VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 107

Originally posted by: manvilover18

poor manvi

and super update

plzzz plzzz continue soon...

can't wait for next update...

Thnk u so much...updating in a bit..😊

Originally posted by: kateyes

wonderful update👏 i know sumthing will happen like dis but awsum work maanvi's pain , helpness , guilt was shown beautifully how shattered she was whn she heard about him n everybody consoling her n after virat got concious her happiness faded away after knowing dat he forgets his 2precious year with her n best line mera virat apni maanvi ko bhul gya how shattered she was dis describe dat now wht will she do n where dere relation take dem now just waiting

Thnk u so much..glad u lykd it...will b updating in a bit..😊

Originally posted by: rashi246

It was a quite a big shock, I still want to read mre please continue soon

I knw it was..😛 updating in a bit, thnks 4 da comment..😊

Originally posted by: amgud

wow wat a sad update

""mera virat apne manvi ko bhul gaya""😭 this line is so touching filled with tremendous emotions of our mannu

it would be soo ajeeb virat will talk to her as a complete stranger now

but as u say dying is way much better than memory loss

u know both of ur updates r soo sad n touching r u trying to cause a tsunami of tears huh😆 cause ur brilliant in describing each n every situation effortlessly

thanx for the pm again😃

n cont soon

Thnk u so much...I knw it will......yup dats true,,cn't c him dying rite..😃...hehehe...yup i m...n m glad it worked on u..lol😆...Thnk u so much, dat means a lot 2 me..ur most wc..updating in a bit..😊

Originally posted by: nanditam2107

Oh god shit!!!! Virat lost his memory!!!😭

Poor manvi!!!!! Really feeling very bad for her!!!!!!😭😭

But gal!!!! I must say you are a wonderful writer!!!! I am just in love with your writing!!!!😊

Please do update soon...will be waiting!!!!!!😊

Aww...thnk u so much, dat really means a lot..thnks a ton...updating in a bit...😊

Originally posted by: keertu

choti maa wat an update.solly for late reply.really solly.

but wat was that it was really emotional.becoz of crying i got cold.

virat forget manvi.poor manvi.

plz continue soon.but he forget virika's marriage also so how will they reveal it.😲

choti maa continue soon😃

Keertu beta, its ok...at least u commented on dis...n thnk u so much, glad u lykd it...updating in a bit...u'll c dat soon...😊

Originally posted by: keertu

choti maa u going to update today itself😉

Yes Beta i m...BUT ONLY THMP...😊

Hello guyz...m bck, woh bhi itni jaldi...actually dis update is dedicated 2 MYVIRMAN, as it was her B'day n she asked me 2 give 1 more update...so here we go..,Thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...really appreciate it..hope u'll lyk it...Njoy...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29...

~Recap~

Maanvi: Mera Viraat,,,apni Maanvi ko..bhul gaya...

Everyone turned towards her, as they heard her word. They felt really bad seeing her in that condition, all lost and broken, alone and sad.

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Maanvi was sitting on a bench, outside of the hospital. Her face were red and wet due to all that crying. She was just sitting there, crying her heart out, alone, recalling her moments with Viraat.

~Flashback...Last Night~

Viraat: (looking at her angelic face) Mujhe miss karogi?
Maanvi: (wrapping her arms around his neck) Har ek second.
Viraat: (pulls her even more closer) Call karogi?
Maanvi: Har ek mintue.
Viraat: Mujhe bhul toh nahi jaogi na?
Maanvi: Khud ko bhul sakhti hun, par tumhe nahi.

~Present~

Maanvi: (crying/hugging herself) Tum mujhe kaise bhul gaye Viraat? Apne Maanvi ko kaise bhul gaye? Main toh tumhe ek second ke liye bhi nahi bhuli, tumne kaise mujhe ek hi pal mein bhula diya...?

~Flashback~

Maanvi: Viraat tum mujhe miss karoge na, kal jab main chali jaungi.

Viraat moved back and looked at her with a smile.

Viraat: Miss toh tab karunga jab tum mere dilo dimaag se jaogi. Kabza kar ke rakha hai tumne apna mere dil aur dimaag mein.
Maanvi: (smiles) Acha?
Viraat: Haan. Waise, aisa nahi ho sakhta ki tumhara jaana cancel ho jaiye.

~Present~

Maanvi: (smiles with tears) Yaad toh dur, tumne toh mujhe apne dilo dimaag se bhi nikal diya hai Partner. Tumhe meri koi bhi baat yaad nahi, main yaad nahi, kyun Viraat? Kyun? Kaise bhul gaye tum mujhe?

Viren and Jeevika, who were looking for Maanvi, came outside of the hospital and saw her sitting on the bench, crying, while hugging herself.

