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Hello guyz...thnks a lot 4 ur comments n lyks...And I really hope u'll lyk dis part as well... juz wanna apologize 4 da delay, dis update is dedicated 2 My Partner Anjali...Shivali...n Keertu Beta...ok so here we go...EnJoY..

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 40...

~Recap~

Her breath stopped as she felt someones hand circling around her waist. She recognized that touch, her lips curved into a sweet smile. She pulled the duvet down and looked at that person. It was none other than her Husband, Viraat. After fighting with his mind and heart, he came to his Wife as his heart won over his mind. Maanvi's eyes sparkled as she smiled looking at him. Viraat was lost in her beauty, he moved some of the hair strands away from her face, wiped her teards and kissed on her forehead, leaving Maanvi shocked yet happy. She closed her eyes and hid her face in his neck, and he pulled her even more close to him. After such a long time, they both slept peacefully in each others arms.

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~Next Morning~

Mannat: (pouts) Maachi Maa, ab aap kab aaogi?

Jeevika and Virika were ready to leave the hotel. They were standing at the door, along with Mannat and Viren, who were looking really sad. Jeevika smiled at Mannat and knelt down, in front of her.

Jeevika: (cupping her cheeks) Jab bhi Mannat bulaye gi, tab Maasi Maa aa jaiye gi.
Mannat: Chhachi? (Really?)
Jeevika: (smiles) Muchi.
Mannat: Toh mujhe aapke chaath, Didi ke chaath, Ma(stops, looked at Viren)..chab ke chaath lehna hai, aap yahin ruk jao na mele paach. (Then I want to stay with you, Virika Didi, Mam...I want to stay with everyone, please stay here with me only.)
Jeevika: (stroking her hair lovingly) Yeh toh nahi ho sakhta na Mannat.

Mannat sadly looks down, with tears in her eyes.

Virika: (smiles a little) Mannat tum udas mat ho, hum fil milein ge na. (Mannat, don't be upset, we'll meet again.)
Mannat: (sadly) Magal kab Didi, main aapko bahut saala misch kalungi. (But when Didi, I will miss you a lot.)
Virika: (hugs Mannat) Main bhi Mannat. Hum jald hi mileinge.
Mannat: (pulls away) Plomich? (Promise?)
Virika: (smiles) Pakka Plomise. (Pinky Promise.)
Viren: (knelt down) Virika, Beta, aap apne Papa ko bhul toh nahi jao ge na?
Virika: (smiles) Nahi Papa.
Viren: (smiles/caressing her hair) Apna khayal rakhna Beta, Mama ka bhi, aur Maasi ka bhi.
Virika: (cutely) Aap Maasi ko jante ho?
Viren: Haan,,woh...
Jeevika: Sirf jante hai, samjhte nahi. (smiles at Virika) Virika, chalo, hume der ho rahi hai.
Mannat: (sadly pouts) Maachi Maa...aap mujhche milne aaogi na, Didi ko le kal? (Maasi Maa...You will come to meet me, with Didi, right?)
Jeevika: Haan Princess, main zarur aungi. Promise.
Mannat: (smiles) Thank You Maachi Maa.
Jeevika: (kisses her forehead) Apna khayal rakhna Princess.
Virika: (waving her hand) Bye Mannat.
Mannat: (waving back) Bye Didi.
Virika: (waving) Bye Papa.
Viren: (kisses on her cheek) Bye mera Angel. Apna khayal rakhna.
Virika: (smiles) Ok.

Jeevika and Virika left, while Viren and Mannat went back inside, sadly.

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~15 Minutes Later~

Jeevika and Virika reached home, Virika was fast asleep so Jeevika took her in her room. When she came back to her room, she saw Maanvi sleeping peacefully on her bed. She smiled looking at her Sister sleeping so peacefully after three long years. The smile that is playing on her lips, which was missing for such a long time, was finally back. Jeevik walked towards Maanvi and sat beside her on the bed. She caressed her hair lovingly. Maanvi opened her eyes, with a huge smile on her face and saw Jeevika's face.

