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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: keertu
choti maa i want update in five mins

Haw...chal jaa THMP padh, tab tak yeh update karti hun BETA...😃😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello my lovely readers...m bck, I really hope u'll lyk dis...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments...n lyks...EnJoY..Sorry 4 da delay...

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 41...

~Recap~

Maanvi looked up at him, her eyes filled with tears, and she turned around to leave. Viraat was a little confused seeing Maanvi in tears.

Maanvi: Vi..Viraat ne,,dus..dusri shadi karli...?

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~9.30 pm...SK Music Company~

Mr Kapoor entered in Viraat cabin, who was sitting on the table, looking up at his lyrics of the song.

Mr. Kapoor: (smiles) Hello Viraat, sab theek hai?
Viraat: (smiles back) Yes Sir sab thik hai, bas yeh lyrics dekh raha tha.
Mr. Kapoor: (sits down) Oh ok...waise aaj jo recording thi woh toh bahut acha gaya. Ek hi baar mein humne song record karli, that's just amazing.
Viraat: I know Sir, jisne bhi Lyrics likha tha usne bahut acha kaam kiya tha.
Mr. Kapoor: I know, aur yeh lyrics kisi aur ne nahi, Maanvi ne hi likha hai. She's just fantantic, bahut achi ladki hai, jiske bhi ghar mein jaiye gi khushiyan hi pehlayegi. Tumhe pata hai, main toh isse apni ghar ki hi Bahu banana chahta tha.

Viraat looked at Mr. Kapoor, angerily.

Mr. Kapoor: (frowns) Par mere Bete ko koi aur pasand aa gayi. Afsos mere paas sirf ek hi Beta hai, jiski kal saghai(engagement) hai.

Viraat looked down, calmed.

Viraat: Toh kya usski shadi nahi hui ab tak?

Viraat was looking at Mr. Kapoor curiously, while Mr. Kapoor frowned.

Mr. Kapoor: Usne kabhi bataya toh nahi hai, par mujhe lagta hai ki woh single hai. Tum jante ho na, Indian womens zyada tar woh saare chize pehnti hai jisse yeh pata chalta hai ki woh shadi shuda hai. Maine Maanvi ko kabhi sindoor lagate, ya mangalsutra pehne nahi dekha.

Viraat looked away, thinking about last night. Her maang was filled with sindoor.

Mr. Kapoor: Anyways, (smiles) main toh yahan tumhe batane aaya tha ki main ghar jaa raha hun, kal mere Bete ki sagai hai na toh mujhe jaana hoga. Dhere dhere saare kaam karne wale chale jaiyein ge, maine Maanvi ko samjha diya hai ache se office band karne ke liye, tumhe ghar jaana ho toh tum jaa sakhte ho, Maanvi sab sambhal legi.
Viraat: Ji, woh main bas (showing him the papers) yeh dekhlun uske baad main chala jaunga.
Mr. Kapoor: (getting up) Ok then, take care, kal milte hai ghar par, tumhe ghar pata nahi hoga isiliye maine Maanvi ko samjha diya hai, tum usse uske ghar se pick up kar lena, she knows the way.
Viraat: Par kyun, main khud aa jaunga, aap mujhe bas apna address de dijiye.
Mr. Kapoor: Its complicated, Maanvi will help you out. (smiles) Ok ab main chalta hun. Bye.
Viraat: (stands up) But Sir...

Before Viraat could say anything, Mr. Kapoor went out the door, towards Maanvi.

Mr. Kapoor: (smiles) Ok then Maanvi, main chalta hun. You take care. Maine Viraat ko kal ke baare mein sab samjha diya hai ok. Woh tumhe pick up kar lega. Please office ache se band kar dena, will meet you tomorrow ok. (walking away) Bye.
Maanvi: (smiles) Bye Sir.

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~10:30 PM~

Everyone left the office, only Maanvi and Viraat were left. Maanvi was sitting on her cabin, waiting for Viraat to leave so she could lock the office and go home, but Viraat seemed to be loving this office more than anything, as he was still in his cabin, doing, god knows what.

Maanvi: (pacing back and forth) Kya karun? Di ghar par intezaar kar rahi hai, aur (looking at her phone) yeh bettry ko bhi abhi marna tha. (stops pacing/hands on her hips) Nikal kyun nahi raha hai yeh, apni BIWI se nahi milne jaana kya isse?

Her heart stopped when she said"BIWI"...The thought that she is not his wife anymore, its someone else, broked her heart into millions of pieces. But she had to accept the bitter truth, she was the one who left him alone, not him.

