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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

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#733

Hey guys, m bck wid a new update, thnks a lot guyz 4 ur lovely comments...n lyks.,,,I hope u guyz lyk dis update...Enjoy..Extremely sorry 4 da delay...

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 42...

~Recap~

Maanvi came back to her sense, after listening to his voice. She slowly, parted away from his arms, looking very embarrassed. Viraat was also feeling a little embarrassed, he looked away from her, trying to avoid meeting her gaze. Unknowingly, his eyes went back onto her, and something caught his attention. It was her mangalsutra, which was tied around her neck, but was hidden because of her dupatta, which was losely place on her shoulder. Viraat raise his glaze, in order to see her sindoor, and to his surprise, it was there, a slight pinch on sindoor on her maang. The only way he saw her sindoor was due to the wind, that blew her bangs back from her forehead, showing her maang, which was filled with sindoor. That was the reason why Mr,. Kapoor never saw any signs of her being married, as it was hidden by the one and only Maavi Chaudhary...oops sorry sorry, Maanvi Vadhera...

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Maanvi: (looking everywhere but him) Woh..main...
Viraat: (unable to look into her eyes) Chalo, main tumhe ghar tak chodh deta hun.
Maanvi: Nahi, main,,main chali jaungi..Sir.

Viraat looked up at Maanvi as she called him "SIR". He looked away angrily and said...

Viraat: Chalo main chodh dunga, mujhe 'Aapka' ghar ka rasta pata hai.

Maanvi just nodded her head and walked towards the passenger side. She looked up at Viraat who was looking at her, and looked down after opening the door of the car. She sat down, Viraat looked around and then sat down on the drivers seat. He looked at Maanvi and saw her looking outside of the window. He knew she was trying to hide her tears from him.

Viraat: Paa, paani chahiye?

Maanvi turned her face towards him, and nodded negatively.

Viraat: Chale?

She nodded positively and looked away once again. Viraat started the engine and drove off, towards her house. Viraat was stealing glance of her, as she was just looking out of the window. He so wanted to console her, but there was no way that he could. He looked back at the road, trying to concentrate on his driving, but his heart was not letting him. He once again looked at her way, he looked down at her hand, which was placed on the seat. Without giving a second thought, he grabbed her hand in his. Maanvi turned her face towards the person who was hold her hand. He was looking straight, at the road, but his hand was still on hers, holding tightly. Maanvi looked away with a sweet smile and tears in her eyes.

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Viren: (sternly) Mannat no.
Mannat: (pouts) Bale Papa kyun? (But why Bade Papa?)
Viren: (sits on the couch) Maine kaha na no.
Mannat: (sits beside him) Kyun?
Viren: (turns his face away from her) Mannu, zid mat karo please.
Mannat: (little hands crossed across her chest, angrily) Main Papa che bataungi. (I will complain to my Dad.)
Viren: (smirks) Batao, main darta hun kya aapke Papa se?
Mannat: (evil smile) Acha, toh main Maachi Maa che bataungi. Aul guccha kalegi woh aap pal, dekhna aap. (Ok, then I will complain it to Maasi Maa. And she will be even more angry on you, just watch.)
Viren: (worriedly/turns to face her) Mannu, aap aisa nahi karogi.
Mannat: (smiles widely) Kalungi. (I Will.)
Viren: (pulling her towards him) No Mannat, aap meri Princess ho na?
Mannat: (nodding her head cutely) Nahi, main Maachi Maa ki Plincecch hun. (Nope, I'm Maasi's Princess.)
Viren: Mannat?
Mannat: (pouts in his arms) Aap mujhe ghumane nahi le jaa lahe ho na, chab bataungi. (You are not taking me out, I will tell everything.)
Viren: (shaking it amusedly) Haye Meri Maa, kitna pareshan karti hai, bilkul Maa par gayi hai apne...

Viren bit his tongue and looked at a sad Mannat.

Viren: Sorry Mannat, main...
Mannat: (small smile/cutely) Main Mama jaichi hun? ( I'm like my Mom?)
Viren: (pulls her cheeks) Aap Mama se bhi bahut zyada pyaari ho.
Mannat: (wide smile) Woh pyaali thi? (Was she cute?)
Viren: (smiles back) Bahut.

Mannat smiled at Viren.