Jeevika: (smiles) Good Morning Mannu.
Maanvi: (frowns) Good Morning Di...Aap yahan?
Jeevika: Main yahan nahi hongi toh aur kahan hongi Mannu? Yeh mera hi kamra hai.

Maanvi looked around and sat up on the bed. Her smile faded away as she realized that Viraat, once again left her. Tears filled her eyes.

Jeevika: (worried) Mannu kya hua? Tu itni udas kyun ho gayi?
Maanvi: (forced a smiled) Kuch nahi Di, bas kuch yaad aa gaya tha.
Jeevika: Kitni baar kaha hai uss baare mein mat socho jo tumhe taklif deti hai.
Maanvi: Koshish karti hun Di, par hota nahi. Waise aap kab aayi? Aur meri Angel kahan hai?
Jeevika: Bas thodi hi der mein, Viri so rahi hai. Waise tu mere kamre mein kya kar rahi hai?
Maanvi: (thinking for an excuse) Woh Di..woh..Mujhe,,woh..
Jeevika: Woh woh kya kar rahi hai Mannu?
Maanvi: Woh...actually Di, mujhe woh aapki yaad aa rahi thi, aur mujhe dar bhi lag rahi thi toh main yahan aa kar so gayi. (smiles) Isiliye.
Jeevika: (smiles) Tu bhi na Mannu. Acha sunna, mera ek kaam karegi?
Maanvi: Haan bolo na Di.
Jeevika: Woh aaj Viri ki appointment hai, check up ke liye, tu usse hospital le kar jaaye gi? Mujhe aaj jaldi class jaana hai. (Jeevika is currently teaching)
Maanvi: (smiles) Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai, Angel ke liye kuch bhi. Main Mr. Kapoor ko call kar ke bata dungi ki main aaj thoda late ho jaungi. Don't worry.
Jeevika: Thank You Mannu.
Maanvi: Di, aap kab se mujhe thank you bolne lag gayi?
Jeevika: (hold her ears) Sorry...
Maanvi: DIII...

Jeevika and Maanvi laughed and hugged each other.

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Maanvi and Virika were in the hospital for Virika's check up. The check up was done, so Maanvi bought Virika in the kids waiting area.

Maanvi: Viri, aapka check up toh ho gaya hai, aap yahin baitho, main Doctor se mil kar aati hun ok.
Virika: (smiles) Ok Maasi.

Maanvi left from there, leaving Virika, who was looking around the room. Her gaze went over to a little girl who was walking inside the waiting room. A cute smile spread over her lips as she recognized who that little girl was. It was none other than her little Sister...Mannat.

Virika: (excitedly) Mannat!!

Mannat looked up and saw Virika, she smiled, ran towards her, adn hugged her, excitedly. Viren, who was behind Mannat, walked in, while talking on his phone.

Viren: Haan Viraat, main bas hospital aaya hun, ek lady ko le kar, usse chot la gayi thi toh main usse yahan le kar aa gaya. Tu Mannat ki fikar mat kar, woh mere hi saath hai, tu bas apne kaam par dhiyaan de. Chal theek hai, bye.

He hanged up and saw Mannat with Virika. He smiled and walked towards them.

Mannat: Aap yahan kaiche aayi Didi? ( How come you're here Didi?)
Virika: Main Maasi ke saath aayi hun Mannat. Mera check up tha na aaj.
Viren: (smiles) Virika, aap yahan?
Virika: Main yahan check up ke liye aayi hun Papa.
Viren: Kis ke saath?
Virika: Maasi Maa ke saath.
Viren: (smiles) Maanvi..(looking around) Maanvi yahan hai? (looking at Virika) Kahan hai woh?
Virika: Woh Doctor ke paas gayi hai.
Viren: Doctor. (to himself) Mujhe usse dhundh na hoga. (to Virika) Virika Beta, Mannat ka khayal rakhna, aur aap dono yahan se kahin mat jaana ok, main bas abhi aaya.
Mannat: (smiles) Ok Bale Papa.

Viren walked out hurriedly, looking inside every room, through the window.