Maanvi: (biting her nail) Main jaa kar dekhun? (worriedly) Nahi nahi, agar gussa ho gaya toh? (frowns) Par jaana toh padega na Maanvi. (looking up) Hey Bhagwaan yeh kaisi uljhan hai, apne hi Viraat ko...nahi Maanvi, (sadly/tears filled her eyes) ab woh tera Viraat nahi hai, kisi aur ka hai. Ab uspar tera koi haq nahi hai, koi bhi nahi. Uff, (wipes her tears) main chali hi jaati hun.

Maanvi walked towards his cabin. Her hand was turmbling as she held the knob of the door. She pulled her hand back and turned around, worriedly.

Maanvi: Mujhse nahi hoga. (frowns) Par karna toh padega na. (sighs) Ok.

She turned back around and knocked on the door.

Come in...

Came the reply, her heart started beating at a unbeatable rate, she opened the door and entered in, without looking up at his face. Viraat was just busy, doing something on his laptop, that he didn't even raised his gaze towards her.

Maanvi: (looking down) Ji..woh...

Viraat looked up as he heard her voice.

Maanvi: (nervously) Main, woh...
Viraat: (shouts at her) Kya kehna hai saaf saaf kaho, mere paas time nahi hai aapke in bakwas ke liye.

Maanvi shivered at his tone.

Maanvi: (teary eyes) Woh...woh, office, band karne ka samay ho gaya hai, mujhe ghar,,ghar bhi jaana hai toh...
Viraat: (coldly) Toh jao, kisne roka hai aapko?
Maanvi: (still looking down) Mujhe...mujhe Sir ne zim..zimedari di hai, office band karne ki, toh...
Viraat: (hand extented) Mujhe keys de dijiye aur aap jaiye.
Maanvi: (looks up at him) Nahi, main...
Viraat: (sternly) Maine kaha na, so just do as I say. Give me the keys and you may leave.
Maanvi: Par...
Viraat: Leave.

Maanvi eyes welled up with tears, she placed the keys on his table and looked up at him.
Viraat was not at all looking at her, she started walking backwards, still looking at him.

Maanvi: (teary eyes/looking at him/to herself) Kitne badal gaye ho tum Viraat. Jis Maanvi ke aankhon mein aansun bhi nahi dekh sakhte the, aaj ussi Maanvi ko khud rula rahe ho. Kal jisse beintehaan pyaar karte the, aaj ussi se hi itni nafrat karte ho ki uska chehra dekhna bhi gawara nahi hai tumhe. Itna hi pyaar tha mujhse Partner? Kya itna hi vishwas tha tumhe mujh par ki aaj tum mujhe bhul gaye, mujhse nafrat karne lage, uss galti ke liye jo maine kabhi kiya hi nahi. Kyun Viraat? Kyun?

Maanvi turned around and left the cabin, with tears streaming down, continuously. She took her stuff and walked out of the office. Viraat came out of his cabin, with hands in his pocket.

Viraat: (looking up/teary eyes/to himself) Badalna meri marzi nahi, meri majboori thi. Tumne mujhe badal diya Maanvi. Tumhare aankhon mein aansun mujhe aaj bhi taklif deti hain, main tumhe kabhi rulana nahi chahta tha, aur na kabhi chahunga. Bas in teen saalon mein jo zaher mere andar thi, woh ab jaa kar bahar aa rahe hai, mera gussa ban kar. (tears rolling down) Pyaar toh main tumhe aaj bhi karta hun, aur hamesha karta rahunga. Par tumhare samne yeh jatana nahi chahta main, kamzor nahi banna chahta main, isliye nafrat karne ka natak karna padhta hai, tumhare samne. Vishwas mujhe tum par hamesha se hi tha, par uss din ke baad, tum par toh kya, mujhe khud par hi bharosa nahi hai. Kash woh din humari zindagi mein kabhi nahi aata Maanvi. Kash tum mujhe chodh kar kabhi nahi jaati...(eyes closed) Kash.

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Maanvi was walking on the lonely street, with tears rolling down her eyes. She was walking for almost 20 minutes by now, but her tears were just not stopping. She wiped her tears when she saw some 4 guys sitting at a stall, drinking, dancing, laughing, and what not. She gulped hard and started walking faster then before. One of the guy, who was looking around, saw Maanvi, walking past them in full speed.

1st Guy: Woh dekh, kya ladki hai bose.
2nd Guy: (evil smile) Arey haan, aur woh bhi akeli.
3rd: Chal dekhte hai.

