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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ShivRajput


Hahaha.. Copy paste ne uska touch copy paste kar hi diya.. 🤣


Arrey woh suuna nh hai kya jo sharmate ehem ehem bed mai aage tum log smart ho
Isiliye maine woh rule follow kia 😉 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow awesome story.
plzzz plzzz update...
can't wait for next update...
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Plz update dear
It's 6th may...add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy me in the pm list😃
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update soon I eager read u r story
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eagerly waiting for ur nex update😉
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It was a fab update
thinking abt so sensible virat make me loose all myy senses
plss cntinue soon
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Uzma kab update karogi??? 🤔 Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya guyz thanks for all those comments tht was really not expected m glad u all liked my story

I know all wanna know viraat's pov for tht hold on ur horses guyz ehehehehhe u have to wait for tht now without any bak bak enjoy reading

PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA


It was midnight I felt some weight on my body and someone's hot breathe on my neck I was shocked I suddenly open my eyes and found everything different it was not my room and where I m it is viraat room and m on viraat's bed oops and I turn my head and saw viraat on me and tht to shirtless my eyes pop out then suddenly reality stuck me m married to him he is my husband and it is our room our bed this made me blush I was in viraat's protective arms and this was safest place on the earth and don't know y m feeling like heaven butterflies in my stomach I know he hug me last night because I was scared but now his half of body over me m crushing below him and his hot breathe making me go all red suddenly I saw some marks on his shoulder then I remember I caught him tightly due to thunder tht r my nails marks and I felt guilty and embarresed too

''Ooch'' I felt something on my neck it was hurting uff when viraat moved it hand his ring brushed on my neck not once but thrice uff how much more embarresing this night will be uff viraat pulled me closer in his sleep thinking as m pillow this going to be very embarrsing

Now m very close to him it something very different I had never been this close to any other guy before I have been close to guyz like viren bhai karan dabbu and arjun but they r like my brothers so I never felt like this before it something very different very weird but feels good my nose almost touching to him his hot breathe on my lips it gives me goose bumps I m really very embarresed what to do? I was numb at a moment if he moves little closer or pull me closer thn just imagination was giving me goose bumps I tried to push him he groan in his sleep like a baby pout little he was looking really very cute and I chuckle little on his antics oopsy my chuckle disturb his sleep and tht happened which I never wanted atleast not now he pulled me more closer and my eyes pop out as his lips brush mine uff m sure by now if someone will ask difference between me and tomato they won't be able to differentiate m tht red now offcourse tht was first kiss not proper one but indeed it was

I was really not able to think what just happened is it true or in dream how I vl be able to face him in the morning y it always happens with me I continue to curse my fate and then don't know when I fell sleep in my heaven

Morning 6:45 am

Viraat open his eyes he found everything different and he saw someone on his bed in his arm and so close he was admiring her but he still can't see her as white silk quilt covered her he was just admiring her angelic face suddenly maanvi open her eyes both were looking in eachother eyes suddenly reality stuck them both panicked and got up embarresed both were looking at other side both not at each other

Viraat tried to start conversation " woh ……erm m so…sorry'' he said finally

Maanvi wasn't able to face him due to last night incident she was blushing very badly she turned her head viraat turn to look at her his eyes pop out seeing marks on her neck he thought ''kahi maine nind mai kuch mujhe usse sorry bolna chahiye''

''Maanvi m…..m sorry woh raat mai pata nahi kaise'' maanvi was shocked and embarreded beyond limit she thought he is talking about kiss

She thought may be he is feeling guilty so she thought lets make him feel better ''koyi baat nahi viraat tum nind mai thei…..isiliye'' she wasn't able to continue due to her shy behavior their was mirror near the bed viraat saw some marks on his shoulder he smirk and look at maanvi '' waise sorry toh tumhe bhi bolna chahiye kal raat aapne bhi woh hi kiya jo maine kiya'' he said with smirk