Mannat: (smiles) Vilika Didi, kya aapki Maachi bhi meli Maachi ki talah hai? (Virika Didi, Is your Maasi, similar as my Maasi?)
Virika: Nahi Mannat, Meli Maasi toh sab se best hai. Mujhe (arms spread out) itna saala pyaal kalti hai. (No Mannat, My Maasi is the best, she loves me a lot.)
Mannat: Woh toh meli Maachi bhi mujhche kalti hai. ( My Maasi also loves me a lot.)
Virika: (smiles) Haan, pal meli Maasi bahut achi hai, woh sabse best hai. (Yes, but my Maasi is very nice, she is the best.)
Mannat: (sadly) Aul meli Mama? (And my Mom?)
Virika: (frowns) Mujhe nahi pata Mannat, tumhali Mama ko maine kabhi dekha hi nahi. (That I don't know Mannat, I havn't seen your Mom, that's why.)
Mannat: (sadly/pouts) Maine bhi nahi dekha.
~*~Kisko nahi dekha?

Virika and Mannat turned around towards the voice. Virika smiled, while Mannat was just looking at that person, curiously. That voice was none other than Maanvi's, who was looking at Mannat with tears in her eyes. She felt something weird, when she saw her, something told her that she is part of her.

Virika: Maasi.

Virika ran and hugged Maanvi, while Mannat was just looking at Maanvi, innocently.

Mannat: (cutely) Yeh aapki Maachi hai? (She's you Maasi?)
Virika: (smiles) Haan, yeh meli Mannu Maasi hai.

Mannat smiled at Maanvi, who smiled back at her. Maanvi walked towards her, along with Virika, and sat down, in front of her.

Maanvi: Kya naam hai aapka?
Virika: Maasi iss ka naam Man...
Mannat: (smiles) Mannu. Mela naam Mannu hai. (Mannu. My name is Mannu.)
Virika: (confused) Pal...(But...)
Mannat: Mela naam Mannu hai Vilika Didi. (My name is Mannu Virika Didi.)

Maanvi smiled at this cute little Princess.

Maanvi: (smiles) Arey wah, naam toh mera bhi Mannu hai. (hand extended out) Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge?
Mannat: (smiles) Haan. (innocently) Kya main aapko hug kal sakhti hun? Plij. (Yes. Can I hug you? Please.)

Maanvi heart skipped thousands of beat, she smiled at Mannat, but her eyes filled with tears. She nodded and pulled her in her arms, hugging her as tight as she could. Tears made its way out, from both of their eyes. Mannat was hugging Maanvi tightly, with her tiny arms wrapped around her neck.

Mannat: (looking up/to herself) Mujhe aapki bahut yaad aati hai Mama, plij mele paache wapas aa jao. ( I really miss you Mama, please came back to me.)
Maanvi: (eyes closed/to herself) Mujhe aapki bahut yaad aati hai Baby, please Mama ke paas wapas aa jao.
Virika: (confused/a little worried) Aap dono ro kyun lahi ho? (Why are you both crying?)

Maanvi and Mannat pulled away from the hug.

Maanvi: Arey, aap kyun ro rahi ho?
Mannat: Aap kyun lo lahe ho? (Why are ypu crying?)
Maanvi: Main,,,woh...(smiles a little) mujhe kisi ki yaad aa gayi thi isiliye.
Mannat: (smiles back) Mujhe bhi kichi ki yaad aa gayi thi, ichiliye. (I was missing someone as well, that's why.)
Maanvi: Acha? Kiski?
Mannat: (frowns sadly) Mama ki.
Maanvi: Mama ki? Kahan hai aapki Mama?
Mannat: Pata nahi. Papa ne kabhi nahi bataya.

Maanvi felt really bad for Mannat, her eyes filled yet again with tears for this cute little girl.