All four of them started walking behind her, Maanvi turned around and saw them behind her. She turned back and increased her speed even more.

4th Guy: Arey meri jaan, sambhal kar chalo, jaldi kya hai?

Maanvi was hell worried as well as scared, tears were just streaming down her face.

All Four: (dancing while following her) O meri jaan, o meri jaan, mere ko majnu bana kar, kahan chaldi, kahan chaldi, pyaar ki pungi bajakar.
3rd Guy: Oh meri Laila, zara ruk toh.

Maanvi turned around and found them getting really close to catch her, she turned bacj around and stared running for her as fast as she could.

2nd Guy: Arey (pointing at Maanvi) yeh toh bhaag rahi hai.
1st Guy: (evil smile) Bhaag kar jaiye gi bhi kahan, chalo.

They started running after her, she turned around to look at those guys and freaked out, she increased her speed, panting, sweating, crying, her legs started hurting due to all that running.

Maanvi: Please Bhagwaan ji, please meri madat karo. Please.

She continued running, with those guys behind her.

3rd Guy: Arey ruk jaa Janeman, ab itna bhi mat tadpao hume.

Maanvi was losing all her energy, she was getting weak, her legs were hurting very much. The guys were still running behind her, they were getting closer and closer as she was getting weak. Maanvi tripped over a rock as she turned around to see them. All of them stopped and surrounded her, in the middle.

1st Guy: (leaning close to her) Akhir rukna hi pada na! Jab rukna hi tha toh hume itna bhagaya kyun Janeman?

Maanvi hurriedly got up from the ground and folded her hands in front of them.

Maanvi: (crying/pleading) Dekhiye, please mujhe jaane dijiye, please.
3rd Guy: Chodhne ke liye thodi pakda hai, agar chodh diya toh kya fyada itni bhaga daudi ki?
4th Guy: (looking at her from head to toe) Aur tum jaisi chiz ko koi pagal hi chodega.
Maanvi: Please, main...main aapko paise dene ke liye taiyaar hun, but please mujhe jaane dijiye, please.
2nd Guy: Heeron(diamonds) ke samne paise, na na na. Hume heerein jayad pasand hai, paison se bhi kai zyada.
Maanvi: (hands folded) Please main aapke aage haath jodhti hun, mujhe please jaane dijiye.

One of the Guy held her wrist and pulled her towards him.

1st Guy: Yeh haath jodhne se kuch nahi hota, tum jaisi chiz ko hum unhi nahi chodhte, samjhi.
Maanvi: (crying/trying to pull her hand back) Please...
1st Guy: (to one of the guys) Oye, chal, nikal iska dupatta.
Maanvi: (worriedly/screams) Na,,,Nahi nahi please, aisa mat kijiye. Please.

Without hearing any of her pleads, the Guy raised his hand to take her dupatta off of her neck. Maanvi closed her eyes tightly, with tears rolling down her face.

Maanvi: Please mat kijiye aisa, please...

The Guy, who was about to take off her dupatta from her neck, was stopped by a hand. He looked at his side and saw a tall, dark, handsome Guy, standing there, while holding his wrist. That guy was none other than, Viraat Singh Vadhera, who was looking at the guy, who was holding Maanvi's hand. Maanvi was just praying to god, her eyes were still closed.

Viraat: (angrily/low voice) Haath chodh.
1st Guyz: Tu kaun hai?
Viraat: (glaring at him) Haath chodh.
1st Guy: (tighten his grip on her wrist) Nahi chodunga, kya karlega?
Viraat: (trying to control his anger) Akhiri baar keh raha hun,..(shouts at them, at the top of his lungs) Haath chodh.

Maanvi shivered at his tone and opened her eyes. Her lips curved into a big smile, when she saw the person whom she needed the most right now. Her Husband. Her Viraat. She was beyond happy to see him there, for her, to protect her from this evil people.

Maanvi: (crying) Vi..Viraat...Viraat mujhe bachalo, please.

Viraat looked at Maanvi, and saw the fear in her eyes. He just wanted to beat the hell out of these people for hurting his Maanvi, and embrace her in his arm, protecting her from these evil world.

4th Guy: Oh, toh dono ek dusre ko jante hai. Wah, (place his hand on Viraat's shoulder) chal tu wahan baith kar show dekh, free mein. (laughs along with other three)

Viraat looked back at those guys, his eyes shooting anger. The guy pulled his hand away from his shoulder, seeing his bloodshot red eyes. Viraat ignored them, and turned back to the guy, who was holding onto Maanvi's hand.

