OS: Chalo Bhai Australia! Part 5:Memories

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved it...so well written...👏

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wow i just don't know what ti say, it was such an amazing update

The way he opened up to her and the way she understood.

She was so bold and the way she made him feel better that he could trust her was astonishing.

It was emotional as hell but i LOVED it

Lastly when she pulled the cheeks i couldn't stop laughing. 🤣

Can't wait for the next update (Love this OS!!!)

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: UltimateBarun
U know what U r going too slow, n amzingly its interesting , n I love it,.,,now this is what I like, slow n steady yet very lovable n interesting,,,,,,U know I am taunting on CV's dont u!!!

loved it!!! thankx!

Sigh! If only CV's could understand what we wanted. If not for these FF, OS and SS, we would have all died long back.🤢

Hopefully one day they will realize this and bring the show back on track

Anyways thanks for loving it.🤗

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
wow i just don't know what ti say, it was such an amazing update

The way he opened up to her and the way she understood.

She was so bold and the way she made him feel better that he could trust her was astonishing.

It was emotional as hell but i LOVED it

Lastly when she pulled the cheeks i couldn't stop laughing. 🤣

Can't wait for the next update (Love this OS!!!)

Yeah! I'm so glad that you liked it.🤗

I always see to it, that there is a mixture of all things in my OS whether it be romance, comedy, drama etc.

I'm happy that you enjoyed it.😊

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maryk_09

@maryk_09

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

It's sooo beautiful... Loved the convo between them...wish something as such happens in the show tooo!!!

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I totally loved it..even that would be an understatement!!! Loved the way Arnav opened upto Khushi and found solace in her presence, that was very touching!! Arnav was the fat chubby boy with that wicked smile..whoaa!!!

How I wish you could be the CV and I could see the scene for real - be it the album and specially the Arnav-Khushi scenes...loved the way you've potrayed the emotions!!!

Update ASAP :) and thanks a lot for the pm :)

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

That was seriosly amazing..totally cute and superbly written, good one!

TFTP!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

that was one awesome update so sad and yet perfect even among his family member he refused to let his emotion out yet kkg can make him cry and let it all out and the next moment smile that was so touching perfectly written thanks for the pm