Mannat: Woh kaichi lagti thi? (How did she look like?)
Viren: (hugs her) Bilkul aapki tarah, bahut hi khubsurat.
Mannat: Chhachi? (Really?)
Viren: Muchi. Acha ab aapko ghumne nahi jaana?
Mannat: Haan, jaana hai na, (excitedly) chalo chalo.

Viren smiled and carried his little cute Princess in his arms.

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~11:45 pm~

Jeevika was pacing back and forth, worried about Maanvi, while Virika was just looking at her Mom weirdly.

Jeevika: (with her cell close to her ear) Kahan reh gayi yeh ladki, itna late toh kabhi nahi hota. Aur upar se phone band hai iska.
Virika: Of ho Mama, Maasi koi choti baachi tholi na hai. Aa jaiyegi woh. (Oh God Mama, Maasi isn't a little kid, she will come on her own.)
Jeevika: (stops/hands on her hips) Bacchi hi toh hai. Tum dono mein koi difference hai kya?
Virika: (cutely) Gussa kyun ho lahi ho Mama, aa jaiye gi Maasi. (Why are you getting angry Mama, she will be here.)
Jeevika: (starts pacing again) Aane do, chodhungi nahi hai isse. Kitna pareshan karti hai yeh mujhe.
Virika: (mummbling to herself) Mannu Maasi, good luck.

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Finally, Viraat and Maanvi reached. Maanvi turned to open the door, but stopped and he was still holding her hand. Maanvi looked at their hands and then at Viraat. He turned his face towards her, looking confused as why isn't she leaving.

Viraat: Kya hua? Yeh tumhara hi ghar hai, tum jaa sakhti ho.
Maanvi: Woh..(looking at their hands) mera..mera haa...haath, aapne...

Viraat looked down and saw him holding her hand. He immediately released her hand and looked away embarrassed.

Viraat: I'm..I'm sorry,,,woh main...
Maanvi: Its ok Sir. And Thank you.

Viraat looked at Maanvi, as she looked away. Viraat was lost in her beauty, he was not able to move his eyes away from her. Maanvi opened the door, and got out of the car, she turned around to leave, just then Viraat called her.

Viraat: Maanvi..?

Maanvi closed her eyes, as she heard her name, from his mouth, with lots of love in it. Her heart skipped millions of beat at his tone, which was nothing but music for her. She smiled as tears slipped down her eyes. She wiped that tear off and turned around to face him.

Maanvi: Yes..yes Sir?

Viraat was just looking at her, without moving his eyes for even a second.

Viraat: Apna khayal rakhna.

Maanvi was just looking at him, surprised, yet shocked, smiling with happiness. Her heart was dancing with joy. She turned around with a smiling face, her happiness knew no boundaries. She ran away from there, as fast as she could, to hide herself from all that sadness that could take her happiness away. Viraat came back to his sense and looked at Maanvi, running away.

Viraat: Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha..? Main apni feelings ko control kyun nahi kar paa raha hun usske samne..? (hits on the steering) Kyun..?

With that, he reversed his car, and drove away, with the same feeling that he had, three years ago, for her...for his Wife...for his Maanvi...

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Maanvi entered the house, looking all happy. Jeevika turned around and saw her Sister so happy after so many years. She forgot her anger and smiled watching her, so happy, so alive. Maanvi closed the door and turned around, towards Jeevika, she smiled, spread her arms out and ran towards her...

Maanvi: Di, Di, Di, Di, Di...

She hugged Jeevika as she reached where she was standing, spinning her around along with herself. Virika was looking at her crazy Maasi, so happy, she clapped her hands excitedly.

Jeevika: Arey Mannu...kya kar rahi hai.
Maanvi: (happily) Dii, aaj main itni khush hun, itni khush hun ki bata nahi sakhti...
Jeevika: (smiles) Arey aisa kya ho gaya?
Maanvi: Bahut kuch...
Virika: (happily) Mannu Maasi...?
Maanvi: (smile widely at Virika) Viri...My Angel, My Baby...

She ran towards Virika and pulled her in a tight hug.

