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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it alot...
rahul planning smthng...maan hurt cz of geets words...superb update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
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H2 - 22



Maan left te party at once , informing his bgs to take Geet home and he need to be alone. He took his car and went some were, were he can pour his burning heart. He drove so fast and without knowing were he is going, at now he have to go far from everything




He stop te car at top of te hill, he got down and bang te car door , removed his coat and throw it harsly, he stood near te edge and started to shout from his lungs , taking all his frustration.




Maan : ah ah ah aha ha ha aha ha






Maan(st) : how dare she , wat she think of herself , who is she to say me to move on, I want to take our relation to next but she wants to broke it, no one ever denied MSK, till now she have seen Maan, but now she will face MSK,





After so much hard he fallen for for a girl but he lost it too, after so long he want to live his life , he want to have a heaven , but god decide him to drown In hell for life long, . he now hating him for changing Maan singh Khurna to Maan , which is no use, yes he did a mistake by changing himself,




He was hitting te car with his hands and it starts to bleed, Geet face was flashing In front of him again and again.. te way she said she didt love him and te way she said him to move on , te way her tears but her eyes say something, she didt look at me while saying all tis, watt is girl think of herself, wat ever Geet u want freedom from tis hell, u will get it. I wont cum near u, u wont see me,


Maan went to campigane , informing to Adi




km


Morning, Geet wake up and saw she still lying on te floor waiting for Maan




Geet : babaji I slept off, were is Maan, did he came home , whom I will ask,


She got ready get , came down and saw Dadi and Anni sitting in dinning table , her eyes searched for Maan, but he is no were


Dadi saw Geet and her face, she sense some thing is wrong

Dadi : Geet beta u didt sleep, ur eyes are so red

Geet smiled faintly : no dadi , im little bit tired



Anni : hmm Geet wat u did yesterday tat u feeling tired ahh, she teased her

Geet : hmm nothing

Dadi sense tat some thing went wrong, she eyed anni to be quiet , anni too saw Geet ki facial expression so she try to change te topic

Anni : Dadi were is Maan bhai

Dadi : Adi called me and inform tat he went to camp

Anni : camp

Dadi was worried : he will go to camp wen he is angry on some thing

Geet know why he left , she got up from te table without having her bf

Dadi : hare Geet beta, have ur bf, wer u going

Geet : no Dadi im not hungry, I will have later


Geet went to her room and lock herself and didt peak to any one, she don't know wat she did is correct or wrong, te only she wants is Maan should be happy



Here , Rahul ki house



Rahul : I want every details abt anni and Geet

Bg : yes sir

Tat time he got a phone call, after te call, he smash te phone into pieces

Rahul shouts : no Maan u have touched te fire, I wont leave u,

Rahul to his assi : I want to see Maan

Assi : sir at present he went out of station

Rahul : hmm inform me wen he returns



After two days, morning, Maan came to km and went to his room, Geet who was sitting with Dadi saw Maan going to his room, he avoid her completely which prick Geet




At tat time, Father came to km, Anni and Geet was so happy to see him, they went and hug him





Father : how are u my kids

Anni : fine father



Geet hugging him and crying , Father thought tat she missed him, but wen she didt stop her cry, he sense tat some thing , with her

Father : Geet wat happen r u fine

Geet broke te hug , wiping her tears : hmm Father

Father know tat she hiding something , he want to ask , BUT Dadi came




(take only Geet, and father as anupam )


Dadi : namasthe Father how are u

Father : im fie Savetriji, how r u

Dadi : hmm fine ,

Father : actually Savetriji I came for a conference here , so I thought to see my kids

Dadi : Father u can cum anytime to see ur daughters

Anni : Father if u have reason only u cum us to meet naa, pouting her lips

Father smiled : no my child, u know I cant leave te orphanage, no one is there to take care of it tats why

At tat time, Maan came down,




Maan : gm father how r u

Father : fine beta how is work

Maan : hmm, Father I want to talk to u

Father and Maan went to his study to talk


After some time they both descend down, they had they lunch together


Father : ok my child im leaving , it is time, if I start now I will reach at evening, Geet , Anni take care of u,

Father bid everyone , he got up to leave

Geet : father im cuming with u




Every one was shocked except Maan who know she will take tis decision, he was silent




Father : Geet

Geet : yes Father I want to cum with u and stay there

Dadi : wat happen Geet

Geet : pls Dadi for some days I want to stay there

Dadi thinks tat she need some time to cum out of hers hell, so decide to send her

Anni : then me too will cum

Geet : no Anni u having ur exams, naa

Anni : hmm ok

Geet : Dadi pls

Maan got up : Dai let her go, ad he left to his room





Dadi was shocked to hear tis from Maan , Geet to was shocked and saw his retreating figure, some were she wants him to stop her , but no , she wish atleast he will see her for once, but Maan went to his room and lock te door




Dadi : ok beta , u go and take care of urself

Geet : yes Dadi

Geet pack her bag and bid bye to everyone

Dadi : take care beta

Geet hugs her : hmm Dad and u too

Dadi kissed her one forehead and then Anni too hugs her


Geet went out to get into te car, but before tat she watch Maan ki room , wish to see him for once but , she got disappointed and sat in te car and went off




