MaaRen os: Some time for each other (part2-pg5)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...!!

This is my first os. This is based on maanvi and viren

Finally viren released from jail and happiness can be seen in the form of tears in eyes of all family members.

Viren, jeevika, virat and maanvi standing at the enterance of vadhera mansion waiting for vanshika ma to welcome the returned happiness with a aarti. All of them entered into house and viren was surrounded and bounded with a hug of happiness by family members.

Then dadaji came forward and spoke...
Dadaji : I an sorry beta (with a sad face)

Viren : Why dadaji??

Dadaji : For not trusting you. Though we all knew from 28 years, still we doubted on you and thought that you are the real victim of Ria. We are extremely sorry (by folding hands and with a guilt in eyes)

Viren : Arey dadaji.Why are you saying sorry? If i was there in your place, then my thoughts will also be same as yours. Waise bhi hum sab lawyers hai tho shak karna humare khoon mein hota hai. Please don't feel sorry about that.

Dadaji : par...

Viren : Par war kuch nahi hai .Waise bhi bohot raat ho chuki hai ,hum sab sone chalte hai .Kal subha baat karte hai.

With that assurance all went to their respective rooms and virika started celebrating their happiness in their own way. Meanwhile in virmaan room...

Virat : (while searching for clothes)Maanvi aaj mein bohot kush hoo bhai ate he khushiya waapas aagaye
And waiting for the response from opposite person but no response

Virat : (turn towards maanvi) Maanvi

Maanvi:...

Virat: MAANVI...

Maanvi: Kyu chilla rahe ho??

Virat: Mein kab se tumhe bula raha tha. Kaha khoyi ho??

Maanvi: Kuch nahi virat. Main bas yahi soch rahi hoo jo trust sheetal ne jeeju par hai wohi trust hume jeeju pe nahi hai.Main bohot guilt feel kar rahi hoo...hume abhi sorry bolna chahiye...

Virat:Tum sahi keh rahi ho...lekin iss samay bohot raat ho chuki hai. Kaal subah sorry boldenge. Ab so jao.

With this they both went to bed. But for maanvi, sleep goddess is not ready to do friendship with her. She slowly krept out of her room and went towards virika room but stopped in mid way with a thought of not to distrub them...

Slowly she turned towards her room but stopped on hearing a familiar voice from back and she know the owner of voice is her own jeeju.

Viren: maanvi

Maanvi: ...

Viren: maanvi
And made her to turn so that she can face him. Maanvi standing before him with head down

Viren: Maanvi, Tum yaha??

With this he came forward and cupped her face so that he can see her.
But he is shocked her saali's beautiful eyes filled with tears.

Viren: maanvi kya hua?? Kahi virat ne tumhe kuch nahi kiya.Usko tho mein chodunga nahi...and started to move towards virat's room but stopped in mid way by hearing maanvi's voice.

Maanvi: I am sorry jeeju.

Viren: huh!!

Maanvi: I am sorry jeeju for not trusting you...I am extremely sorry...meri wajah hai sab aap par doubt kiya. Main aapko jante huye bhi maine shak kiya(with tears in her eyes)...main tho di ki baat bhi nahi suni.

Viren: arey maanvi please aisa mat kaho...tum tho jo aapne ankho se dekha wohi socha...usme koyi shak ki baat hi nahi hai...
Ab jao so jao bohut raat ho chuki hai(he wiped her tears)

Maanvi: par jeeju

Viren: par war kuch nahi ab jao

With this maanvi turned to go towards her room with sad face but viren is feeling sad for her.To enlighten her mood he got an idea

Viren:maanvi

Maanvi: (turning towards him)kya jeeju.aapko kuch chahiye??

Viren:main soch raha hoo ki main jail se release hua tho party sharty tho bante hai.Chalo bahar jakar ice cream party karte hai...

Maanvi: (with shocked face)ab iss samay par raat 11 baje. Nahi jeeju ghar mein kisiko pata chalaga tho humari kair nahi...

Viren:arey kuch nahi hoga chalte hai. Sirf tum aur main.

Maanvi:jeeju...

Viren:kuch nahi hoga.Lets have sometime for each other.

With this they both went to have some ice cream

Precap

Maanvi: jeeju

Viren:kya baat hai maanvi

Maanvi: jab hum pehli bar mile tab tho mein jeevika thi. Tab aap kise shadi karte hai.

Viren: main tum se shaadi kar leta.

Maanvi:kya!!(shocked)

I know this is the worst os which you read in your life. There will be part 2 if you want.
Now throw your chappals *hides under dinning table*
Takecare

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rashi246 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This os is the best, I loved it soo much. Plzzz continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u know i love virman but also love vren n manvi tooo😉
love to read a MaaRen os😃
plzzz cont 😛
want to read more plzzz😭😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love MAAREN...
it was totally unexpected then also i liked it...
pm wen me wen u update...
i loved the precap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Maaren story that too with a interesting turn OMG 🤪
I am a very big maaren fan, plz plz plz update soon n surely PM me
I am sending a buddy reg to u

again wow maaren story
viren said he would have married Manvi wow


kuch kuch hota hain ❤️

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Continue soon...
Liked this one...
Little different bt liked to see next one soon...
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i liked it sooo much plx add me 2 ur pm list
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Originally posted by: rashi246

This os is the best, I loved it soo much. Plzzz continue sooon

Thank you so much.Will continue soon.
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Originally posted by: mehaksanaya

i liked it sooo much plx add me 2 ur pm list

Will add you. Thank you that you liked it.
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Originally posted by: amgud

u know i love virman but also love vren n manvi tooo😉

love to read a MaaRen os😃
plzzz cont 😛
want to read more plzzz😭😆

I also love virmaan . But don't know why I wrote this.
Will continue for sure.

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