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Posted: 12 years ago



this is a banner of taani aka meri tanvi!! Which i stole meri rooh this if for you jaan!!😳

and ya this part is dedicated to my shoba di

daredevilis back!! sorry sweety for making you wait long!!

tum saath the

to khil rahe the hum

jeena tum bin aata nahi hame
kyoki tumhari ssanso main kahi ,
dhadkan hamaari ,
thi chupi hui ,

ab jab jaa rahe ho dur tum
to yeh dhadkan bhi jjaa rahi hai ,
saath tumhaare !

bin tumahaare
jeena to kya
ik saans lena bhi ,
nahi hai gawaara hame !

thank you so much nishu di!! for the poem!!

PART 2:

Rano: Beta maan ne aisa kyun kiya?? Woh tumse shaadi ke liye mana kyun kar raha hai?? woh bhi ek hafte pehle?? I know him more than you ... jaroor tune hi kuch kiya hoga bata geet what did you do?? Bol, rano shook her innocent daughter who sat in the lone corner of the room. It had been a day since she spoke, she was not even reacting to anyone. It was as if all her senses stopped working, she wanted the world to stop but then she received a tight slap on her face. Geet's eyes welled up and she looked at her mother with tears with those numb face yet again, rano was frustrated to see geet that way. She felt like hitting her again but couldn't do it, why does she felt like geet was wrong?? May be she had did something which she wasn't supposed to!!


Geet tere aur maan ke beech mein kya hua tha?? Kitni baar maine kaha tujhse, he has a right to touch you tune phir se mana toh nahi kiya na?? You know his ego!! Gusse mein aake kahi usne? Please atleast answer this question bacha I beg of you!! Rano fell into geet's lap crying on the fate that she was losing a son-in-law like maan. Maan was really close to rano and mohinder, they loved him probably more than geet and now if he was not ready for this marriage their mind only told that it was geet who might have hurted maan. It was a love marriage and maan being an ideal maan who would say no to such a damad after all!! They were more than happy that their jhalli actually fell in love with maan singh khurana the ruler of business, more than that a man who truly and madly reciprocates the love of their daughter. Mohinder was reluctant on his daughter's choice at first but he had to agree when rano too was with geet. His choice was somebody else for geet, but for him nothing mattered more than geet's happiness and he said yes to maaneet.


Rano raised her head and looked at the pale face of geet, jawab de ... She slapped geet again, she chose to remain calm yet again ... so I was right!! You did what I expected you to!! Hone wala pati hai woh tera how could you do something like that? Tu koi bachi nahi hai geet you are 24 and its ridiculous on your part to ...... geet jawab de, rano was losing her patience with geet's silence. She wanted maan as geet's husband and now the chances seemed so thin. At least she would try talking to maan, they had a fight on the same issue once but maan would never leave geet on such petty issue.


I gave him more than I could mama!! Pata nahi wahi shayad maine galti kardiya she said hiding her face in between the palms breaking her silence, What next came to rano's mind was something inevitable. For once her mind froze with the worst thought ever she could even think of, what did you give?? What did you geet?? Rano held her head getting ashamed unable to believe what her daughter was telling her.


Kuch nahi mama he rejected to touch me!! Unko sirf mera pyar chahiye tha, shayad unko laga he was forcing himself on me, why couldn't he understand I was his!! Just his!! Par uske baad bhi sab thik tha very normal pata nahi mujhse kaha galti ho gayi.


Tum kaha galat ho gayi yeh sab sochne ka haq tumne kho diya geet!! You are getting married to rahul on the same day, a shrill voice came from behind. Geet didn't expect that her father would say something like that, but rano already knew it that was the reason she was trying to make out as to what happened between maan and geet.


Late night,

Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai

He looked at the wall, and ran his hand on it!! His misti painted the whole room, his thoughts drifted to the past,


Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai


Maan no!! She screamed running around the room, she had started the game of playing with paint. She had smudged his face with it. After running for an hour finally they halted with geet giving up ...... Acha baba I lost I just cant run anymore ab aapki marzi she stood plonking her hand on the waist. She looked so tempting in those shorts and spaghetti too, he felt like eating her up alive. Maan dipped the brush into the tub of paint and streaked her bare exposed tummy with the paint. Geet shockingly looked down ... It was teasing me since long kya karon badla lena tha isse he said pulling geet into his arms. His ownself got filled with the paint in no time.


Dhadkan dhadkan ik gham rehta hai


She stood behind the curtain hiding herself, feeling shy but he knew his misti, the chum chum of her payal. In no time he caught her, toh tumhe phone ka game khelne mein acha lag raha tha ab mere saath khello. You just spoiled my mood with that message, seduce karne ka shauk chadha tha na ab jhelo, she giggled feeling him tickling her with the stubble.


Jaane kyu phir bhi dil kehta hai


She caressed those images of maan, dev could manage getting cozy images of them, she was sitting in maan's lap and was caught red handed by dev. She simply hugged maan out of shy, few were their actual private moments. Geet smiled seeing maan's laughter she kissed the image, his happiness was her life.


Jee le zara, jee le zaraa


Tumhe kisi aur nahi done donga, your dad will have to agree to our marriage warna utha lejonga samjhi tum!! Tum mujhe rok bhi nahi paogi, she winced as he harshly pulled her hair and kissed her. Her first kiss, his claim she loved it but never confessed to him out of shy.


Kehta hai dil jee le zara


She was sitting in the same place, same way for hours coming in terms with the reality. They were one and all of a sudden the new revelation, she closed her ears as she heard him calling out her name.