Virika: Mannu Maasi, aap itni khush kyun ho?
Maanvi: (pulls apart) Kyun aaj aapke Mannu Maasi ko woh mehsus hua jo in teen saalon mein kho gaya tha.
Jeevika: Kya?
Maanvi: Pyaar. Pyaar Di. Pyaar.
Jeevika: (confused) Pyaar?
Maanvi: Haan Di...aaj maine uski aankhon mein woh pyaar dekha jo maine in teen saal mein shayad kho diya tha. (lost in her own world) Wohi pyaar Di...jis ki wajha se main jee rahi hun. Woh mujhse aaj bhi pyaar karta hai Di...aaj bhi pyaar karta hai.
Jeevika: (worried/scared) Ka..Kaun Mannu?
Maanvi: (looking at her with a wide smile) Viraat Di..Viraat...aapka Devar..mera Pati...woh mujhse aaj bhi pyaar karta hai.
Jeevika: Viraat..? Viraat yahan hai..?
Maanvi: (smiles at her) Haan Di...Viraat yahan hai. Infect ussi company ke liye gaa raha hai jis company ke liye main kaam karti hun. I'm so happy Di. I'm so happy.

Maanvi turned towards Virika.

Maanvi: Viri, chalo, hum ice cream khate hai.
Virika: Yay...

Maanvi and Virika ran towards the fridge, excitedly, while Jeevika was standing their motionless.

Jeevika: Viraat bhi Delhi mein...aur woh bhi Mannat ke saath...(sits on the couch/teary eyes) agar Maanvi ko Mannat ke baare mein pata chal gaya toh...? Aur woh bhi Viraat se...toh Maanvi mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegi...kabhi nahi. (gulped) Nahi,..main, main aisa nahi hone de sakhti...isse pehle Viraat Maanvi ko bataye, (wipes her tears off) main Maanvi ko Mannat ke baare mein bata dungi. Bata dungi main...

She hurriedly went towards the kitchen and saw Virika and Maanvi, enjoying their ice cream,,,laughing their heart out.

Jeevika: (tears streaming down her face) Itne saal baad woh khush hai Jeevika...kya tu usse uski khushi ek pal mein hi chhin legi..?

Jeevika smiled with joy, seeing her Mannu, so happy, so alive.

Jeevika: Nahi...nahi,,,main usse aaj nahi bataungi..nahi bataungi aaj...uski yeh muskurahat nahi chhina chahti main...kal...haan, kal main usse sab kuch bata dungi...sab kuch...

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~Next Day...6:30 pm, Chaudhary House, Delhi~

Maanvi: (worriedly/looking herself in the mirror) Di main thik lag rahi hun na?

Jeevika was just lost in her own world.

Maanvi: (turn towards her) Diii?
Jeevika: Huh..haan, tu..tu (force a smile) bahut khubsurat lag rahi hai Mannu.
Maanvi: Pakka na?
Jeevika: Haan.
Maanvi: (smiles) Ok.

Maanvi turned around to walk away, when Jeevika held her hand.

Jeevika: Mannu sun.
Maanvi: Kya hua Di?
Jeevika: Mannu,,,mujhe, tujhe kuch, batana tha.
Maanvi: (smiles at her) Toh bolo na Di..
Jeevika: Mannu..maine tujhse kuch..kuch chupaya hai...
Maanvi: (frowns) Mujhse? Kya?
Jeevika: Mannu, teri bach...

Jeevika and Maanvi both turned around when they heard the honk of the car being played.

Maanvi: Di (smiles widely) lagta hai Viraat aa gaya. Main aapse baad mein milti hun. (kisses on her cheek) Bye Di.
Jeevika: Mannu...sun...(following behind her)

But Maanvi walked out of the room, towards the main door. She took a deep breath and opened the door. Her heart beat started increase, with each steps she was taking toward him. Viraat looked at his side and saw his Wife, walking towards him, looking like an angel, in black anarkali suit. Her hair opened, with soft cruls at the end. He was just lost in her, again,..last night he promised himself that he will not let her effect him, but seeing her like this, he broked his promise. Maanvi came towards the car, when Viraat turned his gaze away from her. She looked at him, her nightmare came true. He was back to his "Rude Avatar"..

Maanvi's Outfit
Viraat's Outfit

Viraat: (sounding a bit rude) Aap jaldi se andar baithein gi? Hume der ho rahi hai.

Maanvi looked down, all hurt, and sad. She opened the door and sat inside, her eyes again filled with tears of hurt and pain, given by her Husband. Viraat, without looking at her, started the engine and drove off towards Mr. Kapoor's house.

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Mr. Kapoor: (smiles) Aao aao, swagat hai aap ka.
Random Person: Mubarak ho.
Mr. Kapoor: Ji Shukriya.

Mr. Kapoor was standing at the door, with his Wife, greeting all the guest, and waiting for his special guest...VSV.

