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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-8
7th Middle-chapter

Heart, A blooming Thunder, gets blind today...


To begin my life with the beginning of my life'.

Ehesaas kuch naya sa-she closed her magnetic eyes with teary effect. The childhood companion of th disguised boy-actually not disguised by attitude, disguised with hidden fire & an eternal guide,now was l gazing vacantly at her wedding attire.ohh'..why time doesn't lead to past.the heedful past,the glowing past with him in adolescence''.

''Just an atrocious joke!! For whose?? For whose she had to take bridal seat?? DESTINY obviously.But the man behind it??...a mask full of politics!...

He was young but not so much that can't understand her eye's language that's untold but not unfolded.Some unknown feeling caught her politely.If she wanted,she could avoide it.But she welcome her feelings about him with a rosy heart...unfortunately,the guide witnessed a lot of thorns in it.

He took care of her obviously but the guide stopped her while proposing him with a bunch of flowers- tum raj rakt ke adhikarini ho?? nehi na?? toh tumhe koi haq nehi uske sath sare jivon vyatit karne ka aur uske santan ko janam dene ka.jadi tum chahti ho ki voh ek pravabhshali vyati bane...toh iss satya ko zald se zald grahan kar lo aur chale jao uske zindegi se.haan, use viday bhi mat lena...

Then...the strong waves of river Mouli...an aboriginal village...a lot of events...at last waiting vermillion pot...o...in their rituals vermillion is absent...a streger & a pal??...where is he now??...sighing...

-voh aaj parlak ja chuke hey...bahut sadhu tha.maine aaj tak nehi dekha ki...

She was about to run to the people,at that very moment a letter was delivered to her...the signature...the signature...!!!

Bride-Chitra

Companion-Mourya

Cruel man-Acharya

All All are gone...the old familiar faces

-ruko...tum akela nehi ja sakte.

-kyon?? main...!!!

-kyon ki ab tum mere vandi ho.main tumhare pita ke anupasthiti main tumhare virudh vidrah ki ghashna karti hoon...

He was too shocked to say anything.

-par tum jayoge,pratiharioon ke sath.main bhi jayngi.main unka mrit sharir aapne aakhoon se dekhna chahti hoon'

-tum dono bhi ja rahe ho!! shayed nehi jante tumlog ki ab iss prasad ka har ek sadashya mere vandi hey.

-mujhe mere mitra se milne ke liye koi neech nari ki anumati ka zarurat nehi.aap mujhe rokna chahte hey toh mere sath malla yudh mein avtirn ho...

-main aapko kabhi swikar hi nehi kiyi...toh ab prashna hi nehi hey ki main aapka kaha man loon. mujhe untak jane se koi nehi reok payega.

-meri shakti ki andaza hey tumhe??

-shayed aap bhi nehi janti meri satya parichay...

1st convict-Bindusaar

1st lady-Nandini

last 2 opponents- Shashank & Mihika

Some smiles,some tears make my life'my entity'

1st petal:

Like the shadow that shows us the internal entity

Like the leaf that nurtures a sapling with a grave care

Like the grass-flower that makes us happy despite being trembled..

There is none in this world'like Mother,a magic word.


2nd petal:

One who provides rigid care & broken affection

One who has a floral heart covered by pseudo-gravity

One who tells me "MY INNER ENTITY" with a sky-full of confidence

I find my GOD in whom'My Acharya,my best friend forever.



3rd petal:

The guy with simple physic & sample strength

The guy having a powerful entity just for me

The guy offering his all & everything just for one drop of my happiness

Is none other than Shashank, my piece of heart-FRIEND.


4th petal

Shining with the most cute smile

Blushing with more sweet cheek than rose

Hugging me with a all the warmth I deserve

The name of the flower is Durdhara,my queen.


5th petal:

A child with his 1st word calling me murderer

A boy having revengeful eyes,

Still having a drop of longing of affection'.

He is my part,my son-Bindusaar.



Helen stopped reading'.where am I Samrat??? A Nil Entity?!!

How far the unknown galaxies the what we know...

The sun was standing a bit far away with broken heart.his blue tears couldn't realize : the sky was starry or completely dark? he'd witnessed his piece of heart to be smashed just before few minutes.If he wanted he could stop him.but he didn't.why??though he was his treasure of life,he didn't deserve it...because he was''whatever he was,his affectionate call-"Bless me Acharya.Your blessings lead me to victory." Or his great longing for warmth,"Your suppessed affection is the best healer for me." Had been sticking his ears till now'.ohh,he was paining so badly,his heart began to bleed more heavily remembering his few words-"I want to breathe my last with your loving touch Acharya-whenever & however it is destined."'in every turn of their life-journey he protected him just like an iron armour.His violet brine now were asking him for their unpaid value'.!! Did the epitome of knowledge make a mistake??

But the tears,are really great idiots at all'..have no intention to stop'who is calling Acharya!!! What if'what if'..

''He lovingly touched his face-tum jantehi nehi kit um mere koun ho'.

The Sun: Acharya

Bright beam: Mourya


A Question of the Dying Man

The vermillion-pot was gazing at them vacantly,A little bit of what another had expected very heartily.But...those who were fortunate enough-( may be unfortunate-Shiva knows) to achieve it couldn't realize how to prepare the royal jelly of his queen-bee of life!! The galaxy knows... the another would get to make it away or not-The galaxy know. The sun-beams remains same...perhaps the percentage of ultra-violet rays increase a very little bit...but what's the difference between the living man who has recently embarrassed death & the man leading dying life in every sting of life-span??


Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update is a challenge to me...challenge to get back my own style that according to some of my dear readers had been lost in previous update.
Plzz tell me if I'm successful or not.

-Rumpu😊
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Thanks to those who comments & who like the upd
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..read it for the first time😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome all r...u r awesome..
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Posted: 12 years ago
no words
awesome dear
thnx for pm
continue soon
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Originally posted by: akshirocks

awesome all r...u r awesome..



welcome Ishani😳
NEET kamon dili??
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Posted: 12 years ago
bookmarked..
will read later n comment also

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