Maanvi: Kyun?
Mannat: Pata nahi, bach nahi bataya. Woh guccha kalte hai, agal main Mama ke baale mein kichi se bhi baat kalti hun toh. ( I don't know. He just never told me anything about my Mom. And If I asked him anything about my Mom, he gets really angry if I asked anything regarding my Mom.)
Maanvi: (cutely) Mama ki bahut yaad aati hai?
Mannat: (looks down as tears roll down her cute pick cheeks) Bahut zyada, pal woh mele paach aati hi nahi. (Yes, a lot. But she never comes to meet me.)
Maanvi: (pulls her in her arms) Aaye gi Beta, Mama zarur aayegi aapke paas. Aap Mama se bahut pyaar karte ho na.
Mannat: Pata nahi. Pal kya Mama mujhche pyaal kalti hai?
Maanvi: (trying to control her tears) Haan Baby, Mama bhi aapse pyaar karti hai, sab se zyada.

Mannat smiled with tears, while Maanvi was pulling her even more close to her, as tears rolled down her cheek. Mannat pulled away and wiped Maanvi tears away with her tiny little cute fingers.

Mannat: Bali Dadi kehte hai ki lona nahi chahiye. Aap bhi mat lo na plij. (Badi Dadi says that you shouldn't cry. You don't cry as well, please.)
Maanvi: (smiles) Aapki Dadi sahi kehti hai, rona nahi chahiye. (wipes Mannat's tears away) Aap bhi mat ro, aapke in pyaari pyaari aankhon mein aansun aache nahi lagte.

Mannat smiled at Maanvi.

Mannat: Vilika Di sahi keh lahi thi, unki Maachi chab che becht hai. (Virika Di was right, her Maasi is the best.)

Maanvi looked at Virika and pulled her in a hug. Mannat was just standing, watching them hugging each other. Maanvi smiled and extended her one hand for Mannat. She smiled widely and wrapped her little arms around them. The picture perfect moment broked as Maanvi's phone started ringing. She hurriedly pulled away from the hug and answered her phone.

Maanvi: Hello...Ji Sir, main bas pahoch rahi hun. Ok Ji...bye.

Maanvi kept her phone in her bag and turned back at Mannat and Virika.

Maanvi: Beta, ab hume jaana hoga. Aap yahan kiske saath aaye ho?
Mannat: (smiles) Bale Papa ke chaath. (With my Bade Papa.)
Maanvi: Ok good, ab hum chalte hai ok. (hand on her head) Aap apna khayal rakhna.
Mannat: (frowns sadly) Aap mujhse fil kab miloge? (When will you meet me again?)
Maanvi: (smiles) Bahut jald Beta.

Mannat smiled at Maanvi, she hugged her and then Virika one last time, and they went away. Viren entered the room and saw a sad Mannat.

Viren: Princess Virika Didi kahan gayi?
Mannat: (pouts) Woh chali gayi Bale Papa.
Viren: (upset) Kahan? Kiske saath?
Mannat: Apne ghal, apne Maachi ke chaath.
Viren: Aap mili uske Maasi se?
Mannat: (smiles) Haan Bale Papa, woh bahut achi hai, woh mujhe meli Mama ki talah lag...(stops/looks down as tears filled her eyes)

Viren picked Mannat in his arms and hugged her.

Viren: (to himself) Kaise bataun main aapko Mannat, ki woh sirf aapki Mama ki tarah hi nahi...aapki Mama hi hai.

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~S-K Music Company~

Mr. Kapoor: Mr. Vadhera are you ready for your first recording with us?
Viraat: (lost) Um..Yes...(looking at Mr. Kapoor) yes Mr. Kapoor.
Mr. Kapoor: Excelent, so lets start, (handing him some papers) yeh gaane ke lyrics hai. Aap andar jaa sakhte hain.

Viraat who was looking around the room, took the papers from Mr. Kapoor and unwillingly entered the recording room. Mr. Kapoor saw Viraat, looking around, looking little restless, as if he was looking for something, or expecting someone.

Mr. Kapoor: Whom are you looking for Viraat? Koi aane wala hai?
Viraat: Huh...Ji,(forcing a smile) Ji nahi, koi nahi.
Mr. Kapoor: (smiles) Ok then, lets start.

Viraat went to the mic, still looking at the enterance.