Viraat: Maine kaha haath chodh, warna bahut bura hoga.
1st Guy: Kya kar lega tu? Huh, kya kar lega?
2nd Guy: Marega hume? Tu ek aur hum chaar,. Kuch nahi kar sakhta tu humara samjha. Chal ab jaa yahan se.
Viraat: (still glaring at the guy) Haath chodh.
1st Guy: Kyun chodhun haath? Lagti kya hai yeh teri? Dost hai? Ya Premika? Kaun hai yeh teri?

Maanvi looked at Viraat with tears in her eyes. What is she to him? Viraat looked in her fearfulled eyes, which was filled with question, which he knows.

1st Guy: (to the other guy) Oye, tu chal, nikal iska dupatta.

Maanvi was just looking at Viraat with her painful eyes. She is nothing to him, this kept on repeating on her mind. She stood there motionless, unable to believe her own fate. The person whom she loved with all her heart is just standing in front of her, allowing other guys to touch her. Who's not even trying to save her from this evil creatures. She closed her eyes, with a very heavy heart, knowing what's coming next.

Maanvi: (to herself/disbelievingly) Main uski kuch nahi lagti? Kuch bhi nahi?

The guy raised his hands, once again towards her neck, to take her dupatta away. But before he could reach for her dupatta, something hard hit his cheek, making him fall on the floor. He looked up and saw a angry Viraat, who just punched him on his face. Viraat held the other guys hand, who was holding Maanvi's hand, and pulled his hands away from her wrist, making Maanvi's eyes snapped open. He raised his hands and punched him right on his nose, as hard as he could.

Viraat: (shouts) Biwi. (holds the 1st Guys collar) Patni hai woh meri. (shaking him) Suna tumne? (punching him on his face) Biwi hai woh meri. Pati hun main uska.

The other guys tried stopping Viraat, but he was in no mood to stopped beating the hell out of him. He left the 1st Guy for a while, and punched the other two, who were trying to stop him. He again went back to the 1st Guy and punched him, beating him all black and blue, while only chanting...

Viraat: Biwi hai woh meri, suna tune. (punching him on his face) Meri Patni hai woh. Meri Patni. She's my Wife. (stops hitting him/pulls him by his collar again) Yahi rishta hai mera uske saath. (starts hitting him again) Meri Patni hai woh.

Maanvi was just looking at him, while smiling with tears of joy. But she sat down on the ground, hiding her face in her palm, crying for not trusting him. She sat there crying her heart out, while Viraat beated the hell out of those guys. After a little more madness of Viraat, all four of them ran away, saving their lives from this crazy Husband of hers. He turned around and saw Maanvi, sitting on the floor, with her hands hiding her face, crying her heart out. He hurriedly rans towards her and sat in front of her.

Viraat: Maanvi...

Viraat held her hands but she pulled it away from him. He again tried holding her hands but she wasn't letting him. He's heart ached seeing her like this, he wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled in a tight, consoling hug. Without giving a second thought, Maanvi wrapped her hands around his back and pulled him even more close, digging her face in his chest.

Maanvi: Viraat mujhe...
Viraat: (stroking her hair) Shhh, kuch nahi hua Maanvi, bas, shh...
Maanvi: (sobbing on his chest) I'm sorry. Maine socha tum...mujhe maaf kar do...I'm sorry Viraat...
Viraat: (consoling her) Shhh, bas...ab chalo utho.

Viraat helped Maanvi get up from the floor. He once again wrapped his arm around her and walked her towards his car, while Maanvi hid her face in his chest, sobbing softly. As they reached where the car was parked, Viraat made Maanvi stand against the car, and handed her a bottle of water, taking out of his car.

Viraat: Paani pilo Maanvi.

Maanvi dranked the water, with tears streaming down her red cheeks. She gave him the bottle back and again covered her face with her palm. Viraat kept the bottle back in the car and stood in front of her, only inches away from her. He held her hands yet again, and pulled it away, very gentally. He wiped her tears away and held her chin up, making her open her eyes, which were closed.

Viraat: Dar lag raha hai?

Maanvi just nodded her head, with tears, which was not leaving her eyes for even a second.

Viraat: (smiles a little, looking at her lovingly) Main hun na tumhare paas, toh kyun dar rahi ho?
Maanvi: (sobbing) Kabhi...tum..tum nahi rahe,,,toh..main...
Viraat: (hold her hands) Aisa kabhi ho sakhta hai, Maanvi ke paas uska Viraat na ho?