Jeevika: (tears rolling down her cheeks) Meri Mannu ke saath hi aisa kyun hota hai Viren Ji? Khushiyaan aane se pehle hi kyun chhin jaati hai uski muskaan usse?
Viren: (hugs her sideways) Sab theek ho jaiye ga Jeevika. Bas apni himmat mat tutne dena, tumhari himmat se Maanvi apne aapko sambhal rahi hai. Uski himmat mat tutne dena.

Jeevika looked at Maanvi, and wiped her tears off. She forced a smile and looked at Viren.

Jeevika: Chale?
Viren: (smiles) Hm.

They both walked towards Maanvi, Viren sat on her left side, while Jeevika sat on her right. Maanvi turned to look at Viren and then at Jeevika. Tears were just continuously rolling down her cheeks.

Jeevika: (hand on her shoulder) Mannu?
Maanvi: (looking straight/with tears) Tut gayi hai aapki Mannu Di. Tut gayi hai Viraat ki Maanvi. Nahi seh sakhti yeh sab woh.
Viren: (his eyes filled with tears, seeing her so broken) Humari Maanvi itni kamzor toh nahi thi na, woh toh sab ki taqat(strength) banti thi. Aaj wohi Maanvi kaise tut gayi.
Maanvi: Himmat banti thi, par uski jo himmat tha, woh aaj usse hi bhul gaya hai Jiju. (crying) Woh usse nahi pehchanta. Nahi janta ki woh kaun hai, kya rishta hai uska uske saath. Nahi janta woh, sab bhul gaya hai woh.
Viren: Toh kya Maanvi bhi bhul gayi hai apne aur uske rishte ko? Kya woh apne pyaar ko wapas paane ke liye ladhna bhul gayi hai? Kya woh nahi chahti ki uska pyaar usse phir miley? Woh usse pehchane? Nahi chahti hai kya woh?

Maanvi turned her face towards Viren and tilt her head sideways, with tears rolling down. Jeevika was just sitting there, trying to control herself, as she has to take care of her Baby Sister.

Maanvi: Chahti hai, par usse taklif mein dal kar nahi. Main usse yaad nahi hun, mujhe uska utna afsos nahi hoga, jitna usse taklif mein dekh kar hoga Jiju. Agar mere ek galat faisla, mere Viraat ko mujhse hamesha ke liye dur le kar jaata hai, toh main koi faisla nahi lungi. Usse do kadam dur reh lungi, par usse kabhi uske aur apne rishte ke baare mein nahi bataungi.
Jeevika: Itna pyaar karti ho usse? Uske liye, kisi bhi dukh taklif sehne ke liye taiyaar ho?
Maanvi: (smiles/looking at Jeevika) Main usse kitna pyaar karti hun, yeh toh mujhe khud nahi pata DI. Bas pata hai toh itna, ki meri puri zindagi sirf aur sirf uske naam ki hai, agar woh nahi, toh main nahi. Viraat hai, toh Maanvi hai, warna Viraat ke bina, Maanvi kuch nahi..Kuch bhi nahi.
Viren: Aur Maanvi ke bin Viraat bhi kuch nahi hai, yeh sabne dekha hai. Maanvi, apne liye na sahi tumhe Viraat ke liye humara saath dena hoga. Uski yaad dash wapas laani hogi, isse pehle ki bahut der ho jaiye.
Maanvi: (looking at Viren) Main Viraat ke liye kuch bhi kar sakhti hun Jiju.
Viren: Toh kya tum humari madat karogi?
Maanvi: Agar usse Viraat ki zindagi par koi khatra nahi ho toh.
Viren: Koi khatra nahi hoga, hume bas ek natak karna hoga?
Maanvi: (confusedly) Natak? Kaisa natak?
Viren: Pichle do saal mein jo kuch bhi hua. Hum jaise pehli baar miley the. Meri aur Jeevika ki shadi, tumhara humare ghar par rehna, apne Di ke paas. Tum dono ka Partnership, fir pyaar. Woh har ek pal hume fir jeena hoga. Viraat ke liye.
Jeevika: (hand on her shoulder) Haan Mannu, sirf yahin ek tarika hai jisse hum Viraat ki yaad dash wapas laa sakhte hai.
Maanvi: Theek hai, main taiyaar hun.
Viren: (smiles) Excellent. (frowns) Par Maanvi, uske liye tum dono ko pehle jaisa banna hoga. Tum dono ki dressing pehle jaise karna hoga. Single. Yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra, tum dono ko...

Maanvi and Jeevika looked at each other.

Jeevika: Main apni Bahen aur Devar ke liye, yeh karne ke liye taiyaar hun.

