence in the fireplace allowing the two lovers to snuggle closer and spend the night away from the world lost in love.

AMAZING OS swthrt...anything coming from u can not be less then perfect...loved the OS...Marium chose the correct person for the challenge...keep showering such beautiful piece of write ups on us...love u baby

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Another amazing OS by you ,I loved how u depicted swaron in rain and their romance 😳
And also that puppy part was cute 😊
I loved this OS 😳

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely os Baz👏

Desires Revealed beautiful os with enchanting memories of TanHa. You bring all those lovely memories back once again alive loved it.Hope aisa sach mein hota magar cv's ki to dimag ki lalten hi nahi jali kya karein. Loved their confession & the way Sharon took the first step n confess her feeling to Swayam was just beautifully penned down. & next day i thought something happened between them but hamara majnu boy will never allow anything to happen😆 loved his concern.


Lost in Love os mind blowing os. Very cute,naughty & romantic os loved the way you describe all the things so beautifully whether it's about rain,Swaron romance & the little cutely ugly enemy of Swayam beautiful & awesome work. Aise challenge aapko milte rehne chahiye so we can get some really beautiful os to read & cherish my TanHa as i'm really missing them.I also challenge you to give update for your FF HOSTAGE 😉 please i know you said that you will focus on that after completing FF EOF but yaar please i really want to read it as i love to read some thrilling n suspense work. Agar nahi to then write any os with same thrilling pattern which start with Swayam as villain but ends with as a hero😃 Please

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Marium may GOD fulfill all your wishes stay happy always n enjoy life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful..
loved the way yiu depicted their rain dance, their romance..
but the puppy ruined it all🤣 great.. his reaction made me laugh..

amazing peice of work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love Your writing and all Your oneshots are awesome...
just read all of them in one sitting.. :) too good👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice os loved the way u used all the situation given to u 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
as always ...too romactic n hawwt ..loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love reading 'Lost in Love'. It had some wonderful Swaron moments. Especially how they were willing to give up one's comfort for the other. It always feels good to read about so much in love Swaron!!! This one is amazing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it.. swaron in rain and their romance 😳
puppy part was cute..😊

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