Mr. Kapoor: (looking at his watch) Abhi tak aaye nahi yeh dono.
Mrs. Kapoor: Fikar kyun karte hain, aa jaiyeinge na. (smiles/looking at the enterance) Lo aa gayein.

Mr. Kapoor turned towards the direction, which Mrs. Kappor was pointing to. There he saw, Viraat, with Maanvi walking towards them, together.

Mr. Kapoor: Oh Finally tum dono aa gaye. I was waiting for you two only.
Maanvi: (hands folded) Namaste Aunty.
Mrs. Kapoor: Namaste Beta, (hand on her cheek) kaisi ho?
Maanvi: (smiles) Thik hun Aunty. Aap kaisi ho?
Mrs. Kapoor: Main bhi thik hun.
Mr. Kapoor: Viraat inse milo, yeh hai my betterhalf...my Wife, my Life, Soumya.
Viraat: (smiles/hands folded) Namaste.
Mrs. Kapoor: (smiles back) Namaste Beta, kaise ho?
Viraat: Main theek hun, aap kaisi hain?
Mrs. Kapoor: Tumhe dekh kar kaun theek nahi rahega.
Mr. Kapoor: Bilkul sahi kaha. Acha chalo, andar chalte hain.
Viraat: Ji.

VirMan, along with Mr & Mrs Kapoor went inside the hall, where the ceremony was taking place. The whole hall room was decorated with the color of White and Blue. Mr. Kapoor took VirMan towards his Son and To Be Daughter-in-law, along with Mrs. Kapoor.

Mr. Kapoor: Aao, main tumhe apne Bete aur hone wali Bahu se milata hun.

They walked towards them.

Mr. Kapoor: Viraat, yeh hai mera Beta, Saurab, aur yeh meri hone wali Bahu Ananya.
Saurab: (stands up) Hey, VSV, finally got a chance to meet you.
Ananya: (stands up/looking all dreamy) I can't believe this, VSV woh bhi humare engagement mein. I mean...
Viraat: (smiles) Its nothing...
Saurab: VSV, aap humare engagment mein aaye ho, ek gaana toh banta hai please.
Ananya: Haan please, ek romantic sa song.
Viraat: Main, kaise...
Mr. Kapoor: Arey yeh kya tum dono bhi...
Saurab: Papa please, VSV please sirf ek gaana.
Ananya: Haan bas ek romantic gaana. Acha humare liye na sahi, apni Pati ke liye...oh sorry agar Patni nahi toh Girlfriend ke liye, (hands folded) please na Sir, please.

Viraat and Maanvi looked at each other, love, care, yet hurt and pain visible in his eyes. Maanvi looked down, while Viraat looked away, towards Saurab and Ananya.

Saurab: Please Sir.
Viraat: Acha ok, but please stop calling me Sir or VSV, please. Call me Viraat.
Saurab: (smiles) Ok Sir...(bit his tongue) oops sorry..Viraat.
Ananya: So you'll sing for us?
Viraat: Um...(smiles) Ya..
Saurab: Great.
Ananya: Romantic Song Please.
Viraat: (chuckles) Ya of course.
Mr. Kapoor: Ok then, main announce kar deta hun.

Mr. Kapoor walked in the middle of the hall with a mic in his hand.

Mr. Kapoor: Good Evening everyone, I hope aap sab enjoy kar rahein hai. Aur agar nahi kar rahein hai, toh I'm sure, ab bilkul kareinge, kyun ki, ab humare liye ek romantic gaane ke saath aa rahe hai, VSV,,,Yane ki (pointing towards Viraat) Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera. Please give him around of applause.

Maanvi looked up at Viraat, watching him walking away from her. Viraat turned towards Maanvi, as he reached at the middle of the hall.

Viraat: (looking at her) This song is for someone really speacial, but the thing is that, I myself don't know how special she is to me.

Everyone clapped their hands as the music started. Maanvi looked down, as tears filled her eyes. Viraat turned around, his back facing her.

Tum Hi Ho

Viraat: (eyes closed) Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakhte, tere bina kya wajood mera...

He turns around, towards the girl, who has his heart...Maanvi.

Viraat: (tear eyes) Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakhte, tere bina kya wajood mera...(walking towards her) tujhse juda agar ho jaiyein ge, toh khud se hi ho jaiyein ge juda...