Aye humsafar, aye humnawa


Maan looked at the chain that fell down in his room, it was his misti's possession. His heart ached seeing those initials of MG on it, he punched the wall making fist.


Aa paas aa jee le zara


He checked his phone for nth time, no call. What was he even expecting?? Why would she call him?? Its was all over, now even the office seemed to be thorny.


Hai zindagi mana dard bhari


Maan... Maan... dadima called his name again and again, he was staring at the plate all lost and when he heard dadima's voice he shoved the plate away and left leaving his food.


Phir bhi isme ye raahat bhi hai


Geet kuch khale beta, rano tried to shove some food into her mouth ...Maan will not eat his food mama, woh khalenge toh main bhi khalongi, rano left giving up.



Main hoon tera aur tu hai meri


His fingers punched her number but could press the call button, he threw the phone away in anger while aditi stood outside the room watching maan. Ever since he got her home not for once did he speak to her.


Yunhi rahe hum, ye chahat bhi hai


The alarm clock rang early in the morning ... I love you maan!! His eyes shot open and then realized it was his misti's voice.


Phir dil ke dil se, pul kyu toote hain


She still sat in the same position and drifted to sleep in the night, geet saw herself in the warmth of his arms and when the dream broke, her eyes opened taking the reality inside.


Kyun hum jeene se itne roothe hain


He threw the paper weight on the glass table breaking it into pieces, y does he feel his misti was calling him again and again.


Aa dil ke darwaaze hum khole


Rano maa... there was a complete silence from her side rano couldn't speak anything just heard maan's voice. Her emotions stopped her from reacting ... geet kaisi hai?


Jinda hai maan kaafi nahi hai?? And I would have been happy if she was left alone but now her marriage is fixed on the same day when you are going to marry that girl, aditi.


Aa hum dono jee bhar ke ro le


Uske papaji gusse mein hai I swear maan if she does something to herself ill never forgive you, woh tumhare bina jee leti but now I am losing that hope too.


Jee le zara, jee le zaraa


His phone went dead, that was when dadima came into his room .. Maan I am going to my friends place, I don't want to attend your marriage. Geet hi meri bahu banegi if not don't ever try call me, she left the room saying her stand on it. Maan turned to look at her, he couldn't stop his dadima.


Kehta hai dil jee le zara


Nakul, aditi had her food?? ... haan maan sir nakul said cleaning his room, maan stood at the door and watched aditi busy writing something.


Aye humsafar, aye humnawa


Sir are you listening? Adi asked understanding maan's inattentiveness ... you mind the work adi I am not feeling well. That has become his dialog since two days.


Aa paas aa jee le zaraa


seemed like his pleas to her to live her life didnt work, she lost her hopes of living recollecting those words of her father,


You are getting married to rahul on the same day

She gulped a whole lot of sleeping pills, her phone rang again and again. Maan got restless getting no response from her, he ran out to reach her place.

Precap: the truth!!


How could you do such thing geet?? Ek baar bhi nahi socha ki jis insaan ke liye tumne apni jaan lene ki koshish ki hai he is moving on leaving you back?? He didn't expect this from his strong misti, he understood that she is strong only with him being around her. He then felt geet struggling for breath!! His heart almost stopped, he slapped her cheeks again and again madly ... geet!! geet!! Breath dammit!! Saans lo!! He screamed, she gulped gathering herself ... Saans kis ke liye loon maan?? Jabse maine apne saans ko jaana tabse yeh saans sirf aapke ho chuke!! Ab nahi hota mujhse aapke bina yeh jindagi meri ... Meri nahi rahi ... My body, My eyes are not listening to me!!


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PART 1

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PART 3

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG didu itna touchy update
rola diya apne
geet mother was thinking ki geet is at fault thats why maan broke di marraige
she didn't once thought ki geet ko kaisa laga hoga
when her lover said that he won't marry her
nd mohinder is so angry that woh geet ki dusri shaadi karna chahta
he want his daughter happiness
but yeh nahi dekh raha ki uski daughter ki happiness kahan hai
dadi is also angry on maan
all bcoz of aditi
kyun aditi ko laayee maaneet ke pyaare se paradise me
next update jaldi doo
plueej

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Me second...😃😃😃😃

So emotional part..I was crying while reading part...😭😭
Rano also think geet is wrong😕😕
geet's marriage fixed with rahul😲😲
Geet k daddyji aisa mat karo...
So that girl name is aditi...
whatever it is I care for only maaneet...
But why maan is so caring towards her...Must be some reason...
she looks innocent to me...
U described very well maaneet's haal without each ...
Song selection👏👏👏👏👏
again same teaser...
Not fair harika...
waiting for next part to know what is the truth..
super awesome part..
It was worth for my wait...
Harika hats off to you...
will be eagerly waiting for next part...
so update soon...
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



abhi karing sorry for being so late are you there??

ok..ok😃 now jaldi karing..waiting...by th way check this plz https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3581554/happy-mothers-day
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

rano blaming geet😲

geet brokn down😭

geet getng married to rahul on same day😡

maan is such a idiot😡

precap is scary
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


ho gaya and ya ill comment in the thread yaar😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful part
geet has taken sleeping pills
waiting to know the truth
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



ho gaya and ya ill comment in the thread yaar😉

yes i read the part... will comment lamba wala... but not now ..right now on mob. so ...will comment from pc... do com. on that thread bcz it's for my mom & my fav writer's & buddies... & u r my fav writer as well as best buddy..
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful
want to know the whole truth
geet gluped the whole bottle
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Posted: 12 years ago
both are in so much love cant live without each other

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