Maanvi smiled at Jeevika.

Maanvi: Agar mere saath mera Pati hi na ho toh yeh sab ka kya fyada Jiju. Main yeh sab karne ke liye taiyaar hun.
Viren: Theek hai fir. Hum teen din baad ladki, yaane ki Jeevika ko dekhne aayein ge. Tum dono ko ussi taraf behave karna hai jis tarah uss din kiya tha.
JeeMan: (smiles a little) Theek hai.

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~Three Days Later~

Viraat, Viren, and Swamini Bua came out of the car, standing right infront of the Chaudhary House. Pinky Chachi, who was contolling her emotions, were standing at the door, with some other ladies, forcing a smile while waving at them. Viraat was just looking at the house very closely. He was feeling something weird, something different yet very familiar.

Viraat: (lookinga at the house closely) Bhai yeh hai Jeevika Bhabhi ka ghar?
Viren: Haan, yahi hai.
Viraat: Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai, jaise main yahan pehle kai baar aa chuka hun.
Viren: Kya?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, aisa lag raha hai, jaise main yahan sab ko pehchanta hun. Pata nahi kya ajeeb feelings hai yeh. Anyways, (smiles) andar chalte hai, Bhabhi se milne, intezaar kar rahi hogi woh aapka.
Viren: Um..(smiles a little) Haan, chalo.

Viren, Viraat, Swamini Bua entered the house. Beeji, Pinky Chachi, and Madhan Chachu came to welcome them. Viraat smiled, while others were just giving him a forced smiled.

Viraat: (whisperes to Viren) Bhai, aisa kyun lagta hai jaise ki kisi ne (looking at the Chaudharys) in sab ko dant kar kaha hai ki smile karna. (giving them fake smiles) Dekho kaise smile kar rahe hain.
Viren: Tu abhi nahi samjhe ga Viraat, waqt lagega. Chal ab.

Virat gave a confused smile to Viren and walked in, along with everyone else.

Viren: (touches Badi Beeji's feet) Namaste.
Badi Beeji: (hands on his head) Jeete raho.
Viraat: (takes Badi Beeji's blessing) Ji Namaste.
Badi Beeji: (hands on his head) Khush raho. (smiles at him) Kya naam hai tumhara?
Viraat: Ji mera? (smiles) Viraat.
Badi Beeji: (holds Viraat's hand) Sun, uss Maan,,,(holding back her tears) Maanvi se mat..mat milna, daayan hai woh.
Viraat: (chuckles) Daayan?
Badi Beeji: (forced a smile) Haan.
Viraat: JI.

Viren pulled Viraat towards him.

Viren: Viraat sun naa.
Viraat: Haan Bhai bolo?
Viren: Viraat hum jab ladkiyon se milne jaiyein ge toh apne identities exchange kar leinge.
Viraat: (confused) Kyun?
Viren: (thinking) Woh..woh..(smiles) haan, tu toh janta hai main bahut shant kisam ka insaan hun, agar woh,,,Jeevika, mere jaisi nahi hui toh. Agar tu Viren banega toh tu jaan jaiye ga ki woh kaisi ladki hai.
Viraat: Hmm, point hai. (smiles) Theek hai Bhai. Abhi ke liye main Viren aur aap Viraat.

Viren smiled at Viraat and silently thanked god.

Beeji: (smiles) Agar aap chahe toh bachon ko upar chhat par bhej de.
Swamini Bua: (smiles) Ji, hume koi problem nahi hai isse.
Beeji: Dabbu, jaa Viren,,ji aur Viraat ji ko upar chhat par le kar jao.
Dabbu: Ji Beeji. (to Viren and Viraat) Chaliye.

Viren and Viraat along with Dabbu went up on the terrace.

Viraat: (smiles widely/looking around) Yahan kitna acha lag raha hai na Bhai.
Viren: (smiles) Haan Viraat.
Viraat: Aisa lagta hai isse pavitra jagah aur kahin hai hi nahi.
Dabbu: Aap dono yahan rukiye, main Jeevika Di, aur Maanvi Di ko bula kar laati hun.
Viraat: (looking at Dabbu) Maanvi? Yeh Maanvi hai kaun? Aur hum toh yahan Jeevika Bhabhi se, I mean hone wali Bhabhi se milne aaye hai, (looking at Viren) Maanvi kyun?

Dabbu just looked down, as tears filled his eyes.

Viren: Uh, woh Viraat dono Behne hai, jaise tu mere saath aaya hai, waise hi Maanvi shayad Jeevika ke saath.
Viraat: Hm.

Dabbu went away, without looking at Viren or Viraat.