Here Maan was watching Geet and how she was looking at his room with craving look but he hide behind te curtains and watched her getting into te car




Maan got a call from Adi

Maan : hmm I will meet him, ask him to cum to our old site

Addi : yes sir

Maan smirks


Some were in delhi, one of Maan ki site


Maan was standing alone at te top most floor of te building , looking out sipping his drink, Rahul enter , Maan was facing his back



Maan : welcome, Mr.Rahul Khanna

Rahul : Maan how dare u take over my shares

Maan laughs : u r mistaken Mr. Khana, ur share holders have selled to me





Rahul : u have threaten them

Maan : wat ever , now im te major share holder of ur company

Rahul : I wont leave u Maan


Rahul smirks , MAAN turn to face him,




Rahul : wat u think I have cum here to talk with u, and laughs at him

Maan looks at him

Rahul : only u can bribe my mans, I cant , look at there , u have done a mistake Maan cuming here alone


Maan saw 5 persons standing opposite to te building and pointing gun at him, Maan smirks at him and started to laugh, Rahul was shocked to see Maan




Maan : wat u think am I a fool to believe, and look at u mens

Rahul saw , all his mens are shot one by one, by Maan ki BGS


Maan : Mr.Khaana , u sil in 80's , try to change ur tactics, u can betray my Dad ot me, im MAAN SINGH KHURANA so better use ur brain next time, I think u have became old so why u cant retired from everything, Maan side everything in little bit hard tone


Rahul saw him, and came to hold Maan , but before tat Maan ki BGS hold him

Rahul : I wont leave u Maan

Maan : now im leaving u, coz I want to play some game with u before I destroy u completely, so lets start te game, Rahul Khana


Rahul wriggle from BGS but they took him out and throwed him,

Rahul was spacing back and fro in his house


Rahul : no I wont leave him no, first his father Yash khurana played with me, I have ruined him, now his son came , I wont leave him, I will destroyed him , te world should know wat happens wen they touch Rahul Khana, Maan I will destroy u





Assi : sir I got te information abt his family

Rahul smirks : hmm

Assi : sir he is living with his dadi, his sister and his wife

Rahul : I know tat wat they doing

Assi : sir at present his wife went to her native and his sister studying In xyz col,

Rahul : hmm I want hers sister in our place

Assi : but sir security we cant


Rahul : I don't need any excuse , I want to ruine his sister ki life in front of his eyes, I want him to beg for his death seeing his sister with other mens


Assi : ok sir

Rahul : get her soon, send her photo , hire some new mens

Assi : yes sir


Assi went out, but without knowing to Rahul one more person heard tis , tat is his daughter Sameera


Sam came to talk with his father , she stood wen he said abt te way he killed Yash Khurana Anni ki father, she know wat happen in anni ki life , but she cant believ , her father a s behind it




She run to her room and started to cry , till now she thought her father is everything to her, her hero, her role model, she felt she is te lucky to get a father like him , she didt miss her mother coz she got everything from his father ,but today all were shattered , she broke into pieces wen she heard wat her father said, how can he ruine Anni ki life


Sameera wipe her tears : no I wont let te past repeat again, he did te si, his daughter I have to take te punishment no he is not my father monster , yes he is monster, I wont let it happen


She got up , wash her race and went out, here Rahul ki Assi took a print out of Anni photo , he placed it a cover and went out, at tat time, sam came and bumb with him and te cover fell down


Sam : oh sorry uncle

Assi : it is ok baby u didt get hurt naa

Sam : no uncle and she took te cover and gave it to him


He went out with te cover, after he left, Sam took te actual cover and smile , she saw Assi taking te printout so she bumb on him and exchange te cover, she took te cover which was Anni ki photo went to her room , took te photo out


Sam : sory Anni I have to do it, she kissed te photo and burnt it



















PRECAP: GEET IN GOA, WILL SAM SAVE ANNI

NEXT PART- 23 , PG 108


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Maan has again become msk with hard exterior
He repents falling for geet
Her e geet is worried for maan
Oh no. She left to goa.
Maan n rahuls encounter was superb
Hope sam saves ani

Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was fast moments di i like ur sam cont soon nd make geet sensible wid maan 's feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago


Rahul is so cheap...

but his daughter Sameera tried to save Anni...

but will she be able to because whose photo now Assistant taking...is she putting any other girl's life and dignity to risk or she put her photo in that envelop and Rahul has appointed new men to r**e Anni so they will naturally not know that Sameera is not Anni...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ! geet decided to go with father and maan agreed to it ...it seems he has some plan ...he even spoke with father privately... hope , annie is saved from the evil plan and sameera seems to be a good person at heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet u r not only ruining ur life but maan's too
he became soft heart for u
but again u turned him in monster
nd now u were waiting for his one glimpse
nd not only that u r going goa too
maan didn't said anything
sam got to know about her father real self
i think she will be able to save annie
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update👏
Continue soon

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