She nodded negatively, and looked down.

Viraat: (tilt his head, to see her face) Toh fir, kyun dar rahi ho?
Maanvi: (looking up at him) Yakeen kaise, karun...ki tum raho ge...hamesha?

Viraat placed his palm on her cheek, and placed a soft kiss on her forehead, assuring her.

Viraat: (cutely) Ab bhi yakeen nahi?

Maanvi wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him close to her, while crying her heart out.

Maanvi: (holding him as tight as she could) Main bahut dar gayi thi Viraat. Agar tum nahi aate toh na jaane kya ho jaata. Main kya karti. Kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha, kuch bhi nahi.

Viraat just wrapped his hands around her waist and pulled her even more close, giving her a very comforting hug, letting her take out all the fear, all the pain that she had in her heart, through her tears. After 10-20 minutes, Maanvi stopped crying, her tears finally stopped. She was just lost in his arms, which was wrapped around her very tightly. Her eyes were closed, living the moment, which she missed in this three long years.

Viraat: (stroking her hair lovingly) Maanvi?

Maanvi came back to her sense, after listening to his voice. She slowly, parted away from his arms, looking very embarrased. Viraat was also feeling a little embarrased, he looked away from her, trying to avoid meeting her gaze. Unknowingly, his eyes went back onto her, and something caught his attention. It was her mangalsutra, which was tied around her neck, but was hidden because of her dupatta, which was losely place on her shoulder. Viraat raise his glaze, in order to see her sindoor, and to his surprise, it was there, a slight pinch on sindoor on her maang. The only way he saw her sindoor was due to the wind, that blew her bangs back from her forehead, showing her maang, which was filled with sindoor. That was the reason why Mr,. Kapoor never saw any signs of her being married, as it was hidden by the one and only Maavi Chaudhary...oops sorry sorry, Maanvi Vadhera...

Thank Thank Thank guyz, I reall hope u lykd dis update...plz leave ur comments 4 me n hit lyk...thnk u...Luv Aartii...Sorry Guyz, Next Update Will B A Lil Late..

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

choti maa u made me cry.the dialoges of virman😭

their love for eachother was ...no words to say.

virat can't see his lady love in trouble.

the way he said she is my wife👏

thank u soo much choti maa for an emotional update but please

reveal wat was the reason for their breakup.

plz chotimaa

my fav part

Viraat: Biwi hai woh meri, suna tune. (punching him on his face) Meri Patni hai woh. Meri Patni. She's my Wife. (stops hitting him/pulls him by his collar again) Yahi rishta hai mera uske saath. (starts hitting him again) Meri Patni hai woh.

Edited by keertu - 12 years ago

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Tuba KHAn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Update Update !!
mla Mla Update mila 😆😃🤪 !!
LOL .. Ittaaa Delay Koi krta h kia 😭 Ab ni krna 😛 ..
umM !!
Update Was Awe-awe-aweSome .. Fully VirMan Based Update ta .. i Tow just Loved every Bit Of it ..
Beginning Was Too Emotional .. Kia Kia Esaaa Kia Hva ta PAST me 😭 i want to know , i want to know 😭 ..
But the Fighing sequence wasss .. hayeee .. " FAVORITE " .. The way virat scolded them I loved it ..
HAYEE " Dream Husbnd " 😳😃 ..
But I m missing Mannat n virIka !! AwW 😔 ..
Next Update Jaaallldii se krnaaa .. can't wait .. 😊

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

Thanks for pm...
Update was superb...
Liked it...
Finally today i got two fab writing piece...
Want next update soon...

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

eeee aswomeee update aarti :-) loveddd it hayeee mere virman they are sooo sad koi bat nai but the dhishon dhishom scene was fab hahahaha virat ne maraaa lol nope but the hug scene and the way he consoled her was adorable...

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monikaksl

@monikaksl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

superb update👏

i hate doe jerks😡virat has done nyc job by beating hell out of dem😃

update soon

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Superb...the mad bull virat...but loved the way he save her, console her...so cute

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Wah wah kya baat hai!
Got two wonderfull updates from you...
Maanvi aur viraat kab mile ge? Waiting is the only solution...
Heart ache due to so painful update...
Thanks for the pm

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princess369

@princess369

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

what an part i really like it the r awsome
especially the way in which virat helped manvi nd told the GUYS THAT SHE IS MY WIFE or YEAH. RISHTA HAI MERA ISKE SAAT.

finally.virat saw the sindoor in manvi's partition. update soon really nice. updatr waiting...

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