OS: Chalo Bhai Australia! Part 5:Memories

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Maha Ayaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i am reading all the parts together and its so good!!!!

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

i want to commet for the last part but the thread was closed so am commenting here for that part too...

awww... he offered her to take his room

he wanted an approval of his dress from Khushi

Khushi chose a shirt for him

he ride horse with her

He realized he was liking this trip to Australia and maybe he was liking Khushi too.

and i realized that am falling for your writing style all over again 😃

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Khushi wanted to pull his cheeck...hehehehe

Arnav dressed up as Gabber in his childhood 😆 i can so imagine Khushi's reaction towards that photo and Arnav's reaction towards Khushi's reaction...😆

he shared his feelings with her and she assured him she would always be ther with him...awww... they are finally acceptin their feelings

and Khushi finally pulled his cheek

this chapter is definitly a chapter of emotions and it forced me to comapre it with mirage... i must say this chapter defines you as good writer and you desrved to write something as outstanding as Mirage...

and i must say that at this point you have proved that you are indeed an outstanding and marvellous writer 👏