Maanvi looked up and saw him walking towards her. Tears rolled down her eyes, as she saw tears in his eyes.

Viraat: (stops one feet away from her/sideways) Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, (looking at her from the corner of his eyes) zindagi ab tum hi ho, chain bhi, mera dard bhi, (turns his face towards her) meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

Saurab held Ananya's hand and took her in the middle of the hall, along with other couples, while Maanvi started walking away to hide her tears from others. Viraat was looking at her all this time. He smiled and started walking after her.

Viraat: (smiles) Tera mera rishta hai kaise, ek pal dur gavara nahi, tere liye har roz hai jeete tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi...Koi lamha mera na ho tere bin, har saans pe naam tera...

Maanvi turned around, and saw Viraat behind her. She stood still, looking at him with love and pain in her eyes.

Viraat: (looking at her lovingly) Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho, chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

Viraat held Maanvi's hand and walked her in the middle of the hall. He placed her hands on his shoulder, and wrapped his arms around her waist. Maanvi looked down as it was difficult for her to hide her tears from him.

Saurab: (twirls Ananya) Tum hi ho...tum hi...ho...

Viraat lifted her chin with his fingers, making her eyes meet with his. Maanvi looked up at him, and tears rolled down once again. Viraat moved his hand up to her cheeks and wiped away the tears off with his fingers.

Viraat: ( his forehead touching hers) Tere liye hi jiya main, (holds her tightly) khud ko jo yun kho diya hai, (pulls away) teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala, saare gumon ko dil se nikala...

He twirled her around, her back hit his chest. He held her hands, that was on her stomach, and closed his eyes, living in the moments with his Maanvi.

Viraat: Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda, tujhe paa ke adhura na raha...(pulling her even more close) Hmmm...

He turned her back around, and dipped her down.

Viraat: (pulling her up) Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho, (holds her hand, while the other wrapped around her waist/swaying) chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...(looking deeply into her eyes) Kyun ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho, chain bhi, mera dard bhi, (push her hair behind her ears) meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...(cups her face, and placed a soft kiss on her forehead)

Viraat and Maanvi came back to their senses as the heard people applauding for him. He looked up and saw his Maanvi, standing there looking shocked. While Maanvi was looking at him, who was looking confused. Then the reality hit both of them, they were standing four feets away from each other. The dance, that they thought they were doing together, was just their dream...their imagination...Disappointed and hurt Maanvi looked away to hide her tears yet again from everyone who were present in the hall.

Uhh long update...I hope u lykd it...nxt update will b interesting, hopefully...Thnk u...LOVE U All...Aartii...

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Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago

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princess84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#734

awww pooor manvi...and can't believe jevika is selfish as always continue soon

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#735

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sorry for no long comments really buzzi these dayzz
loved the update no doubt ❤️

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Nice update

Thanks for the pm

I could maanvi's pain and viraat's too...Amazingly written

Keep going good work

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nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#737

ahhh...what a sad sad update...after the sad sad newzzz😭😭

they both love eachother and yarn for eachother but still...they are soo away from eachother😔

and i love the way virat held his mannu's hand tightly and was not leaving it😃...they sooo much care for eachother

awww and love the convo of mannat and viren..so shwoeet...mannt really misses her mama...and she was sooo happy to know something abt his mama...love how she blackmails her bale papa with her machi maa😉

and jeevs, virika and mannu convo is alsoo sweet na...jeevs saying "bachi he to ha tm dono mai koi faraq thori hai"😆

and the song ""TUM HI HO"" perfect for virman alwayzzz❤️...their feelings and emotions are sooo👍🏼

why the hell is virat soo angry on manvi😡...when manvi should be the one to be angry on him...😔where is all the love he has for his manvi, his bandariya huhhh😒... she is the one who is suffering the most she is the one who doesnt even know that her child is alive😭

and why the hell is manvi being sooo weak and naive huhhh...when she was the most strongest...she s the sherni...why is he behaving all sooo guilty towards virat she didnt do anything...why why why??????

plzzz cont sooon and thanx for the pm🤗🤗

plzzz make manvi strong like she used to be plzz😳...plzz make manvi the one who used to make virat follow and fulfill her each n every wish like a order😉😉

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hemameenu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#738

ha so cool dear I Want manvi and virat patch up pls pls pls kindly patch up cant see the pain betwn the couples awesome written dear 👍🏼❤️🤗

thanks a lot dear for the pm

pm me when u update next part