kya apko mera asya story qubool hai?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi all

i would like to write a short story and i wish cvs do watch it so that a wonderful scene shall be witnessed

asad and zoya goes to ajmer along with dilshad,,najma and billi

in ajmer tannu near shopping stares asad and will be fida on him,,,this will be observed by z oya and gets jealous..she says mr.khan why dont you go and take rest...why u want to do the shopping..pata nahi aajkal sab log tho aaphi pe mare jarahe

asad:ms,farooqi whats wrong with you why are you talking like this,,,ok...agar aisa kuch bhi hai to aap ko kya farak padta hein(with little smile) and asks are you jealous?

zoya says what nonsense... nothing like that...i was just telling as your well wisher...who am i to you?and she leaves from there...asad starts smiling...but zoya will be totally in upset stage with tannus acts..and starts doubting her too...

tanveer plans and sends gunda's to kill zoya...but asad will come and save there and fight with them..he starts screaming and says how dare you to touch her...agar unko kuch hojata to i will not leave you at all...but unfortunately some body will hit zoya on head with a stick..

she will fall down and says mr.khan and asad screams zoya and takes her to his lap and zoya put her hands on his cheek and says mr.khan ...i love you..i dont want to die...and asad out of tears says i love you too zoya...how can i live with out you...nothing will happen to you...and hugs her and kiss her on forehead..

by the time dilshad comes zoya will be turning unconscious and asad starts crying...and rushes by holding her on road to hospital..tanveer gives her worst expressions

dilshad says nothing will happen to zoya and he cries like a small kid while hugging her..and says ammi i love her from the first day ..but never expressed as iam son of janab rashid khan and i might hurt her as he did to you and dilshad says no...u r my child and u will never turn like father

dr says she is out of danger and conscious...everyone will go inside but asad stares her from out side with tears.

zoya remembers their confession and her eyes search for asad,,,dr discharge her and they will go the hotel room...(as they are in ajmer)

zoya asks dilshad where is asad and she says about his fear of hurting ...zoya smiles and she goes to asads room and calls mr.khan..

he turns back and his eyes are full of tears and asks how r u ms.farooqi...he wants to touch her head and bandage but pulls back his hand...zoya says why you saved me,,asad asks what nonsense she is talking...and he says in her place if any girl is there he will do the same...but zoya immediately says and you will tell i love you too..asad turns the other side and says she has gone mad becos of head injury and says he never said i love you..

zoya says ok mr.khan now enough is enough ..iam fed up with you and your emotional challenged problem...what iam feeling is god wants me to take with him..thats why so many times so many people attacked me..and she says now next time if any body tries to kill pls u dont come and save ...as she screams ,cry out of pressure...blood comes out of her bandage on head..asad sees that and becomes panic..and rushes to her ...tries to stop the blood with tissues..during this asad is very close to zoya and zoya with teared eye stares asad and hugs him tightly

mr.khan i know that you love me from the beginning but today phupi said abt your fear..mr.khan i will never leave you even if you want to hurt me as i lost everybody in life and i will not loose you and starts crying very badly...asad shocked from this and hugs her too very tightly and says zoya i love you...i will never leave you...incase if i scream at you on anger its only for few seconds as my love is more than anger...both cries.hugs and asad kiss on her fore head and says even if god wish to take you i will not allow...and hugs her tightly.

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chocolate15 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww
what an awesome story
hume QUBOOL HAI
malathidubai thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: chocolate15

awww

what an awesome story
hume QUBOOL HAI

thanks alot..i wish cvs also say qubool hai😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool ha qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai an100000000000000000000000000000000000000000...……. Qubool hai amazinggg job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it.
mujhe yeh story qubool hai
malathidubai thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Ilhamez

Qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool ha qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai an100000000000000000000000000000000000000000...''. Qubool hai amazinggg job

hey thanks alot...i wish we get some scene like this
malathidubai thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
hi sorry i didnt get u
malathidubai thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocolate15

awww

what an awesome story
hume QUBOOL HAI

thank u chocolate

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