I 'am' with You - Sooraj

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The entire creation is full of messages of love..Isn't it?
We just need the eye to see and take them into our own lives.❤️.
No wonder even few seconds of SoorYa scene is more than enough to awake poetess within me n I always end up penned down something crazy..😆.

Anyone noticed This time "Haraa" Kurta of Sooraj didn't give us any trouble.😲.


*~❤️ I 'am' with You ❤️ ~*

Even if the sky alter its color,
With an idle world, a new,
The water begins owning hue,
And the birds stop singing; don't you worry, I'll be there.


Even if your relatives create threats,
And the friendly breeze stops from flowing,
To make things tough, the fishes forget swimming,
I'll be there beside you, my dear, even after the sun rests.


Even if you want not to think about me,
The sweet memories will keep reminding,
And the internal wall slowly but surely be breaking,
Into thousands of pieces, you'll see.

Even if Lord descends to win you over,
Don't affright, my, as Derrida stated, "Imaginary presence in absence" will sentinel,
Your soul, chastity and the self on the whole,
Like Bronte's Jane Eyre, don't you let your hope and faith expire.


Even if the words die out from earth's exterior,
The rainbow and the clouds feel reluctant to come into sight,
Even if your empathy isn't convenient,
You'll see me extending my arms to embrace; yes, I'll be there!


P.S:- This time I took a challenge to complete the poem in 20 lines.😳.

Just one small creation which I really hope reflects my theme of poem.

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Deebz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Second PP!

Amlu, the minute poet, you have an amazing talent.

Sandy's internal wall, really hope is cracking into a million pieces never to be put up ever again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely poem from one small meaningful scene...I always like your writing/poem more when you write them from Suraj's POV...very nice ⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ami di i'm gonna steal this one from u😆 well done👏 i think this scene made everyone go crazy😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amlu your poems are always awsm
the support from suraj was like can we ever see a person with so much of love for his wife's studies
the scene reminded me of surya when suraj arranges the table and gives tea to sandy asking for her approval to continue studies
suraj character is the best ever on tv

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the poem Amlu. It is so beautiful 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U rock as usual Ami. Wonderful Poem ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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O wow! Two romantic poems in 3 days?! 😲 Baat kya hai ami?

Awesome poem! Didn't really understand the 4th stanza, because of all the references, but really enjoyed the other four stanzas! And totally loved the title and how you put 'am' in quotation marks! Brilliant! ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kya baat hain Kya baat hain Ami turning totally romantic ❤️

well Ami"Hara"for u has a new meaning all together 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wah wah Amlu Ali Khan!
Romance toh kut kutke bahar aa raha hain! Missing greenery too much hain na!😆

Wonderful one!
And the siggy...wow! 👏

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