Mr. Kapoor: OK Viraat. 1...2...3...start..
Viraat: Huh..oh sorry...fir se karte hai.
Mr. Kapoor: Ok. 1...2...3...start...

Viraat was just looking at the papers, which had songs lyrics on it.

Mr. Kapoor: (confused/concerned) Viraat, are you ok?

Viraat looked up at Mr. Kapoor.

Viraat: Ya, yes yes Sir, I'm..I'm fine. (smiles)
Mr. Kapoor: You sure?
Viraat: Ya...lets start.
Mr. Kapoor: Ok...1..2..3...go.
Maanvi: (entering the room) Sorry sorry sorry Sir...I'm late..

Viraat looked up and saw Maanvi. A cute smile appeared on his lips after seeing her there. It was her, whom he was waiting for.

Mr. Kapoor: Uh, Maanvi, thank god you're here. Hum bas recording shuru hi karne wale the. come. (turns to Viraat) Viraat, start.

Maanvi looked up at Viraat, her eyes filled with tears but she closed her eyes tightly, trying to hold back her tears from falling. She opened her eyes and saw his gaze on her.

Mr. Kapoor: Ok Let's start now. 1...2...3...go.

Viraat held the mic near his lips, his gaze still fixed on Maanvi, who was looking down. And started his singing...

Viraat: Apne karam ki kar adaayein...

Maanvi looked up at him, and they had a cute eye lock.

Viraat: Yaara, Yaaraa...Yaara! Yaara...Yaara, Yaara...

Maanvi looked away from him and smiled at Mr. Kapoor, who was smiling at her while nodding.

Viraat: (eyes closed) Mujhko iraade de...Kasamein de, waade de...Meri duaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de...Dil ko thikaane de...Naye bahaane de...Khaabon ki baarishon ko mausam ke paimane de...(opens his eyes/looking at Maanvi, who was looking away) Apne karam ki kar adaayein...Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein...(Maanvi turned her face towards him) Sun raha hai naa tu...Ro raha hun main...(looking down at the lyrics) Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main...(looking up at Maanvi) Sun raha hai naa tu...Roh raha hun main...Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main...

Their eyes met once again...they could see the same love in each others eyes, which they had 5 years ago. Maanvi looked away, as her eyes filled with tears. Viraat stood there, recalling his life without Maanvi, the night when she left him, the night when she went away from him. He opened his eyes, with tears, looking at his wife.

Viraat: (close his eyes, in order to hold back his tears) Manzilein ruswa hain, khoya hai raasta...Aaye le jaaye, itni si iltejaa...Yeh meri zamanat hai...(opens his eyes/looking at Maanvi) Tu meri amaanat hai haan...

Maanvi turned around, and wiped her tears.

Viraat: Apne karam ki kar adayein...(looking at her, as if asking her to turn back) Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein...Sun raha hai naa tu...Ro raha hoon main,,,Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main...

Viraat was lost, he was just looking at Maanvi, lost in his own world of darkness yet again. The flashbacks of their wedding, their romantic moments came into his minds, a cute smile crept over his lips. And then the moment when she hurted him the most, when she said that her child...their child was a burden for her, faded his smile away. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Mr. Kapoor was trying to get his attention, but nothing helped. Maanvi turned around and saw him in tears, her heart ached, seeing her love in tears, her heart breaked into millions of pieces. She closed her eyes and started singing for him.

Maanvi: Yaara...

Mr. Kapoor smiled at her and signalled her to go inside, beside Viraat. She smiled a little and slowly headed where Viraat was standing, lost. She stood beside him and started singing.

Maanvi: Waqt bhi thehra hai...Kaise kyun ye huaa...Kaash tu aise aaye...Jaise koi duaa...(looking at Viraat) Tu rooh ki raahat hai,,,Tu meri ibaadat hai...Aaa...(turns her face away) Apne karam ki kar adaayein...

Viraat turned his face towards Maanvi, who was not looking at him. Instead he saw her eyes were shut, with tears rolling down her cheeks.