Maanvi's eyes were widen she was shocked behind limit she thought ''omg maine bhi viraat ko kiss kiya nind mai..nahi maanvi tu aisa kaise kar sakti hai tu viraat ko kiss kaise woh kya socch rahe hoge tere bare mai tujhe unse baat karleni chahiye'' before she speak some knock at the door

Viraat went to open the door maanvi went inside washroom still lost in her thought viraat open the door and found 2grining faces viren bhai and karan they were coming inside but viraat suddenly remember about maanvi her dress so he stopped them ''nahi aaplog ander nahi aasakte'' he sad with worried face

Viren and karan wink at eachother

Viren-q bhai hum a nahi aasakte pehle toh kabhi aisa nahi hua hai toh aaj kya hogaya

Karan-arrey samaj na yaar kal shaadi hui phr suhaagraat,waise suhaagahraat se yaad aaya suhaagraat kaise thei

Viren-arrey puch q raha hai mai batataho na kaisi thi

He turn viraat around and showed him marks on his shoulder and back viraat turn around quickly and said ''bhai jaisa aap log soch rahe hai waisa kuch nahi hua''

Karan put his hand around his shoulder and viren catch his hand and karan look around and then wisper ''bolna kal kisne baazi maari 🤣 waise tera haal dekh kar sab pata chalta hai aur yeh lipstick ka mark'' he said while touching near his lips viraat jerked his hand and said ''abbey saale aisa kuch nahi hua yeh lipstick woh kal raat…viren cut him and said ''ha wohi toh kal raat kya hua woh hi suunna hai''

And karan and viren hi-5 eachother and viren further continued '' ek toh tu hame ander aaane nahi de raha uparse kuch phuut nahi raha ab hum ander aakar rahege''

Viren and karan tried to come inside but viraat was pushing them outside they all where pushing eachother standing at the door while jeevika and shanaya came with bags in their hands and started laughing watching the sight in front of them all the 3 guyz stopped and look at them

They came forward and jeevika told aap log q satarahe ho mere devar ko dekh nahi rahe ki bechaare kitna thaka hua hai kal raat se and all burst out laughing

Viraat mouth open in o shape and said jeevika tum bhi viraat kept his hand on his hips and asked ''kissne woh dress waali harkat ki''

Now all started blaming eachother

Jeevika-mera nahi who viren ka idea tha and other 3 nodded

Viren-jhuti jeevika he turn her wrist jhutti tumhara aur shanaya ka idea tha maanvi ke dress chupaane ka aur maine aur karan aur arjun (hahahaha I just noticed karan arjun 🤣 ) ka idea tha

Viren realized he spill all the beans while other were looking at him with hands on hips and with anger and viraat started laughing jeevika handed bags to viraat and told here r urs and maanvi's clothes and caught viren with collar and pulled him while shanaya hold his hand karan his neck and said ''ab baatate hai tumko kissne kiya kia'' and pulled him

Viren shouted stop he put his hand in pocket went near viraat yehle ab tereliye bahut kaamaayega he handed him ointment while jeevika came running and from back and said ''maaanvi ko bhi issi zarurat padegi usse bhi share karna'' and both ran away while giggling

Precap-

Maanvi in the kitchen with jeevika and shanaya

Jeevika-maanvi kal raat kaisi thi with smirk on her face

Shanaya-haha maanvi

Jeevika slap her shoulder and said ''maanvi nahi maanvi bhabhi bol''

Maanvi-woh errm kuch nahi kuch na..nahi (and she started blushing)

Jeevika went near her look around and said ''matlab kal raat kuch nahi hua'' while shanaya join them by other side

Maanvi nodded in no and blushed more

Jeevika said ''acha'' with smirk and removed her duppatta from one side and asked ''toh yeh kiya hai'' she said with evil smirk and both shanaya and jeevika burst out laughing

Maanvi was more embarresed and said ''woh viraat……. Jeevika cut him said ha woh humme bhi pata hai yeh viraat ne kiya hai

~~~

maanvi-viraat m sorry maine tumhe kiss galti se kardia hoga kal raat jaise tumne kiya mujhe

viraat-kya maine tumhe kiss kiya

Uff how was it finally part 3 done

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