Viraat: (looking at Dabbu, weirdly, walking away) Bhai, aapko nahi lagta iss ghar mein sab bahut ajeeb behave kar rahe hai? Jaise ki kisi ne inhe koi punishment di hai smile karne ki. Khush rehne ki.
Viren: (painful smile) Jiske dil mein dard hota hai, unhe apne dard chupane ke liye muskurana hi padhta hai. Jo sabse zyada dard se guzar rahi hai, usse toh tumne abhi dekha hi nahi hai.
Viraat: (confused) Matlab?
Viren: Huh...kuch, kuch nahi.

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Dabbu entered the room, where Maanvi and Jeevika were. Maanvi was sitting on the bed, crying, while Jeevika was standing beside her, consoling her. Dabbu walked in with his head down, as his eyes were still teary.

Dabbu: (holding back his tears) Jeevika Di, Maanvi Di, Viren Jiju, aur Viraat Jiju...aap dono ka intezaar kar rahe hain.

Maanvi and Jeevika looked up at Dabbu. They knew their Brother was hiding his tears, as he's looking down. Maanvi wiped her tears off of her face and forced a smile.

Maanvi: (walking towards Dabbu) Yeh humari teesri Bahen ko kya hua Di, yeh ro kyun rahi hai?

Jeevika and Dabbu looked up at Maanvi, tear filled eyes.

Maanvi: (looking at Jeevika and Dabbu) Arey aise kyun dekh rahe ho aap dono mujhe?
Jeevika: Mannu tu?
Maanvi: (smiles) Of ho Di, ladke wale aapko dekhne aa gaye hai aur aap ho ki meri chinta kar rahi ho. Aur Dabbe tu, yun ladki ki tarah kyun ro raha hai?
Dabbu: (crying) Di, main aapko aise nahi dekh sakhta.
Maanvi: Arey mujhe kya hua hai, main toh fit-n-fine hun.
Dabbu: Par main nahi hun Di. Main aapki tarah strong nahi hun. Aapko aisa nahi dekha jaata mujhe.
Maanvi: (hands on his shoulder) Banna padega tujhe strong Dabbu. Apne liye nahi, apni Di ke liye. Nahi dekh sakhta na tu apni Di ko aise. Toh mere liye smile kar, mere liye woh Dabbu ban jo tu do saal pehle tha. (teary eyes) Please Dabbu.
Dabbu: (wipes his tears off) Main aapke liye toh apni jaan bhi de sakhta hun Di, aap toh mujhse sirf mera ek smile hi maang rahi ho.
Maanvi: (smiles through his tears) Thank you Dabbu.

Maanvi hugged Dabbu tightly.

Dabbu: (crying/hugging her back tightly) Viraat Jiju ko sab yaad aa jaiye ga na Di. Unhe aap yaad aa jao gi na Di?
Maanvi: (trying to control her tears) Haan Dabbu..Haan..

Jeevika also joined the hug, crying her heart out along with Dabbu and Maanvi.

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Maanvi and Jeevika climbed up the stairs, towards the terrace, where Viren and Viraat were waiting. Viraat turned around and saw two pairs of innocent eyes, looking at him, with pain and love. He was not able to see her face, as there was a thing between them. Maanvi's eyes filled with tears, but she blinked that tears away and forced a smile, looking at her Viraat, with lots of love, only for him. Viren turned towards Viraat, and saw him looking at something very closely. He looked at his direction and saw his Wife, with his Saali. A smiled appeared on his lips, and his eyes filled with tears, looking at them.

Viren: Bhagwaan, please meri Saali ko aur taklif mat do, usse uska Viraat lauta do, woh Viraat jo usse beintehaan pyaar karta hai. (looking up) Please Bhagwaan.

Viraat was feeling very weird, he felt as if all these things had happened with him before. This place seems really familar to him, as if he came here before. He was just lost, in her eyes, in Maanvi's eyes, who was standing rather than walking towards them.

Jeevika: (holds her hand) Mannu chal.
Maanvi: (stops her) Di, hum sahi kar rahe hai na? Viraat ko kuch hoga toh nahi na?
Jeevika: Kuch nahi hoga Mannu, (smiles) Bhaagwaan par bharosa rakh.

Maanvi sighed and started walking again, towards Viren and Viraat.


Ok, dats it 4 2day...emotional update again...sorry bout dat...plz leave ur comments 4 me n hit lyk if u lykd it...THNK U...Lots of Luv Aartii..


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Wow update sooo fast finallly all thanx to myvirman n:-)
Happy birthday to her :-)
And this update was soo goood...
The flashback scenes and manvi's dialogue was sooo emotional...
Viren's plan is soo. Interesting ...
Wow its like reliving those moments agwin ...
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