Maanvi: Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein...Sun raha hai naa tu...(clutching onto her dupatta in her fist) Ro rahi hun main...Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main...Sun raha hai naa tu...Ro rahi hun main...(opens her eyes) Sun raha hai naa tu...Kyun ro raha hun main...
Viraat: (still looking at her) Yaara...

Viraat and Maanvi came back to their senses, when they heard Mr. Kapoor clapping his hands for them. They wiped their tears, and came out of the recording area.

Mr. Kapoor: Wow, maine toh socha tha yeh gaana sirf male voice mein acha lagega, but Maanvi, you surprised me. Pehli baar tumne koi gaana likha aur itna acha gaya bhi usse. Awesome. Yeh recording toh bahut hi achi gayi. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha ki tum gaati bhi ho Maanvi.

Maanvi: (fake smile) Woh Sir, main toh bas...

Mr. Kapoor: But I'm glad you did. Acha ab tum Viraat ko uske cabin mein le kar jao, mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai. Once again, well done guys.

VirMan: Thank You (looking at each other)..Sir.

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Viraat and Maanvi entered Viraat's cabin. Maanvi was standing at the door, with her head down, where as Viraat walked in towards his seat. He turned around and saw Maanvi, standing there with her head down, playing with the end of her dupatta.

Viraat: (coldly) Aapko kuch chahiye Ms. Chaudhary?
Maanvi: Viraat tum...
Viraat: Viraat nahi...(turns his back towards her) Sir...

Maanvi looked at him shockedly, yet hurtfully.

Maanvi: Sir?
Viraat: Yes, Sir. Employees apne maalik(bose) ko aise hi bulate hai na (turns towards her) Ms. Chaudhary?
Maanvi: (smiled through her tears) Haan..Sir...employees apne malik ko aise hi bulate hai.
Viraat: So? You need anything?
Maanvi: No,,,Sir.
Viraat: Then what are you waiting for?
Maanvi: Main...

Maanvi was cut off by Viraat's phone, which started ringing. He hurriedly took his phone out and answered it.

Viraat: (to Maanvi) You may leave. (answering the call) Hello?
Mannat: (cutely) Papa?
Viraat: (smiles) Hi Baby, everything ok?
Mannat: Papa aap ghal kab aaoge? Main aapko bahut saala mich kal lahi hun. (Papa, when are you coming back home? I'm missing you a lot.)
Viraat: I'm missing you too Baby, but abhi main yahan kaam kar raha hun toh ghar nahi aa sakhta.

Maanvi, who was about to walk out of the cabin, stopped in her tracks as she heard Viraat calling someone "Baby" over the phone.

Mannat: Oh, ok, koi baat nahi Papa, pal aap plij jaldi aa jao na, maine aapko kal bhi nahi dekha tha. (Oh ok, no problem Papa, but please come back home soon, I didn't even see you yesterday.)
Viraat: (smiles) I know Princess, main jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.
Mannat: (smiles widely) Chhachi? I Love You Papa. (Really? I Love You Papa.)
Viraat: (cutely) Muchi..I Love You Too Baby, chalo ab main phone rakhta hun, ghar par milte hai huh. Apna khayal rakhna ok. Bye.

Viraat hanged up his phone and saw Maanvi, still standing there.

Viraat: You can leave Ms. Chaudhary.

Maanvi looked up at him, her eyes filled with tears, and she turned around to leave. Viraat was a little confused seeing Maanvi in tears.

Maanvi: Vi..Viraat ne,,dus..dusri shadi karli...?

I knw u guyz r ready 2 kill me, as I always stop at a vry wrong place, but wat can I do, it long enough na...da song,,Sun Raha..frm Aashiqui 2...well juz wanna warn u all dat u will c songs of Aashiqui 2 in both of my FF/SS as m in luv wid dat movie + songs..sorry if u dn't lyk em, m sure no 1 dislyks it..plz leave ur comments 4 me n hit lyk,..thnk u...Luv Aartii...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Superb..~!! Like the song seection n the convo between Maanvi n Mannat..too cute...N the MU is the end, nice building up drama even more...Waiting fir the next...~!!